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Ch.1 Part Three

Ruri came home the next morning surprised to see her father sleeping at the door.

Ruri: AH!
Dad: *wakes up* AH!
Ruri: *holds her chest* What are you trying to do? Give me a heart attack?!
Dad: No, but what were you doing all night?
Ruri: I told you last night that I was going to watch a movie with Yurina and Minako.
Dad: You didn’t say you would be out all night!
Ruri: I didn’t? Oh, I probably forgot to say that.
Dad: -___- How could you forget?
Ruri: I just did.
Dad: T__T I was soooo worried and hungry!
Ruri: Sorry! Well, I’m going to go take a shower.
Dad: What about my breakfast?
Ruri: That can wait!
Dad: T__T
Ruri: It looks like you have 4 missed calls.
Dad: What?

Ruri’s dad checks his messages on his cellphone.

~The Messages~
Police Officer: Mr. Asagata! Please come to the Tokyo College Hospital! Your partner, Asuma got shot! *click*

Dad: What?!! *gets changed, writes a note to Ruri and runs out the door*


~~At the hospital~~
Asagata M.: *bows* I’m very sorry for not coming sooner.
Asuma: *laughs a bit but winces at the pain in his stomach* no worries, at least you came.
Asagata M.: *has tears in his eyes*
Asuma: *sweat mark* don’t cry, you’re a man.
Asagata M: *rubs his eyes* Your kindness touched my heart.
Asuma: *sweat mark*


Meanwhile at Ryu’s house, he was thinking about the dagger that was left behind at the crime scene. He knew he saw it somewhere.
His phone rang.

Ryu: Hello?
Police Officer: We found out that the dagger was made with paper mache.
Ryu: Anything else?
Police Officer: Sorry, but that’s all.
Ryu: Alright.
*click*
Ryu: Ugh! What does this all mean?!

Ryu gets another call.
Ryu: Hello?
Ruri: Hi Ryu.
Ryu: Hi Ruri, what’s up?
Ruri: My mom called and told me that your coming to dinner tomorrow night! And she told me to tell you the place and time.
Ryu: Oh, Okay.
Ruri: It’s going to be at the Ginza Plaza Center. The resraunt’s name is New Crown. And we all meet at 6 pm.
Ryu: Alright.
Ruri: Don’t come late!
Ryu: I won’t!
*click*
Ryu: What the...? No bye? *sigh* Maybe the dinner might take this case off my mind.



~~The Next Night~~
Mom: Why were you late, like always?!
Dad: I was busy! With a case!
Mom: *glares at him* Whatever. LIES!
Ruri: Mom, be nice.
Mom: Hmph!
Ruri: Dad, this is Ichimiya Ryu. My boyfriend.
Dad: *inspects him* So, you’re the boy who is going out with my daughter.
Ryu: *gulp*
Dad: You look familiar have I seen you somewhere?
Ryu: I live on your block, and I played with your daughter since we were young.
Dad: Hm…*glares at Ryu*
Ruri: Ahahaha~ let’s go sit down.

The waiter lead them to the table.
Waiter: Have you thought of your orders?
Mom: Yes. We would like the Lava Italian spaghetti combination.
Waiter: 4 Lava Italian spaghetti combinations? What kind of drink would you like with it?
Mom: I will have peach tea.
Ruri: Me too!
Mom: Two peach tea.
Dad: Beer.
Mom: One beer. What would you like Ryu?
Ryu: Cold milk tea, please.
Mom: And one milk tea.
Waiter: Is that all?
Mom: Yes.

The waiter walks away with there order and comes back with their drinks.
A few minutes later, the chef comes and brings their food.
Dad: Oh~ it’s Ishigawa-kun! Long time no see! *gets up and shakes the chef’s hand*
Ishigawa: Asagata-san! How have you been? *shaking his hand*
Dad: I’ve been doing good!
Ruri: o__O?
Dad: Ishigawa-kun, this is my daughter Ruri. Ruri, you may not remember Ishigawa-kun, but he used to baby-sit you when you were younger. And he is my friend from when your mom and I were in high school.
Ruri: Pleased to meet you again, Ishigawa-san.
Ishigawa: Ruri-chan! You’ve grown up to be a beautiful young lady!
Ruri: haha, Ishigawa-san this is my boyfriend, Ichimiya Ryu.
Ishigawa: Oh~ handsome boyfriend you got there Ruri! Makes me jealous!
Ruri: *giggles*
Ryu: ha-ha…ha…*thinking* I can’t keep up with this conversation…*sweat mark*
Ishigawa: Ichimiya… As in the detective Ichimiya?!
Ryu: Yes, I am a detective.
Ishigawa: I’ve seen you on the newspaper!
Dad: WHAT?! YOU MEAN HE’S A DETECTIVE?!
Ishigawa: Number one in Japan!
Ryu: Ahahaha…*sweat mark*
Waiter: Chef! They need you to make the orders! Or the customers are gonna leaving!
Ishigawa: Oh! Sorry! Well guys, sorry but I have to go. Have a nice eating!

Ishigawa leaves and they start eating.
Ruri: Uwahh~ this food is delicious! Don’t you think so Ryu?
Ryu: *nods head*
Dad: Not bad…
Mom: *takes a bite and swallows some of it, but notices something wrong and spits it out* w-w-water!
Ruri: Huh?

Her mom collapses out of the chair.
Dad: ERI!

While Ruri called the ambulance, Ryu stared at the white flower that was on Ruri’s mom plate. It was strange, because she was the only one with a flower on her plate.

~~END~~
Haha... the suspence is rising!
What will happen to Ruri's mom?
Find out in the next part!
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OMGosh!!
a new case for Ryu!!
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waaah gomen for the l8 comment!...kyaaa...new case!way to go there yamachan!!!...
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ahaha~ it's k geh-chan :]
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it's k! at least you read it ^_^
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i'll write the next part..as soon as i think of it hehe
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omg...can't wait for the mext part
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Ch.1 Part Four

Ruri’s mom went into surgery at the Tokyo College Hospital. The doctor came out with the results.

Doctor: Mr. Asagata, your wife was food poisoned.
Asagata: What?! How?

~~Flash Back~~
Mr. Ishigawa bringing their plates to their table.

Asagata: What? That can’t be!
Police officer: What’s wrong?
Asagata: Mr. Ishigawa. He brought our food to us.
Police officer: *radios other police officers* We will catch him Mr. Asagata.

~Couple of minutes later~
The police officers are outside Mr. Ishigawa’s house.
Police officer 1: Ishigawa Kouhei, come out! You can’t hide from us now!
Ishigawa: *comes out* What’s this all about?

One of the police officers grabs Ishigawa by the arm and slams him down on the police car.
Ishigawa: Ow! What did I do wrong?
Police officer 1: Mr. Ishigawa, you are being arrested for the poisoning of Goto Eri. You have the right remain silent. Anything you say can and will be used against you in court.
Ishigawa: What?! That’s absurd!

The police officer takes Ishigawa inside the car.

~The next morning~
Ryu was called to the police station to listen to the reasoning of the Ishigawa poisoning case.
Asagata: I didn’t think you would do such a thing, but why?
Ishigawa: I didn’t! I was set up!
Ryu: Don’t lie! We saw you bring the food. And nobody could have put poison in the plate or we would have seen it!
Ishigawa: Why would I lie? Asagata, we were best friends since high school! I’m innocent I tell you!
Ryu: Then explain about the…*door slams open*

Someone comes in the room.
Voice: He is telling the truth, he’s innocent.
Ryu: What?! Who’s there?
Kameda: I’m investigator Kameda Jigen. Mr. Asagata, your wife was not poisoned by the food, but by the drink.
Asagata: How do you know?
Kameda: I checked the food, but I couldn’t find any harmful poisons. But, when I checked for poison in the drink, it was plus.
Ishigawa: See! I told you I was innocent!
Asagata: But, why did my wife spit out the food?
Kameda: The poison kills your tastebud, so probably when she took a bite out of it, she didn’t taste anything so she spit the food out. Then the poison took effect and made her unconscious.
Asagata: I see. *bows to Ishigawa* We’re sorry for accusing you.
Ishigawa: It’s okay.
Asagata: Let’s go get the REAL criminal now!.

The police officers and Asagata go to the house where the waiter lived. They rang the doorbell a couple of times, but nobody answered. So they had no choice but to break in. Just when they were about to break in, the landlord came to stop them.

Landlord: Are you here for Kamiyama-san?
Asagata: Yes, we are!
Landlord: Well, he moved out last night.
Asagata: What?! Do you know where he might be?
Landlord: How should I know?
Asagata: Oh, thank you anyways.

The landlord goes back into his room.

Asagata: That last name sounds familiar. *thought of something* Kamiyama Sen!
Police officer: You mean, the man that you arrested 10 years ago?
Asagata: Yes, it must be him! He is back for revenge!
Police officer 2: Asagata-san! Your brother! He is in the hospital!
Asagata: What?!

Asagata drove to the Tokyo College Hospital to check on his brother.
Asagata: Hiroshi!
Doctor: Your brother was shot in the shoulder. He should recover soon. Be glad that he only had a minor injury.
Asagata: Thank you doctor. *bows*

The doctor walks away.
Asagata: Was anything left at the crime scene?
Police officer: Yes, a paper mache scepter.
Ryu: hmm…*rubs chin*
Asagata: Oh, thank you.

The police officer bows and walks away.
Ryu was having a hard time figuring it out. He went outside to walk around a bit. He came across a toy store.
Ryu: I’ve got it!

~END~
haha~ kinda short..but eh..the fun part starts in the next part ^_^
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So cool!! hope Ryu solves the case!!
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