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ooh omoshiroi desu ne~gambarre yamachan!..he can solve the case..i knew it...he's brilliant you know...and he won't give up solving that case...
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haha~ i think i'm getting the hang of writing stories..though i've been writing since i was 9..or 10 haha
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Ch. 1 Part Five

Ryu raced back to the hospital Asagata was, to tell him that he had figured out what has been bothering him. He was breathing quite hard when he reached the room.

Ryu: Asagata-san! I’ve figured it out!
Asagata: What?! Are you serious?
Ryu: *nods head* But first, let’s go into Asuma-san’s room, and call Investigator Kameda.

Asagata did as he was told. Kameda came a couple of minutes later.

Kameda: Is it true you figured it out?
Ryu: Yes.
Asagata: Well, tell us already!
Ryu: *takes something out of his pocket*
Asuma: What is that?
Ryu: *smirks* A deck of cards.

There was silence in the room.

Asagata: What does the deck of cards have to do with this case?
Ryu: Everything.
All: What?!
Ryu: It’s true. Asuma-san, you were attacked first. You are this card. *shows the King of clubs*
Asuma: How?
Ryu: In your name.

Kameda writes Asuma’s name on a sheet of paper.

Kameda: *gasps* It’s true! *shows the other two the paper*
Asuma: I’ve got it!
Asagata: Eh? I don’t see it…

They all sigh.

Ryu: Well, when you write Asuma’s name, it looks like this. (明日真 十三) The kanji in his first name reads thirteen.
Asagata: Oh! Now I get it! But, how does Eri and Hiroshi fit with the deck of cards?
Ryu: The last name, Kisaki in kanji means Queen, and Asagata Hiroshi-san’s first name has an eleven in kanji in his name.
Kameda: But, how do you know for sure? It can be just a coincidence.
Ryu: The objects left behind at the crime scene, they all match! See! *shows the king with a dagger, queen with a white flower, jack with the scepter*
Asuma: Woah! He’s right!
Ryu: The next target will be number ten! Asagata-san, do you know anyone with a ten in his or her name?
Asagata: You mean, the next target will be someone I know?
Ryu: Of course! It’s been that way the whole time!
Kameda: He’s right; they are all someone close to you.
Asagata: What?! *panicking* I can’t think of anyone!
Ryu: Use your cellphone!
Asagata: Oh, right. *looking at his contact list on his cellphone* Oh! Tsuji Keisuke has a kanji ten in his last name!
Kameda: Right, let’s go!

They raced to where Tsuji Keisuke lived. Tsuji was a helicopter driver, so when they reached the house, he wasn’t there. They asked the housekeeper where he was, she told them that he was on his way to his hometown. They reached the airport and told Tsuji everything. And he chuckled at them.

Tsuji: Hah! Am I supposed to believe that nonsense? How can you be so sure that I’m going to be killed?
Asagata: Please, don’t fly your helicopter today.
Tsuji: No way! I’ve got to go to my hometown today.
Asagata: Please! I don’t want to lose you!

Tsuji ignored Asagata’s comment and entered the helicopter.

Asagata: If your not going to listen to us, we are going to fly with you! *enters the helicopter*
Kameda: Right.
Ryu: Oi~
Kameda: *enters the helicopter too* Aren’t you coming?
Ryu: …Yeah! Wait for me! *takes the seat next to Tsuji*
Tsuji: First time flying?
Ryu: No.
Tsuji: Hah! *drops eye medicine in his eyes*
Ryu: What’s that?
Tsuji: My allergy eye drops. I take them before I drive stuff.

The helicopter took off into the air. Asagata and Kameda were looking out the windows.

Asagata: Woah~ I can see me house from here!
Kameda: The houses looks soo small up here!
Tsuji: Why not look outside?
Ryu: I’d rather not. But thank you for the offer. *uneasy smile*

Ten minutes after taking off, and Tsuji starts acting strange and Ryu notices.

Ryu: What’s wrong?
Tsuji: Huh? Oh, nothing.

A few minutes later, they could see the sun shining. Then, an unexpected thing happened.

Tsuji: *grabs eyes* AHH!
Ryu: *surprised* Eh? What happened Tsuji-san?
Tsuji: I can’t drive anymore. I can’t open my eyes.
All: WHAT?!
Tsuji: Someone drive for me.

They all look at Ryu.

Ryu: What?! Me?! I can't do it! *thinking* of course i can.
Asagata: Just do it!!! If you don't want to die!
Ryu: Fine.

Ryu changed places with Tsuji and steered to a deserted place.

Ryu: We are going to land soon.

He was about to pull the lever, when he heard an unexpected pop.

Asagata: What was that?
Ryu: Uh-oh
Tsuji: Don't worry, just land!

They were 5 feet from the ground, when the helicopter fell to the ground.

Ryu: *looks out the window and sees gasoline leaking* EVERYBODY GET OUT OF THE HELICOPTER NOW!

They all ran out of the helicopter and then, 2 minutes later the helicopter exploded.

~~End~~
Is everyone safe? What happend to Tsuji?
Find out in the next part ^_^
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OMGosh!!
this is soOoo amazing!!
Ryu's so cool as always!! ^-^
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Posted 8/23/08
of course! hsj-chan! rofl xD he's always cool :]
thnx for commenting!
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omg!! ryus so kakkoi!!
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haha xD lol pafoua~~ hello
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hi *wave*
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*waves back* how are you, dear?
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waaah!sugoi!!!
i'm sure they're all safe without a doubt...
keep on going yuuki chan!!!i'm loving it MORE!
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xD rofl~~ thanx geh-chan~~
ionno.. maybe.. ryu dies?! shhh...rofl
rofl thanx for commenting =) love yaaa<3
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Posted 8/24/08

Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

*waves back* how are you, dear?


im ok hehehhe

how bout u
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Posted 8/25/08

pafoua wrote:

im ok hehehhe

how bout u


i'm doing good..
haha just that i have to study for test next week T__T
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:


pafoua wrote:

im ok hehehhe

how bout u


i'm doing good..
haha just that i have to study for test next week T__T


oh good luck!!
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oh good luck!!


haha :] thanks!
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