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Posted 8/23/08

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OMG U DDI! D= MY BAD IM SO SOWWIES
ahh take it take it LOL


Are you sure? I could try to think of another thing. Natsumi could be..... well i don't know yet.


you could be a pawn too i dont want to be the only pawn if inekoz accepts this
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better yet, natsumi can be the knight n i'll be the pawn!
HAZZAH! HATTORI AS A PAWN! 8)
Posted 8/23/08
Sure! But if you really want to be knight, you can... I'm fine with pawn. minimoonp, i was wondering if it was Talia who's pawn or is it TJ???
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Talia is i dont know why but like i said i'll figure out somethig
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Poor Allen. All her friends are bad guys.
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Poor Allen. All her friends are bad guys.


not really talia is just gonna be pawn for a little bit til something happens idk i was planning kinda like her new egg turns into an x-egg and then she get mad and then someone tricks her into joining whatever the group is called but then she has a change of heart and turns back good and the x on her egg goes away and her chara oes back to normal oor something like that but thats just a thought it might not even happen im not sure

(sorry that was long)
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Posted 8/23/08

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Kiki_chan wrote:

Poor Allen. All her friends are bad guys.


not really talia is just gonna be pawn for a little bit til something happens idk i was planning kinda like her new egg turns into an x-egg and then she get mad and then someone tricks her into joining whatever the group is called but then she has a change of heart and turns back good and the x on her egg goes away and her chara oes back to normal oor something like that but thats just a thought it might not even happen im not sure

(sorry that was long)


XD it's okay if it's long. My story of what I had for breakfast is longer(XD sorry, inside joke). Besides, long ideas mean you've thought it out and that you still have good ideas coming that can help the story get even better.
Posted 8/23/08

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Kiki_chan wrote:

Poor Allen. All her friends are bad guys.


not really talia is just gonna be pawn for a little bit til something happens idk i was planning kinda like her new egg turns into an x-egg and then she get mad and then someone tricks her into joining whatever the group is called but then she has a change of heart and turns back good and the x on her egg goes away and her chara oes back to normal oor something like that but thats just a thought it might not even happen im not sure

(sorry that was long)


It's okay. I have a long one, too. More like a few. I'm thinking that what happened at her old school(So far only Allen knows) keeps her heart dark. The person that hurt her comes to visit her and tells her stuff that hurt her. Her egg gets Xed because she believes no one really likes her and no matter what no one can change her mind. She does Easter's bidding, she forgets what it feels like to have a dream. She turns darker and darker. Eventually Allen, Talia, Lockette, Ashurii, etc will save her probably.
Posted 8/23/08 , edited 8/23/08

Kiki_chan wrote:

Poor Allen. All her friends are bad guys.


Poor Allen, but Allen is gonna help Natsumi turn better. But unfortunately she gonna work for easter longer than Talia most likely.
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Kiki_chan wrote:

Poor Allen. All her friends are bad guys.


Poor Allen, but Allen is gonna help Natsumi turn better. But unfortunately she gonna work for easter longer than Talia most likely.


I want to make Allen go bad, but she's the type of person who will bounce back from any problem or hurting words(and has), and she would never be able to harm another person. She can't even hate the girl who shoved her out of a third story window in the second grade(scary, i know, for those little tykes to be so vicious, and scarier for Allen to be so forgiving.)
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Posted 8/23/08

Kiki_chan wrote:


minimoonp wrote:


Kiki_chan wrote:

Poor Allen. All her friends are bad guys.


not really talia is just gonna be pawn for a little bit til something happens idk i was planning kinda like her new egg turns into an x-egg and then she get mad and then someone tricks her into joining whatever the group is called but then she has a change of heart and turns back good and the x on her egg goes away and her chara oes back to normal oor something like that but thats just a thought it might not even happen im not sure

(sorry that was long)


XD it's okay if it's long. My story of what I had for breakfast is longer(XD sorry, inside joke). Besides, long ideas mean you've thought it out and that you still have good ideas coming that can help the story get even better.





BlackYuki wrote:


minimoonp wrote:


Kiki_chan wrote:

Poor Allen. All her friends are bad guys.


not really talia is just gonna be pawn for a little bit til something happens idk i was planning kinda like her new egg turns into an x-egg and then she get mad and then someone tricks her into joining whatever the group is called but then she has a change of heart and turns back good and the x on her egg goes away and her chara oes back to normal oor something like that but thats just a thought it might not even happen im not sure

(sorry that was long)


It's okay. I have a long one, too. More like a few. I'm thinking that what happened at her old school(So far only Allen knows) keeps her heart dark. The person that hurt her comes to visit her and tells her stuff that hurt her. Her egg gets Xed because she believes no one really likes her and no matter what no one can change her mind. She does Easter's bidding, she forgets what it feels like to have a dream. She turns darker and darker. Eventually Allen, Talia, Lockette, Ashurii, etc will save her probably.


Ha Ha i guess you're right!
Posted 8/23/08

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BlackYuki wrote:


Kiki_chan wrote:

Poor Allen. All her friends are bad guys.


Poor Allen, but Allen is gonna help Natsumi turn better. But unfortunately she gonna work for easter longer than Talia most likely.


I want to make Allen go bad, but she's the type of person who will bounce back from any problem or hurting words(and has), and she would never be able to harm another person. She can't even hate the girl who shoved her out of a third story window in the second grade(scary, i know, for those little tykes to be so vicious, and scarier for Allen to be so forgiving.)


Lol, that'd probably be me in real life. Natsumi is forgiving like Allen, but not forgiving if it's her friend's lives in danger. But she loses sight of that because she believes that no one cares for her.
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Posted 8/24/08
Well...actually my plan was joining Easter with hopes of trying to get that emblem back...
Posted 8/24/08 , edited 8/24/08

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Well...actually my plan was joining Easter with hopes of trying to get that emblem back...


Emblem???? What Emblem???
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Posted 8/24/08

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kinomoto123 wrote:
Well...actually my plan was joining Easter with hopes of trying to get that emblem back...


Emblem???? What Emblem???


um i think her character is looking for some kinda necklace
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