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Posted 8/22/08

MSgaaRa wrote:


Xx_ciael_xX wrote:




yey~ well, its ok if you're an anti SasuSaku~~ atleast you liked my story --thanks^^



i even think about it at night and whenever i wake up....


lol. uhh.. so what pairing in naruto do you support?
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Posted 8/22/08

Xx_ciael_xX wrote:


MSgaaRa wrote:


Xx_ciael_xX wrote:




yey~ well, its ok if you're an anti SasuSaku~~ atleast you liked my story --thanks^^



i even think about it at night and whenever i wake up....


lol. uhh.. so what pairing in naruto do you support?


gaahina/naruhina, shikatema, ankokakashi, nejitenten, narusasu, kibahina....
Posted 8/22/08 , edited 8/22/08
Thought i'm a Mod I'll just enter for fun^^ It's a story about someones broken love

Broken Heart

I walked to the school
*Kade!! Wait for meee!!* I heard his voice and knew who it was and stopped
He came to myside and smiled i smiled back
*Hay Kail, wassup?* I asked
He looked at me from top to Toe
``Is here something wrong with me?´´I thoght and asked, *what?*
*heh Nothing really, you just look different and acct different* he said
I looked at him strangely *really? in what way?*
*you... ummm nah never mind lets go*
*NOOO!!! Tell me* I smiled big and looked at him curiously
*well you look like a Tomboy, heh u looked more girly before summer vacation* He said and looked down on the floor
Somehow it hurted in my heart when he said so, I didnt say anything and went to school with him


*************************************************************************************************************************
When we was in school all my friends looked at me strangely like Kail did
And so I asked *What?* I was kinda annoyed
*Errr hei, u look.... kinda,....like a Hippie* they all mumbled
*Oh?? really? well okey...* I was real mad and went away
Kail ran after me *Hay Kade dont care about what they say, they're just friends*
I looked at him and hs words hitted e like a knife in my heart, then I said *so... I would'nt care about what u say either?? ooh of curse i remember u're just a friend*
He looked at me seriously and suprisly *what have happened to u under summer? u're totally strange, I liked the (Before) you better! At least you looked like a girl!!! *
Tears ran down my face and I looked at him... I was stunned I didnt know what to say
He looked at me surprisely *ohh...uuhh, Kade... I'm... I didn't.... I didn't mean to... like that*
He took his had upp and wanted to touch me I slapped away his hand
*DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I'VE LOVED YOU??!!! YOU ARE A TOTALLY IDIOT!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!*
I ran away, from school, and away from Kail, away from friends, and away from everything
And there was my Broken Heart...


***********************************************************************************************************************
Next Day (Kail's story)
Next day Kade didnt come to school, and the teacher didnt know either
I felt bad for what I did yesterday and what I said
I have to apologise ther later today
*ummm, Kail.... do you know where Kade is?? we're sorry for what we said yesterday* It was her friends from yesterday
*hehe sorry I dont know* I said and turned away
Why am I so worried? My do I feel like it will be hopeless even if i Alpiosise?? won she forgive me?
I'll skip class later and go to her house maybe she's just feeling well, I thought...


*************************************************************************************************************************
After Class
Yes finaly, I'll hurryto Kade's place now. I thought
Then suddenly the principal came into our class *Please everyone dont eave the class and sit down* He said
Damn, I thought
*Well I kinda have news for u now, so everyone keep Shut and look at the screen*
I kinda flt nervous over what he said, but what could it be?
He turned on the TV screen and there was the news
*A young girl named Kade from Adin School jumped off the Hidaya Bridge last night.... A victim saw her wandering alone to the bridge at night and suddenly she jumped off... I'm soo sorry everyone, her Family and friends so Please everyone Pray for poor girl Kade* The TV report stoped and closed her eyes and started to pray
I sat there. and didn't know what to do, I sat there like a statue, what should I do? why do I feel so sad? She's my friennd my friend, my girlfriend... No no, my friend, I closed my eyes half way when the reporter suddenly said
*Oh the girl Kade left a peice of paper here on the bridge, lets see what it stands on it* ... she opened the peice of letter in her hand *Here stands: I... I love... y.you I'll show u all the pic* and she showed the picture to uss
I stared at the words she wrote, I stared at the paper, I stared at the love part and I stared at my name
My tears ran down my face, I started to cry, slightly and then I knew In my heart she wasnt just a friend, she was the most inportant and the one I loved
I regreeted what I did and said to her, But i know that I'll remember and lover her forever....
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Posted 8/22/08

JennyD wrote:

Thought i'm a Mod I'll just enter for fun^^ It's a story about someones broken love

Broken Heart

I walked to the school
*Kade!! Wait for meee!!* I heard his voice and knew who it was and stopped
He came to myside and smiled i smiled back
*Hay Kail, wassup?* I asked
He looked at me from top to Toe
``Is here something wrong with me?´´I thoght and asked, *what?*
*heh Nothing really, you just look different and acct different* he said
I looked at him strangely *really? in what way?*
*you... ummm nah never mind lets go*
*NOOO!!! Tell me* I smiled big and looked at him curiously
*well you look like a Tomboy, heh u looked more girly before summer vacation* He said and looked down on the floor
Somehow it hurted in my heart when he said so, I didnt say anything and went to school with him


*************************************************************************************************************************
When we was in school all my friends looked at me strangely like Kail did
And so I asked *What?* I was kinda annoyed
*Errr hei, u look.... kinda,....like a Hippie* they all mumbled
*Oh?? really? well okey...* I was real mad and went away
Kail ran after me *Hay Kade dont care about what they say, they're just friends*
I looked at him and hs words hitted e like a knife in my heart, then I said *so... I would'nt care about what u say either?? ooh of curse i remember u're just a friend*
He looked at me seriously and suprisly *what have happened to u under summer? u're totally strange, I liked the (Before) you better! At least you looked like a girl!!! *
Tears ran down my face and I looked at him... I was stunned I didnt know what to say
He looked at me surprisely *ohh...uuhh, Kade... I'm... I didn't.... I didn't mean to... like that*
He took his had upp and wanted to touch me I slapped away his hand
*DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I'VE LOVED YOU??!!! YOU ARE A TOTALLY IDIOT!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!*
I ran away, from school, and away from Kail, away from friends, and away from everything
And there was my Broken Heart...


***********************************************************************************************************************
Next Day (Kail's story)
Next day Kade didnt come to school, and the teacher didnt know either
I felt bad for what I did yesterday and what I said
I have to apologise ther later today
*ummm, Kail.... do you know where Kade is?? we're sorry for what we said yesterday* It was her friends from yesterday
*hehe sorry I dont know* I said and turned away
Why am I so worried? My do I feel like it will be hopeless even if i Alpiosise?? won she forgive me?
I'll skip class later and go to her house maybe she's just feeling well, I thought...


*************************************************************************************************************************
After Class
Yes finaly, I'll hurryto Kade's place now. I thought
Then suddenly the principal came into our class *Please everyone dont eave the class and sit down* He said
Damn, I thought
*Well I kinda have news for u now, so everyone keep Shut and look at the screen*
I kinda flt nervous over what he said, but what could it be?
He turned on the TV screen and there was the news
*A young girl named Kade from Adin School jumped off the Hidaya Bridge last night.... A victim saw her wandering alone to the bridge at night and suddenly she jumped off... I'm soo sorry everyone, her Family and friends so Please everyone Pray for poor girl Kade* The TV report stoped and closed her eyes and started to pray
I sat there. and didn't know what to do, I sat there like a statue, what should I do? why do I feel so sad? She's my friennd my friend, my girlfriend... No no, my friend, I closed my eyes half way when the reporter suddenly said
*Oh the girl Kade left a peice of paper here on the bridge, lets see what it stands on it* ... she opened the peice of letter in her hand *Here stands: I... I love... y.you I'll show u all the pic* and she showed the picture to uss
I stared at the words she wrote, I stared at the paper, I stared at the love part and I stared at my name
My tears ran down my face, I started to cry, slightly and then I knew In my heart she wasnt just a friend, she was the most inportant and the one I loved
I regreeted what I did and said to her, But i know that I'll remember and lover her forever....


Very touching T__T.
Posted 8/22/08

xVeron wrote:

Okay, I wrote something, but it's so corny and totally uninteresting D:

Angel Wings

The cold, frigid air this winter felt harsher than he'd ever known as the wind lashed across his cheek. Around him, he could see warmth radiating from people in different forms - in their smile of the child hugging her Christmas present; in the hearty whistle of the man dressed up as Santa Claus; in the joyful voices of the choir in harmony, singing songs of Christmas. Yet he felt no warmth; if anything, these scenes made his heart feel colder. He shoved his gloved hand deep into his pocket, bowed his head and walked on aimlessly.

A sweet, clear voice rang out. "Darling!" His head snapped up, eyes searching for her lovely smile that always sent his heart beating in a crazy frenzy. Then he felt a pang of melancholy when he remembered that she couldn't possibly be there.

He felt something cool, soft and downy falling on him, around him. He raised his eyes to the skies, and saw snow gently drifting down from the heavens. Suddenly, he felt a surge of warmth, something he'd missed for the past four months. Tasting the snow on his lips, he remembered.

They'd always pass by this same bank, walking side by side, his gloved hand wrapped around her small little one. She'd say something and they would laugh, then she would always look up at him and smile that smile that never failed to make him fall in love with her all over again. There would be a twinkle in her eyes, glittering like the way the frozen bank did, as though diamonds were scattered in them. Bathed in the soft, warm glow of the streetlights, there was almost an angelic quality to her beautiful face, and he would be unable to resist the temptation to bend down and press his lips to her soft, supple ones.

In his memory, her lips were always so full of warmth. In fact, he thought now, that there was nothing about her that was frigid or cool. That was who she was, his little piece of sunshine, guaranteed to bring him the comfort of heat whenever they went.

A shadow of a smile appeared on his face. He paused, realising where his feet had brought him, without thinking at all. He went down on one knee and removed the glove from his right hand, then dusted off the snow that had settled over the cold stone. As always, he ran his fingers over the photograph that was on the tombstone, the expression on his face a mixture of heartache and loving tenderness. He touched the words that were carved below the photo, reading them aloud:
"Remember to breathe,
remember to love,
remember to keep dreaming.
Live your life twice for mine, and most of all,
remember that even though I may have gone with the wind,
I'm always with you on angel wings."


Slowly, he stood up, and somehow it felt as though the winter wind had became gentler, a soft caress against his cheek like how she used to bring her hand to his face, even when she was a frail, white angel lying on that hospital bed. He wiped a tear that had escaped from his eye, and finally smiled a real smile. "This is the first winter that I've spent without you by my side, and there'll be many more to come, but you'll always know that I love you, don't you?" He whispered, into the cool air.

As he walked away, he thought he heard a whisper too. "Merry christmas, my love."

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I wrote this when I didn't sleep :X Might have some vocabulary errors or plot holes since I only skimmed through it once. Hope no one died of the cliche-ness.




lol i like this one :3
Posted 8/23/08

SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:

Thought i'm a Mod I'll just enter for fun^^ It's a story about someones broken love

Broken Heart

I walked to the school
*Kade!! Wait for meee!!* I heard his voice and knew who it was and stopped
He came to myside and smiled i smiled back
*Hay Kail, wassup?* I asked
He looked at me from top to Toe
``Is here something wrong with me?´´I thoght and asked, *what?*
*heh Nothing really, you just look different and acct different* he said
I looked at him strangely *really? in what way?*
*you... ummm nah never mind lets go*
*NOOO!!! Tell me* I smiled big and looked at him curiously
*well you look like a Tomboy, heh u looked more girly before summer vacation* He said and looked down on the floor
Somehow it hurted in my heart when he said so, I didnt say anything and went to school with him


*************************************************************************************************************************
When we was in school all my friends looked at me strangely like Kail did
And so I asked *What?* I was kinda annoyed
*Errr hei, u look.... kinda,....like a Hippie* they all mumbled
*Oh?? really? well okey...* I was real mad and went away
Kail ran after me *Hay Kade dont care about what they say, they're just friends*
I looked at him and hs words hitted e like a knife in my heart, then I said *so... I would'nt care about what u say either?? ooh of curse i remember u're just a friend*
He looked at me seriously and suprisly *what have happened to u under summer? u're totally strange, I liked the (Before) you better! At least you looked like a girl!!! *
Tears ran down my face and I looked at him... I was stunned I didnt know what to say
He looked at me surprisely *ohh...uuhh, Kade... I'm... I didn't.... I didn't mean to... like that*
He took his had upp and wanted to touch me I slapped away his hand
*DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I'VE LOVED YOU??!!! YOU ARE A TOTALLY IDIOT!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!*
I ran away, from school, and away from Kail, away from friends, and away from everything
And there was my Broken Heart...


***********************************************************************************************************************
Next Day (Kail's story)
Next day Kade didnt come to school, and the teacher didnt know either
I felt bad for what I did yesterday and what I said
I have to apologise ther later today
*ummm, Kail.... do you know where Kade is?? we're sorry for what we said yesterday* It was her friends from yesterday
*hehe sorry I dont know* I said and turned away
Why am I so worried? My do I feel like it will be hopeless even if i Alpiosise?? won she forgive me?
I'll skip class later and go to her house maybe she's just feeling well, I thought...


*************************************************************************************************************************
After Class
Yes finaly, I'll hurryto Kade's place now. I thought
Then suddenly the principal came into our class *Please everyone dont eave the class and sit down* He said
Damn, I thought
*Well I kinda have news for u now, so everyone keep Shut and look at the screen*
I kinda flt nervous over what he said, but what could it be?
He turned on the TV screen and there was the news
*A young girl named Kade from Adin School jumped off the Hidaya Bridge last night.... A victim saw her wandering alone to the bridge at night and suddenly she jumped off... I'm soo sorry everyone, her Family and friends so Please everyone Pray for poor girl Kade* The TV report stoped and closed her eyes and started to pray
I sat there. and didn't know what to do, I sat there like a statue, what should I do? why do I feel so sad? She's my friennd my friend, my girlfriend... No no, my friend, I closed my eyes half way when the reporter suddenly said
*Oh the girl Kade left a peice of paper here on the bridge, lets see what it stands on it* ... she opened the peice of letter in her hand *Here stands: I... I love... y.you I'll show u all the pic* and she showed the picture to uss
I stared at the words she wrote, I stared at the paper, I stared at the love part and I stared at my name
My tears ran down my face, I started to cry, slightly and then I knew In my heart she wasnt just a friend, she was the most inportant and the one I loved
I regreeted what I did and said to her, But i know that I'll remember and lover her forever....


Very touching T__T.


ohhh^^ hehe thx, maybe
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Posted 8/23/08

JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:

Thought i'm a Mod I'll just enter for fun^^ It's a story about someones broken love

Broken Heart

I walked to the school
*Kade!! Wait for meee!!* I heard his voice and knew who it was and stopped
He came to myside and smiled i smiled back
*Hay Kail, wassup?* I asked
He looked at me from top to Toe
``Is here something wrong with me?´´I thoght and asked, *what?*
*heh Nothing really, you just look different and acct different* he said
I looked at him strangely *really? in what way?*
*you... ummm nah never mind lets go*
*NOOO!!! Tell me* I smiled big and looked at him curiously
*well you look like a Tomboy, heh u looked more girly before summer vacation* He said and looked down on the floor
Somehow it hurted in my heart when he said so, I didnt say anything and went to school with him


*************************************************************************************************************************
When we was in school all my friends looked at me strangely like Kail did
And so I asked *What?* I was kinda annoyed
*Errr hei, u look.... kinda,....like a Hippie* they all mumbled
*Oh?? really? well okey...* I was real mad and went away
Kail ran after me *Hay Kade dont care about what they say, they're just friends*
I looked at him and hs words hitted e like a knife in my heart, then I said *so... I would'nt care about what u say either?? ooh of curse i remember u're just a friend*
He looked at me seriously and suprisly *what have happened to u under summer? u're totally strange, I liked the (Before) you better! At least you looked like a girl!!! *
Tears ran down my face and I looked at him... I was stunned I didnt know what to say
He looked at me surprisely *ohh...uuhh, Kade... I'm... I didn't.... I didn't mean to... like that*
He took his had upp and wanted to touch me I slapped away his hand
*DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I'VE LOVED YOU??!!! YOU ARE A TOTALLY IDIOT!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!*
I ran away, from school, and away from Kail, away from friends, and away from everything
And there was my Broken Heart...


***********************************************************************************************************************
Next Day (Kail's story)
Next day Kade didnt come to school, and the teacher didnt know either
I felt bad for what I did yesterday and what I said
I have to apologise ther later today
*ummm, Kail.... do you know where Kade is?? we're sorry for what we said yesterday* It was her friends from yesterday
*hehe sorry I dont know* I said and turned away
Why am I so worried? My do I feel like it will be hopeless even if i Alpiosise?? won she forgive me?
I'll skip class later and go to her house maybe she's just feeling well, I thought...


*************************************************************************************************************************
After Class
Yes finaly, I'll hurryto Kade's place now. I thought
Then suddenly the principal came into our class *Please everyone dont eave the class and sit down* He said
Damn, I thought
*Well I kinda have news for u now, so everyone keep Shut and look at the screen*
I kinda flt nervous over what he said, but what could it be?
He turned on the TV screen and there was the news
*A young girl named Kade from Adin School jumped off the Hidaya Bridge last night.... A victim saw her wandering alone to the bridge at night and suddenly she jumped off... I'm soo sorry everyone, her Family and friends so Please everyone Pray for poor girl Kade* The TV report stoped and closed her eyes and started to pray
I sat there. and didn't know what to do, I sat there like a statue, what should I do? why do I feel so sad? She's my friennd my friend, my girlfriend... No no, my friend, I closed my eyes half way when the reporter suddenly said
*Oh the girl Kade left a peice of paper here on the bridge, lets see what it stands on it* ... she opened the peice of letter in her hand *Here stands: I... I love... y.you I'll show u all the pic* and she showed the picture to uss
I stared at the words she wrote, I stared at the paper, I stared at the love part and I stared at my name
My tears ran down my face, I started to cry, slightly and then I knew In my heart she wasnt just a friend, she was the most inportant and the one I loved
I regreeted what I did and said to her, But i know that I'll remember and lover her forever....


Very touching T__T.


ohhh^^ hehe thx, maybe


lol, is there a site for these kind of touching stories? xD
Posted 8/23/08

SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:

Thought i'm a Mod I'll just enter for fun^^ It's a story about someones broken love

Broken Heart

I walked to the school
*Kade!! Wait for meee!!* I heard his voice and knew who it was and stopped
He came to myside and smiled i smiled back
*Hay Kail, wassup?* I asked
He looked at me from top to Toe
``Is here something wrong with me?´´I thoght and asked, *what?*
*heh Nothing really, you just look different and acct different* he said
I looked at him strangely *really? in what way?*
*you... ummm nah never mind lets go*
*NOOO!!! Tell me* I smiled big and looked at him curiously
*well you look like a Tomboy, heh u looked more girly before summer vacation* He said and looked down on the floor
Somehow it hurted in my heart when he said so, I didnt say anything and went to school with him


*************************************************************************************************************************
When we was in school all my friends looked at me strangely like Kail did
And so I asked *What?* I was kinda annoyed
*Errr hei, u look.... kinda,....like a Hippie* they all mumbled
*Oh?? really? well okey...* I was real mad and went away
Kail ran after me *Hay Kade dont care about what they say, they're just friends*
I looked at him and hs words hitted e like a knife in my heart, then I said *so... I would'nt care about what u say either?? ooh of curse i remember u're just a friend*
He looked at me seriously and suprisly *what have happened to u under summer? u're totally strange, I liked the (Before) you better! At least you looked like a girl!!! *
Tears ran down my face and I looked at him... I was stunned I didnt know what to say
He looked at me surprisely *ohh...uuhh, Kade... I'm... I didn't.... I didn't mean to... like that*
He took his had upp and wanted to touch me I slapped away his hand
*DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I'VE LOVED YOU??!!! YOU ARE A TOTALLY IDIOT!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!*
I ran away, from school, and away from Kail, away from friends, and away from everything
And there was my Broken Heart...


***********************************************************************************************************************
Next Day (Kail's story)
Next day Kade didnt come to school, and the teacher didnt know either
I felt bad for what I did yesterday and what I said
I have to apologise ther later today
*ummm, Kail.... do you know where Kade is?? we're sorry for what we said yesterday* It was her friends from yesterday
*hehe sorry I dont know* I said and turned away
Why am I so worried? My do I feel like it will be hopeless even if i Alpiosise?? won she forgive me?
I'll skip class later and go to her house maybe she's just feeling well, I thought...


*************************************************************************************************************************
After Class
Yes finaly, I'll hurryto Kade's place now. I thought
Then suddenly the principal came into our class *Please everyone dont eave the class and sit down* He said
Damn, I thought
*Well I kinda have news for u now, so everyone keep Shut and look at the screen*
I kinda flt nervous over what he said, but what could it be?
He turned on the TV screen and there was the news
*A young girl named Kade from Adin School jumped off the Hidaya Bridge last night.... A victim saw her wandering alone to the bridge at night and suddenly she jumped off... I'm soo sorry everyone, her Family and friends so Please everyone Pray for poor girl Kade* The TV report stoped and closed her eyes and started to pray
I sat there. and didn't know what to do, I sat there like a statue, what should I do? why do I feel so sad? She's my friennd my friend, my girlfriend... No no, my friend, I closed my eyes half way when the reporter suddenly said
*Oh the girl Kade left a peice of paper here on the bridge, lets see what it stands on it* ... she opened the peice of letter in her hand *Here stands: I... I love... y.you I'll show u all the pic* and she showed the picture to uss
I stared at the words she wrote, I stared at the paper, I stared at the love part and I stared at my name
My tears ran down my face, I started to cry, slightly and then I knew In my heart she wasnt just a friend, she was the most inportant and the one I loved
I regreeted what I did and said to her, But i know that I'll remember and lover her forever....


Very touching T__T.


ohhh^^ hehe thx, maybe


lol, is there a site for these kind of touching stories? xD


hehe actually I write those storys myself xD hehe so idk if there is any place xD
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JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:

Thought i'm a Mod I'll just enter for fun^^ It's a story about someones broken love

Broken Heart

I walked to the school
*Kade!! Wait for meee!!* I heard his voice and knew who it was and stopped
He came to myside and smiled i smiled back
*Hay Kail, wassup?* I asked
He looked at me from top to Toe
``Is here something wrong with me?´´I thoght and asked, *what?*
*heh Nothing really, you just look different and acct different* he said
I looked at him strangely *really? in what way?*
*you... ummm nah never mind lets go*
*NOOO!!! Tell me* I smiled big and looked at him curiously
*well you look like a Tomboy, heh u looked more girly before summer vacation* He said and looked down on the floor
Somehow it hurted in my heart when he said so, I didnt say anything and went to school with him


*************************************************************************************************************************
When we was in school all my friends looked at me strangely like Kail did
And so I asked *What?* I was kinda annoyed
*Errr hei, u look.... kinda,....like a Hippie* they all mumbled
*Oh?? really? well okey...* I was real mad and went away
Kail ran after me *Hay Kade dont care about what they say, they're just friends*
I looked at him and hs words hitted e like a knife in my heart, then I said *so... I would'nt care about what u say either?? ooh of curse i remember u're just a friend*
He looked at me seriously and suprisly *what have happened to u under summer? u're totally strange, I liked the (Before) you better! At least you looked like a girl!!! *
Tears ran down my face and I looked at him... I was stunned I didnt know what to say
He looked at me surprisely *ohh...uuhh, Kade... I'm... I didn't.... I didn't mean to... like that*
He took his had upp and wanted to touch me I slapped away his hand
*DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I'VE LOVED YOU??!!! YOU ARE A TOTALLY IDIOT!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!*
I ran away, from school, and away from Kail, away from friends, and away from everything
And there was my Broken Heart...


***********************************************************************************************************************
Next Day (Kail's story)
Next day Kade didnt come to school, and the teacher didnt know either
I felt bad for what I did yesterday and what I said
I have to apologise ther later today
*ummm, Kail.... do you know where Kade is?? we're sorry for what we said yesterday* It was her friends from yesterday
*hehe sorry I dont know* I said and turned away
Why am I so worried? My do I feel like it will be hopeless even if i Alpiosise?? won she forgive me?
I'll skip class later and go to her house maybe she's just feeling well, I thought...


*************************************************************************************************************************
After Class
Yes finaly, I'll hurryto Kade's place now. I thought
Then suddenly the principal came into our class *Please everyone dont eave the class and sit down* He said
Damn, I thought
*Well I kinda have news for u now, so everyone keep Shut and look at the screen*
I kinda flt nervous over what he said, but what could it be?
He turned on the TV screen and there was the news
*A young girl named Kade from Adin School jumped off the Hidaya Bridge last night.... A victim saw her wandering alone to the bridge at night and suddenly she jumped off... I'm soo sorry everyone, her Family and friends so Please everyone Pray for poor girl Kade* The TV report stoped and closed her eyes and started to pray
I sat there. and didn't know what to do, I sat there like a statue, what should I do? why do I feel so sad? She's my friennd my friend, my girlfriend... No no, my friend, I closed my eyes half way when the reporter suddenly said
*Oh the girl Kade left a peice of paper here on the bridge, lets see what it stands on it* ... she opened the peice of letter in her hand *Here stands: I... I love... y.you I'll show u all the pic* and she showed the picture to uss
I stared at the words she wrote, I stared at the paper, I stared at the love part and I stared at my name
My tears ran down my face, I started to cry, slightly and then I knew In my heart she wasnt just a friend, she was the most inportant and the one I loved
I regreeted what I did and said to her, But i know that I'll remember and lover her forever....


Very touching T__T.


ohhh^^ hehe thx, maybe


lol, is there a site for these kind of touching stories? xD


hehe actually I write those storys myself xD hehe so idk if there is any place xD


ohh, how cute.. T__T~
i wish i could write some like that.. xD
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ohh, how cute.. T__T~
i wish i could write some like that.. xD


Umm u can if u want^^ just see how r day was how's ur feeling and then write it all down in a story^^
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SadPromise wrote:



ohh, how cute.. T__T~
i wish i could write some like that.. xD


Umm u can if u want^^ just see how r day was how's ur feeling and then write it all down in a story^^


ohhhh, well..
i have a boring life xD
Posted 8/24/08

SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:



ohh, how cute.. T__T~
i wish i could write some like that.. xD


Umm u can if u want^^ just see how r day was how's ur feeling and then write it all down in a story^^


ohhhh, well..
i have a boring life xD


thihi u just gave me an idea on ur booring life^^ woow nice, give me ideas of ur life^^
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JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:



ohh, how cute.. T__T~
i wish i could write some like that.. xD


Umm u can if u want^^ just see how r day was how's ur feeling and then write it all down in a story^^


ohhhh, well..
i have a boring life xD


thihi u just gave me an idea on ur booring life^^ woow nice, give me ideas of ur life^^


LOL, you gunna make a story of my boring life..? xDD
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YOU think it might be boring but maybe it'll turn out really good, well my storys sucks itself xd
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YOU think it might be boring but maybe it'll turn out really good, well my storys sucks itself xd


lol, no it's not o:<
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