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Posted 8/24/08

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JennyD wrote:



YOU think it might be boring but maybe it'll turn out really good, well my storys sucks itself xd


lol, no it's not o:<


you dont know if u dont tell me^^
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SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:



YOU think it might be boring but maybe it'll turn out really good, well my storys sucks itself xd


lol, no it's not o:<


you dont know if u dont tell me^^


lols, okayys.. well..
a boring day story, eh..? o-o;
Posted 8/24/08


Yes boring day story^^
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Yes boring day story^^


Okays.
One day, when i woke up at 12:00 am in the morning, i heard a BOOM.
I thought it was an earthquake, but it was actually my sister jumping off her bed.
Then my dog came rushing to me with excitement, asking me to play with her, but i was too sleepy
and drowzy for that, so i walked downstairs into my computer room, turned on my computer, went on crunchyroll, and started talking all day, and then i go to sleep at 3:00 am everyday, at least..
And then tommorrow, I HAVE SCHOOL, ZOMG. I NEEDA SLEEP AT LIKE, 8:00 PM.
the end? xD
Posted 8/24/08

SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:



Yes boring day story^^


Okays.
One day, when i woke up at 12:00 am in the morning, i heard a BOOM.
I thought it was an earthquake, but it was actually my sister jumping off her bed.
Then my dog came rushing to me with excitement, asking me to play with her, but i was too sleepy
and drowzy for that, so i walked downstairs into my computer room, turned on my computer, went on crunchyroll, and started talking all day, and then i go to sleep at 3:00 am everyday, at least..
And then tommorrow, I HAVE SCHOOL, ZOMG. I NEEDA SLEEP AT LIKE, 8:00 PM.
the end? xD


Nice i'll start writing imedietly^^ thihi so just wait for the news
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SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:



Yes boring day story^^


Okays.
One day, when i woke up at 12:00 am in the morning, i heard a BOOM.
I thought it was an earthquake, but it was actually my sister jumping off her bed.
Then my dog came rushing to me with excitement, asking me to play with her, but i was too sleepy
and drowzy for that, so i walked downstairs into my computer room, turned on my computer, went on crunchyroll, and started talking all day, and then i go to sleep at 3:00 am everyday, at least..
And then tommorrow, I HAVE SCHOOL, ZOMG. I NEEDA SLEEP AT LIKE, 8:00 PM.
the end? xD


Nice i'll start writing imedietly^^ thihi so just wait for the news


LOL JENNY, YOUR REALLY GUNNA WRITE IT? XDD.
It's so boring though.. o3o
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once apon a time there was a patato and when this girl touched it everyone died the end
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Posted 8/24/08

SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:



Yes boring day story^^


Okays.
One day, when i woke up at 12:00 am in the morning, i heard a BOOM.
I thought it was an earthquake, but it was actually my sister jumping off her bed.
Then my dog came rushing to me with excitement, asking me to play with her, but i was too sleepy
and drowzy for that, so i walked downstairs into my computer room, turned on my computer, went on crunchyroll, and started talking all day, and then i go to sleep at 3:00 am everyday, at least..
And then tommorrow, I HAVE SCHOOL, ZOMG. I NEEDA SLEEP AT LIKE, 8:00 PM.
the end? xD


Nice i'll start writing imedietly^^ thihi so just wait for the news


LOL JENNY, YOUR REALLY GUNNA WRITE IT? XDD.
It's so boring though.. o3o


Yes I've allredy writed it thought it's nothing fun but still xD
Posted 8/24/08
Well first meening was an Idea from SadPromise so we kinda cooperated and made a story together^^
not really well thought

You woke me Upp

Sunshine warming my face at 12:00 am.
*BAM BAM* I opened my eyes suprisely, and noticed it was only my sister at her room
I was still sleepy so I closed my eyes, then my damn dog came in and licked my cheek *YUCK, GET OTTA HERE* i screamed
How can i sleep now i thought so I got upp Turned on my computer and sat there the whole day, me and my computer ONLY. This is heaven i thought... looks at the watch *DANG*, OMG it's school tomorrow gotta sleep it's allredy 3am!!! (panic)

*******************************************************************************************************************************
First day

Going to school, first day of upper secondary school , I'm sooo tierd
Summer Vacation was nice thought, but still i'm tierd
Coming to school... oh wait sorry forgot my name^^ I'm Alicia, a girl, that's all...
Continueing, coming to a new school knowing No one, and I dont really care
This is hell, school is hell, and u know what's the worse? I'm sitting beside what they call schools "Handsome prince" Yuuck. I dont like him, he's so full of himeslf, he only sees HIM self -_- YUCK YUCK
when we're doing some subjects we have to cooperate he does it himself and when ever we talk he always looks at another derition, it's annoying he's an ANNOYING BRAT!!! YUCK, and why am I thinking of him allredy?? Bad thoughts, Bad thoughts.... So I started to Ignore him after the first day
weather he asked something, he wanted something or looked at me I didn't talk to him
so was my first day (does not really care)
*******************************************************************************************************************************
3 Months later
I stopped to think about that guy besides me in school, called Andy yuuuck
And he sopped asking me question and all like 2months after i ignores him
I dont need anyone, my lill sister says I'm wierd so I suppose so
My dad doesnt want me at his house he says i'm like a "Emo" and he's a shitty old man himself -_-
No one needs me I dont need them either, I'm in hell anyways
oh anyways I'm thinking this while now I've arrived in school... nothing changed still alone
Untill someone suddenly called my name *Aliciiaaa!!! Hay!!!*
*what the h....* i mumbled, I turned around and on my surprise guess who, Andy.
What's the dork here anyways, I thought... so I asked *what u wanna?* and glared at him
*err well I.. i thought maybe we could go to class together..* he mubeled, but enought to make me hear
what's with him today, i thought but never mind... *err okey but keep a distance away from me will u?*
*about that.. why? Or nah okey* he said and walked by my side but hold his distance from me
We came to class and everyone shouted out *ouuuuhhhhhh Andy coming to school with his girl today!!*
I surprisely looked at them and later him, all he did was smiled and went to his place
I thought it might be a joke so doesnt matter, I went to my place
After class the girls came to me(how un usual), they started to ask alot
*when did u 2 became a couple? why didnt u say? how did u 2 meet? is it good realationship btw u two?*
I didnt get a freaking word what they said, I looked at him and he looked at me and smiled
What the? this have to be a dream, this IS a dream, a night mare, or I'm allredy in hell
Then i got annoyed and asked *what the hell r u all talking about?*
They looked at me surprisely and the the whole class laughted even Andy *come on Alicia noo need to hide it*
I looked at the seriously *i'm NOT joking* I glared at them
Andy came to me and took my han and walked outta the class *what are u doing? let go!!* I screamed
But still he looked angry and then he stoppe when we was on the back school yard...
*what's goin on? why is there such Lies like tha...* he grabbed my hand and kissed me
what? what's going on? what? why Aint i doing anything? this is wrong, i thought and slapped him later
*WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING???* Tears ran down my face, and i looked at him
*Alicia I didnt mean to... I'm sorry, it's just my feelings... I told them a lie okey? I said u and me where a couple... but that was because I really liked u alicia and then I thought maybe you would get some more friends that waa...* I slapped him
*Is that the way showing me you like me? that's the worse way to show me that you like me.. I HATE YOU*
I cried and ran away, m heart hurted I didnt know what to do, this isnt right, it's all wrong
and there ended my 3 months of pece
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Fallen
It has now been 2 weeks I didnt go to school, I dont know what will happen and I dont wanna see him
all 2 weeks I've been thinking of HIM only, maybe he just joked a bit, maybe he lied
But why do I feel like I wish it wasnt a lie, that he didnt joke? why do I feel that way?
Andy = Handsome boy = Inlove with me = not possibe, so I guess he joked But i'll stay home for another week
*Pling Plong* the door bell rang, and I'm alone myself at home so I have to open *sight*
*Yes? who is ther....* In my surprise infront of me was, yes I know u know allredy ANDY!!!!
*badum Badum* why is my heart beathing so fast seeing his smiling face infront of me?
We stood there a while, in silence, saying nothing just looked at each other on the eyes then he broke it
*Umm, i heard u where sick, and it's been 2 weeks now so I thought of coming here and visit u* he mumbeled
*oh really? well thank you and god bye* I said coldly and closed the door when he putted his hand there btw
*What?* I asked and didnt have the confident to look at him
*please dont ignore me will you? please i beg you* he said and looked at me *I like you please belive me*
*NO, sorry but I dont and i wont and i cant belive you* I said and looked at him and to my surprise
He looked at me too, with teary eyes He fell on his knees *please belive me I really do like you, please*
*what the? stand upp what r u doing? go away!! sheesh, you'll get over me and find a new* I said and it huted
he looked at me and his tears fell down his face, *Actually I, didnt have the confident for telling you I liked you*
I loked at him suprisely and he continued *fron the beggining it looked like u hated me allredy, i tried to change myself, talk to you, ask you questions, but you just ignored me, so I thought that maybe if i told them all that we where together then if i confessed, you might have heard some rumors and all so you wouldnt be surprised that I liked you I dint wish it to turn out this way belive me, please, if u dont want me then please just beli...*
Suddenly I find myself on my knees and where kissing him, but I felt happy now, I dont know why
Maybe I like him to? *You're the first one that have made me Fallen on my knees* I wispered
He looked at me suprisely and then he asked*you like me to* I suddnly blushed and turned away and nodded
*YEEESSSS, WOHOOOOOO!!!* He screamed of happined and smiled, and then he hugged me tightly
*I wanna tell you something Andy* I said wispering in his ears
*mm? yes?* he wispered back and it tickeled and made me giggle
*You woke me Upp from hell, and from lonelyness* I said and smiled
He smiled back and said *You woke me upp from everything* I couldn't be more happy
From that day he was the one that woke me upp everyday with warmth and love


I know sucky story
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JennyD wrote:

Well first meening was an Idea from SadPromise so we kinda cooperated and made a story together^^
not really well thought

You woke me Upp

Sunshine warming my face at 12:00 am.
*BAM BAM* I opened my eyes suprisely, and noticed it was only my sister at her room
I was still sleepy so I closed my eyes, then my damn dog came in and licked my cheek *YUCK, GET OTTA HERE* i screamed
How can i sleep now i thought so I got upp Turned on my computer and sat there the whole day, me and my computer ONLY. This is heaven i thought... looks at the watch *DANG*, OMG it's school tomorrow gotta sleep it's allredy 3am!!! (panic)

*******************************************************************************************************************************
First day

Going to school, first day of upper secondary school , I'm sooo tierd
Summer Vacation was nice thought, but still i'm tierd
Coming to school... oh wait sorry forgot my name^^ I'm Alicia, a girl, that's all...
Continueing, coming to a new school knowing No one, and I dont really care
This is hell, school is hell, and u know what's the worse? I'm sitting beside what they call schools "Handsome prince" Yuuck. I dont like him, he's so full of himeslf, he only sees HIM self -_- YUCK YUCK
when we're doing some subjects we have to cooperate he does it himself and when ever we talk he always looks at another derition, it's annoying he's an ANNOYING BRAT!!! YUCK, and why am I thinking of him allredy?? Bad thoughts, Bad thoughts.... So I started to Ignore him after the first day
weather he asked something, he wanted something or looked at me I didn't talk to him
so was my first day (does not really care)
*******************************************************************************************************************************
3 Months later
I stopped to think about that guy besides me in school, called Andy yuuuck
And he sopped asking me question and all like 2months after i ignores him
I dont need anyone, my lill sister says I'm wierd so I suppose so
My dad doesnt want me at his house he says i'm like a "Emo" and he's a shitty old man himself -_-
No one needs me I dont need them either, I'm in hell anyways
oh anyways I'm thinking this while now I've arrived in school... nothing changed still alone
Untill someone suddenly called my name *Aliciiaaa!!! Hay!!!*
*what the h....* i mumbled, I turned around and on my surprise guess who, Andy.
What's the dork here anyways, I thought... so I asked *what u wanna?* and glared at him
*err well I.. i thought maybe we could go to class together..* he mubeled, but enought to make me hear
what's with him today, i thought but never mind... *err okey but keep a distance away from me will u?*
*about that.. why? Or nah okey* he said and walked by my side but hold his distance from me
We came to class and everyone shouted out *ouuuuhhhhhh Andy coming to school with his girl today!!*
I surprisely looked at them and later him, all he did was smiled and went to his place
I thought it might be a joke so doesnt matter, I went to my place
After class the girls came to me(how un usual), they started to ask alot
*when did u 2 became a couple? why didnt u say? how did u 2 meet? is it good realationship btw u two?*
I didnt get a freaking word what they said, I looked at him and he looked at me and smiled
What the? this have to be a dream, this IS a dream, a night mare, or I'm allredy in hell
Then i got annoyed and asked *what the hell r u all talking about?*
They looked at me surprisely and the the whole class laughted even Andy *come on Alicia noo need to hide it*
I looked at the seriously *i'm NOT joking* I glared at them
Andy came to me and took my han and walked outta the class *what are u doing? let go!!* I screamed
But still he looked angry and then he stoppe when we was on the back school yard...
*what's goin on? why is there such Lies like tha...* he grabbed my hand and kissed me
what? what's going on? what? why Aint i doing anything? this is wrong, i thought and slapped him later
*WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING???* Tears ran down my face, and i looked at him
*Alicia I didnt mean to... I'm sorry, it's just my feelings... I told them a lie okey? I said u and me where a couple... but that was because I really liked u alicia and then I thought maybe you would get some more friends that waa...* I slapped him
*Is that the way showing me you like me? that's the worse way to show me that you like me.. I HATE YOU*
I cried and ran away, m heart hurted I didnt know what to do, this isnt right, it's all wrong
and there ended my 3 months of pece
*******************************************************************************************************************************
Fallen
It has now been 2 weeks I didnt go to school, I dont know what will happen and I dont wanna see him
all 2 weeks I've been thinking of HIM only, maybe he just joked a bit, maybe he lied
But why do I feel like I wish it wasnt a lie, that he didnt joke? why do I feel that way?
Andy = Handsome boy = Inlove with me = not possibe, so I guess he joked But i'll stay home for another week
*Pling Plong* the door bell rang, and I'm alone myself at home so I have to open *sight*
*Yes? who is ther....* In my surprise infront of me was, yes I know u know allredy ANDY!!!!
*badum Badum* why is my heart beathing so fast seeing his smiling face infront of me?
We stood there a while, in silence, saying nothing just looked at each other on the eyes then he broke it
*Umm, i heard u where sick, and it's been 2 weeks now so I thought of coming here and visit u* he mumbeled
*oh really? well thank you and god bye* I said coldly and closed the door when he putted his hand there btw
*What?* I asked and didnt have the confident to look at him
*please dont ignore me will you? please i beg you* he said and looked at me *I like you please belive me*
*NO, sorry but I dont and i wont and i cant belive you* I said and looked at him and to my surprise
He looked at me too, with teary eyes He fell on his knees *please belive me I really do like you, please*
*what the? stand upp what r u doing? go away!! sheesh, you'll get over me and find a new* I said and it huted
he looked at me and his tears fell down his face, *Actually I, didnt have the confident for telling you I liked you*
I loked at him suprisely and he continued *fron the beggining it looked like u hated me allredy, i tried to change myself, talk to you, ask you questions, but you just ignored me, so I thought that maybe if i told them all that we where together then if i confessed, you might have heard some rumors and all so you wouldnt be surprised that I liked you I dint wish it to turn out this way belive me, please, if u dont want me then please just beli...*
Suddenly I find myself on my knees and where kissing him, but I felt happy now, I dont know why
Maybe I like him to? *You're the first one that have made me Fallen on my knees* I wispered
He looked at me suprisely and then he asked*you like me to* I suddnly blushed and turned away and nodded
*YEEESSSS, WOHOOOOOO!!!* He screamed of happined and smiled, and then he hugged me tightly
*I wanna tell you something Andy* I said wispering in his ears
*mm? yes?* he wispered back and it tickeled and made me giggle
*You woke me Upp from hell, and from lonelyness* I said and smiled
He smiled back and said *You woke me upp from everything* I couldn't be more happy
From that day he was the one that woke me upp everyday with warmth and love


I know sucky story


LOLS, XD.. That was so creativee. xP
Posted 8/24/08

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i got this idea from AngeLiliana's post in the your opinions forum, i re-arranged it a bit and formed this ^^. here goes: best short story wins; may it be adventure, romance, horror, some combination of the three, or etc, its welcome here ^__^

+ your story should have characters
+ its okay if you include some details from certain animes but don't base it entirely on them
+ is all =P


hmm.. lets see, what my powers can do! kidding..
Posted 8/24/08 , edited 8/24/08



**

There was once a girl named Hikari, she excels in her studies well and shes a very good daughter.

**
One day, at school, Hikari was walking going to school, and a group of thugs were looking at her.
She walked quickly to avoid them until a thug approached her.
"Hey young lady, come over here, ill give you some info" he said

She didnt respond and ran.
The thugs road their bikes and chased her.

They threw rocks at her, some she evaded but one hit her foot and she tripped.
"Young lady,never underestimate me!" The thug roared.
The group ganged at her and ripped her clothes, but she kicked them in the faces.
Luckily, they fell. The master thug's ID fell, she grabbed it and ran to her house.

****

She was on her bed, traumatized and drenched in fear.
Her vision was blurring and she saw the ID of the master thug.
She reached it and read the name. She cried in her pillow until the night came.

*****

Crows flying around, dark clouds covering the sky.

She woke up and looked at her window. Her computer opened by itself and connected to the internet.
The keyboard typed "Hell Correspondence" and it opened a website.

All that Hikari did was stare at it.

Suddenly, a girl appeared to her, red eyes and a sailors clothes.

******

"Who are you?" Hikari asked
"My name is Ai Enma" she replied
"Ai Enma?...the hell girl?" she replied

Ai nodded and moved closer to Hikari and asked her "Would you like to terminate your antagonist?"

Hikari remembered the happening a while ago and fell on her knees crying.
Ai came closer to her and said "I will kill him for you".
The ID came into Ai's hands and read it.

Kyouya Hibari

"Hikari-san, type this at the website" Ai said slowly
"What will happen next?" Hikari said, sobbing.

Another woman came down from her window and stared at Hikari.
"i will eliminate you antagonist" the woman said.

"But you have to pay retuition to me,
When one person is cursed, two graves are dug." Ai told her.
"You mean, ill be sent to hell too?" she asked
"Well, thats after you die" Ai said
"But it'll kill your antagoonist and his group" the woman persuaded.

The woman flopped on the floor as a straw doll with a red string.
"Pull the red string and he will be killed" Ai said as she handed the doll to hikari.

Hikari got it and thought of whats going to happen. Suddenly, she pulled the string.
A huge draft came into her room and Ai was gone.

*****

The Master thug was on his bike with his gang.
They saw a girl walking on the street late that night.
They attempted to rape her, but when she looked at them, Her red eyes unleashed a Mangekyou Sharingan.

She jumped up high and Striked them all with her powers.
Dead women held the gang and pulled them to hell, The master thug looked at Ai and tried shooting her.

"You like being the executioner, but you hate being the victim!" Ai said.

Ai pushed him to hell and he fell with his body burning.

***

Hikari lived in peace, thanks to Ai enma.

*****

END
Posted 8/24/08

SadPromise wrote:


LOLS, XD.. That was so creativee. xP


thihi got the first meening from u^^ thihi and the rest i stayed upp whole night to think it over while the other "Heart Broken" I wrote in just 15 minutes xD
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LOLS, XD.. That was so creativee. xP


thihi got the first meening from u^^ thihi and the rest i stayed upp whole night to think it over while the other "Heart Broken" I wrote in just 15 minutes xD


Wow, hahas. Your born to be a writer alright. O-o;
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