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Posted 8/25/08

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LOLS, XD.. That was so creativee. xP


thihi got the first meening from u^^ thihi and the rest i stayed upp whole night to think it over while the other "Heart Broken" I wrote in just 15 minutes xD


Wow, hahas. Your born to be a writer alright. O-o;


haha nah but i wish to be an author^^ but not skilled enough^^
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Posted 8/25/08

JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


LOLS, XD.. That was so creativee. xP


thihi got the first meening from u^^ thihi and the rest i stayed upp whole night to think it over while the other "Heart Broken" I wrote in just 15 minutes xD


Wow, hahas. Your born to be a writer alright. O-o;


haha nah but i wish to be an author^^ but not skilled enough^^


YOU ARE SKILLED, WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT !
Posted 8/25/08

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YOU ARE SKILLED, WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT !


not skilled, actually I'm writing a story now it's about 10 sides of A4 paper and then i got tierd of it xD
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JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:



YOU ARE SKILLED, WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT !


not skilled, actually I'm writing a story now it's about 10 sides of A4 paper and then i got tierd of it xD


Wow.. pro writer.. O__O..
your best subject must be L.A.. xD
Posted 8/25/08

SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:



YOU ARE SKILLED, WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT !


not skilled, actually I'm writing a story now it's about 10 sides of A4 paper and then i got tierd of it xD


Wow.. pro writer.. O__O..
your best subject must be L.A.. xD


haha AS IFFF xD I'll show u the story someday but ur eyes will get tierd of reading a boring story xD
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Posted 8/25/08

JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:



YOU ARE SKILLED, WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT !


not skilled, actually I'm writing a story now it's about 10 sides of A4 paper and then i got tierd of it xD


Wow.. pro writer.. O__O..
your best subject must be L.A.. xD


haha AS IFFF xD I'll show u the story someday but ur eyes will get tierd of reading a boring story xD


haha, no it wont. you lie. xD
Posted 8/25/08

SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:



YOU ARE SKILLED, WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT !


not skilled, actually I'm writing a story now it's about 10 sides of A4 paper and then i got tierd of it xD


Wow.. pro writer.. O__O..
your best subject must be L.A.. xD


haha AS IFFF xD I'll show u the story someday but ur eyes will get tierd of reading a boring story xD


haha, no it wont. you lie. xD


haha well think it over, 20chapters of what u just readed from Heart Broken or You woke me upp, 20 CHAPTERS
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Posted 8/25/08

JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:



YOU ARE SKILLED, WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT !


not skilled, actually I'm writing a story now it's about 10 sides of A4 paper and then i got tierd of it xD


Wow.. pro writer.. O__O..
your best subject must be L.A.. xD


haha AS IFFF xD I'll show u the story someday but ur eyes will get tierd of reading a boring story xD


haha, no it wont. you lie. xD


haha well think it over, 20chapters of what u just readed from Heart Broken or You woke me upp, 20 CHAPTERS


Lol, 20 chapters. It's okay ! :D
The chapters can be short anyways~ :3
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Posted 8/28/08

SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:


SadPromise wrote:



YOU ARE SKILLED, WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT !


not skilled, actually I'm writing a story now it's about 10 sides of A4 paper and then i got tierd of it xD


Wow.. pro writer.. O__O..
your best subject must be L.A.. xD


haha AS IFFF xD I'll show u the story someday but ur eyes will get tierd of reading a boring story xD


haha, no it wont. you lie. xD


haha well think it over, 20chapters of what u just readed from Heart Broken or You woke me upp, 20 CHAPTERS


Lol, 20 chapters. It's okay ! :D
The chapters can be short anyways~ :3


lol thats fine, i expected most of the stories to be that long anyway
Posted 8/29/08 , edited 8/29/08
The Memory.


" Gahd im so sorry!!!" Hina Matsuri said as she got up to help her "bump mate"
" yeah right!!!" a handsome boy stood up and glared at Hina...It was Harui Naime...this boy was known to be a delinquent and is feared by students in school.

from that day on they had this "mortal-enemies-relationship"

Hina was a highschool student who was told to leave their house and stay on a boarding house..coincidentally Harui was staying on the same house....squabbles can be heard from the house and a lot banging noises " Get lost you idiot!!!!" Harui hollered..."What did you call me?!!!" Hina shouted back. and there would be screaming .."GAH!!! I HATE YOU!!!!".


a few hours later: "it can't go on like this" Hina said and went off to Harui's room....

"Naime?..."
....he was lying on his bed...staring at the ceiling...."what..."
Hina decided to sit on the floor beside his bed..." neh.....Naime....why are you so cold to everyone?....you always ignore ppl..and me..........i don't understand.."

"....you wanna know why?...."...Harui faced Hina.."well...that's why im here......"

"...the woman who i loved the most in this world has forgotten me..." Harui said as his bangs covered his black eyes...
"wha--?" ...

." in our group .....our leader....has the power to erase a person's memories .." ...." one day she got involved in one of my street fights..a man hit her with a metal stick....the most gruesome thing anyone has done to her.....the incident made her approach our leader.... begging to her knees to erase her memory of me.."

From that moment on Hina began to understand Harui......both of them finally became good friends...and Harui opened up to Hina...but still cold to others...
~~~~
Years have passed and their friendship grew stronger..

"Harui...."
"Hmm?"
"Please don't forget me....."

....at the end of that day Harui gave her a necklace with a black shard of broken glass....he said that if this glass shattered by itself it means he has forgotten her already....

"That way...you'll know that I'll always remember you..." Harui smiles endearingly...


..Harui had made many friends throughout the many crazy misadventures both of them has been through.....and Hina liked Harui very much....and vice versa....

"Come on...we're going to be late...you idiot!!" Harui said joyfully....."hey give me back my toast!! moron!!!" Hina came running...
"Well...well...well......here's a happy couple....." A man appeared with a metal stick....together with others..
"Hina!!!!...."
Harui, who was just in time, shielded Hina with his whole body.... Hina watched in shocked tears Harui being beaten all over again...and that everytime a member of the gang will strike a metal on Hina ...a tired and bloody Harui would block it...

"hmph!....this is getting boring!!!!" the leader said...the mob finally left...

"Harui......no....Harui hold on to me....let's mend your wounds..." Hina struggled to guide Harui along the way...

When they got home Harui's wounds were carefully mended:
"Hina......." Harui whispered as if it was his last breath..
" Hmmm? don't worry...just rest...." Hina said happily...trying to encourage Harui....

"...thank you......"

Hina felt as if this will be the last words he will hear from Harui....

the next morning Harui was nowhere to be found...
"Harui.....? where are you?"

While Hina was busy looking all over the house...The leader of Harui's gang stood surprised to see Harui covered with bandages...." Harui!!! what happened to you?" (the leader already became close with Hina)

" Sayuri...." the leader approached Harui...
" I have a favor to ask ...." Harui said...and his eyes were again hidden by thos soft black bangs of his....
...Sayuri the leader however took it lightly and said..." oh of course!!! what is it?"

" ....make her... forget.... me...."

Sayuri's smile faded....." I....understand that you want her to keep from the dangers you are facing as a delinquent....But is this what you really want--...."

Sayuri was held to a stop..though Harui said nothing and remained silent....
She began to chant the words of the spell...

" Harui? where the heck did that idiot go.....?" Hina said...

"Memories that hold your past..pain that make your suffering last-----"

"Harui!!!!" Hina was surprised to see the pendant Harui has given to her..was glowing...

"Things had been done...Hina Matsuri's memory..--------"

Hina is starting to panic........suddenly all of her memories with Harui flashedback to her.... tears came flowing down from Hina's surprised eyes...

"...Harui..."

"....Will be gone..." and the black pendant shattered to pieces.

Hina forgot Harui....and continued living on...the gang who attacked them got arrested by the police...and Harui lived in peace again as a delinquent.

Three years later:

Hina was speeding on her rollerblades...when..
"Ouch..gahd im so sorry!!!.." Hina landed on the ground...she looked up ..and saw a boy with black hair and black eyes...
"yeah.......right..." the boy replied.












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O-O..
NASH IS FROM DESSERTS & SWEETS ! XD.
Posted 8/30/08

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O-O..
NASH IS FROM DESSERTS & SWEETS ! XD.


Yeah!!!! how did you know!!!!!!

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O-O..
NASH IS FROM DESSERTS & SWEETS ! XD.


Yeah!!!! how did you know!!!!!!



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Posted 8/30/08

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I have the best short-story ever >:3



-sniff sniff- What an interesting very SHORT story (or sentence) I've ever read. TT-TT
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I have the best short-story ever >:3



YES IT IS. >:O XD
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