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I feel like writing a horror story. :E


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Im Not Good With Stroies XD
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JennyD wrote:

Well first meening was an Idea from SadPromise so we kinda cooperated and made a story together^^
not really well thought

You woke me Upp

Sunshine warming my face at 12:00 am.
*BAM BAM* I opened my eyes suprisely, and noticed it was only my sister at her room
I was still sleepy so I closed my eyes, then my damn dog came in and licked my cheek *YUCK, GET OTTA HERE* i screamed
How can i sleep now i thought so I got upp Turned on my computer and sat there the whole day, me and my computer ONLY. This is heaven i thought... looks at the watch *DANG*, OMG it's school tomorrow gotta sleep it's allredy 3am!!! (panic)

*******************************************************************************************************************************
First day

Going to school, first day of upper secondary school , I'm sooo tierd
Summer Vacation was nice thought, but still i'm tierd
Coming to school... oh wait sorry forgot my name^^ I'm Alicia, a girl, that's all...
Continueing, coming to a new school knowing No one, and I dont really care
This is hell, school is hell, and u know what's the worse? I'm sitting beside what they call schools "Handsome prince" Yuuck. I dont like him, he's so full of himeslf, he only sees HIM self -_- YUCK YUCK
when we're doing some subjects we have to cooperate he does it himself and when ever we talk he always looks at another derition, it's annoying he's an ANNOYING BRAT!!! YUCK, and why am I thinking of him allredy?? Bad thoughts, Bad thoughts.... So I started to Ignore him after the first day
weather he asked something, he wanted something or looked at me I didn't talk to him
so was my first day (does not really care)
*******************************************************************************************************************************
3 Months later
I stopped to think about that guy besides me in school, called Andy yuuuck
And he sopped asking me question and all like 2months after i ignores him
I dont need anyone, my lill sister says I'm wierd so I suppose so
My dad doesnt want me at his house he says i'm like a "Emo" and he's a shitty old man himself -_-
No one needs me I dont need them either, I'm in hell anyways
oh anyways I'm thinking this while now I've arrived in school... nothing changed still alone
Untill someone suddenly called my name *Aliciiaaa!!! Hay!!!*
*what the h....* i mumbled, I turned around and on my surprise guess who, Andy.
What's the dork here anyways, I thought... so I asked *what u wanna?* and glared at him
*err well I.. i thought maybe we could go to class together..* he mubeled, but enought to make me hear
what's with him today, i thought but never mind... *err okey but keep a distance away from me will u?*
*about that.. why? Or nah okey* he said and walked by my side but hold his distance from me
We came to class and everyone shouted out *ouuuuhhhhhh Andy coming to school with his girl today!!*
I surprisely looked at them and later him, all he did was smiled and went to his place
I thought it might be a joke so doesnt matter, I went to my place
After class the girls came to me(how un usual), they started to ask alot
*when did u 2 became a couple? why didnt u say? how did u 2 meet? is it good realationship btw u two?*
I didnt get a freaking word what they said, I looked at him and he looked at me and smiled
What the? this have to be a dream, this IS a dream, a night mare, or I'm allredy in hell
Then i got annoyed and asked *what the hell r u all talking about?*
They looked at me surprisely and the the whole class laughted even Andy *come on Alicia noo need to hide it*
I looked at the seriously *i'm NOT joking* I glared at them
Andy came to me and took my han and walked outta the class *what are u doing? let go!!* I screamed
But still he looked angry and then he stoppe when we was on the back school yard...
*what's goin on? why is there such Lies like tha...* he grabbed my hand and kissed me
what? what's going on? what? why Aint i doing anything? this is wrong, i thought and slapped him later
*WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING???* Tears ran down my face, and i looked at him
*Alicia I didnt mean to... I'm sorry, it's just my feelings... I told them a lie okey? I said u and me where a couple... but that was because I really liked u alicia and then I thought maybe you would get some more friends that waa...* I slapped him
*Is that the way showing me you like me? that's the worse way to show me that you like me.. I HATE YOU*
I cried and ran away, m heart hurted I didnt know what to do, this isnt right, it's all wrong
and there ended my 3 months of pece
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Fallen
It has now been 2 weeks I didnt go to school, I dont know what will happen and I dont wanna see him
all 2 weeks I've been thinking of HIM only, maybe he just joked a bit, maybe he lied
But why do I feel like I wish it wasnt a lie, that he didnt joke? why do I feel that way?
Andy = Handsome boy = Inlove with me = not possibe, so I guess he joked But i'll stay home for another week
*Pling Plong* the door bell rang, and I'm alone myself at home so I have to open *sight*
*Yes? who is ther....* In my surprise infront of me was, yes I know u know allredy ANDY!!!!
*badum Badum* why is my heart beathing so fast seeing his smiling face infront of me?
We stood there a while, in silence, saying nothing just looked at each other on the eyes then he broke it
*Umm, i heard u where sick, and it's been 2 weeks now so I thought of coming here and visit u* he mumbeled
*oh really? well thank you and god bye* I said coldly and closed the door when he putted his hand there btw
*What?* I asked and didnt have the confident to look at him
*please dont ignore me will you? please i beg you* he said and looked at me *I like you please belive me*
*NO, sorry but I dont and i wont and i cant belive you* I said and looked at him and to my surprise
He looked at me too, with teary eyes He fell on his knees *please belive me I really do like you, please*
*what the? stand upp what r u doing? go away!! sheesh, you'll get over me and find a new* I said and it huted
he looked at me and his tears fell down his face, *Actually I, didnt have the confident for telling you I liked you*
I loked at him suprisely and he continued *fron the beggining it looked like u hated me allredy, i tried to change myself, talk to you, ask you questions, but you just ignored me, so I thought that maybe if i told them all that we where together then if i confessed, you might have heard some rumors and all so you wouldnt be surprised that I liked you I dint wish it to turn out this way belive me, please, if u dont want me then please just beli...*
Suddenly I find myself on my knees and where kissing him, but I felt happy now, I dont know why
Maybe I like him to? *You're the first one that have made me Fallen on my knees* I wispered
He looked at me suprisely and then he asked*you like me to* I suddnly blushed and turned away and nodded
*YEEESSSS, WOHOOOOOO!!!* He screamed of happined and smiled, and then he hugged me tightly
*I wanna tell you something Andy* I said wispering in his ears
*mm? yes?* he wispered back and it tickeled and made me giggle
*You woke me Upp from hell, and from lonelyness* I said and smiled
He smiled back and said *You woke me upp from everything* I couldn't be more happy
From that day he was the one that woke me upp everyday with warmth and love


I know sucky story


LOLS, XD.. That was so creativee. xP

this is the bestest story i read i like it!!!!

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anime343 wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:

Well first meening was an Idea from SadPromise so we kinda cooperated and made a story together^^
not really well thought

You woke me Upp

Sunshine warming my face at 12:00 am.
*BAM BAM* I opened my eyes suprisely, and noticed it was only my sister at her room
I was still sleepy so I closed my eyes, then my damn dog came in and licked my cheek *YUCK, GET OTTA HERE* i screamed
How can i sleep now i thought so I got upp Turned on my computer and sat there the whole day, me and my computer ONLY. This is heaven i thought... looks at the watch *DANG*, OMG it's school tomorrow gotta sleep it's allredy 3am!!! (panic)

*******************************************************************************************************************************
First day

Going to school, first day of upper secondary school , I'm sooo tierd
Summer Vacation was nice thought, but still i'm tierd
Coming to school... oh wait sorry forgot my name^^ I'm Alicia, a girl, that's all...
Continueing, coming to a new school knowing No one, and I dont really care
This is hell, school is hell, and u know what's the worse? I'm sitting beside what they call schools "Handsome prince" Yuuck. I dont like him, he's so full of himeslf, he only sees HIM self -_- YUCK YUCK
when we're doing some subjects we have to cooperate he does it himself and when ever we talk he always looks at another derition, it's annoying he's an ANNOYING BRAT!!! YUCK, and why am I thinking of him allredy?? Bad thoughts, Bad thoughts.... So I started to Ignore him after the first day
weather he asked something, he wanted something or looked at me I didn't talk to him
so was my first day (does not really care)
*******************************************************************************************************************************
3 Months later
I stopped to think about that guy besides me in school, called Andy yuuuck
And he sopped asking me question and all like 2months after i ignores him
I dont need anyone, my lill sister says I'm wierd so I suppose so
My dad doesnt want me at his house he says i'm like a "Emo" and he's a shitty old man himself -_-
No one needs me I dont need them either, I'm in hell anyways
oh anyways I'm thinking this while now I've arrived in school... nothing changed still alone
Untill someone suddenly called my name *Aliciiaaa!!! Hay!!!*
*what the h....* i mumbled, I turned around and on my surprise guess who, Andy.
What's the dork here anyways, I thought... so I asked *what u wanna?* and glared at him
*err well I.. i thought maybe we could go to class together..* he mubeled, but enought to make me hear
what's with him today, i thought but never mind... *err okey but keep a distance away from me will u?*
*about that.. why? Or nah okey* he said and walked by my side but hold his distance from me
We came to class and everyone shouted out *ouuuuhhhhhh Andy coming to school with his girl today!!*
I surprisely looked at them and later him, all he did was smiled and went to his place
I thought it might be a joke so doesnt matter, I went to my place
After class the girls came to me(how un usual), they started to ask alot
*when did u 2 became a couple? why didnt u say? how did u 2 meet? is it good realationship btw u two?*
I didnt get a freaking word what they said, I looked at him and he looked at me and smiled
What the? this have to be a dream, this IS a dream, a night mare, or I'm allredy in hell
Then i got annoyed and asked *what the hell r u all talking about?*
They looked at me surprisely and the the whole class laughted even Andy *come on Alicia noo need to hide it*
I looked at the seriously *i'm NOT joking* I glared at them
Andy came to me and took my han and walked outta the class *what are u doing? let go!!* I screamed
But still he looked angry and then he stoppe when we was on the back school yard...
*what's goin on? why is there such Lies like tha...* he grabbed my hand and kissed me
what? what's going on? what? why Aint i doing anything? this is wrong, i thought and slapped him later
*WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING???* Tears ran down my face, and i looked at him
*Alicia I didnt mean to... I'm sorry, it's just my feelings... I told them a lie okey? I said u and me where a couple... but that was because I really liked u alicia and then I thought maybe you would get some more friends that waa...* I slapped him
*Is that the way showing me you like me? that's the worse way to show me that you like me.. I HATE YOU*
I cried and ran away, m heart hurted I didnt know what to do, this isnt right, it's all wrong
and there ended my 3 months of pece
*******************************************************************************************************************************
Fallen
It has now been 2 weeks I didnt go to school, I dont know what will happen and I dont wanna see him
all 2 weeks I've been thinking of HIM only, maybe he just joked a bit, maybe he lied
But why do I feel like I wish it wasnt a lie, that he didnt joke? why do I feel that way?
Andy = Handsome boy = Inlove with me = not possibe, so I guess he joked But i'll stay home for another week
*Pling Plong* the door bell rang, and I'm alone myself at home so I have to open *sight*
*Yes? who is ther....* In my surprise infront of me was, yes I know u know allredy ANDY!!!!
*badum Badum* why is my heart beathing so fast seeing his smiling face infront of me?
We stood there a while, in silence, saying nothing just looked at each other on the eyes then he broke it
*Umm, i heard u where sick, and it's been 2 weeks now so I thought of coming here and visit u* he mumbeled
*oh really? well thank you and god bye* I said coldly and closed the door when he putted his hand there btw
*What?* I asked and didnt have the confident to look at him
*please dont ignore me will you? please i beg you* he said and looked at me *I like you please belive me*
*NO, sorry but I dont and i wont and i cant belive you* I said and looked at him and to my surprise
He looked at me too, with teary eyes He fell on his knees *please belive me I really do like you, please*
*what the? stand upp what r u doing? go away!! sheesh, you'll get over me and find a new* I said and it huted
he looked at me and his tears fell down his face, *Actually I, didnt have the confident for telling you I liked you*
I loked at him suprisely and he continued *fron the beggining it looked like u hated me allredy, i tried to change myself, talk to you, ask you questions, but you just ignored me, so I thought that maybe if i told them all that we where together then if i confessed, you might have heard some rumors and all so you wouldnt be surprised that I liked you I dint wish it to turn out this way belive me, please, if u dont want me then please just beli...*
Suddenly I find myself on my knees and where kissing him, but I felt happy now, I dont know why
Maybe I like him to? *You're the first one that have made me Fallen on my knees* I wispered
He looked at me suprisely and then he asked*you like me to* I suddnly blushed and turned away and nodded
*YEEESSSS, WOHOOOOOO!!!* He screamed of happined and smiled, and then he hugged me tightly
*I wanna tell you something Andy* I said wispering in his ears
*mm? yes?* he wispered back and it tickeled and made me giggle
*You woke me Upp from hell, and from lonelyness* I said and smiled
He smiled back and said *You woke me upp from everything* I couldn't be more happy
From that day he was the one that woke me upp everyday with warmth and love


I know sucky story


LOLS, XD.. That was so creativee. xP

this is the bestest story i read i like it!!!!



I know. Jenny's good at making stories.. xD
Posted 9/10/08

anime343 wrote:


SadPromise wrote:


JennyD wrote:

Well first meening was an Idea from SadPromise so we kinda cooperated and made a story together^^
not really well thought

You woke me Upp

Sunshine warming my face at 12:00 am.
*BAM BAM* I opened my eyes suprisely, and noticed it was only my sister at her room
I was still sleepy so I closed my eyes, then my damn dog came in and licked my cheek *YUCK, GET OTTA HERE* i screamed
How can i sleep now i thought so I got upp Turned on my computer and sat there the whole day, me and my computer ONLY. This is heaven i thought... looks at the watch *DANG*, OMG it's school tomorrow gotta sleep it's allredy 3am!!! (panic)

*******************************************************************************************************************************
First day

Going to school, first day of upper secondary school , I'm sooo tierd
Summer Vacation was nice thought, but still i'm tierd
Coming to school... oh wait sorry forgot my name^^ I'm Alicia, a girl, that's all...
Continueing, coming to a new school knowing No one, and I dont really care
This is hell, school is hell, and u know what's the worse? I'm sitting beside what they call schools "Handsome prince" Yuuck. I dont like him, he's so full of himeslf, he only sees HIM self -_- YUCK YUCK
when we're doing some subjects we have to cooperate he does it himself and when ever we talk he always looks at another derition, it's annoying he's an ANNOYING BRAT!!! YUCK, and why am I thinking of him allredy?? Bad thoughts, Bad thoughts.... So I started to Ignore him after the first day
weather he asked something, he wanted something or looked at me I didn't talk to him
so was my first day (does not really care)
*******************************************************************************************************************************
3 Months later
I stopped to think about that guy besides me in school, called Andy yuuuck
And he sopped asking me question and all like 2months after i ignores him
I dont need anyone, my lill sister says I'm wierd so I suppose so
My dad doesnt want me at his house he says i'm like a "Emo" and he's a shitty old man himself -_-
No one needs me I dont need them either, I'm in hell anyways
oh anyways I'm thinking this while now I've arrived in school... nothing changed still alone
Untill someone suddenly called my name *Aliciiaaa!!! Hay!!!*
*what the h....* i mumbled, I turned around and on my surprise guess who, Andy.
What's the dork here anyways, I thought... so I asked *what u wanna?* and glared at him
*err well I.. i thought maybe we could go to class together..* he mubeled, but enought to make me hear
what's with him today, i thought but never mind... *err okey but keep a distance away from me will u?*
*about that.. why? Or nah okey* he said and walked by my side but hold his distance from me
We came to class and everyone shouted out *ouuuuhhhhhh Andy coming to school with his girl today!!*
I surprisely looked at them and later him, all he did was smiled and went to his place
I thought it might be a joke so doesnt matter, I went to my place
After class the girls came to me(how un usual), they started to ask alot
*when did u 2 became a couple? why didnt u say? how did u 2 meet? is it good realationship btw u two?*
I didnt get a freaking word what they said, I looked at him and he looked at me and smiled
What the? this have to be a dream, this IS a dream, a night mare, or I'm allredy in hell
Then i got annoyed and asked *what the hell r u all talking about?*
They looked at me surprisely and the the whole class laughted even Andy *come on Alicia noo need to hide it*
I looked at the seriously *i'm NOT joking* I glared at them
Andy came to me and took my han and walked outta the class *what are u doing? let go!!* I screamed
But still he looked angry and then he stoppe when we was on the back school yard...
*what's goin on? why is there such Lies like tha...* he grabbed my hand and kissed me
what? what's going on? what? why Aint i doing anything? this is wrong, i thought and slapped him later
*WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING???* Tears ran down my face, and i looked at him
*Alicia I didnt mean to... I'm sorry, it's just my feelings... I told them a lie okey? I said u and me where a couple... but that was because I really liked u alicia and then I thought maybe you would get some more friends that waa...* I slapped him
*Is that the way showing me you like me? that's the worse way to show me that you like me.. I HATE YOU*
I cried and ran away, m heart hurted I didnt know what to do, this isnt right, it's all wrong
and there ended my 3 months of pece
*******************************************************************************************************************************
Fallen
It has now been 2 weeks I didnt go to school, I dont know what will happen and I dont wanna see him
all 2 weeks I've been thinking of HIM only, maybe he just joked a bit, maybe he lied
But why do I feel like I wish it wasnt a lie, that he didnt joke? why do I feel that way?
Andy = Handsome boy = Inlove with me = not possibe, so I guess he joked But i'll stay home for another week
*Pling Plong* the door bell rang, and I'm alone myself at home so I have to open *sight*
*Yes? who is ther....* In my surprise infront of me was, yes I know u know allredy ANDY!!!!
*badum Badum* why is my heart beathing so fast seeing his smiling face infront of me?
We stood there a while, in silence, saying nothing just looked at each other on the eyes then he broke it
*Umm, i heard u where sick, and it's been 2 weeks now so I thought of coming here and visit u* he mumbeled
*oh really? well thank you and god bye* I said coldly and closed the door when he putted his hand there btw
*What?* I asked and didnt have the confident to look at him
*please dont ignore me will you? please i beg you* he said and looked at me *I like you please belive me*
*NO, sorry but I dont and i wont and i cant belive you* I said and looked at him and to my surprise
He looked at me too, with teary eyes He fell on his knees *please belive me I really do like you, please*
*what the? stand upp what r u doing? go away!! sheesh, you'll get over me and find a new* I said and it huted
he looked at me and his tears fell down his face, *Actually I, didnt have the confident for telling you I liked you*
I loked at him suprisely and he continued *fron the beggining it looked like u hated me allredy, i tried to change myself, talk to you, ask you questions, but you just ignored me, so I thought that maybe if i told them all that we where together then if i confessed, you might have heard some rumors and all so you wouldnt be surprised that I liked you I dint wish it to turn out this way belive me, please, if u dont want me then please just beli...*
Suddenly I find myself on my knees and where kissing him, but I felt happy now, I dont know why
Maybe I like him to? *You're the first one that have made me Fallen on my knees* I wispered
He looked at me suprisely and then he asked*you like me to* I suddnly blushed and turned away and nodded
*YEEESSSS, WOHOOOOOO!!!* He screamed of happined and smiled, and then he hugged me tightly
*I wanna tell you something Andy* I said wispering in his ears
*mm? yes?* he wispered back and it tickeled and made me giggle
*You woke me Upp from hell, and from lonelyness* I said and smiled
He smiled back and said *You woke me upp from everything* I couldn't be more happy
From that day he was the one that woke me upp everyday with warmth and love


I know sucky story


LOLS, XD.. That was so creativee. xP


this is the bestest story i read i like it!!!!


Hehe u think so?? well maybe not ur best but I'm happy u liked it *hug* and thx
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whatcha talking about?? veryone has a story~ *rainbow background appears*
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Lokkin wrote:

Im Not Good With Stroies XD


whatcha talking about?? veryone has a story~ *rainbow background appears*


XD I Dont got one XD *blank backgrorund appears* XD
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XxPastaxX wrote:


Lokkin wrote:

Im Not Good With Stroies XD


whatcha talking about?? veryone has a story~ *rainbow background appears*


XD I Dont got one XD *blank backgrorund appears* XD


sure you do =P *sparkly effects occur*
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Silmeria42696 wrote:

I have the best short-story ever >:3



YES IT IS. >:O XD


Pwuhahaha! Thanks~ :3
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This is just the Summary of my Story~
I actually got Chapter 1 - Scene 1 and Scene 2~ xD
(This is actually the story of my Character.....)


A long time ago, When I was around 6 years of age, I killed our Clan as I accidentally drank the blood of my mortal friend and went berserk. My whole clan has a Rose imprinted on any part of our body to show that you are one of the clan and I was the only one left with the Rose Mark. During the day that I killed my whole clan, Travelers came pass by my village and saw me. So they took me in and raised me in their Castle (The travelers who found me are the Royal Clan of the Underworld). But on the same day I lost my memories (Caused by Amnesia because of painful things that happened and my mind wanted to forget). The ones who took me in are Countess of the Underworld (Rion), Luna of the Underworld and Nicholai of the Underworld. They tried to train me to not be berserk whenever I drink Human/Mortal Blood and when I was 8 years old, they now named me the Minerva of Seducers.
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I remember that day, a bright, sunny afternoon. standing in the park, watching people go by... i was hiding my hands behind my back so nobody would see them. i walked on, wodering what my purpose was, why was i in this world. i was lost in the boiling tumult of my mind, angry,sad, wonder,curiosity, all these feeling mixed together in one enigma i did not understand. i remember the days when i was called a monster, by my friends, my foes, even people i did not know. i did not know why either. what was wrong with me? i did not know. i was clueless, helpless, in this world. i was lost. and as i was strolling, a small,lone, yellow butterfly came across my path. i held out my 12 inch long index finger blade. it flew closer,and closer,and closer till finally, it alighted upon my monstrous, bladelike,finger. i smiled, and realized that i was not a monster, no..... i was a masterpiece.


i wrote this short story, but inspiration from Tim Burton, Creator of Edward Scissorhands, i must give credit. thank you.

i have another one, but i dont want anybody seeing it. you'll have to wait until its published! =P
Posted 10/2/08 , edited 10/2/08
The sun beats down on a lone figure. The field is empty, except for a few, who silently stand out his way. He tugs at his shirt, the sweat dripping from his face. The crowd watches, waiting in anticipation. Noone dares to move. His opponent stands opposite to him, twitching ever so slightly, nervous. This is his last chance. The lone man smiles. He releases it. Time seems to pass slowly, as it cuts through the air. The opponent sees it come towards him.

And in his fear, he reacts too quickly. Swinging his bat too fast. A hard dull sound is heard as it hits the leather glove of the man behind him. The opponent sighs. The lone man punches the air. The crowd erupts into cheers. And the man with the glove yells, "STRIKE THREE!! YOU'RE OUT!"

Inspired by a baseball movie I saw a few hours back. >D I love sports movies, they're always good. <3
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here i go it's a story i did okkk nyuu hope you like~


a girl lived in one of the beggest and bestest city she was rich but her mother dies when she was very young she livs with her father she was so sed but she never showed that to her father she all way's smiled her name is veronica cuchky

the girl all way's wanted to see her mather ever seen's she dies *but..how*said veronica

veronica looked at the moon * i want to..see her..so much im so lonley here...* the girl want to sleep in the window

when she woke up she saw a big japanese looking mansion!

*were am i???* veronica siad she enterd the mansion she thought:* a mansion? it looks so old ..nobody's here..*

the girl looked Arounde * this..place it's. familor but i never been here before* the girl heard balls*ah! this sound* she truned Arounde

nothing*what..was that it was like..* veronica keeped going deeper and deeper

over here somehting or someone said veronica looked and heard balls again *w.w..what!!*

over here..* siad the thing or person a white butterfly appeared *w..what!!* said veronica

the butterfly gat closer to veronica it touched her nose *don't be scared or..she get you..*said the thnig or person *s..she??* said veronica *please you must get out ..before..* a sream all must dies heard (like mony realy)

*ahh* said veronica the butterfly vanished veronica's body gat cold *my.. body..*said veronica whan she looked she saw a woman she hed tattoos all over her body *gave me you're soul..to the other side..*

the gilr was about to scream but then *the..other ..side?*said veronica the womam gat closer *ahh..ehhh..w..what ..*the gilr woke up and *kyaaaaaa get away from me!!* and run as fast as she coude the woman get closer tho *n.. no.. no..!!!!!!* she fell the woman was so close now*to ..the ..other side*siad the woman *ah..ah ..AHHHHHHH!!!*...

the girl cloes her eye's when she opened them she saw a guy (he looked like ikuto let's say that)

run now* said the guy *h..huh* the woman let out a scream*ahhhhh* *eh stupid gilr* the guy carryed veronica and run off

veronica thought * what's gonig on i was sleeping wan't i??* she saw the guy *umm.. exuse me..but what's gonig on were are we..??* the guy just looked sed

a.ahh sorry..mi sorry!!) the guy gat her arm * i was just kiddy were in castel orya* the gile was so close to his face she blushed*ahh.. i see want a ..castill* yes said the guy

no way what am i doing here* said veronica * you'll have to go to the other side* the girl's eyed winden *..the.. other........side.....*said veronica * yes im seak* said the guy *s..seak?? i see now y..yes im veronica cuchky

you know you're here for a reason* said seak*w.what what excse me..but what reason??*said veronica *you wanted to see someone you lost * seak get closer to veronica's face*right??*veronica blushed*y..yes?? oo h my .mather*said veronica

are you going to the other side ..for that you need to* a scream was heard *ahh she's here run now!!*said seak *y..yes*siad veronica she run as fast as she coude looking back to seak * no i don't want to be ...no!! i must become ..strog*

she run to the door with lock's the lock's were gone when she gat close she fall *ahh oww*said veronica *what.. a ocean so many light*

i'll find the story later now i g2g nyuuu
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i have a question! should it be a fanfic? or can it be an original?
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All of you just take from web....i know...i can find if i wan
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