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[Fanfiction] Love Is Painful
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Title: Love is Painful
Rating: T (for some bloody scenes and language and kissing and stuff)
Pairing: Amuto
Status: incomplete

Chapter 1

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This fanfic is on my Story Alert on FF.net. I don't remember if it was finished or not. x.x But it was/is really good.
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wat's with the weird names?
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this is a very good idea of a fanfiction.
i like it so far, and can't wait for more.
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Awww its so sad! =[ You did a great job though =] Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Yep yep. Cant wait for next chapter what happens but some weird names... hehehehehehe
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Chapter 2

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wow!!that waz awesome!!!i cant wait for the next chapter!
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hmmmm...*waiting*
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ahh loved it, can't wait for the next one
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Chapter 3

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wow o.o its nice story =3 the chapters so long =o which is good thing =3
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love this story!! NYA!!~ haha. i seriously sometimes say that though......
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Chapter 4

Natsuya: Here’s chapter 4! Enjoy!

X-x-Flashback of chapter 3-x-X

I was heaving so hard. We made it. “Good job. You made it just in time. It’s my order to lock it up at exactly 11:00.”

“You c-huffs could have huffs waited a second!” I said huffing and puffing.

“Sorry, orders are orders.” He left. I finally got my breathing normal.

“I haven’t ran that fast in a long time!” I exclaimed.

“Same here!” Miki said huffing.

“Where’s Ikuto?” I asked. He was gone and my hand felt different without his warmth…

X-x-Somewhere else-x-X

Someone’s POV

“Damn, we failed!”

“I am so sorry for my failure.”

“That’s alright. How did you escape the police?”

“After that girl left, I knocked them down and ran as fast as I could here.”

“I see. Did you notice anything in particular about Hinamori Amu?”

“I did notice that she panicked a lot when she couldn’t find her silver cross charm that was on her bracelet. There was nothing on the bracelet when I took it.”

“Excellent. You have done well. We now know one of her weakness. You can go now.”

“Thank you very much for the compliment, Utau-sama!”

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Falling In Love

Amu’s POV

“Ok, Amu-chan! Tell us everything.”

“Chill out, Ran. Okay. Well, I was walking…” I told Ran, Miki, and Su my story. When Miki and I went back to our dorms, I was attacked by Ran. I fell down.

X-x-Flashback-x-X

“Amu-chan!! Where were you?! We were so worried about you! I knew I should’ve walked back here with you! Tell us what happened!!”

“Ran, calm down. I’m alright and it was thanks to Ikuto and Miki that I made it back in time.”

“Ikuto-san? I thought you hated him and won’t ever call him by his first name desu.”

“Well, I guess he deserves that much since he helped me.” Actually, I’m not even sure myself.

“Stop stalling. Ok, Amu-chan! Tell us everything.”

X-x-End of Flashback-x-X


“That stupid robber. That bracelet was so precious to you!”

“Yea, I don’t know what I would have done if Ikuto hadn’t found it.”

“Well, that was a close call desu. Do you have any idea how the robber looked like desu?”

“No, because he was dressed in all black and clothing that covered most of his body. He was wearing black gloves and a cloth that covered his mouth…”

“Did he say anything?” Miki asked.

“Well, he only cursed when I bit his finger because he was covering my mouth but other than that, no.”

“This is really troublesome. We have no leads on this guy. Do you think he’ll go after you again?”

“I don’t think so because the police caught him but he might have escaped…”

“Don’t worry, Amu-chan! We’re here for you so don’t be afraid! By the way, you didn’t get hurt did you?” Ran said.

“I only have a cut on my right arm when he pinned me down but it’s not serious.”

“Let me look at it desu.” Su is like the mother of us. She knows exactly what to do when we get injured or sick. She examined my arm. She touched the cut gently but I still yelped, “Ow!”

“Su, how is she?” Ran asked.

“Amu-chan was wrong, this is serious. There is blood all over the wound and a bruise around it. Come over here, Amu-chan desu. Let me take care of it but it should heal in a few days though desu.” She led me to the kitchen and wiped the blood and patched it up for me.

“Thanks, Su.”

“No problem desu.” She smiled. “We should get to sleep soon.”

“Why? We don’t have school tomorrow since it’s a Sunday and we begin work at 11 a.m.”

“Um, Amu-chan? Do you even know how much time we spent talking?”

“45 minutes?”

“Look at the clock.” Miki replied. I looked up at the clock. My jaw dropped.

“It’s 1 a.m. already?!”

“Yea, so let’s hurry up and go to bed.”

X-x-9:55 a.m.-x-X

I woke up yawning. Miki was still sleeping and Ran and Su slept in our dorms last night. For once, I woke up before them. I went over to the balcony to get fresh air. I looked down and saw Ikuto. He was walking and looks like Utau isn’t with him. He was staring at the sun and he turned around at the building. He looked up and saw me. His eyes widened.

“Can you come down here?” I nodded. My dorm is on the 2nd floor by the way. I made my way downstairs, changed of course, and found him waiting outside the entrance door.

“Hi. What are you doing here?”

“I’m just taking a walk. You?”

“I just woke up and decided to take a breather. I have to go to work soon anyways.”

“I see.” He smirked.

“What are you smirking for?!”

“Nothing.” He tried to make a straight face but I could still see him plotting something behind his eyes.

“Thank you again.”

“For what?”

“Last night.”

“Oh. It’s not a big deal. I found it on the ground. Who gave it to you by the way?” I asked trying to sound casual.

“Sorry, I gotta go now. Bye, Tsukiyomi. And no, I won’t call you by your first name.” I said answering his unasked question.

“Bye, Amu.” I stomped down the hallway fuming. I reached the elevator but I waited for a few minutes but it didn’t open. I tried again but the light above the elevator stayed at number 4. I decided to take the stairs. I rushed up the stairs.

BANG!

“OW!!” I tripped. “What the hell?! How did I trip?!” I said asking myself. I looked down and there was a banana peel. Figures. There was also a piece of paper.

I’ve warned you.

Utau!! She did this! I groaned. I looked to see if I got hurt and sure enough I did. There was a bruise on my right knee, a big one in fact. I gently touched it and I winced. This is going to be one hell of a day. I trudged up the stairs to my dorm. I opened the door.

“Amu-chan! Where wer—”

“Hey.”

“What do you mean hey?! You’re limping and your knee has a hell of a bruise. What happened?!”

“Tripped on a banana peel.”

“Who the hell puts a banana peel on the floor like that?! Only people in shows do that!” Wow. Ran just cursed. She never curses. She only curses when she is extremely mad but she is always cheerful.

“I don’t know who.” Of course I knew—Utau.

“Well, let’s fix up your knee desu.”

“Thanks, Su.”

Ding Dong! Ding Dong!

“Coming!” Ran yelled. She opened the door. A delivery man.

“What is this?” Ran asked.

“A delivery from the Easter’s Café.”

“Thank you.” She closed the door.

“What is it?” I asked.

“I don’t know,” she replied. “But it’s for you, Amu-chan.”

“Me?” I reached for the box. Sure enough, it was addressed to me. I opened the box and there was a black mini skirt, a strawberry pin, a cat pin, a soccer ball pin, and a clover pin. There was also a letter.

To: Miss Hinamori Amu

This clothing in the box is going to be replacement for your other skirt. The strawberry pin is for you and the cat pin is for your friend, Miss Takayashi Miki, the soccer ball pin for Miss Takayashi Ran. This was requested by my son and his two friends. Enjoy your day.

From: The Owner of Easter’s Café

My eyes were wide.

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“WHAT THE HELL!!” I screamed.

“Amu-chan, quiet down. Some people are still sleeping even though it is 10:15.”

“Damn that Ikuto to hell. He is going to regret this.” I said with a flaming aura.

“Amu-chan, can I have the pin?”

“You actually want it?!”

“Well, it’s from Yoru.” Miki replied.

“Huh?” I looked back at the letter. The pins were from Ikuto and his two friends…it must be Daichi and Yoru.

“Then, the soccer ball pin must be mine.” Ran said excitedly.

“Why are you so excited?!”

“It’s because the pin was from Daichi!”

“Oh. Hey, wait! Su doesn’t get one…” I looked at Su. Her face was not sad, but happy. “Don’t you want one, Su?”

“No, it’s alright desu. I rather not have a pin or I can make one of my own if I want to.”

“Your right!”

“Um, Amu-chan? You should try on the skirt.”

“Oh crap, Miki you’re right.” I sighed. I went to the bathroom to get changed. I stepped out and Ran, Miki, and even Su were gaping at me. “Stop it! You’re making me embarrassed!”

“But Amu-chan, that skirt is really short.”

“Of course it is and that’s why I don’t like it!”

“You’ll get used to it. It only reaches down halfway between your knee and the end of your stomach.”

“Only? ONLY!! IT IS WAY TOO FREAKIN SHORT!!”

“Calm down, Amu-chan desu.”

“How can I calm down?!”

“You can start by not shouting.” Miki stated popping in. “By the way, we’re going to working in half an hour so hurry up.”

“What?! I need to hurry and eat breakfast! What’s today’s breakfast?”

“Scrambled eggs, bacon, and sausage with orange juice desu!”

“Thanks, Su.” I started to gulp down my breakfast.

X-x-At the Café-x-X

“Hi, Amu-ch—Geh! Why are you wearing a mini skirt?!”

“Tsukiyomi Ikuto-san requested that I wear this mini skirt.” I said angrily.

“Actually, it looks good on you, Amu-chan but I don’t think you like wearing revealing clothing right?”

“Duh!”

“By the way, I like your pin. Did you buy the pin yourself?”

“No. Requested.”

“Ha ha!”

“Stop laughing!”

“Anyways, could you take care of that table?”

“Fine.” I muttered. I walked over to the table I was assigned to. “Welcome to—Geh! Not you people again!!” Kukai, Daichi, Tadase-kun, Nagehiko, Kairi, Yoru, and…Ikuto were sitting at the table I was assigned. ‘Stupid Amaya. She probably knew that Ikuto was here…oh man, is she going to pay.’

“Hey, Amu. I like your skirt.” He smirked.

“Wipe your smirk off your face you dumbass.” I said menacingly. “And why the hell did you…request for me to wear a mini skirt and this pin?!” I pointed to my pin right above my heart.

“Aw, Amu, don’t you like the skirt? Or the pin?”

“Hell no!” But I was wondering why it was a strawberry pin…I remembered our…accident or whatever you call it. I blushed. ‘Damn blush!’

“Why are you blushing, Amu?” He smirked.

“Shut the hell up, Ikuto.” I said with flames around me.

“Oh, you calling me by my first name now, eh?” He was definitely adding fuel to my fire.

“Amu-chan?” I turned. Miki and Ran were coming towards me. “Amaya-chan told us to see what you were doing because you don’t seem to be pleasing the customers.

“Hey, Miki nya!”

“Hiya, Ran!”

“Hey. Thanks for the pin.” Ran and Miki chorused. While Miki and Ran were chatting with Daichi and Yoru, and Kairi, Tadase-kun, Kukai, and Nagehiko in their own conversation, I was stuck with Ikuto. Ikuto smirked; he knew that it was only me and him.

“Shut up.”

“I didn’t say anything.”

“You know what I mean. Anyways, what do you people want?”

“Strawberry Milk.”

“Do you have short-term memory?”

“No, why would I?”

“Because I told you that we don’t have Strawberry Milk in this café.”

“Really?” He smirked. My eyes were narrowed. Something suspicious is going on…my eyes widened. I went walked back into the kitchen away from Ikuto and on the machine with the drinks and stuff, it has something new on it, “Strawberry Milk”. ‘Are you freakin kidding me.’ I stomped back to Ikuto looking really pissed off. I could see that he was smirking. When I was a few feet from him, I started to shout, “I HA— ” Suddenly, I was facing the ground and almost going to knock into the floor. I shut my eyes tightly but I didn’t feel my face touch the ground. My face was on something warm and soft. I opened my eyes to find Ikuto under me and hugging me sitting up on the ground. This is basically the position we were in: He was sitting up and I was like hugging him with my head on his shoulder and my arms around him and his arms were around mine. I blushed furiously. I got off quickly still blushing. ‘Ouch!’ I looked down and it looks like my bruise got worse because my knees were on the hard floor when I fell.

“Amu-chan! Are you okay?!”

“Yea, I’m alright Ran.” I turned back to Ikuto and looked down. “Thanks.” I muttered. I could feel him smirking.

Ikuto’s POV (before Amu fell)

I saw Amu stomping towards me. I smirked. I asked my dad to install strawberry milk in the machine for drinks and it looks like Amu found out. I looked to my right beyond the boys talking at my table and found a man all covered up in clothes and looking at Amu.

“I HA—” Was she going to say I hate you? I saw what stopped Amu from saying that. The man that was looking at Amu stepped his foot out and purposely tripped Amu. Amu was falling and I reacted fast by going under her and catching her. We both fell down but I was sitting up and she was like on top of me. My arms were around her and I actually liked holding her…she was so small and cuddly. ‘What am I thinking?!’ Luckily, she didn’t get hurt but I saw that she had a bruise on her right knee…I saw that she noticed our position and blushed a bright red. I was smirking the whole time. I looked to my left and the guy that tripped Amu went out the door. ‘Damn, that bastard.’

“Amu-chan! Are you okay?!” the Ran girl asked.

“Yea, I’m alright Ran.” she replied. She turned back to me the muttered, “Thanks.” I have to admit that she is cute while blushing and looking down. ‘On second thought, I think I may be losing myself here.’ “No problem.” I answered.

X-x-After work-x-X

Amu’s POV

ARGH! I’m still blushing because of that scene! ‘But Ikuto’s arms around me were really warm and I felt protected in his hug. Argh! Stupid Amu, you’re losing your mind over here!’

“Amu-chan desu? Amu-chan desu!!”

“Wha?!”

“Are you there? We’re going home desu. By the way, how is your knee? It looks worse than before desu.” Su said with worrying eyes.

I smiled. “I’m alright, Su. Thanks. And you can go ahead first. I’ll be right behind you.”

“No way! What if some burglar ambushes you again?!” Ran said popping into the conversation.

“I’ll be fine. I have some self-defense you know.” I grinned. “I chased them down last time and I can do it again!”

“Well…if you say so, Amu-chan…but you’re late and not back in half an hour, you’re in big trouble.” Miki said.

“Got it! But I may be looking stores or something or window shopping.”

“Just hurry up desu!”

“Ok, I will. Now go! I have to change first. See you guys later!” They were hesitating and I gave them another smile and they left. I went to get changed.

X-x-Outside-x-X

Ah! Fresh air! I walked one step. “Ouch!” I looked down at my knee. ‘Crap, I didn’t let Su take care of it and it’s not bleeding like hell. This is going to take a long time to get home. The reason I didn’t want them to follow me is because of my knee. I’ll slow them down A LOT and I’ll be a nuisance to them.’

“Hey, Amu.” I snapped out of my thoughts and turned around quickly and winced. I shouldn’t have done that. “Ikuto?!”

“The one and only.” He smirked.

“Shut up. What are you doing here?!”

“I thought I should help you.”

“What?! Help me? How?” He walked over to me and looked at my knee. “Oh.” I muttered. He then picked me up bridal style.

“What do you think you’re doing?! Put me down!!”

“Be quiet. I’ll carry you there.”

“You don’t have to.” I began struggling in his arms.

“I want to.” he said quietly. I stopped moving. I looked up into his eyes. It was blank but he was blushing which was a rare sight. He looked down at me. I was suddenly absorbed into his eyes. I looked away blushing. “Thanks.” I muttered.

“No problem.” He mumbled and started running. “But first, I want to show you this place first.”

“What place?” I said with confused eyes. “Wait! Put me down first! People can see!”

“I won’t tell you and no because no one is really out here anyways.” I looked around and sure enough, there were only a few people walking and there were barely any cars on the road. “Fine.” I muttered. He smirked in victory. “Just stop smirking.” But of course, he still kept on smirking. I sighed. I began to slowly drift in and out. I didn’t know the surroundings of where Ikuto was walking. There were trees everywhere and it looked like it was a forest.

“Amu, we’re here.” I slowly opened my eyes. I gasped.

“It’s so beautiful!” There was a huge fountain in the middle of this empty space. You could see the stars sparkling and the water reflected the moon and it was a full moon tonight. It was breathtaking.

“I thought you might like it.” He said smiling.

“I do.” I smiled widely. “Thank you, Ikuto!” He laid me down on the edge of the fountain. “How did you find this place?”

“I happened to past by here. It seems like not many people come here but there is always water here. I play my violin here sometimes.”

“You play the violin?!” I asked surprised.

“Yea.”

“I play the piano.” I smiled. “Can I hear you play the violin sometime?”

“…Fine, but I have to listen to you play the piano. Got it?”

“Deal!” I smiled. I closed my eyes and a breeze blew at me lightly. That felt good. I opened my eyes and I found him starting at me. I once again found my eyes absorbed into his. He was looking into my eyes deeply, too. He sat down beside me without breaking my gaze. His face got closer to mine. Unconsciously, my face neared his. Our faces were only an inch close. I think I’m, no definitely, blushing since my face is so red and he is so handsome.

BAM!!

We both jumped a few inches. I looked up and saw fireworks. Who puts fireworks nowadays?! But I guess teenagers like to do something fun. I looked at Ikuto and he looked so handsome in the light of the fireworks. I was still blushing and it looks like he is blushing a little too.

“Shall we go home, Amu?”

“Ok, Ikuto.” He picked me up bridal style.

X-x-At Amu’s dorm-x-X

“Thank you for carrying me all the way here, Ikuto.”

“No problem.” He smiled. For the first time, he smiled instead of smirked. I smiled back.

“Well, good night Ikuto.”

“Good night, Amu.” I watched him walk away until he was out of sight. I opened the door to my apartment.

“There you are, Amu-chan!!” Ran exclaimed glomping on me. “Ouch!” I yelped.

“Oops. Sorry. But where were you?!”

“Taking my time walking.”

“Oh! How is your knee?” she looked down at my knee and called Su. “How did you get here will an injury like this?”

“Ikuto helped me.”

“Ikuto-san?!” Miki and Ran exclaimed together. “Yes, Ikuto.” Their eyes were opened so wide that I swear it could reach the floor if it was possible.

“I thought you hated Ikuto-san.”

“He’s not so bad.”

“Amu-chan could it be?”

“What, Miki?”

“Love!” Ran and Miki both exclaimed at the same time.

“No way!” I shouted back.

“It’s possible, Amu-chan desu.”

“Not you too, Su.”

X-x-1:00 a.m.-x-X

I rolled on my bed and kept on switching sides to make it more comfortable but I just couldn’t get to sleep! Ran and Su went back to their dorms and I bet they were sleeping too. I heard Miki breathing softly on the bed next to me. I smiled. I quietly got off the bed and slid the glass door to the balcony door aside. I went out on the balcony to get fresh air. I breathed in the smell and the breeze swept past me. This feels good. My mind suddenly went to the scene that happened a while ago. I blushed.

Ikuto’s POV

When I got back to my dorm, Yoru was waiting for me.

“What were you doing nya?”

“Taking a walk.” I simply replied.

“Oh. Well I’m going to sleep nya. We have school tomorrow. Good night, Ikuto nya.” And with that said, he turned off the light and under the covers.

“Sleep well, Yoru.” Because I sure wasn’t going to sleep at all and I was right. When it was 1:00 in the morning, I decided to take a breather. There was a balcony in my room, too. I went out onto the porch and the breeze felt nice. My mind suddenly drifted to the scene with Amu and me. Her golden eyes were so pretty but there was something else inside there…pain? Sorrow? I’m not sure. Amu was cute and almost beautiful when I saw her by the moonlight. I think I was about to kiss her right then and there…

Amu’s POV

I was blushing mad right now. I probably was going to kiss him right then and there. Then, I realized something…

Amu’s and Ikuto’s POV

Am I falling in love?

X-x-Somewhere Else-x-X

Utau’s POV

“Did you get her?”

“No, I am sorry, Utau-sama. I did make her bruise on her knee worse though. Do you remember? The banana peel you put on the stairs when she going up the stairs? And stopping the elevator was smart thinking.”

“Well, it helps to have a famous family since our café is known to everyone.”

“But, Utau-sama, I think Tsukiyomi Ikuto-san saw me trip Hinamori Amu.”

“Hmm…that’s not good…but he may not know that I told you to do it!”

“Yes, you are correct, master!”

“Thank you for your service. You can go now.”

“Yes.” And he was off. ‘Just you wait, Amu. You are never going to see Ikuto again!!’

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End of chapter 4




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never thought Utau would be so evil.
can't wait for chapter 5
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