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'Ikuto...' I say... sigh is probably a better word. I didn't know what I was going to say next until I did. 'I love you, Ikuto.' What? Why did I just say that? I mean, I know it's true, I have known since he first kissed me, probably before, but I refused to let myself realise. I groan, and feel heat flood my face. I close my eyes and look away from his face.
'Amu... I love you too-' I glance back down at his face and his eyes capture mine straight away. Once I am locked in them, there is no looking away... I see pain in his eyes, deep pain, but that is at the back. At the foreground is... embarrasement?, but most of all, love. 'Can I kiss you?'
Did he really just ask that? Did he really just ask, rather than just go for it? Did he really just repeat Utau's line? He seems to be waiting for an answer. I can't speak. I just nod helplessly, and bend my head to his.
His lips are hot, burning hot, but I don't feel the heat. I think mine may be the same temperature. I only feel the texture of his lips - slightly rough, yet smooth at the same time...I only feel the sweet intensity of his kiss...so sweet...and I taste salt. Tears have brimmed over from my eyes, the pain of seeing him hurt, the pain of the world...the pain of love. And I know, more than I ever have before, that I love him, more than I have ever loved anyone, I love him with all my heart. He breaks the kiss and reaches one shaking hand towards my face. His gentle fingers wipe away my tears.
'Don't cry...' he whispers in a rough voice. 'I don't want you to cry.' Then his hand falls limply into my lap as the pain akes him under, into the world of the unconcious.


I love her. I love her with all my heart. I can't bear to see her cry I can't bear to see her upset, I can't bear to see her hurt, I can't bear to see anyone hurt her. Her kiss was sweet and salty, her tears flavouring it with sadness. So, so sweet, and she loves me. It is so satisfying to know that she loves me. I don't want her to cry. I love her with all my heart...




u shuld probably tru being a romance novel write thingie O.o


I'm already writing one. But I don't know what's going to happen or if I'll get it published (probably won't - I can't be bothered really. And it's not actually that good. But it's fun).
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ShadowInTheNight wrote:


moon1414 wrote:


ShadowInTheNight wrote:



'Ikuto...' I say... sigh is probably a better word. I didn't know what I was going to say next until I did. 'I love you, Ikuto.' What? Why did I just say that? I mean, I know it's true, I have known since he first kissed me, probably before, but I refused to let myself realise. I groan, and feel heat flood my face. I close my eyes and look away from his face.
'Amu... I love you too-' I glance back down at his face and his eyes capture mine straight away. Once I am locked in them, there is no looking away... I see pain in his eyes, deep pain, but that is at the back. At the foreground is... embarrasement?, but most of all, love. 'Can I kiss you?'
Did he really just ask that? Did he really just ask, rather than just go for it? Did he really just repeat Utau's line? He seems to be waiting for an answer. I can't speak. I just nod helplessly, and bend my head to his.
His lips are hot, burning hot, but I don't feel the heat. I think mine may be the same temperature. I only feel the texture of his lips - slightly rough, yet smooth at the same time...I only feel the sweet intensity of his kiss...so sweet...and I taste salt. Tears have brimmed over from my eyes, the pain of seeing him hurt, the pain of the world...the pain of love. And I know, more than I ever have before, that I love him, more than I have ever loved anyone, I love him with all my heart. He breaks the kiss and reaches one shaking hand towards my face. His gentle fingers wipe away my tears.
'Don't cry...' he whispers in a rough voice. 'I don't want you to cry.' Then his hand falls limply into my lap as the pain akes him under, into the world of the unconcious.


I love her. I love her with all my heart. I can't bear to see her cry I can't bear to see her upset, I can't bear to see her hurt, I can't bear to see anyone hurt her. Her kiss was sweet and salty, her tears flavouring it with sadness. So, so sweet, and she loves me. It is so satisfying to know that she loves me. I don't want her to cry. I love her with all my heart...




u shuld probably tru being a romance novel write thingie O.o



I'm already writing one. But I don't know what's going to happen or if I'll get it published (probably won't - I can't be bothered really. And it's not actually that good. But it's fun).


plublish it on some site its gonna be great
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moon1414 wrote:


ShadowInTheNight wrote:


moon1414 wrote:


ShadowInTheNight wrote:



'Ikuto...' I say... sigh is probably a better word. I didn't know what I was going to say next until I did. 'I love you, Ikuto.' What? Why did I just say that? I mean, I know it's true, I have known since he first kissed me, probably before, but I refused to let myself realise. I groan, and feel heat flood my face. I close my eyes and look away from his face.
'Amu... I love you too-' I glance back down at his face and his eyes capture mine straight away. Once I am locked in them, there is no looking away... I see pain in his eyes, deep pain, but that is at the back. At the foreground is... embarrasement?, but most of all, love. 'Can I kiss you?'
Did he really just ask that? Did he really just ask, rather than just go for it? Did he really just repeat Utau's line? He seems to be waiting for an answer. I can't speak. I just nod helplessly, and bend my head to his.
His lips are hot, burning hot, but I don't feel the heat. I think mine may be the same temperature. I only feel the texture of his lips - slightly rough, yet smooth at the same time...I only feel the sweet intensity of his kiss...so sweet...and I taste salt. Tears have brimmed over from my eyes, the pain of seeing him hurt, the pain of the world...the pain of love. And I know, more than I ever have before, that I love him, more than I have ever loved anyone, I love him with all my heart. He breaks the kiss and reaches one shaking hand towards my face. His gentle fingers wipe away my tears.
'Don't cry...' he whispers in a rough voice. 'I don't want you to cry.' Then his hand falls limply into my lap as the pain akes him under, into the world of the unconcious.


I love her. I love her with all my heart. I can't bear to see her cry I can't bear to see her upset, I can't bear to see her hurt, I can't bear to see anyone hurt her. Her kiss was sweet and salty, her tears flavouring it with sadness. So, so sweet, and she loves me. It is so satisfying to know that she loves me. I don't want her to cry. I love her with all my heart...




u shuld probably tru being a romance novel write thingie O.o



I'm already writing one. But I don't know what's going to happen or if I'll get it published (probably won't - I can't be bothered really. And it's not actually that good. But it's fun).


plublish it on some site its gonna be great :D



I already have a short story on one site.
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ShadowInTheNight wrote:


moon1414 wrote:


ShadowInTheNight wrote:


moon1414 wrote:


ShadowInTheNight wrote:



'Ikuto...' I say... sigh is probably a better word. I didn't know what I was going to say next until I did. 'I love you, Ikuto.' What? Why did I just say that? I mean, I know it's true, I have known since he first kissed me, probably before, but I refused to let myself realise. I groan, and feel heat flood my face. I close my eyes and look away from his face.
'Amu... I love you too-' I glance back down at his face and his eyes capture mine straight away. Once I am locked in them, there is no looking away... I see pain in his eyes, deep pain, but that is at the back. At the foreground is... embarrasement?, but most of all, love. 'Can I kiss you?'
Did he really just ask that? Did he really just ask, rather than just go for it? Did he really just repeat Utau's line? He seems to be waiting for an answer. I can't speak. I just nod helplessly, and bend my head to his.
His lips are hot, burning hot, but I don't feel the heat. I think mine may be the same temperature. I only feel the texture of his lips - slightly rough, yet smooth at the same time...I only feel the sweet intensity of his kiss...so sweet...and I taste salt. Tears have brimmed over from my eyes, the pain of seeing him hurt, the pain of the world...the pain of love. And I know, more than I ever have before, that I love him, more than I have ever loved anyone, I love him with all my heart. He breaks the kiss and reaches one shaking hand towards my face. His gentle fingers wipe away my tears.
'Don't cry...' he whispers in a rough voice. 'I don't want you to cry.' Then his hand falls limply into my lap as the pain akes him under, into the world of the unconcious.


I love her. I love her with all my heart. I can't bear to see her cry I can't bear to see her upset, I can't bear to see her hurt, I can't bear to see anyone hurt her. Her kiss was sweet and salty, her tears flavouring it with sadness. So, so sweet, and she loves me. It is so satisfying to know that she loves me. I don't want her to cry. I love her with all my heart...




u shuld probably tru being a romance novel write thingie O.o



I'm already writing one. But I don't know what's going to happen or if I'll get it published (probably won't - I can't be bothered really. And it's not actually that good. But it's fun).


plublish it on some site its gonna be great :D



I already have a short story on one site.


-goes jumps into a ocean of never ending- yea......O.o i have one jsut tht im just like typing ti out for no reason
Posted 12/7/08

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'Ikuto...' I say... sigh is probably a better word. I didn't know what I was going to say next until I did. 'I love you, Ikuto.' What? Why did I just say that? I mean, I know it's true, I have known since he first kissed me, probably before, but I refused to let myself realise. I groan, and feel heat flood my face. I close my eyes and look away from his face.
'Amu... I love you too-' I glance back down at his face and his eyes capture mine straight away. Once I am locked in them, there is no looking away... I see pain in his eyes, deep pain, but that is at the back. At the foreground is... embarrasement?, but most of all, love. 'Can I kiss you?'
Did he really just ask that? Did he really just ask, rather than just go for it? Did he really just repeat Utau's line? He seems to be waiting for an answer. I can't speak. I just nod helplessly, and bend my head to his.
His lips are hot, burning hot, but I don't feel the heat. I think mine may be the same temperature. I only feel the texture of his lips - slightly rough, yet smooth at the same time...I only feel the sweet intensity of his kiss...so sweet...and I taste salt. Tears have brimmed over from my eyes, the pain of seeing him hurt, the pain of the world...the pain of love. And I know, more than I ever have before, that I love him, more than I have ever loved anyone, I love him with all my heart. He breaks the kiss and reaches one shaking hand towards my face. His gentle fingers wipe away my tears.
'Don't cry...' he whispers in a rough voice. 'I don't want you to cry.' Then his hand falls limply into my lap as the pain akes him under, into the world of the unconcious.


I love her. I love her with all my heart. I can't bear to see her cry I can't bear to see her upset, I can't bear to see her hurt, I can't bear to see anyone hurt her. Her kiss was sweet and salty, her tears flavouring it with sadness. So, so sweet, and she loves me. It is so satisfying to know that she loves me. I don't want her to cry. I love her with all my heart...



*Squeel* EEEEP! Omigoodness! That was awesome! ^_^
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Amu gently lay her head on Ikuto's chest. She was so worried about him, even though she knew how strong he was, and that he would never leave her. Oh, Ikuto... I knew you wouldnt leave me so suddenly! She pulled her face up and looked at his sleeping face. There was one cut above his right eye-brow that stuck out to Amu. She leaned forward, and very gently, kissed it. She wanted him to feel better so badly. She knew all she could really do for him though, was be there for him. To love, and listen to him. No matter what happens... she thought ....I'll never leave you, Ikuto. She rested her head on a pillow. Amu carefully linked her fingers between Ikutos. Though he was unconscious, she felt him weakly hold Amu's hand in his. She took a deep breath, shut her eyes, and let her exhaustion over-take her.
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I drift back to conciousness to feel a dead weight on my chest. I open my eyes, and sit up groggily.Amu's head fell off my chest. I catch it quickly in both hands and rest my forehead on hers. Her eyelids flutter as she wakes up.

I open my eyes to see Ikuto face in the way of my vision. I sit upquickly and start cheking that the bandages haven't fallen off. They haven't.

'Are you okay?' I ask, panicky. 'Who was that guy? Why was he hitting you?...'

'Slow down, slow down... I'm fine. That guy was my father...he doesn't like me being in love with you - you're supposed to be my enemy. I am against you...yet I can't be.' He leans down and kisses me softly, as if to illustrate his words. 'He was hitting me for the same reason.'

'He hit you for LOVING me?' I say angrily. 'Idiot...' I mutter under my breath. Hitting Ikuto like that. If I see him again, I'll tell him what I think of him. But if Ikuto went through all that for me... I sigh and reach up to press my lips softly against his. His lips have cooled down since last night. I love you Ikuto... I think to myself. I really do. After a few minutes...or hours...I break the kiss.



Posted 12/18/08
omg you all are like so great at this
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Ikuto gets up, but i grabbed him midway.
"Where are you going," i ask suddenly without realising it. i could only hear my heart skipping a beat every minute.
Ikuto smiles and gets as close as possible without touching me. "Closer to you."
All of my blood rushed to my face. My heart wanted to explode. My lips felt gentle against his. I wasn't breathing, i couldn't. He stopped and rested his head on my chest, and fell asleep. He must of been so tired. I kissed his forehead and went back to sleep with the one and only person i could truely love.
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omg, this story is great!
so romantic
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thanx lol...
its not my best but i tried lol ^^
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I wandered to school in a daze the next day. Would Ikuto be all right? Would he be found? Would he be waithing for me when I got home? Would he be gone?

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All these questions fluttered all around my mind. Just thinking about Ikuto makes my stomach tickle. I hope he's all right. If anything would happen to him, I don't know what I'd do to myself. I stare up at the sky looking at each cloud individually. "I wonder what's so special about the sky," thinking to myself. "He looks at it everyday."
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