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"C'mon Sam you can do it" My mom was insisting. She had put a knife a my hand and had moved back. I simply stared at the ground my fathers body laid motionless on the ground surrounded by this bleach blood woman with big boobies. I knew who she was. Every Saturday night when my mom was out and I was in bed. She would come over. and during the whole night I would only hear something banging on the wall and the girl screaming. and around midnight she would leave and my mom would come home a bit after she left.

After hours of seeing my mom beating them with my small baseball bat. I still couldn't understand why she wanted me; a 7 year old boy to stab them with a knife...

"But mommy! Why? I don't want to do it!" I drop the knife, turn around and run. But she's faster then me. "Okay you little twerp I'll do it but you'll get punished badly and you have to watch when you son of a bitch father died with his slutty whore."

"But mommy. You can't kill daddy! Its daddy." I jump on his body. "Even if is kinda mean and touched me sometimes I still love him!" She seemed disgusted.

"How could you love him he raped you several times he beat you when you put the knife in the fork section how could you love such a horrid man?" She walked slowly towards the body pushed me off my daddy's to be corpse and plunged a knife in his chest. Tears didn't flow on my face but blood flowed on the ground. She passed to the big boobies woman and pluged in many times in her chest. Blood squirted everywhere on her face.

Thats when I walked forward.
"Mommy? Can I try?" She didn't say anything she just handed me the knife and didn't move. I took the knife and lifted it above my head plunged it into her leg. She jumped back screaming and grasping her wounded leg. Blood leaked on her light blue jeans and on her little tanned white hands. I walked towards the body of my mother still squirming in pain. "Thats for killing daddy!" I bent down behind her and cut her chest between her breast and with the blood leaking everywhere I drew a heart on her left cheek and drew an "X" in it and simply walked away. I climbed up the stairs. Opened the door and walked out of the basement. "good bye" I simply whispered.
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Wow. Very impressively gruesome. It somehow reminds me of a manga called "Boys Next Door". I wonder what'll happen to Sam. And when you made Sam say, "But mommy. You can't kill daddy! Its daddy.", do you know how true it is? Little kids who doesn't understand things would really do that.
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Posted 8/19/08
thanks^^ ya^^
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Posted 8/20/08
Your welcome ^_^. Keep on writing! I really wanna read what happens next!
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Posted 8/20/08
kk^^
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Posted 8/21/08
i like it, can;t wait for the next part! I love gore
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Posted 8/25/08
My life changed snice the accident. Or so other say. Since I plunged the knife in my mothers body. I'm now 12 and I am the most recruited killer in America. They recruit because of my small size and wild imagination to kill and slowly torture them but I also clean up after myself so they think its just a suicide. But don't tell anyone its a secret. My dirty little secret. I have other secrets ut you'll have to wait for those ones.

And for your information what your reading is confidential and should never get past then end of your unimportant son a bitch lips. Its the story of my life. And dont you ever dare feel sorry for me. . But before I wanna tell you what happened after I got out of that basement you might think important if you ever want to find me.

I got out of the house I ran till my lungs would bursts. Till my heart would pound so had that it would break through my ribs land in-front of me. I ran till I was under a bridge a bridge that I had never seen before.

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And there was man waiting there. He was waiting for me.

"You're Sam?" he asked with his bushy eyebrows stuck together. "Who's asking?" I respond in my toughest voice.

"You can call me M.L. And we need to talk about you." He wachted my puzzled look and answered before I could say anything.

"Your a machine." He simply said. "A killing machine. A machine that kills with no mercy and no sorrows."
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Posted 9/3/08
my last post was really short but thats all you need to know right now I want o make sure your thrilled for the rest.
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Posted 9/3/08
that is totally wrong
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Posted 9/5/08
Awesome! it Totally rules! keep writing!
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MY heart was still pounding from the running, and my breath still huffing. And my head spinning from the comment he had just thrown to me.
"What?!" I yell at him.
"Yes, you were created in a lab ut since we thought you a failliar we simply forgot about you and put you on for adoption but when you killed or help kill you parents we knew you had survived. And that we had to get you back to start your training." His little crooked smile kinda scared me. I swallowed loudly then asked.
"Train for...for what? And why do you say 'we'?"
"We need to train you to be the ultimate killing machine you will be invincible. No bullets or anything will be able to penetrate your skin." He laughed." And we I say 'we' I mean our corporation; DEATH."
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