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Posted 8/20/08
The war started far away only affecting our brave military soldiers. But one day my dad call from Afghanistan and it cut. We didn't think much of it till he never called back. That night the news was outraged the military base had been destroyed. They had killed everybody...Including my dad.

And they announced that they were going to spread till every country was under their controlled. And thats how 5 years later that the third world war started. Every family in Canada, U.S and the big countries would send their days in their basement.

Houses were destroyed. Buildings reduced to dust. We couldn't think for ourselves. We were surrounded. And death was upon us no matter what.
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Posted 8/22/08
sweet
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Posted 8/22/08
Very nice beginning. I've always been wondering about the third World War. And who exactly is the army going for world domination? Afghanistan? Because I'm not so confident in their military forces... the rebels were the ones to be admired. Or feared.... whichever way you wanna put it.

Russia has a better chance at killing the world. They got nukes. Like us.
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Posted 8/24/08
lol I actually dont know yet^^ but I guess I'll choose Russia
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Posted 8/26/08
Very nice beginning, can you post the rest?
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Posted 8/27/08
Monday 2nd, 2039

Dear Diary,

The Russian army is killing more and more ferociously. I still dont know when were going to be able to walk on the streets again and have fun. And I hope that one day we could get our freedom or that they kill us now so we can go to heaven and join daddy.

Quebec, Manitoba and half or Saskatchewan is nothing but dust and ruins. It wont be long before they come for Alberta too. It will maybe takes months you would think but some contries have joined with Russia, like those the germans They betrayed everybody those cowards! (Sorry for any Germans here I took a random country for my story do NOT be mad at me plz!) . SO before they invade the whole Canada and United States it might just take days.

You think I would be scared... but no I actually can't wait. After everyone is dead except them on earth they'll understand that it was a mistake an that after that theres nothing to do with the world.


Sunday 8th, 2039

Dear Diary,

I know its been a while since I've written anything but I didn't really have time. We had to move. The army was getting too close. So we drove with the minimum of clothe and tent so whenever we stop we can camp in the middle of nowhere. Well I dont why were running away from our faith. Our faith is to die and we should accept it. you might think I'm crazy but I'm not I'm just realistic. Think of that next time you hear about a suicide.
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Posted 9/2/08
please comment and tell what you think and if I should continue because its probably going to be a short story or something really short
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Posted 9/3/08
it's good, write more. But start describing people first.
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