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Posted 8/20/08 , edited 8/23/08
Title: RYO: Ohkura's Story (Part 1)
Pairings: Ryo x Ohkura, A lil bit of Subassan
Rating: This part - Not for the young ones...N17?M21?RA?
Genre: The usual stuffs
Disclaimer: I never understood the need for this disclaimer part, but...oh well..i don't own the guys...they own me.
Summary: Ohkura finds himself acting abnormally around Ryo. And its all because of that kiss, in tha name of "Fanservice". Its all Ryo's fault, isn't it?
A/N: ITS SUPER LONG. Also, never in my life have I ever cared about grammatical errors. So if you do find this un-editted, un-Beta-ed fanfic full of misplaced past and present tenses, forgive me...Just turn a blind eye to those grammar errors, kay? Go with the story's flow instead...and enjoy it...*hopefully*

*note for JE Fanfict [email protected] readers: some of you may have seen this fic of mine on lj before...i'm sharing it here and when we reach the part where i stopped in lj, i'll update both in here and lj...*



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Posted 8/20/08 , edited 8/22/08
arigatou for posting this blacque!....btw...u have an LJ?..that's great..u can add me up der..that way i may get to read your other fanfics....and the story is fine!..I do enjoy your story...somehow... so btw, this is a multichap fic of yours ne~???

keep up the good work and pls remain to be active here in our group...it would be very appreciated...
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Posted 8/21/08
un.. idunno what to say...it's like... eh.. it's good.. demo.. eh... xD haha can't explain..but.. uh good work?
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Posted 8/21/08
WOW new fic!
let me read it after I do my assigns!! ^-^
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Posted 8/21/08

Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

un.. idunno what to say...it's like... eh.. it's good.. demo.. eh... xD haha can't explain..but.. uh good work?


demo...? u didn't continue at all!! explain!! lolz!! okay....did i do something wrong...? should i change the ratings or something...?

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Posted 8/21/08

Geh-san wrote:

arigatou for posting this blacque!....btw...u have an LJ?..that's great..u can add me up der..that way i may get to read your other fanfics....and the story is nice!..very nice...I do enjoy your story...so btw, this is a multichap fic of yours ne~???

keep up the good work and pls remain to be active here in our group...it would be very appreciated...


yep i do...so far its only this fic, so yeah...i haven't write the other stories yet...n yes, this multi-chap fic is mine...100% mine....XD
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Posted 8/21/08 , edited 8/21/08
O______O...O___O.. xDDDDDD
OMGSH!! That was soooo intense xD!!
Kyaaaaaaaaa!!!
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"Ryo couldn't believe his straying thoughts, but those fingers....Imagining them grabbing his own stick and shoving it in between those luscious lips...."

That part made me keep reading till the very end xDDD
WOW xDD, it's really well written!!!
>_< but now I kinda have a mental image in my head..that's not too nice T_T lol. But I really love it!![Ur Fanfic..not the mental image I'm having xD]
More please xDDDD!!
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Posted 8/21/08

blacque wrote:


Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

un.. idunno what to say...it's like... eh.. it's good.. demo.. eh... xD haha can't explain..but.. uh good work?


demo...? u didn't continue at all!! explain!! lolz!! okay....did i do something wrong...? should i change the ratings or something...?



xD the..rating should change..rofl it was wierd listening to ryo say that.. haha
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Posted 8/22/08
hahahaha!!
soOooo..hahaha!!
you're an amazing writer!! ^-^
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