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aawww >.< hehe what will be interesting is if nastume came in and sees them xD ahah that would be funny!!


LOL theirs an idea!!haha but nah I;m gonna try and make some guy come from another school and steal her heart away...or she'll just get a crush on him and not relise it and act natsural but Natsume will get jelouse.LOL :D


lol thats gonna be soo cute!! xD


haha yeah I HOPE IT WILL
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Chapter 20-Transfer Student

After a few seconds I released Irie-kun from my hug

"But what made you want to take me back from Grandmother?"I asked

He looked down at the floor

"Actually Clara did"

"H-Huh!!??"I gasped

'Clara,the diobalical girl herself!?'My thoughts raced

He nodded

"She asked about my past for a school assignment..."He paused

"And since I'm her only family I told her about my past.And somehow ended up telling her this story"

I stared at him as he continued

"And she ended up being quiet upset with me for giving you to a woman who's as 'stiff as a pole'"he smiled

I stiffled a laughed

'Stiff as a pole.Thats Grandmother for sure!'

His frown returned "And she told me 'what kind of man would do something so cruel to the woman you loved baby,and your best friend?'"

I blinked back some tears

'He must have been suffering all that time...'the words whispered in my head

"So I thought about it,and decided to see if you could live here.Which wasn't taht hard to do since when that woman smells cash she'll do anything for it"I laughed

I nodded

"And you were worried that she'd reconise you.So you sent your manager"

He nodded

"So thats all there was to it..."He said as he started to get up and walk towards the door

"Oh,and don't be so hard on Clara she's actually a good girl.No matter how hard it is to believe.I think she's just lonley"I nodded

'lonley...like I was...?'

Irie nodded and left the room

'I don't know how I actually obsorbed that whole story.Amazing...'I laughed

I lied down on my bed

'Gosh I'm tired.To tired to turn the light off...'I yawned

What time was it even??

I turned over to my alarm clock and read...11:30 p.m

'To late' I cried out

I turned off the lights after a long try to get up.And finally succeded.


NEXT MORNING

"May-sama time for school"I heard Presea call me,as she opened the window curtins

"Uh to bright Presea,just a few more minutes of sleep..."I murmered sleepily

"No Irie-sama said you have to get up earlier"I said as she pulled my blankets off me

"Uh!!What happened to worrying about me getting sicker...?"I wined

"Well you seem fine so its time to get up"I grouned

"Besides I feel like somethings gonna happen today"She smiled

"What are you some kind of fortune teller?"I grumbled

She laughed "Who knows"

I smiled

"Okay,Okay I'll get up"I said as I jumped off my bed.

"Ah!"Presea gasped

"May-sama why are you wearing your uniform to bed?"She asked as she looked at me

"Ah sorry I was tired and...forgot...hehe"I muttered as I looked away from her face

She sighed "Oh well,I think we have another uniform in your closet for back-up"

-sweat drop-

'Backup...eh...?'


SCHOOL

"Sorry for making you guys late"I apologized to Clara,and Natsume as we ran to our classes

"Geez are you always late!?"Clara growled

-sweat drop-

"S-Sorry"I smiled weakly

"For once I agree with her,your always late"

"Hey!Its not my fault I stayed up to late!"

"Then who's is it?"Clara argued

I sighed "Never mind..."

CLASS

"Your lucky May you just made it"Amu whispered over to me

I breathed deeply "Y-Yeah!"I laughed lightly

"Okay class"The teacher started as he walked into the classroom

"We have a transfer student"The teacher shuffled some papers togeather in his hands

"Kouchinawa would you like to come in and introduce yourself?"The teacher asked

I heard the door slide open,I looked up slightly as I heard footsteps aprouch the front of the class

'Ah'I blushed lightly

'Hes so cool looking' My thoughts twisted in a spiral

I heard gasps come from all around the classroom as the cool looking blond haired boy,with green eyes stepped into the classroom.

I looked around and saw all the girls with hearts in their eyes.Even Amu!

'Am I the only one who's not like this???'I thought frantically


MEANWHILE

"Natsume"whispered Kukaii from behind me

"Did you feel that?"He asked

I nodded

I felt the power of another matchmaker come into the school...and infact it was VERY close...

"I think its in the class next to us"I murmered without looking back at him

"May's class?"Kukaii gasped

I nodded

"We better check it out Natsume..."I nodded once again

"Follow my lead"I murmered

"Kukaii feels sick Mr.Kolind"I stode up

He nodded "Take him to the nurses office and see whats wrong with him"I nodded

I placed my hands over him,acting like I was helping him walk.

After we were out of the classroom we ran towards May's class.

'This precence is VERY strong...'





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Chapter 21-Date

"My names Ken Kouchinawa I am from Paris,my family moved here when my father found work"He smiled a breathtaking smile that even made my heart thump.

'Who is this guy...?'I wondered as I caught something from the corner of my eye

'Is that Natsume and Kukaii!?'I tried to hide a gasp

'What are they doing here!?'I wondered

Natsume was staring at the transfer student,when he seemed to notice my stare

"What are you doing here!?"I mouthed

He put his finger to his lips to shush me

I shook my head

He mouthed "Thats an order"I pouted

'This guy...'

What was he even doing here?I wondered

I looked back at the transfer student and noticed him looking at me

'W-What how did he notice me?' I stared blankly at him

He smirked

I saw him ask the teacher were he would be sitting

The teacher pointed to the desk behind me

'Great...'

He walked towards his desk but stopped at mine

"I hope we get to know each other"He smirked

'W-What!?Hes just like Natsume!!Hes got 2 faces just like his!!I wonder sometimes if my theory about 2 people living inside of someone is true...'

He started to walk towards his seat once again and sat down.


LUNCH

"Your so lucky May~!!"Amu wined

'H-Huh?'

"What do you mean?"I questioned

"Well look at you you are sitting in front of the cutest guy in school,and he even seems insterested in you!"she smiled as she bit into her lunch

"I don't like him...He seems like hes got two faces..."I murmered

She thought about that for a second "Well I guess if you say that then its probly true"

"Huh..?How?"I asked

"Well you seem to see the real person in people all the time"She smiled

"I guess..."I muttered as I stared at my small lunch

"Yeah but you do relies that girls are gonna start to target you"

"E-Eh!?No way!"I cried out

She nodded "Well 1) You live with the second cutest guy in school.Natsume of course.And you hang out with him often for reason's that you can't tell people about."I nodded my head

"And 2)You sit in front of the cutest guy in school and he seems to like you"I sighed

Thoughs were good reasons....

"O-Oh well don't worry about it May-san"She tried to cheer me up as I became depressed

"U-Um we didn't get to go shopping on the weekend so what if we go after school"She changed the subject

I looked up at her

"I do need some new clothes.."I mumbled

"Yeah of course every girl always needs new clothes"Amu smiled

I laughed "Yeah I guess so"I smiled.

"hhhmm shopping huh?"I heard someone whisper in my ear

I nodded,but then jumped back as I noticed that the voice that had just spokin was inches away from my face,and was Ken.

"A-AH!!How long have you been their!?"I growled

"hhmm a while"He smirked

"That means the whole time doesn't it" I muttered

I looked over at Amu "Why didn't you tell me"I wined as my cheeks filled with a red moisture

She shook her head "I didn't see him honestly"She frowned

I saw him smirk from the corner of my eye.

But a fake smile return onto his face as we both looked back at him

"Jeez would you go away!!"

He frowned

'Looks like hes never been denied by a girl before.'

"But all I wanted was to go shopping with you 2"He went chibi

"W-Wait you mean...like a date!?"Amu cried out

He nodded

"Sure"Amu said with hearts in her eyes

"You guys go and have fun"I smirked as I started to sneak away

"Your coming to"Amu said her face darkened

"O-Okay!!I'll go,I'll go!!"I repeated

"Why me,Why me"I cried.
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Chapter 22-My first Date is with this guy!?

School had finished quicker than it usually does and I hadn't gotten to think much about this crummy date I was going on.

All day I could feel the eyes of fan-girls bouring into my back.

Natsume seemed to busy to give me orders today so I pretty much had something good happen.

"May!"Amu called me

"Yes?"I asked in a sigh

"Were going to meet at the train station at 5:30 so make sure to be there and ready,with money!!"She scwinched her eyes togeather

I sighed,but nodded

"Okay..."


TRAIN STATION

I had changed into a light pink short dress like top,with a flower designe on it.And I wore black leggings underneath and had my hair in a ponytail once again with strings of my short blond hair hanging out in the front.

"Ah May!!!"I heard Amu call out as she ran towards me pulling Ken with her.

"Hey"I smiled lightly

"Ah you actually look decent"Ken snickered

"W-What!!Of course I do,don't insult me if you asked to come shopping with us!"I growled

I saw a smirk apear on his face

"hhmm I guess.I did complement you didn't I"I frowned

'this guys such a sceiz...'

"Lets just get this over with"I turned away from them and walked toward the train.

SHOPPING

"WAH!!this is cute May"Amu showed me a jean skirt that was a little higher than the nee.

I nodded

"I agree its cute."I smiled

"Hey I think you'd look good in this"Ken showed a black short-short-short!!!dress,and a pair of sleek black leather boots that were nee high.

"I think thats the shortest dress I've ever seen"I heard Amu murmer

I snapped out of my shock "YOU PERVERT!!"I screamed as I charged at him and did a sky attack.

"Sky uper cut"I heard a little kid yell

"EERRR!!"I started to punch him

"H-Hey I was just kidding"he laughed

"Well I'm not!!" I growled

"Do you think we should stop them?"I heard a store clerk whisper to Amu

She shook her head "Let them get it out of their system"

the clerk nodded as they both watched my kick him.

"Who do you think will win?"I heard a guy ask his friend

"I'm betting on the blond,she seems to know what she's doing."

"I'll take that action"A guy shook the other guys hand

I saw Ken grab a broom and place it on the ground.

But I was to feriouse to get what he was doing

I steeped on the broom and it flung and hit me in the face.

I fell back words and landed on a cart of clothes.

The boy looked over at his friend that had betted on me to win the fight.

The boy that had betted on me gave the other kid a 5$ bill.

And then I blacked out...

THE LAKE

"Ow"I wined

"Ah!!May are you coming around?"I heard Amu ask

"I guess this is a good chance to say sorry because she can't attack me right now"I heard Ken say from a distance

"Sorry"

'Oh he better think again about me not being able to hurt him'

I calculated where his voice had come from and kicked in the direction

I heard a whine of pain,and then someone drop to the ground

"I forgive you"I said miscellaneously

"May that was cruel"Amu yelled at me

I frowned

"Well I'm just returning the favor for making me colappes in public"

I heard her sigh

"OW!"Ken cried out

I smiled

I opened my eyes and the world span

I squeezed my eyes shut again

"May you ok?"Amu asked in a concerned tone

"Yeah"I lied

'I feel dizzy...stupid Ken.I should have kicked him harder"I heard Ken laugh.

"Huh whats so funny?"Amu asked

"Nothing"He laughed

I sighed

'I'd better get up soon or else Amu will worry....and we'll miss the great sales."I heard Ken stiffle a laugh.

I opened my eyes slowly

'Uh so sickening....'I wined

"May are you sure your ok..?we could go home"

"I'm fine"I lied again as I smiled weakly

"Now lets go find some bargins!!"I smiled

Amu smiled to.


END OF THE DAY

In the end all I bought were 2 tops,3 skirts,1 pair of jeans,and hair supplies.

Amu had found MUCH more deals than I ever could.

I sighed as we got off the train.

"Well I had fun"Amu smiled

"Lets do that again some time"She continued

I smiled too "sure"

"Well see you tomorrow May,Ken"She smiled and walked towards a her home.

It was close to the train station

"Are you walking home?"Ken asked

I nodded

We hadn't talked much throughout the day so that we wouldn't make Amu upset if we fought.

"Its dark I'll walk you home"He smiled

"I'm fine"I lied

"I can take a few thugs or 2 if they come my way"I continued

he frowned

"I don't care what you say I'm walking you home"I glared at him,but gave up knowing how stubborn he acted.

I sighed

"Fine just don't come near me"I growled

He nodded,a smirk apeering on his face

"And no smirking"I added

He laughed "No promises there"I sighed but flushed lightly

I turned away from him and walked in the direction of my home.

AT ENTRANCE

"Well see you tomorrow"I murmered as I looked back at him

He smirked "Sure"

'I still don't like this guy.I would have rather walked home with thugs'

I saw him smile

"Well then..later"I started to walk towards the gate to open it when I felt him stop me

'H-Huh?'

"After a date the girl gets a good night kiss from the guy.You should even know that"he smirked

"I know that so go-"

He cut me short as he pressed his lips to mine.

My eyes widened

'W-What!!'My thoughts rambulled

I seperated from the kiss and stared at him

"Good night"He smirked and walked away...

'W-What was that?'I gasped as I touched my finger tips to my lips.

"EERR!!"I snapped out of it "How dare he!!"I growled as I started to rub my lips with my arm franticly.
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it would be funny if natsume saw that!!!
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it would be funny if natsume saw that!!!


haha who know :D
I wonder what he would say if he did...?lol o wells I'm gonna start working on the next chapter now
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it would be funny if natsume saw that!!!


haha who know :D
I wonder what he would say if he did...?lol o wells I'm gonna start working on the next chapter now :P


ok! ill try to get more of my friends to be an active on this group kay! -^U^-
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This should be made into a manga! -^U^-


hehe ty!!but I'm a terrible drawer and I don't think I'm very good with this story actually :D.I'm just doin for fun but ty,I wanna be an auther one day!!hehe


Really I do to. but i also want to ba a PRO mangaka. I'm ganna draw a picture of May now (Did you know my nickname is Mae May!)
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Chapter 23-Reuninion

"May-sama!!!"Presea called

"May-sama!!"She repeated

"What?" I grouned as I hid my puffy eyes under the covers

Last night when I had come back from shopping Natsume had yelled at me...and for some reason it really upset me...


MAY'S MEMORIES

"May"I heard Natsume call out as I walked into the beautiful home..my beautiful home.

"Oh Hi Natsume"I chimmed

He looked upset,and...annoyed?

"What's wrong?"I asked

"Why did you come home late?"He growled

"Huh?I left a note saying that I was going shopping"I answered

"With who?"He said in an irritated tone

"Amu,and that new transfer student in my class"

I saw his face darkin and flames shot up in his eyes

"Stay away from that transfer student"He growled

"H-Huh?"I said with a shocked look on my face

"You heard me"He growled as a dark aura serounded him

"N-Natsume-kun...do you not like him"I asked

"That doesn't matter just listen to what I had said and stay away from him.And thats an order"He yelled

"Um...ok"I nodded

"Jeez always falling for the first guy you see"He grumbled

"W-What!?"I yelled

He looked back at me

"I don't even like him and let me tell you this.You don't own me!!So stop acting like a jerk!!"I screamed as I stormed up the stairs and past him into my room.

END OF MEMORIES

'Baka Natsume whats with him...'I grumbled as I rubbed my sore eyes

"time for school"I could tell she was smiling

"I don't feel good"I mumbled

"AH!!REALLY!?"She asked frantically

'I don't like worrying Presea....sorry'I thought sadly in my thoughts

"I'll go and call a doctor and-"I cut her short

"I'm probly just tired Presea so theres no need to call a doctor,I proboly just need a little sleep"

I wasn't sure if she had heard me but it seemed that she was just thinking

"ok...I'll have to ask Irie-sama for permission to let you stay home though so just wait a second..."She murmured as she walked out of the room.

I sighed 'Whenever I was sad Marble would notice,and try to cheer me up'I thought sadly as I wondered how she was doing.

I heard Presea's footsteps enter the room

"Irie-sama said its ok for you to stay home.But if you don't rest and seem to be fine he will send you to school"

I nodded "ok"I sighed as I closed my eyes and started to drift into a dreamless sleep.


A FEW HOURS LATER...

Threw out the day Presea kept on wakeing me up acctidently whenever she came in to check in on me.

"Sorry May-sama"She apologized for the 20th time

-sweat drop-

"Its ok"I lied as I finally faced her.

Hoping that my puffy eyes were no longer their.

Presea walked out of the room as the phone rang

I could here what Preasea was saying because she was talking on the phone that was a room next to mine.

"Hello Wilder Recidents Presea speaking..."

I heard a long pause before Presea spoke

"Sorry mame I can't understand you if you talk so fast"She paused again as she listened to whoever was speaking

"Who?"She asked

"A lady May is not feeling well at the moment..."She started but paused again

"Yes...I'll tell her.Whats your message?"She asked

Pause

"Okay I'll tell her to call you later when she feels better."

Pause

"Yes no problem....okay have a nice day"She hung up the phone.

After a few minutes Presea walked into the room

"Who was that?"I asked weakly

"Ah its one of your old friends from were you used to live"She answered

My eyes widened

"Was her name possibly...Marble?"I asked

She nodded

"What was her message!?"I jumped from the bed and put my hands on her shoulders.

She stared at me shocked but answered "She said 'Please tell May to call me.I miss her and can't belive that old swine actually sold you'"She repeated her message

I laughed as tears came from my eyes

"Marble"I smiled

"Same old Marble"

Presea stared at me

"Was she your good friend?"She asked as a smiled started to apear on her face

I nodded as happy tears rolled down my cheeks "My only friend.No.My dear friend Marble..." I murmered

I wipped my tears

"Did she give you a number to call her?"I asked as I calmed down slowly

she nodded as she handed me a price of paper

I smiled happily and grabbed onto the folded peice of paper and read the numbers aloud.

"905-206-3932"
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This should be made into a manga! -^U^-


hehe ty!!but I'm a terrible drawer and I don't think I'm very good with this story actually :D.I'm just doin for fun but ty,I wanna be an auther one day!!hehe


Really I do to. but i also want to ba a PRO mangaka. I'm ganna draw a picture of May now (Did you know my nickname is Mae May!)


no way really!!thats such a cool nick name all I have is a short one Drama queen,and Angel,and some call me Sawa.So they aren't really cool like yours :D
And thats so cool taht we both have the same dreams!I wish you good luck ^-^
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haha who know :D
I wonder what he would say if he did...?lol o wells I'm gonna start working on the next chapter now :P


ok! ill try to get more of my friends to be an active on this group kay! -^U^-


Aw ty!!I'll do the same for yours to ok??
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This should be made into a manga! -^U^-


hehe ty!!but I'm a terrible drawer and I don't think I'm very good with this story actually :D.I'm just doin for fun but ty,I wanna be an auther one day!!hehe


Really I do to. but i also want to ba a PRO mangaka. I'm ganna draw a picture of May now (Did you know my nickname is Mae May!)


no way really!!thats such a cool nick name all I have is a short one Drama queen,and Angel,and some call me Sawa.So they aren't really cool like yours :D
And thats so cool taht we both have the same dreams!I wish you good luck ^-^


how old are you im making my crfamily and im going to add you to it. :)
and thanks.
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omg >.< so much has been done since i last visited xD omg first natsume <33 and now Ken >.< i dun noe who to chose n e more xP
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This should be made into a manga! -^U^-


hehe ty!!but I'm a terrible drawer and I don't think I'm very good with this story actually :D.I'm just doin for fun but ty,I wanna be an auther one day!!hehe


Really I do to. but i also want to ba a PRO mangaka. I'm ganna draw a picture of May now (Did you know my nickname is Mae May!)


no way really!!thats such a cool nick name all I have is a short one Drama queen,and Angel,and some call me Sawa.So they aren't really cool like yours :D
And thats so cool taht we both have the same dreams!I wish you good luck ^-^


how old are you im making my crfamily and im going to add you to it. :)
and thanks.


aw ty I'll add you too!!And I'm 13 how old r u??
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