Post Reply A Night Time
Posted 8/21/08
Night Time...
By,MiSa_AnGeLz o8.21.o8


Night time still here in this dark room
wit a light that will last for couple of minutes
are we through?
Sure we had our difference our fights, though that
made us closer together more
But it got worst and worst im still here
beneath these cold floors
The fire we had was burnt out by one blow.
A blow so icy it left me out here in the cold
You said you would be here if i cried where have u gone.
How could you do me like this so wrong.
I cared for you and yet u said to trust you
everything will be okay.
Well now look at me sadness in my eyes is there
anything left to say.
A sense of feeling that maybe you would one day comeback
and bind me to you.
But as I wait hatness grows on me like a vine tidying me harder,
i cant even move
Im so numb that i dnt understand love anymore
That this darkness has consumes me into something I could never
think of before.
But i'll keep dreaming in my darkness, to escape
From this hate
Night time....Still here in this dark room
Doors creak I look up....and saw you <3
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Posted 8/22/08
I love this poem you really did a great work! ^.^
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Posted 8/26/08
aww.. i like it!! nice poem! >.<
Posted 8/28/08

Yamira wrote:

I love this poem you really did a great work! ^.^


l0l thankies I tried :sweatingbullets :
Posted 8/28/08

farfalla_12 wrote:

aww.. i like it!! nice poem! >.<


GRACIAS! =] [meaning thank you in spanish lol]
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Posted 10/13/08
nice ^^
I like night time ^^
and ur poem also
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