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FANFIC[MC]~~"Realize"
Posted 8/22/08 , edited 10/14/08
hi guyz!!! well i'll be writing my first fanfic!!the title is "Realize", hope u like it!! and please i need ur support because i'm kind of nervous.....

well i can't quite make a synopsis or a summary... i'm so sorry demo here are the characters and an introduction!!




and here is the introduction:

(At the Miura Mansion)

Aya, Michiyo, Miyujiku and Chiaki are getting ready for school

Aya: Chiaki!!! Hayaku!!
Chiaki: Hai!!! *goes down* Gomen ne.
Buttler: Young mistresses the car is waiting.
Michiyo: Let’s go!!! *smiles brightly*

Aya, Michiyo, Miyujiku and Chiaki got on the limousine, and then they stopped to pick up Sara.

Sara: Ohayo minna!!
Aya, Michiyo and Chiaki: Ohayo Sara-chan

Sara got on the limousine, the girls chatted until they stopped again to pick up Michiko.

Michiko: Ohayo!!
Aya, Michiyo and Chiaki: Ohayo!!
Michiko: *saw Miyujiku reading* Eh, your reading again??
Michiyo: Of course, she is Miyu-chan you know. *giggles*

Michiko got on the limousine, and the girls chatted again and then they stopped again this time to pick up Miharu

Miharu: Ohayo gozaimasu!!
Aya, Michiyo and Chiaki: Ohayo!!
Miharu: *sees Miyujiku* You know Miyu-chan you should really greet your best friend.

Then Miyujiku said almost like a whisper;

Miyujiku: Ohayo…

Miharu then smiles and got on the limousine, and the girls chatted again.

As they passed the Johnny’s entertainment building they noticed a limousine in front of the building and they also noticed that the members of the band Hey! Say! JUMP is getting on. Then Michiko said excitedly

Michiko: Minna, I heard that Hey! Say! JUMP will be transferring to another school.
Miharu: Eh?! Hontoni?! Maybe they will transfer to our schools *laughs*

Then everybody laughs too. They continued their journey while chatting.

When they arrived a block away Meiji University, Aya and Sara got off.

Aya: Bye-bye minna!
Sara: Take care!
The 5 girls: Hai!

Then Aya and Sara walked to their school. Then they noticed another limousine.

Chiaki: Eh?! I wonder who owns the limousine..
Then 3 persons got out but they can’t quite see them. They continued their journey wondering who owns the limousine. Again they stopped a block away Shirokin Gakuen. The 5 girls got off then they saw again the other limousine and 7 persons got out but again they can’t quite see their faces, putting it aside the girls started to walk to their school not knowing that the simple joke Miharu said might come true..

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hope u liked it!! ^_^
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wah!!
this is so cool!!
I know you can do it!!
I'm soOooo happy you've posted your fic!! ^-^
ganbatte kudasai!!
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yay!! new fanfic!!
it;s good!! i like the intro hehhe

can i be Miura Chiaki?? she seems kute hehe plus i like her personality
Posted 8/22/08

hsj9392 wrote:

wah!!
this is so cool!!
I know you can do it!!
I'm soOooo happy you've posted your fic!! ^-^
ganbatte kudasai!!


Arigatto nee-chan!!
Posted 8/22/08

pafoua wrote:

yay!! new fanfic!!
it;s good!! i like the intro hehhe

can i be Miura Chiaki?? she seems kute hehe plus i like her personality


Hai!! u can be Miura Chiaki!! Arigatto for reading!!

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yay i read this....good job u posted it!...hehe...looking forward to the next part ne~ ...hehe
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Asuka-chan_12 wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:

wah!!
this is so cool!!
I know you can do it!!
I'm soOooo happy you've posted your fic!! ^-^
ganbatte kudasai!!


Arigatto nee-chan!!




haha!!
np..
I know they would like it!!
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Asuka-chan_12 wrote:


pafoua wrote:

yay!! new fanfic!!
it;s good!! i like the intro hehhe

can i be Miura Chiaki?? she seems kute hehe plus i like her personality


Hai!! u can be Miura Chiaki!! Arigatto for reading!!



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^________^ good job I'm liking it so far ^^.
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^________^ good job I'm liking it so far ^^.


Arigatto!! ^_^
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YAY for asuka-chan!! ^-^
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waaaa~
great fanfic u hv there .
so sad there's nothing left for the char already .
but i will READ YOUR FANFIC !!
your is interesting !!
x)
Posted 8/22/08

vanialestari wrote:

waaaa~
great fanfic u hv there .
so sad there's nothing left for the char already .
but i will READ YOUR FANFIC !!
your is interesting !!
x)


Thank you very much!!!

Why? do u wanna be in my fanfic??
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WOW!!Su-chan!!there a lot of people LUV your story!!!
SEE!!Don't need to feel nervous,okay??
I LUV the story too!!!

Posted 8/22/08

Atij wrote:

WOW!!Su-chan!!there a lot of people LUV your story!!!
SEE!!Don't need to feel nervous,okay??
I LUV the story too!!!



Arigatto Ta-neechan!!

Hai!! i'll do my best!!
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