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Posted 8/22/08 , edited 8/22/08
here you can write short stories on love....enjoy.....
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Posted 9/2/08
SHE was always there but I couldn't see her, she was high like a bird,she sang a stupid song when I first know her , I didn't like the song but I liked the way she used to sing, her name was a sacred spell for me ,there were many girls up there but she was the only angel, she is the vintage of years of devotion and dreams, she feed my loneliness , feed my anger ,feed the phoenix that was sleeping for ages in my heart, that love was impossible ,I know it from the first glance, but, I loved the fire that burned me, she was always with me, she was my obsession ,I never told her the word ( love ), I used to imagine myself in her funeral, no ..
I wanted her to be part of me, I wanted to EAT her alive ,that was the only thing I wanted to do to the love of my life, she was my muse , my demon, my cross, my heaven and hell, my poison and remedy, my madness,
I always knew that I belong to her , and she to me, but we went our different ways , she found her salvation, and I found my reality..we both isolated in the two ends of the maze of life....
Posted 9/2/08
this is good......
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Posted 9/2/08 , edited 9/2/08
Bravo
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Posted 9/2/08
Truly well done......
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Posted 9/3/08
letters are nailed to my soul, I'm letting them free,,I want to read ur stories too..give some nails to the ark !
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Posted 9/6/08
I saw your vision in my dream once in an ancient time, before the great sun of our conscious arise, in the universe of silence our lost souls roamed , drinking from the river of eternity ..when we were blind our love filled the universe, the light creatures of heavens threw their feathers upon us joyfully when we used to dance, that was a long time ago..your face, a ghost shade engraved in the bosom of my heart before I gain my being..
the great rose of the higher self falls, and we are separated, my love, on the rainy forest among many beasts, and I'm forgetting who I was , fighting my way to you, my queen, the moon giving me long nights of loneliness and inspiration ,I'm running to you in a huge labyrinth ,breaking the talisman over my heart to regain your vision, your kingdom is so far away, many of them died trying to reach you ,and even if they did; a glance of you is enough to destroy their being..I'm running leaving my wisdom behind breaking the circles ,flying to the most ecstasic freedom ,dancing with the old forgotten spirits, seeking you , I'm far away , so far away, and the moon leading me to my destiny. to the queen of my longing heart, my thorns are so painful, my blood is drawing the map to your old kingdom where the sun always rising...
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Posted 9/6/08
that is nice bro//
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Posted 9/6/08

cosmictourist wrote:

I saw your vision in my dream once in an ancient time, before the great sun of our conscious arise, in the universe of silence our lost souls roamed , drinking from the river of eternity ..when we were blind our love filled the universe, the light creatures of heavens threw their feathers upon us joyfully when we used to dance, that was a long time ago..your face, a ghost shade engraved in the bosom of my heart before I gain my being..
the great rose of the higher self falls, and we are separated, my love, on the rainy forest among many beasts, and I'm forgetting who I was , fighting my way to you, my queen, the moon giving me long nights of loneliness and inspiration ,I'm running to you in a huge labyrinth ,breaking the talisman over my heart to regain your vision, your kingdom is so far away, many of them died trying to reach you ,and even if they did; a glance of you is enough to destroy their being..I'm running leaving my wisdom behind breaking the circles ,flying to the most ecstasic freedom ,dancing with the old forgotten spirits, seeking you , I'm far away , so far away, and the moon leading me to my destiny. to the queen of my longing heart, my thorns are so painful, my blood is drawing the map to your old kingdom where the sun always rising...


thats great.........
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Posted 9/6/08
r e f l e c t i o n s
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Posted 11/6/08
a cigarette love story :
night is getting darker, the heart is filled with emptiness, no one near except a hollow pain emerging and covering his body, on his bed so desperate trying to feed his soul with rest, but alas, he is more and more in the depth of the muddy swamp, can't breath, he is absurd just like the darkness around him, while he kept silenent the incarnation of the great smoking earth GAYA is calling for him, beneath clouds of nicotine and the holy herb that arouses the mind to paradise, so he made his move, walking the streets seeking for a packet of his favorite brand, night is dark for the people, getting darker every moment, a strange smell is knocking his hollow mind, then a dead black cat appears, decaying alone in the side road, just like his broken soul. shops had no favorite brand anymore. another steps lead him to the sea, the pure salt water cannot be drunk, a side street, small with agony and barbique, a small shop selling toys and other stuff, he stops at the gates of the nicotine temple, and GAYA was there waiting for him, the brand, a gift from heaven, GAYA was somewhere in the background of a rusty icon out there, leaving and heading towards eternity, cigarette in his lips, first kiss of freedom, and the lighter to destroy all darkness, the smoke being inhaled, and the earth is all him..the smoke is filling the city, and he finished that one..crushed the remains of the nicotine fairy, the other one is the holy herb, tall and pyramid -like...and the gates of heaven open just for him, he dances with angels and kings and the black dead cat also, the son of GAYA is back to regain his lost kingdom, his lost MIND !


SMOKING IS HAZARD FOR UR HEALTH !
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Posted 11/7/08
i'm really impressed
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cosmictourist wrote:

a cigarette love story :
night is getting darker, the heart is filled with emptiness, no one near except a hollow pain emerging and covering his body, on his bed so desperate trying to feed his soul with rest, but alas, he is more and more in the depth of the muddy swamp, can't breath, he is absurd just like the darkness around him, while he kept silenent the incarnation of the great smoking earth GAIA is calling for him, beneath clouds of nicotine and the holy herb that arouses the mind to paradise, so he made his move, walking the streets seeking for a packet of his favorite brand, night is dark for the people, getting darker every moment, a strange smell is knocking his hollow mind, then a dead black cat appears, decaying alone in the side road, just like his broken soul. shops had no favorite brand anymore. another steps lead him to the sea, the pure salt water cannot be drunk, a side street, small with agony and barbique, a small shop selling toys and other stuff, he stops at the gates of the nicotine temple, and GAIA was there waiting for him, the brand, a gift from heaven, GAIA was somewhere in the background of a rusty icon out there, leaving and heading towards eternity, cigarette in his lips, first kiss of freedom, and the lighter to destroy all darkness, the smoke being inhaled, and the earth is all him..the smoke is filling the city, and he finished that one..crushed the remains of the nicotine fairy, the other one is the holy herb, tall and pyramid -like...and the gates of heaven open just for him, he dances with angels and kings and the black dead cat also, the son of GAIA is back to regain his lost kingdom, his lost MIND !


SMOKING IS HAZARD FOR UR HEALTH !


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