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My Micky Yoochun love story/fan fic begins like this...


Title: Fast Love...!?


The day was warm and a gentle breeze was blowing. I could tell from looking out of the shop's window, the leaves on the tree branch where swaying back and forth. Walking away from the piano, that was by the window I was staring blankly at, I got up and walked out of the Piano shop, I started walking buy a couple of small shops when I felt as if someone was watching me. I turned around but I didn't see anyone who looked suspicious enough! So I brushed it off and kept walking but the feeling of someone watching me didn't go away. It felt like someone was burning a whole in my back (metaphorically). I stopped in my steps and quickly turned that's when I saw a VERY handsome man standing before me. He looked kind of like a lost little puppy! The site, if you can believe, was ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE! He had an expression on his face that said, "Help Me!!! I don't know what to do or where to go!". He looked like a lost child!

Me: Um...can I help you?

The mysterious man: I...well actually I was watching you earlier. When you where playing the piano.

Me: ?Oh? O_o?

The mysterious man: You played beautifully I've never heard anyone play the way you did. Where did you learn to play like that?

Me: Uh...well nowhere I learned by myself. My parents couldn't afford to pay for lessons so I learned by listening to the music.

The mysterious man: That's amazing! Your a real prodigy! So...can we...hah (nervous laugh)

Me: Would you like to accompany me to get a bite to eat? Beh go-pah-yo (I'm hungry)!

The mysterious man: Uh...sure!

We both turned and started walking. My heart was racing as I kept stealing glances at him. There was something familiar about him, like I've seen him some where. Then it hit me I knew exactly who he was!

Me: OH!!! It's you isn't it? What...but...how??? O_O?

The mysterious man: (he laughs) It took you long enough! :P

Me: But why didn't you say anything? You made me look like a fool (pabbo) just now! Well anyways let me introduce myself! Nae ee rhum eun Marlie im ni da (My name is Marlie)!

The mysterious man: Yes and Nae ee rhum eun Park Yoochun im ni da! But you can call me Micky if you like! :D

Me: Ok...Micky (I start blushing). Oh here we are!

Micky & I walked in the restaurant side by side. With our cheeks red as can be! Micky got to the table before I did and pulled the chair from under the table for me. I sat down and he did too. We ordered Gimbap/Kimbap, Spicy Ramen/Ramyeon, Kimchi, Bulgogi, Janchi Guksu, Jajangmyeon, Bindaetteok & then for dessert we ate Yaksik, Hahngwa, & Maejakgwa (of course we didn't eat it all there where tones of leftovers, lol, which we each took some of)! I was ready to pay when Micky pulled out his wallet to pay for our meal, which took me by surprise because I've never had anyone pay for me before, especially a guy! It made my heart race even more! As we where walking out Micky stops me.

Micky: Come with me I know where we can view the beautiful night sky of Seoul!

Me: Omo you move fast don't you? :D

Micky grabbed my wrist gently and had me follow him to his really nice car! Like the gentleman he is he opened the car door for me and I slid in the front seat. Looking out the car window I noticed that the sun had gone down completely. Micky drove to the destination and my goodness the view was absolutely beautiful! We where up on the edge of a peak high above Seoul where the air was crisp and clean!

Me: I've never seen so many stars! This is really something wonderful! (I looked over at Micky and smiled sweetly) Thank you for bringing me here! I would have never learned how beautiful Seoul is at night!

Micky: It is more beautiful tonight (the whole time he was speaking he was staring at me with those alluring eyes).

Slowly inch by inch he was getting closer to me! I started getting really nervous I tried to step away but with no prevail! And then it happens!

Park Yoochun (Micky) puts his arm around my waist and swung me around so quickly I didn't have enough time to react! Before I knew it we came face to face I was trembling with fear of what to do next, so I let my hand move slowly up his strong muscular arm up to the back of his neck. He lowered his head just enough and planted a sweet gentle kiss on my lips, I then stepped on my tip toes to give in to his kiss! I quickly pulled back in embarrassment and turned away. I turned my head half way as to not make any eye contact and apologized for the way I acted! Before I could walk away Micky grabbed hold of my arm and pulled me back firmly.

Micky: Please look at me.

I couldn't speak all I could do was shake my head.

Micky: You didn't do anything wrong I wanted to kiss you. I was just hoping you'd let me.

Me: I really wanted to kiss you too it's just this feels wrong. We don't even know each other that well we just met! I've never considered my self that kind of girl! :(

Micky: Your not that kind of girl. I would have never fallen for a girl like that. I fell for you! Haven't you ever heard of 'Love at first sight'? Don't you believe in that?

I summoned up all my courage and faced him.

Me: ღ♥ღ Honestly I never had a reason to...until I met you! ღ♥ღ

The expression on Micky's face was pure happiness! He pulled me in to a warm embrace and I looked up into his coffee brown eyes which were burning with liquid fire! Micky leaned forward and kissed me ever so tenderly on the cheek. I closed my eyes, feeling myself relax as he covered my cheek in feather light kisses. Then I turned my head slightly and captured his lips with mine. Soon all thoughts of anything else were far from my mind all I could do was think of Micky and how strong but gentle his lips felt against my own!

Micky: I feel like my heart is pounding in my head!

Me: (I laugh nervously) Yeah I know the feeling! It's nice isn't it?

Micky: Yes! It is! (He gazes at me for a moment then says...) ღ♥ღ I love you! ღ♥ღ

Me: What!?! O_O

Micky stares deep into my eyes, feeling himself being sucked in. I confidently wrap my arms around his neck and lock my fingers and gazed back at him, my deep brown eyes sparkling with tears! We ended up in a heated embrace in the middle of the night, his hands on my waist holding me very close against the warmth of his body. My fingers where entangled in his hair and we stayed that way all night long!


The End


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Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! So PLEASE comment this and tell me what you think about it!

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lol very romatic!
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LOL thanks! ^_^
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very romantic....hehehe...........
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~Tee Hee~ Thanks! I like writing things that are romantic! ^_^
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Good Story, I would of pretend I did not know who he was though, lol. That picture you got of him, lol, awesome.
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~Tee Hee~ Thanks, lol! ^_^
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

love at first sight ahahahha

hey that was too fast ... saw you .. treat you .... comfort you... then kiss you .... hahahah I LOVE YOU .... hahhahaha that was pretty fast

more more more........

he is such a CB LoL
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

love at first sight ahahahha

hey that was too fast ... saw you .. treat you .... comfort you... then kiss you .... hahahah I LOVE YOU .... hahhahaha that was pretty fast

more more more........

he is such a CB LoL


LMAO!!! Thanks 4 that mydeathcurse but I promise the next 1 I make I'll make it longer, lol! I'll also be making 1 for U-Know, Xiah, & Max!!! XOXOXO ^_^
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Mary1803 wrote:


mydeathcurse wrote:

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

love at first sight ahahahha

hey that was too fast ... saw you .. treat you .... comfort you... then kiss you .... hahahah I LOVE YOU .... hahhahaha that was pretty fast

more more more........

he is such a CB LoL


LMAO!!! Thanks 4 that mydeathcurse but I promise the next 1 I make I'll make it longer, lol! I'll also be making 1 for U-Know, Xiah, & Max!!! XOXOXO ^_^


max ... em waiting for it .....

show how clever he is ..... wahahahahaha
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omg that was rlly romantic but the gurk was kinda too SASSY but it fit with it~~~~
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peasilla wrote:

omg that was rlly romantic but the gurk was kinda too SASSY but it fit with it~~~~


LOL! Thanks...I think! LMAO!!! By the way what do u mean by gurk?
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Mary1803 wrote:


peasilla wrote:

omg that was rlly romantic but the gurk was kinda too SASSY but it fit with it~~~~


LOL! Thanks...I think! LMAO!!! By the way what do u mean by gurk?


OMIGAWSH~ i ment gurl! xD srry it was like 5 am in the morning wen i went on xD
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peasilla wrote:


Mary1803 wrote:


peasilla wrote:

omg that was rlly romantic but the gurk was kinda too SASSY but it fit with it~~~~


LOL! Thanks...I think! LMAO!!! By the way what do u mean by gurk?


OMIGAWSH~ i ment gurl! xD srry it was like 5 am in the morning wen i went on xD


LMFAO!!! ^_^ That makes so much more sense, lol! OMG that was funny! ^_^ Well thanks it was my 1st fan fic & I was way 2 excited cuz I wanted to post it up fast lol but my other 1 will be longer promise, lol! ^_^
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Mary1803 wrote:


peasilla wrote:


Mary1803 wrote:


peasilla wrote:

omg that was rlly romantic but the gurk was kinda too SASSY but it fit with it~~~~


LOL! Thanks...I think! LMAO!!! By the way what do u mean by gurk?


OMIGAWSH~ i ment gurl! xD srry it was like 5 am in the morning wen i went on xD


LMFAO!!! ^_^ That makes so much more sense, lol! OMG that was funny! ^_^ Well thanks it was my 1st fan fic & I was way 2 excited cuz I wanted to post it up fast lol but my other 1 will be longer promise, lol! ^_^


Lols, okey~ thnx btw
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