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oh god..i'm SOOO LATE..
huhu..gomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeenn*bowsbows*
btw LOVE IT!!
kame's style.. ahhaha^^
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Gomen for the late post!!! Anyway, here it is!... My boring part

Part 3 - The Unexpected

For a meantime, Kame was having fun touring himself at the new school but he still felt sad for he expected Izumi would tour him more. He stopped in front of a cafeteria and entered. As soon as he entered, all eyes were on him. Some of them look a bit disgusted, while some of them are whispering from one another but he thought it's a sign of a welcome from them so he smiled back. They were all forced to smile back at him.

KAME: *rubbing his hands* ooh ooh, love the food in here. I better buy now! and one for Izumi chan!oh I mean Nakamaru chan.

After a while, Jin, Koki and Junno entered inside and looking for an empty place to take. Junno found a place and they all sat down.

JUNNO: EH?!

KOKI: EH?! What? Why did you scream?

JIN: Something wrong?

JUNNO: It's the lame ner...i mean, Naka chan's "classmate" or "friend"? I don't really know.

KOKI: EH? where?

JUNNO: The guy who wears a black and thick eyeglasses with a messy hair and with a some sort of a 1980 style.

JIN: Are you sure that's Naka san's classmate? He seemed soooo........

KOKI: Weird?

JIN: *whistles*Waah, you're bad. Well he said the word not me.

JUNNO: Ano, we didn't ask your opinion, Jin. You seemed guilty?

JIN: Eh? No i'm not.

KOKI: What I'm just telling the truth?

JIN: Why won't we approach him? Besides he's all alone, they might guarantee that he's like a psycho maniac or something.

KOKI: Now you're the one who's bad.

JIN: EH? i didn't mean it.

JUNNO: Nani? Are you serious? Are we going to approach him? You know I'm out of there.

JIN: Hey, cmon. Don't be soo bad. Let's just say, we can add someone in our group you know. We'll make him...ano...cool! Isn't that great?*smiles*

KOKI & JUNNO: 0_0

JIN: I'm serious. Let's add someone, we should no longer be a trio anymore like stinky-fatso-stretch trio, but we'll be a quartet! I'm a genius ne~*smiles again*

KOKI: What's that supposed to mean? -_-

JIN: Oi, I'm not kidding, I'm really serious about it and it doesn't mean I don't like hanging around with you anymore, I still love you guys don't worry!

KOKI & JUNNO: EH?! DISGUSTING!

JIN: AS FRIENDS OF COURSE!!!

KOKI & JUNNO: *sighs with relief* Yokatta

JIN: So what? do you agree?

KOKI: People might gonna laugh at us, if he's around.

JIN: That's why we're going to change him.

JUNNO: Gee, you're really serious about it huh?Or maybe because, you're doing this for my friend Naka chan ne~? So that she can get out with you

JIN: EH?! No I'm not! I'm dating someone else.

JUNNO: EH?!

KOKI: You're really a playboy ah?

Jin didn't reply back because he's already approaching Kame.

JIN: Oi! Nerdy!

Kame didn't look back for he thought it wasn't him.

JIN: OI! I'm talking to you.

KAME: EH?!*his glasses almost fell down* I i i thought you you're calling someone else?

JIN: You're the only nerdy guy inside the cafeteria you know.

KAME: Na....ni? Am I....a... a... nerd? waaah*sobs* [everyone looked at kame and some of them are laughing at him.]

JIN: *panics* aaah no no. I mean you're a friendly guy that I've seen inside the cafeteria.

KAME: *stops sobbing* Honto?

JIN: Hai! By the way, Akanishi Jin desu~ *puts out his hand*

KAME: *wipes his cheeks and about to shake Jin's hand* Kamenashi Kazuya desu~ yoroshiku onegaishimasu!

JIN: *immediately shakes Kame's other hand because his other hand is wet from the tears* Oh, hai, yoroshiku! Say, why won't you hang out with us?

KAME: *grins* Eh?! Is it ok with you?

JIN: Hmm.. i don't mind

KAME: HAI! Chotto I'll go buy food!! I'll treat you ne~

JIN: EH? No it's ok.

KAME: *wide grin*What do you like?

JIN: *scratches his head* Anything can do. Well our table is just over there ne~

KAME: HAI!!!

IZUMI's part~~

IZUMI: *sighs* Aargh, this is really a bad day.

While she was walking, someone slipped in front of her. Izumi helped her up.

IZUMI: Next time, be care....waah! Kim chan!

KIMYO: Hai! It's me!

IZUMI: You're still the same old Kim, clumsy as always!

KIMYO: EH?! you're not used to me being clumsy? Is something wrong with you?

IZUMI: Ah, gomen. Ano, it's nothing. It's just I'm having a bad day, that's all. But i'm fine.

Kimyo knew that something's wrong with her bestfriend. They keep on chatting while they were on their way to the cafeteria. Just then, Izumi let out a slight shriek which made Kimyo jumped and her eyeglasses almost fell.

KIMYO: EH?! What now?

IZUMI: Still remember the guy I was playing with when we were young?

KIMYO: *blushes*Hai, it's Kame-kun ne~

IZUMI: Just call him Kamenashi kun now.

KIMYO: *scratches her head and ponders*EH?Why will I also call him....well anyway, where is he???

IZUMI: *points* there! With EH?!!!Akanishi kun!!! Taguchi kun and Tanaka kun?!HOw come he has friends that easily?

KIMYO: It's that him?! *looking at the guy beside Kame* Demo I can't see hs face, but i'm sure he's handsome just by looking at him from the back.

IZUMI: EH?! Who are you referring to? That's not Kamenashi kun! He's the one with thick, black eyeglasses beside Akanishi kun.

KIMYO: *fixes her eyeglasses* OOh, that one?! He seemed..................kawaii!

IZUMI: Nani?!

KIMYO: *grabs her hand and approaches them* Ne~Kame kun! Is that really yOU?!*big grin*

KAME: *excited* IZUMI CHA.......ano, Naka-chan. [BG - KIMYO: I got ignored again?]

JIN: EH?! So Naka-san, is he really your friend?

IZUMI: A..ano, he's...[BG-Kame was smiling, expecting that she would say "He's my childhood friend"]he's new..in our neighborhood *smiles a bit* [Kame frowned and sighed]

JIN: Oh I see.

JUNNO: Ne~wanna eat with us?

IZUMI: Ano...

KAME: *shocked* EH?! Are you like...................

JIN, JUNNO, KIMYO, AND IZUMI: Nani?

KAME: *about to sob* Dating my Izumi?!

JIN AND JUNNO: EH?!

KOKI: *after drinking his iced tea* eh?

KIMYO: EEEH?!

IZUMI: O_O

What do Kame mean by saying that?
Why would he have the guts to say that in front of them?


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KOKI & JUNNO: EH?! DISGUSTING!

That was funny. hahaaa.

JIN: *immediately shakes Kame's other hand because his other hand is wet from the tears*

This part was funny too.
YOU DID LIKE SUCH AN AWESOMEEEEE JOB.
i'm so proud. hehe.
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ahahh this is so funny!! love it!!

this part was funny!!

JIN: Oi! Nerdy!

Kame didn't look back for he thought it wasn't him.

JIN: OI! I'm talking to you.

KAME: EH?!*his glasses almost fell down* I i i thought you you're calling someone else?

JIN: You're the only nerdy guy inside the cafeteria you know.

KAME: Na....ni? Am I....a... a... nerd? waaah*sobs* [everyone looked at kame and some of them are laughing at him.]


ahaha i love it!! kame is so kawaii!! lookin forward to next part!!
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hahah it was funny!! MORE PLEASE!!
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Sooooo funny!!!
Awww pooor Kame T^T.
Gooooooooooood JOB!! I love it!
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Haha, so funny!!
Kame is so kawai xD
Please continue the good job ^_^
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Ucckkk. Here's my part. gomen, for not posting for a while. IT'S BORING. T^T *sobs*

Part 4

Koki:*spits out his ice tea all over Kimyo*

Kimyo: T_____________T Eww.

Junno: MY NAKA-CHA-

Jin: Naka-chan... Are you... d-d-d-dating this.... ummm... Kamenashi-kun?

Izumi: *nervous**looks at the floor* Ehh... Well...... We are......[BG:Kame is veryy happy] *looks up at Akanishi* .....KIDDING!!!!! *fake laugh* Can't believe you guys fell for it!! *another fake laugh*

Everybody: ToT

Izumi: Ha....Ha....Ha...

[Bg: Crickets]

Koki: Good Trick Kamenashi! I actually fell for it.

Izumi: Haha yeah! Why would we date if I don't even know him! [BG: Kame:*seems like he's going to cry] *sees Kame*

Jin: I have to say that I was shock. I'm happy that you're not dating him. NOT THAT YOU'RE BAD BOYFRIEND KAMENASHI-KUN. I mean I want Izumi. I MEAN THAT I WANT IZUMI TO BE HAPPY. Though she still could be happy with you Kamenashi-kun. hehe. BUT SHE NEEDS TO FIND THE ONE. BUT I MEAN YOU COULD BE THE ONE KAMENASHI-KUN! Maybe me as well. I MEAN WE WILL FIND SOMEONE WHO'S RIGHT FOR US. But why should you listen to me.... I'm not your dad! Though I may be one somebody with- WHAT THE HELL AM I TALKING ABOUT? *goes red*

Everybody:

Junno: Oh....kay.... *hugs Izumi* so glad you're not dating anybody!

Izumi: *tries to smile**looks at Kame* -Why do I feel really bad..... I shouldn't be treating Kame like this....- *pulls Junno away* You guys.......I have something to say.....

Junno: Nani?

Izumi: Me and Kame are actually childhood fri-

Kame: CLASSMATES!

Izumi: O___O

Kame: Anou... w-w-w-we're only c-c-classmates.. *pulls up his glasses* I'll be g-g-going now... *leave*

Izumi: Mnnn. yeahhh. T.T

It was now after school. Izumi tries to look for Kame everywhere.

Izumi: -What have I done....... I really shouldn't have treat him like that. baka baka baka baka baka ba- *see Kame* Kamenashi!

Kame: *ignores her*

Izumi: *runs up to Kame* Kamenashi-kun! Didn't you hear me calling you? *looks straight at his eyes*

Kame: *looks at Izumi. Then looks away* Oh you did? Gomen, I couldn't hear you.

Izumi: Well, hear me out Kamenashi... Kame. I'm sorry how I treated you at school. Deep...deep...deeep inside... I'm glad that I'm able to s-

Kimyo: OIII~ IZUMI-CHAN~ I HAVE TO ASK YOU SOMETHING!

Izumi: Kimyo...........Ahh....Kamenashi-kun... I'll..... talk to you later....ne?

Kame: .......Hai......Ja... *walks away*

Izumi's side

Izumi: *whispering* Gomenne.. Kame-kun... *runs up to Jin* Kim-chan, nani?

Kimyo: Do... Do.. Do you think..... Nevermind.

Izumi: What is it? TELL MEEE~

Kimyo: ........ Do you think you could hook me up with Kame?

Izumi: EHHHHHHHHHH?

Kimyo: You can't? Aishh. Gomenasai for asking a hard question. *bows*

Izumi: I could. It's just weird..... NOT THAT YOU GUYS ARE WEIRD.

Kimyo: .......... ahh. souka... we'll look weird together...

Izumi: NOOO! you guys would make a...... c-cute couple.... I'll try my best.....

Kimyo: ARIGATOU!!!

Izumi: Mmmmnnn...

Kame's side

Kame: *looks at Izumi and Kimyo* I've been looked down again. *sigh*

Kame started to walk back home. Kame started to look at all the things around him so he can get familar with the things around him. While he looked a around, he saw a shadow. As her turned around, he didn't see it again.

Kame: W-w-who is there? D-d-don't play games with m-m-me.

Kame started to walk again. But faster. He started to hear footsteps.. Kame stopped. The footsteps stopped too. Kame started to run. He heard somebody running as well. Kame turned left. And stop. Waiting for the stranger to come so he could hit whoever was following him. Kame grabbed his book bag and as soon as the person came he hit him!

Kame: HI-YA STALKER!!!

???: I-I-ITEEE~~ P-p-please s-s-stop.....

Kame: U-u-ueda-kun?

Ueda: H...hai...It's me... Kame-kun

Kame: *grins* I'm s-s-so happy to s-s-see you.

Ueda: M-m-me too. I was l-l-lonely.

Kame: M-m-me too. L-l-let's go to my house!

Ueda: H-h-hai.

Girl: Nakamaru-kunn~ Come and hang with us today.

Nakamaru: Yada.

Girl 2: Nande~? We're not good for you?

Nakamaru: Hai. *sees Kame and Ueda*

Girl 3: Nakamaru-kunnn~ You're so meannn~

Nakamaru: *walks up to Kame and Ueda* How about this. I'll hang with you guys, if you hang out with my...friends. Deal?

Girl: Though you are the world for me, it's not worth it to hang out with thoses geeks. *walks away*

Kame: E-E-EHHH??

Girl 2: Ewww. I won't hang out with those nerds for you. *walks away too*

Ueda: N.. Nande?

Girl 3: I only want you Nakamaru-kyunnn~ Hmmp *walks away*

Nakamaru: Bye bye~ *waves at the girls* *turns to Kame* Kame-kun! And...his... friend.... [Ueda: I..It's Ueda desu] Where's Izumi?

Kame: Somewhere else. It seems like she doesn't like me.....

Nakamaru: *quiet enough so Kame can't hear* I can see why.

Kame: Nani?

Nakamaru: I know a way so that Izumi could like you!

Kame: HONTO? What is it?

Nakamaru: Just follow me~ You too Kame's friend.

Ueda: It's Ueda. U-E-D-A.

Nakamaru: Ikou~ *starts to walk*

Kame: But, this is not the way to our homes.

Nakamaru: Who said we're going home?

Kame & Ueda:

Exactly what is Nakamaru going to do with Kame and his friend?
Is Izumi will be able to help her friend Kimyo, hook up with Kame?
Or will she not?
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Kyaa ~
LOVE THE STORYYY .
ehehehe twins pls continue it ~~ ^
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wahahahahaahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!

gomen gomen gomen for reading this late!!!!!!!

honto ni gomen!!!

hahah i love it!! hahahah!!

i can imaging the scenes hahahha
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yatta~ seriously the story line is soo interesting!! gomen for readng tis late T T been too busy.
nice job ra-chan and gehchan sense! speaking of, i missed gehchan T T haven't talked with you for ages!><

anyway, im looking forward to the next one! wonder what will happen to kame-kun
this is so awesome! rachan + gehchan = NICE~ and katsudon's my fave! *drools*

e-tto, can i be a character? :]
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oooo sugoii! i bet maru's gona gif dem an awesome makeover or sumthin xDD
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Yay, i loved it!! ~~
Haha, Nakamaru is so popular >.<
Ganbate for the next chapter! ^_^
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kyaaa!!! futago chan u posted it!
i'm loving it!!!oops its my part again..i hope i can do better as yours...waaah

arigatou all for reading our fic...
oh and @ nerrii chan! i missed you too..hope you can read my fic too ne~onegai...
sure u can be a char.
who do you lke?
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@Gehchan: hai hai~ dunn worry ne. im reading it now. though im not yet finished reading it but im loving the story. tons of japanese words! yatta~ you're really a good sensei xD
e-tto, Haruhi Emi.. junno!haha
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