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Wow... tht was incredibly cool! You know, I've been planning on writing my own story here...but I'm very uncertain on whether I should write or not! I'm afraid everyone would say it's bad...
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Wow... tht was incredibly cool! You know, I've been planning on writing my own story here...but I'm very uncertain on whether I should write or not! I'm afraid everyone would say it's bad...


you should post anyway...if it needs improvement people encourage you to do so..they are really nice, no one will tell you it sucked...besides I dont think its bad...Its usually a lot better than the author thinks it is...

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oh wows!! u have a lot of words describing things which makes me imagine it nd i lyke how u write too!! ur story never fails 2 surprise me. i wanna read more!!^-^



that was an incredible compliment for me thank you so much


hee hee ur very welcome!!^-^

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Good work on the story.
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Good work on the story.


thank you ...next chapter will fallow soon....
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elanra_moonlight wrote:


kylie2008 wrote:

Wow... tht was incredibly cool! You know, I've been planning on writing my own story here...but I'm very uncertain on whether I should write or not! I'm afraid everyone would say it's bad...


you should post anyway...if it needs improvement people encourage you to do so..they are really nice, no one will tell you it sucked...besides I dont think its bad...Its usually a lot better than the author thinks it is...


Thnx! Maybe I'll write a bit first... I think I'm calling it "Earth-bound'...

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when are you going to post the rest of the story?
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when are you going to post the rest of the story?


really soon I am sorry it took so long, I didnt have much time last week, but I will definetly add a new episode this week...

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dominicannena1 wrote:

when are you going to post the rest of the story?


really soon I am sorry it took so long, I didnt have much time last week, but I will definetly add a new episode this week...



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Episode V

The New Guy


He walked to the door with high archways and passed under it. He looked around and saw that she was waiting. She was sitting on one of the comfortable single armchairs. She looked up at him, her eyes wide with curiosity and worry.

He walked slowly and stood in front of her, then bowed her lightly. She raised her arm and waved it, she said “I told you many times not to do it”

He replied “Master Crystal, I feel the need to, I respect you”

Crystal rolled her eyes but did not insist. He sat down the armchair opposite to her and they exchanged looks. He knew Crystal was waiting for him to tell but he didn’t know how to start. He looked down at his hands and started from the beginning. Told her everything that happened since the last time he left. Crystal listened carefully, never interrupting him. When he was done, they both fell in silence; thinking what it all meant. After some time Crystal asked “She didn’t see you right?”

_ “No master, I did not reveal myself to her” he answered. He thought ‘Even though I really wanted’ and he blushed instantly cause he knew Crystal heard him thinking that. She didn’t say anything about it but she asked “So, what did you think Jonathan? Did she do it all on purpose? Did she intend to hurt them?”

Jonathan had to answer this question truthfully, not letting his emotions infiltrating his judgment. Yet he knew the answer. “No master, I do not think she intended to. She was really sad and unbalanced because of what happened. It happens when she feels extreme fear, anger and all…She can not control it and she can not stop it or understand it. She doesn’t understand anything. She is scared.”

Crystal had watched him closely as he spoke…Her evening purple eyes piercing him, scanning his soul. She knew he was telling the truth and then she thought “When did he lie to you? Never…exactly.”

She sighed and laid back. Her eyes a little tired but burning with flames. After another long silence, when Jonathan was lost in thoughts and she pretended not to hear them, she asked finally “Do you believe she is ready?”

Jonathan lift his head up, meeting her eyes. His blue eyes flared and bright. Glowing with emotion. He responded “She has nothing to do there. She can’t train herself there, can’t learn how to control. That’s impossible without a teacher who knows what’s what.” He stopped for a while. Then added, “If you ask me Crystal, she is wasting time there. The time neither she has nor we do…”

Crystal nodded with her eyes had lost focus and deep in thoughts. She asked “Would you vote for her? For her reliability and for her soul not being evil?”

Jonathan replied “She is not evil. She is just scared and Crystal, frankly she has an awful life there. She has all the rights to be angry, all the rights to fear and resent. If you ask me she is really strong…My life wasn’t like hers. Not that hard, yet I had those seizures more frequently. More violent, more damaging. But you thought I was worthy. If I am worthy, she definitely is…”

Crystal smiled. Her whole face lightened and she seemed to be glowing inside. She spoke, yet her lips weren’t moving “You really liked her didn’t you Jonathan?”

He met her eyes, knowing that she could see his bare soul. He answered seriously “I really liked her…I liked her a lot actually. She amazes me. I admire her.” He smiled a little then his expression changed suddenly, he sat up and said “If you believe this would compromise my mission, I can come back Master.”

Crystal shook her head. “There is no need for such a thing. If something is meant to happen it will, no matter what you do to prevent it, and if it isn’t then it won’t, no matter how hard you try to make it.” Jonathan relieved noticeably and laid back. Crystal spoke again “So you think, we can move on?”

Excitement filled Jonathan. Because he knew the next step. He said “Yes, we can. I think we should.” Then worry took over his expression and he added “You know who else is after her. You know what’s at stake…We don’t have much time”

Crystal nodded again. Then she stood up, Jonathan fallowed her. She stood in front of him piercing him, “Alright then Jonathan Weiss. It’s all on you now.” She hugged him and Jonathan felt, surrounded with her energy and aura. He felt warm and calm. As she let go she glanced at him one more time and again, he heard her voice in his head…Her lips weren’t moving.

“Be guided by the light”

Jonathan replied to her saying the same thing. She smiled and as she turned to leave the room, her blue hair waved by her movement.

Jonathan stood in the middle of the room his hands united in front of him. He bent his head down and thought of the place he wanted to go.

It was never more easier for him to go before. All the imagination and visualizing the place stuff weren’t needed. All he had to do was to focus on a single thing. It was strong enough to carry him through dimensions and time.

Melody Beloven…

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omg that was great ^_^ i cant wait for the next chapter and also ur writing is awesome so much detail so cool!!! XD oh and that picture is so cool (but when i first saw it i couldnt see the name XD) SO COOL SO AWESOME ^_^ please upload soon but take ur time
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omg that was great ^_^ i cant wait for the next chapter and also ur writing is awesome so much detail so cool!!! XD oh and that picture is so cool (but when i first saw it i couldnt see the name XD) SO COOL SO AWESOME ^_^ please upload soon but take ur time


thank you

I'll post another episode tonight...
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yay ^_^ ill be waiting patiently (hopefully XD)
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The next morning after Melody’s birthday she was kind of dizzy and lost all day. She had a terrible headache like she was drunk even though she never got drunk. As she took her shower she shook her head trying to wake up her thoughts and senses. Somehow she felt weak and…what was this feeling? She was feeling attacked. Like someone had get into her mind and controlled her. It wasn’t true she knew it but she felt that way.

When she got out, she stood in front of the mirror and thought about yesterday night. All the crazy things that had happened. It seemed like a dream now, or a nightmare. She looked at her eyes, looked deep down. For the first time she concentrated on her ‘power’, letting it grow inside of her totally conscious of herself. She felt that feeling of her senses expanding and at a moments notice she saw her eyes starting to glow blue. It was pulsing before, shining more with each beat then it became constant. Her eyes became bright dark blue, like electrical blue and they were glowing outside. So much it was reflecting her face through the mirror, making her face look greenish.

Melody gazed her own eyes with true amazement and also fear. That meant everything she remembered from yesterday were true. They weren’t a dream or a nightmare. She thought about her ‘Angel’. Her watcher who made everyone forget what happened. She frowned at herself. How was that possible? Had he altered their memories? If he did, then…how? Then she remembered how he communicated her. How the chalk in mid-air wrote words to the black board. Her eyes flared. He was really protecting her. He was really watching over her. Melody’s eyes were burning now. She wanted to see him. She was so curious who was him and why was he helping her with this crazy power of hers.

Melody calmed herself back down slowly. She imagined the power inside of her shrinking and fading. Her eyes lost light instantly. After a moment it was her own normal green-blue eyes looking back at her.

As she left the bathroom she realized her watcher wasn’t there. She was alone and even though she didn’t like this feeling she knew he would be back. Maybe if she wasn’t so lost in thoughts and memories she could have heard Mrs. Seri calling out her name as she walked to the dining hall. But she didn’t. Instead she glided like a zombie and took her breakfast. As she sat their table with Alex, Alex came running with her tray in her hands. She dropped herself on the chair opposite to Melody. Melody glanced at her quickly and saw that she was alright, even for some reason seemed excited and eager. She wasn’t hurt or hadn’t been crying. Melody relieved. Alex was looking at her with this I-know-something look on her face. She wanted Melody to ask. So Melody did.

“What happened?”

Alex took a deep breath and started to talk. “There is a new student in the school. Can you believe it? Coming at this time of the semester…he must be nuts.”

Melody wasn’t interested in this at all. If this new student was a foreigner then it was pretty normal for him to come at this time. She asked unconcernedly “What about him?”

Alex smiled, “He is eighteen I think. Registered to the senior grade.” Melody knew this still wasn’t her point. But she was loosing her already non-existing interest rapidly. Her mind was flowing away to the memories of yesterday night. Alex was saying “They say he is really handsome. Even too handsome. Girls are swooning everywhere. They placed a bet on Sera Toprak. They say she can seduce him in a week.” She was playing with her food. “They are betting on her with money. Can you believe it?” Melody heard all of it after she distinguished Sera’s name. She was a little amused with all of it; she asked “Why are you resenting it that much? Did you saw him Alex? Are you swooned as well?” Alex blushed all the way to her forehead. She muttered “No, I…I did not see him. He is…obviously he had said that he wasn’t interested in younger girls. Well, I don’t care. He actually struck me as a really arrogant and selfish person. With what I heard I mean. I did…not see him.” Melody laughed and Alex blushed more. But she didn’t insist. They ate and left the dining hall ten minutes later.

As Melody walked with her in the cold hallways and corridors her hands in her long, black coat’s pockets, one of the doors on their right opened and Mrs. Seri got out of the teacher’s room. She looked up at the footsteps and when she saw Melody her face lightened. She beckoned Melody and said “Can you give me a minute dear?” Melody looked surprised but walked to her. Alex seemed a little confused, trying to decide between going and staying and in the end she waved at Melody walking off, leaving them alone.

Mrs. Seri smiled at her. Asked softly “How are you dear?”

“I am fine, thank you ma’am.” She was curious why she was called.

Mrs. Seri didn’t sway on the topic. She said “I think you know, we have a new student in the school. He is from United States. His timing is a little unfortunate so he needs help.”

Melody listened and raised her shoulders. “What do you want me to do about him?”

Mrs. Seri gave her a radiant smile. “You are the best student in your English class. He needs guidance from a Turkish student to get used to, to the school. There isn’t anyone better than you for this job”

Melody frowned. Now she had to baby sit to the new guy. What her teacher said about her were flattering but she didn’t enjoy the idea of running after an arrogant, selfish guy all day. She asked “There are better students than me. There are other foreigners who learned speaking Turkish fluently. Why aren’t they helping?”

Mrs. Seri looked a little disappointed with her none so ever eagerness. She answered “I though it should be you, I gave your name to the board. If you do this you’ll have extra credits and grades as well.”

Melody gave up. She gave her teacher a little smile and said “Ok ma’am. I’ll do it. When do you want me to start?”

Mrs. Seri smiled her back widely “Now. This is his dormitory number” She gave her a little piece of paper with numbers scratched on it. “You should go and take him from there now. He is waiting for his guide.”

Melody nodded. Mrs. Seri patted her shoulder and started to walk. Melody put her hands in her pockets again and walked to the guys’ dormitory. But before she took three steps she remembered turned around and called out “Ma’am!! I don’t know his name! What’s his name?”

Mrs. Seri turned around as well, clapped her hand to her head and said “Oh I am sorry, you are right.” She opened the notebook in her hand and run through it for a while then she put her index finger on the page, looked up and said,

“His name is Jonathan. Jonathan Weiss.”

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