First  Prev  1  2  3  4  5  6  7  8  9  10  11  Next  Last
Post Reply The Blue Light
Editor
8055 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
24 / F / ~*heaven*~
Offline
Posted 10/17/08
awws!! kawaii couple nd moments!!^-^ but i have some questions, wat happened 2 melody's fwend alex while she was spending time with jonathan? she sat alone? or with others? da story didnt really talk much about her^-^'
Group Leader
23306 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
27 / F / Turkey
Offline
Posted 10/18/08
she went home, dont you remember? she is home for her semester brake...
Writer
UN1M3 
17784 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
F / No where to be seen
Offline
Posted 10/18/08 , edited 10/18/08
awww he wont give up sleep to protect her ^_^ thats sweet but it would worry melody if she found out >_> but a another great chapter ^_^ hope the next one will come soon (i was slow to read this chapter =3=)
Editor
8055 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
24 / F / ~*heaven*~
Offline
Posted 10/18/08

elanra_moonlight wrote:

she went home, dont you remember? she is home for her semester brake...


i remember dat part but where did she go when they were still at skool? when melody was walking jonathan 2 his classes? nd when they eat breakfast nd other meals together? o.o

Group Leader
23306 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
27 / F / Turkey
Offline
Posted 10/20/08

lilpurplepanda wrote:


elanra_moonlight wrote:

she went home, dont you remember? she is home for her semester brake...


i remember dat part but where did she go when they were still at skool? when melody was walking jonathan 2 his classes? nd when they eat breakfast nd other meals together? o.o




usually with them, but I just didnt want to write about Alex and Jonathan talking...but they do know each other and Melody didnt ignore Alex when Jonathan came, dont worry...
Group Leader
23306 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
27 / F / Turkey
Offline
Posted 10/20/08

UN1M3 wrote:

awww he wont give up sleep to protect her ^_^ thats sweet but it would worry melody if she found out >_> but a another great chapter ^_^ hope the next one will come soon (i was slow to read this chapter =3=)



no problem, Thank you for commenting UN1M3, you are great
Writer
UN1M3 
17784 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
F / No where to be seen
Offline
Posted 10/21/08
thank you very much but i should be the one saying that u are great ^_^ ur writing is and story is also GREAT ^_^
Editor
8055 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
24 / F / ~*heaven*~
Offline
Posted 10/26/08

elanra_moonlight wrote:


lilpurplepanda wrote:


elanra_moonlight wrote:

she went home, dont you remember? she is home for her semester brake...


i remember dat part but where did she go when they were still at skool? when melody was walking jonathan 2 his classes? nd when they eat breakfast nd other meals together? o.o




usually with them, but I just didnt want to write about Alex and Jonathan talking...but they do know each other and Melody didnt ignore Alex when Jonathan came, dont worry...


ohs okies^-^

Group Leader
23306 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
27 / F / Turkey
Offline
Posted 10/26/08


The next day all the students get back from their semester brake… Alex ran to Melody the moment she burst in the dining hall and hugged her tight. Jonathan smiled at her from where he sat and said “Welcome back Alex…” Alex walked around the table and hugged Jonathan as well. Melody looked amused. Alex went to grab her breakfast. Melody spoke, “I had missed her”

Jonathan searched her. She didn’t know how Alex got out of the mess Melody caused before. Jonathan had to keep everyone unconscious, even Alex so he could carry her out of the classroom to her dormitory… He thought ‘if I’ll ever be able to tell these things to her’…

After Alex came back, they sat together and talked about her holiday and what did she do in the last two weeks. Before their breakfast was about to finish, Alex looked at them both…Her eyes going between Melody and Jonathan. She asked with a plain voice “What did you do? Two weeks, all alone in the school, what did you do?”

Jonathan and Melody looked at each other. Melody replied “We didn’t do anything. We talked. And we weren’t alone in the school. There were other people just not some that we could spend time with…” Jonathan nodded her and started to play with his food, with the tip of his fork. Melody looked outside where the snow had blanketed everything. It was a cloudy day. It would probably be dark.

Alex didn’t stay long for some reason. She muttered something about her books and then left them. Melody looked a little taken aback and resented but pretended she wasn’t. Jonathan was distracted and his eyes kept losing its focus. He was staring into space, probably seeing something in thin air, which no one else but him could see.

Melody stood up. Her movement alerted Jonathan and he fallowed her right away. They left their trays and walked silently. They still had half on hour to their lessons to start, so they decided to go the library.

The library was empty except of a little freshman girl. She was at the “E” row and obviously looking for a book. Melody sat on one of the chairs in front of the rock carved high windows. It had started to snow again. The snowflakes were falling slowly but it seemed like it would turn into another snow storm. She watched the clouds getting tighter and wind forcing its way through windows causing loud voices. The lake wasn’t visible from this side of the building. Here, she could see basketball and football court. Teachers’ dormitory and sports building. Theatre building was at the left next to her favorite place. A path in to the forest. It was breath taking to walk on it in the fall and the spring time. Melody had walked on it so many times she felt drawn to it again. But it was cold and she was warm here.

Jonathan was sitting next to her. His eyes watching the snowing but actually looking at something else. Melody put her hand on his arm. He was instantly startled with her touch, looked at her hand then her eyes. She asked softly, “Are you alright?”

Jonathan stared at her. Then he said “I am ok. I am just thinking”

“Is it the same thing you were thinking before but you couldn’t tell me?”

Jonathan looked down at his hands. Seconds passed lazily and then he spoke, his voice lower than she ever heard.

“I don’t know if I can tell you. I don’t know if I should”

Melody held his hand again. Jonathan grabbed it and squeezed it. He looked in her eyes searching; wanting to see that she was ready. Ready to know. Ready to learn. As he looked deeper and deeper using his ability to sense her feelings, he felt the faintest glimpse of fear. A fear for what she had inside. A fear about knowing the truth. He knew she wasn’t as afraid as he had been when he was in her shoes but his instinct talked to him, ‘Just a little longer…wait…a little bit longer’.

Jonathan sighed and spoke “I can’t tell you. Not yet.”

As she looked in his eyes, one more time a maddening sensation of déjà vu came over her. She had heard this before. It was important, she had to remember it. She forced herself to get the memory out but it was like trying to hold water. Going away as she tried to catch it.

They sat there hand in hand for more than twenty minutes. She was a little resented because he hadn’t told her what was in his mind. But her attention was distracted with her déjà vu. As the bell rang first time in more than two weeks they both stood up quietly and walked out of the library. Until they reached the corner where Jonathan should go for his classes, they didn’t talk. At that point, Jonathan looked in her eyes again. Melody saw in his eyes that he wanted to tell her. Even now, he was burning to tell her. He struggled for a while, then his shoulders fell and she understood he wasn’t going to. Not yet.

Jonathan put his hand on her arm, leaned his head on a side then said softly, “I am sorry, Melody.”

Melody nodded and then turned around. She hated herself for walking away from him like this, knowing he didn’t deserve it. But she was mad and she didn’t even know what at. She knew he was watching her. She didn’t stop until her own class.

Jonathan watched her walking away, feeling awful for shutting her off. Especially after all the things she had told him. He wanted to go after her, grab her by the arm and tell her everything. He had already taken two steps when the bell rang for the last time. He sighed, turned around and walked to his class.

Writer
UN1M3 
17784 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
F / No where to be seen
Offline
Posted 10/27/08
wow another great chapter XD so awesome ^_^ cant wait for the next chapter (portion)
Editor
8055 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
24 / F / ~*heaven*~
Offline
Posted 11/2/08
awws...both of them felt bad about da other... x[
Writer
4196 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
22 / ~my studio~
Offline
Posted 11/11/08
finish reading all of them....
that was nice...
it's descriptived but not too descriptived which makes you bored... which is good if your writing a novel....
the plot is presented simply and you don't used too hard words... another good point!!!
although, the story seems too common...
and damn, the name jonathan!!! i love that name soooo much!!!
i want the next chapter!!!!
Group Leader
23306 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
27 / F / Turkey
Offline
Posted 11/11/08
thanks, I am translating it...will post this week, I should also read yours
Group Leader
23306 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
27 / F / Turkey
Offline
Posted 11/12/08


Even though they had spent the entire day together they hadn’t talked much. Alex had sat between them, kept talking about random stuff to brake the uncomfortable silence. When Melody was back in her dormitory she felt bad for acting like that whole day. She never meant to hurt him.

She turned aside in her bed and sensed her watcher next to her. But she was too tired to talk to him and the girls in the dormitory weren’t sleeping yet. So she just smiled at the point where she felt he was standing.
The moment she closed her eyes, she found herself in a corridor leading a room with a high archway. She walked under it and she saw Jonathan right away, sitting on an armchair, his elbows on his knees. He was talking to a young woman with incredible, long, blue hair and, Melody could see it from where she stood, her purple eyes… Her sun set purple eyes. Bright and burning. She was beautiful. Her face was almost divine, she felt an irresistible feeling of venerate. Wanted to kneel in front of her. Not just because of her beauty and elegance or her undeniable aura indicating she was heavenly and noble, it was the power of her. She looked so strong yet modest. Her eyes were reflecting her inner strength; she felt the piercing power of her gaze even though she was looking at Jonathan.

Jonathan spoke “I want to tell her now, master. Only if you approve of course.”

The woman with blue hair answered “I trust your judgment about her. If you believe she is ready then she is.” She watched him carefully with a caring, soft expression on her face. Almost motherly. She spoke again, her voice kinder and lower this time “Jonathan you look really tired. Why don’t rest one day, you can go back to earth tomorrow.”

As she said so, Jonathan raised his head and their eyes met. He said with a voice harder than marble, colder than ice “I can not rest Master Crystal. Lara is so close. I can feel her. I am not going to let her take Melody. Not her too.” His face was bitter with past memories and his emotions.

The woman named Crystal looked serious and worried. She replied slowly “Yes, I feel her as well.” She leaned forward facing Jonathan, her eyes at his, making her words stronger “She, Lara, wants to have her. You know what’s at stake; you know how valuable Melody is.” Crystal leaned her head to one side a little “She will attack Jonathan. And you cannot beat her if you are tired and distracted.” Crystal reached out and held his hand “Melody can’t fight her on her own. She can’t stand a minute if Lara attacks. You must be there. You must be there totally conscious of yourself, totally awake and fully prepared.”

Jonathan listened to her carefully until the end. Then he rose to his feet. Crystal stood up with him. Jonathan spoke “If she comes…when she comes, she will realize that I have gotten stronger. Yet I am not a fool, I can’t beat her if we fight. I can hang on for a while but in the end she will waste me”

Crystal smiled at him “You underestimate yourself so much Jonathan Weiss.” Then she got serious, “You won’t be alone. The moment she is there, I’ll know. I’ll know and send all the others for help.”

She took two steps forward and hugged Jonathan. He closed his eyes and let her power to wash him. A blue light appeared in the middle of them; seem to be floating out of their pressed bodies. It surrounded them and started to pulse inside out. After a couple of seconds Master Crystal let go of him and Jonathan opened his eyes, feeling totally fresh and awake. All of his senses alerted and clear. He smiled at her.

A voice echoed in the air. It was Jonathan’s voice yet his lips weren’t moving. “Thank you Master”

Crystal responded the same way. “When will you stop calling me that?” She was smiling though.

Jonathan and her exchanged looks for a while then he lifted his hands up and united them in front of him like he was praying. He raised his head one last time and the echoing voice vibrated through the air.
“Be guided by the light…Crystal”

Crystal smiled at him, her eyes burning with her inner power “Be guided by the light, Jonathan”

The blue light, one more time, appeared at the point where Jonathan’s hands were united. It grew larger and covered him. He was just a silhouette in the light then he was gone. And with a flash of light the blue light disappeared with him.

Melody woke up suddenly. She pushed the hair over her face. Her eyes looking at thin air, still under the effect of the dream. Everything had made sense now. It was all clear. She had the answers finally. How well they suited with everything had happened… Now she knew… Who “he” was…

Writer
4196 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
22 / ~my studio~
Offline
Posted 11/12/08
that was amazing....
i want to know what melody will do next....:))
First  Prev  1  2  3  4  5  6  7  8  9  10  11  Next  Last
You must be logged in to post.