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My Hero Jaejoong love story/fan fic begins like this...


Title: Our Love


Looking out my apartment window I began wondering how I wanted so badly to change the path my life was going! How I was unable to make happy memories and how to avoid all this bad luck that was put upon myself! Questions I needed to ask and was left unanswered. Why me? What did I do that was so wrong that I have to be punished this way!?! My unhappy life took a turn for the worst when someone I truly cared for left me! Left me but not even for another women, no, but from this earth! He past away 2 year’s ago and I still can't get over it! I never got to tell him how much I loved him! We had just started dating and everything was taken away from me just like that. Felt like someone snatched the rug from under me! Ever since the day of Hyunki's funeral I felt like I would never love again. Even when I tried to date it would all end in disaster. I would put up a wall and block any and all feelings. I don't think there will be anyone in this world who I would ever truly love again!

Walking away from the window I slowly walked to my closet; grabbed clean clothes and changed. Even though I've sheltered myself from the world I tried my best not to let myself go not because I didn't want to but because I couldn't. I remember when Hyunki was still alive he used to always say, "Even if things in our life turn sour we have to remember we can't just avoid life or ourselves we have to keep going with life no matter how hard it gets for us! We have to always look our best even if we put up a front we can't let ourselves go. Promise me that?" And I have, I've kept my promise till this day even putting on a fake smile so no one can tell how miserable and in pain I was.

I walked out the door of my apartment. Before leaving I grabbed my jacket and hand bag! Heading towards the elevator I bumped into a feminine yet manly looking man. Of course not watching where I was going I knocked his things down as well as my own. I jumped in surprise and apologized for not paying attention. I bent down to pick up his belongings. The handsome man didn't say a word. The only thing he did was stare. His face was clean, fresh, and very beautiful. His face looked too perfect to be a mans face. It looks as though we are about the same age (22). But looking at him closely I realized there was something about his appearance that made him stick out from the rest. It was the way he dressed; he dressed like a celebrity. He looked as though he was the type of person who had money. Thinking to myself I thought he must have some type of important job or he can be someone famous! But I couldn't tell for sure because he put his cap back on and he pulled it down low.

Handing over the beautiful mans belongings I noticed a smile slowly spreading across his face. I felt my cheeks turn hot and my hands turned cold. I took my eyes off him, I really couldn't look him in the face any longer because I knew if I spoke up I would tumble my words.

Then the beautiful man spoke first, "Gwen-chahn-ah-yo (are you ok)? Seems like you where rushing off to some place."

"Oh...uh...not really just going for a walk. Seems as though my mind drifted off again, feels like it happens more often now. Oh...but...I guess you didn't need to know that." I started rambling.

The beautiful man: "Are you nervous? You shouldn't be, please just be yourself."

Just when he says that I guessed he must be someone famous, just wish I could see his face clearly just to be sure.

"Do you live here in this building? I do too! I just moved in yesterday, I live 3 doors down." With that the beautiful man takes out a small compact mirror and looks into it. Then quickly puts it away and says, "Neh ee rhum eun Kim Jaejoong im ni da (my name is Kim Jaejoong)! And you are?"

"Kim...Jaejoong?" I asked in a hushed nervous voice. "My...my name...my name is Marlie."

The beautiful man smiles and says, “Cho-um pepkaysumnida (nice to meet you).”

“Ye.” I quickly replied.

That was all I could say. Nervously kneeling down to pick up my jacket and hand bag I felt a warm hand over mine. Taking my hand away in surprise I quickly grabbed my things and speed walked to the elevator realizing the man was coming towards the elevator, I quickly pressed the button to close the door on him. Realizing how ridiculous I was acting, I felt embarrassed, especially now that I know he lives in the same building just 3 doors down from me! Maybe I won't bump into him in the future I mean I'm sure he'll be busy unpacking and also if he's a celebrity like I believe he is then I'm sure he won't be around much in his apartment. ~Sighs~ I'll just shake it off I mean no point in worrying about that now. Finally reaching the parking lot of my apartment complex I decided not to take the car, I felt like walking instead. But as I was leaving I heard a voice calling for me from behind.

"Oh crap! It's him, I know it is." I thought to myself. Not stopping to the voice that was calling for me, I turned the corner of the lot and rushed to get away!

Unfortunately I couldn't get away in time I heard his running footsteps getting closer. Thinking I could escape I suddenly felt his hand grab hold of my arm. I turned to face him and saw that he was laughing with his free hand over his mouth! Is...is he...laughing at me!?! Now my face turned as red and bright as a tomato. Jaejoong let go of my arm, once he did I covered my face with both hands. Thinking to myself, "OMG this is so embarrassing!!!"

“Why did you run?” He asked still laughing.

I kept my faced covered and said, “I…I was rushing off to someplace that’s all.”

Jaejoong tried looking at my face but I wouldn’t let him. He sensed that I was feeling a bit uncomfortable so he stops and then says, “Uh…I can give you a lift if you’d like.”

I quickly looked at his face and blushed even more and said, “Ah-nee-yo! Oh no what I mean is that it won’t be necessary I felt like walking actually, thanks anyways. Um, I’m going first.”

“Oh I see.” He says.

With that I smiled and walked away feeling VERY nervous. I looked over my shoulder just a bit to see if he had left but when I looked I saw that he was still standing there watching me walk away. Strange how my heart races when I see him. Maybe if I go shopping I can forget about him. ~Sighs~ Shopping used to be something I enjoyed doing but now I just do it to get out of the house. Heading home my mind kept drifting off to the man I met earlier today. What was his name again? Oh right it was…Kim Jaejoong! How strange…why am I thinking about this man for!?! Although I have to admit that man is very good looking and very beautiful indeed! I wonder what he’s doing now. Once the elevator doors opened my question was answered. Kim Jaejoong was coming out of his apartment. As soon as I walked out of the elevator Jaejoong turns around and sprints towards me with a smile on his face. Oh my gosh my heart starts speed racing. Without noticing a smile spread across my own face once he was standing there in front of me.

Jaejoong says, “So we meet again!”

I couldn’t help but giggle. Jaejoong laughs too.

“I see you’ve done some shopping.” Jaejoong says looking down at my hands which where struggling to hold onto the bags.

It takes me by surprise when Jaejoong takes the bags from me and just stares at me with this sexy grin plastered on his face.

I then said to him, “Oh no it’s ok I can handle the bags myself.”

I reached for the bags but he wouldn’t give them back, so I just turned around and opened the door and walked in. Jaejoong didn’t come inside till I said it was ok. What a gentlemen don’t you think? Well anyways, he set the bags down on my couch and just stood there. I was starting to feel very nervous and uncomfortable. I haven’t had any other man in my home before other than Hyunki. I looked over at Jaejoong and noticed him staring at me so deeply. It felt like he was trying to get inside me! I can hear my heart beating rapidly it felt like it was going to come out of my chest. I tried to look away but I couldn’t take my eyes away from his deep gaze. Jaejoong begins to walk towards me, closer and closer.

Then he raises his left hand up towards my shoulder and places it there and then says, “You don’t have to be so afraid of meeting new people. Looking at you I can tell something very painful has happened in your life.”

I stood there in total silence. Not knowing what to say I just nodded my head and looked down at my hands. Jaejoong then takes my hands in his and holds them. My heart raced even more. I was beginning to think that if this keeps up I’m sure Jaejoong would eventually be able to hear it. Before I noticed, a lonely tear strolled down my cheek and with that I covered my face to try to control my tears that I knew was going to pour out like a waterfall. But I couldn't hold them back any longer and I began to cry for the first time since Hyunki's death. I fell down to my knee’s and cried very hard that my body began to shake, Jaejoong kneels down and puts his arms around me and holds me tightly then whispers in my ear, “It’s ok to cry. Cry when you need to cry.” When he says those words to me, my heart some how felt lighter. I looked up into his eyes and it made me feel calm and safe like nothing bad can ever happen to me. I buried my face in his chest and cried some more and with my arms around his waist I held him tight against my body. The warmth coming from his body was soothing and I finally calmed down and let him lose. Jaejoong wipes away my tears and gives me a warm smile. We both stand not saying a word. I don’t look at Jaejoong instead I lower my head and ask him to please leave. He hesitates for a minute and then leaves but not before he says, “You know where to find me if you ever need anything or need anyone to talk to.”

I nod my head but I don’t say a word. I hear the door close and I run to lock it. Turning my back to the door I slump to the ground in silence and thought to myself, “Why did I let myself cry in front of him? I haven’t cried in 2 years and to cry in front of a total stranger! How can I do such a thing? And even worse I tightly embraced him! I…he…!?! He held me so tight and I held him even tighter. But it felt nice…really nice.” So many things went threw my mind all at once it felt like I would go crazy. I stood up and walked towards the couch I looked down and saw something reflecting in the light. It was Jaejoong's shades and just when I thought I wouldn’t have to see him again after this embarrassing display it seems like I’ll have to see him once more. So many things happened in one day maybe I’ll go tomorrow and return Jaejoong his shades. My body felt worn out and exhausted so I went into the bed room and quickly fell asleep.

I had awoken from the bright sun light that lit up my bed room and shined brightly in my eyes. Covering my eyes from the sun light I quickly rose and did my morning routine. Every 10 seconds I would glance over at Jaejoong's shades and thinking to myself, “I’ll make sure to return these to him later!” My heart would beat faster and my hands would get cold and my palms would get sweaty. Just knowing that I would see him again made me REALLY nervous. I changed clothes did my hair and then my make-up. I looked at myself in the mirror and thought to myself, "I look pretty cute today! ^_^" It's the first time in so long that I had complemented myself! I had a mixture of feeling's going on all at the same time. I was feeling nervous, happy, afraid, and excited! Deciding it was time to return Jaejoong his shades, I grabbed them from the couch and headed out the door. Walking so slowly down the hall towards his door my heart was beginning to speed faster then it was a little while ago. Finally standing in front of Jaejoong's door I raised my hand and hesitated a bit when I heard foot steps behind me. I spun around and saw Jaejoong looking down at me. For about a second I didn't recognize him without his hat on! But when he smiled at me that's when I knew it was him! Now having a better view of his face I can see he really does have VERY good looking facial features! I quickly remembered the sunglasses I was holding and brought my hand out to give them to him.

Jaejoong looks down and grabs the shades from my hand he then looks back at me and smiles and then says, "Oh kamsamnida! Did you come just to return these?"

"Ah! Ye! Um...I just saw them and thought I should return them to the rightful owner, ha ha (laughs nervously)" I replied.

Nothing was said after that. We where in dead silence & alone in this quiet hallway. 'Ah damn! Why am I acting so weird?', I thought to myself, 'What should I do now? What should I say?' Before I could strike up a conversation Jaejoong speaks up first and took me by surprise.

"Hey, um I'm heading out right now, would you like to get something to eat with me?" Jaejoong asked.

"Sure!" I replied.

Walking side by side in our small narrow hallway my heart began to race. Worrying about whether or not Jaejoong could hear it I tried to walk closer to the wall so I wouldn't be so close to him. Getting off the elevator and out the building I saw Jaejoong heading towards a motorcycle and getting on it. Then he looks at me. He hands me a helmet and says, "Here get on."

I look at him dumbfounded and begin to say, "Yeah, um...you expect me to get on that thing? Wearing this?"

I was wearing a white sweater shawl over a sexy pink spaghetti string silk top and a blue super cute pleated denim mini skirt (one of the outfights I had bought earlier when I went shopping) I was wearing flats so that was ok.

Jaejoong looks at me a second and just lets out a light chuckle then says, "It'll be ok as long as you sit closer to me, no one would be able to see anything. And besides that skirt doesn't look like it'll fly up easily. Hahah!"

I ended up sitting on it anyways. My hands shook from fear of being on a motorcycle for the first time. And I think Jaejoong noticed because he took my hands and wrapped them around his waist but that was so embarrassing so I took them away and held on to his jacket instead but he would let me he kept putting them back. I wouldn't keep my hands there so he stops trying and says, "Hold on tight!" And starts the bike.

Once the bike started it speed so fast it felt like I was about to fall back but I found myself subconsciously getting closer to Jaejoong and pressing my body against his and wrapping my arms around his waist and holding on so tight I thought I was going to hurt him. But from all the noise of the street I was able to still some how hear Jaejoong laugh. My face flushed and my palms started sweating. Every corner we turned I would grab Jaejoong tighter and tighter but when the ride would get smoother I would let my grip loosen.

Just then Jaejoong stops the motorcycle. I get off first then Jaejoong. But when I got off I could barely stand up properly, my legs felt numb and so wobbly like spaghetti. I looked up at the restaurant where we would be eating our dinner. We walked up the steps and I saw that there where tables outside and inside it was really beautiful. Jaejoong asked for an out side table where we were able to eat under the beautiful night sky. Jaejoong firmly grabs my arm and helps walk into the restaurant. I gave him a shy thankful smile and he smiled back at me reassuringly.

A waitress came and took us to our seats and Jaejoong asked, “Menyurul poyo juseyo (the menu, please).” The waitress brought us our menu’s and then left to give use some time to decide our orders. Shortly after the same waitress came back and took our orders. Jaejoong and I where left at the table in awkward silence. This time it was my turn to say something.

"So do you come to this shikdang (restaurant) often?" I asked.

Jaejoong's reply was a quick and low "Yes!" And that was the end of it.

We sat there staring at our hands awkwardly. And when I looked up at him I noticed a girl was staring at our table. She was very pretty. Sort of made me feel a little self conscious about myself. But there was something familiar about her appearance. I just can't seem to put my finger on it. I couldn't help glancing back at the girl and every time I looked she was always staring back with an expressionless face. I looked back at Jaejoong and noticed he was staring at me and made me blush.

He then spoke, "Um..is there something wrong? You keep looking else where."

I looked up at him in surprise and said, "Ah! No it's nothing. Really."

Just then the waitress comes back with our orders. She sets them on the table, bowed and walked away. Looking at all the food and smelling the aroma that came from it just made me even hungrier then I was when we got here. I reached out to grab my plate but before I could Jaejoong takes it and serves me. I was so taken aback that I couldn't say anything to him.

Jaejoong sets the plate in front of me then looks at me with a sweet smile and says, "Please Eat." And begins to eat himself.

I pick up my silver chopsticks and begin to eat. The food was indeed very delicious. I pick up some pieces of meat and place them on my plate and then I look up at Jaejoong just so I can see his face. But when I look at him I noticed the girl who was staring earlier was STILL staring. It was beginning to make me uncomfortable.

I decide to tell Jaejoong, "Ah Jaejoong there's a girl over there who keeps staring. She looks like she has something to say."

Jaejoong put's down his bowl of rice and chopstick's and slowly turns around. As soon as he does the expressionless girl suddenly changes. Her face is now shining with happiness. I look from the pretty girl to Jaejoong. On Jaejoong's face appeared a wide smile and the same shine and brightness that the girl had. For some reason the scene I was witnessing was making me much more uncomfortable then before. Jaejoong gets up from his seat and goes over to the girl and embraces her, which completely shocked me but what shocked me even more was how I was feeling. I didn’t like this feeling at all. I stayed sitting there speechless just watching them chatting away and forgetting my existence. Getting upset I got up from my seat and walked towards them.

Jaejoong looked my way and came to realization, “Oh no, Marlie, I’m so sorry! I got caught up in our conversation. Please come and sit here. Let’s all eat together.”

He pulled out the chair for me and I sat down. Jaejoong sat down and they both looked at me with the same look of interest in me in there eyes. It sort of made me feel a bit uncomfortable. I looked directly at the girl and thought she must be a couple of years younger then us but not by much she should be around 19 or 20 years old. She really is such a beautiful girl. She has such big eyes and the whitest and smoothest skin I have ever seen and so flawless. Not even a blemish insight. I was beginning to feel depressed about myself just from looking at her. I looked away from her and began to eat again. Jaejoong sitting across from me ignored my existence completely…again! Listening to there conversation I picked up that they’ve known each other for a very long time and they even know very personal things about each other. It made me feel very uncomfortable and got me thinking ‘Why am I even here with this guy, I know nothing about him!?’ My hands turned cold and my heart was racing. Why should I be jealous for? I don’t even know him that well, just a couple incidents where we bumped into each other but that’s it. I put my chopsticks down and moved my chair back. Jaejoong looked up at me a realized that he hasn’t spoken with me much since we arrived here. He looked apologetic and ashamed. I got up from my seat and they both looked at me. Jaejoong tried to speak and explain, “I’m so sorry Marlie I meant to introduce to you my…” But before I could let him finish I made an excuse and said, “Oh I’m sorry but I forgot that I was supposed to do something important. So please excuse me and thank you very much for the meal. Jal-mug-ut-sum-ni-da (the food was delicious (I ate well)). Annyonghi kyeseyo (goodbye). ” With that I turned around and walked away but not before a glanced over at the girl. She stared at me but with a confused expression on her face. I turn forward and continue walking. I could hear Jaejoong calling after me but not stopping I quickly got into the taxi that was parked in front of the restaurant (how lucky was that!) and headed home. Getting close to my street I tell the driver, “Yogiyae naeryo juseyo (I want to get off here).” I got out the taxi and headed towards the building.

Opening the door to my apartment I hurriedly locked the door and ran to the bedroom. I plopped myself on the chim-dae (bed) and laid there thinking. I suddenly realized the sharp pain in my chest. I don’t understand why I’m feeling this way. It’s as if I was disappointed and hurt. Like I was being rejected and pushed to the side. I don’t like this feeling at all. Am I just thinking too much? I mean I didn’t even let him explain, I just walked away. I think I realized this feeling I was experiencing for the first time in my life was…was…JEALOUSY!? No, that can’t be! That’s impossible I’ve never felt this way before even when I was with Hyunki. How can this be? I barley know the man and yet I can still feel this way? No way, this is crazy! Ohtoke!? I began worrying about this new discovery. I didn’t like the feeling at all. I jumped at the sound of someone knocking on the door. I jumped off the bed and sprinted quietly to the door. Peeking through the peep hole I saw Jaejoong standing on the other side with a sad expression on his face. I pressed my back against the wall and slid down. PABBO!!! That’s how I felt! I was feeling too embarrassed to face him I felt like such a pabbo (fool). Just sitting there letting him knock on the door for a good 5 minutes till the knocking stopped I quickly got on my feet and looked through the peep hole again and saw no one. Feeling really down, my cheeks got hot and my eyes where brimming with tears. Shaking my head I decided I shouldn’t feel this way over a man I barely knew. All I knew about the man was his name, his age (which I guessed) and that we lived in the same building let alone on the same floor. Not knowing what to do I decided it would be best just to jam-ja (sleep). Tomorrow is another day.

I didn’t even get much sleep. All I had on my mind was Jaejoong and how I was going to face him the next day. I pulled the cover over my head not wanting to get up and facing the day I KNEW was a head of me. I heard ringing in my ear and realized it was the telephone. I reached over picked it up and answered, “Hello?”

On the other end I heard, “Marlie can we talk? When you left the restaurant yesterday you looked upset. I’m so sorry I didn’t mean to ruin our first date.”

Freaking out! That’s what I was doing right now. I was freaking out when I heard Jaejoong’s voice on the phone. I couldn’t reply back my throat felt dry and tight. I could hear Jaejoong’s breathing.

Then Jaejoong starts speaking again, “Um, Marlie can you meet me down stairs at the main door in 10 minutes? (Silence) Please let me explain about last night. I felt like you left with some misunderstandings.”

“Ok. I’ll meet you in 10 minutes.” I replied. And with that I hung up. Wait a minute thinking back to what he said!? Did…did he just say that last night’s dinner was our first…DATE!?!? What…but when…since when was that a date? I don’t remember Jaejoong asking me out on a date!?












NOTE: This fan fic is not done yet so please be patient and when I do finish it, I'll be sure to inform all of you who have been asking and waiting for this! Thanks everyone! ^_^



The End...NOT, lol! ^_~


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Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! So PLEASE comment this and tell me what you think about it so far!

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good so far
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i agree.....good so far
keep it coming.......
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nice story im looking forward to the continuation of this fanfic and also to the fanfics of the other DBSK members ;D
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You should totally do this, I think it would be fun to do, the girl seem to be concerned she made up the subtitles, but I think if it is going to be fanfiction, it does not matter. Makes me want to make a fiction story and create a vid, for it, lol.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=KC0yCh7OTzs

All below involves DBSK, so you might like more, lol.
http://youtube.com/watch?v=bWgkjwAD5nQ

This one too, lol:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=j4SfyYSu9dc

And another, lol:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=3_1UT0WV-V8

http://youtube.com/watch?v=OV5mxqGavyE

http://youtube.com/watch?v=9cGWzDSa9Ro

http://youtube.com/watch?v=ezXMt3YZh7U

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LOL that was SO kool! I seriously REALLY LOVED a couple of them & LIKED a couple!!! OMG SO GOOD!!! ^_^
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You should start a FanFiction Group, lots of people to me I think would be interested, and it could just be your normal kind of fanfiction to whatever person you write about, so people can have plenty different kind of fanfictions to write and read.
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Good idea! So how should we do that? ^_^
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i love the trailers ;D and im actually reading every fanfic now. heh x)
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Mary1803 wrote:

Good idea! So how should we do that? ^_^


Call it a Asian Variety Fan Fiction Group.


Where it could be for all Fan Fictions that involve Music Stars, actors, actresses, and models.
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angelynnnnn wrote:

i love the trailers ;D and im actually reading every fanfic now. heh x)


Glad you enjoy them.
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InternationalDramaLover wrote:

Call it a Asian Variety Fan Fiction Group.

Where it could be for all Fan Fictions that involve Music Stars, actors, actresses, and models.


I mean it might end up being lots up forums, lol. But, the rules, could be applied, for example, where there could be a Se7en Forum topic made, and only Se7en Fan Fictions are allowed in it, that they can't make a new topic for him, just because they wrote a story, if they have one about him, they have to stick it in the Se7en Forum only. I know there are multipy characters, so they are going to have to decide which main character is the story more about, and then categorized one of them by the forums that are made, unless the character they got is not listed, then they can start a forum topic on that person.
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Oh that's sounds seriously like a good idea! ^_^
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Doesn't it? Lol.
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LMAO! Yeah it does! ^_^
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