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Posted 8/25/08 , edited 8/25/08
Another story i wrote when Kamichama Karin came out xD which is quite some time ago xD Kazune inspried me ^^

Short Story

The bell just rang as I walked inside with my 3 best friends, at least they may be now.
My name is Karina and my three best friends are, Bridget, Zoey, and Mina. I am 13 years old with a younger brother name Rikky.

I walked across the hall to where my lock was and then i saw him. My love. I had a crush on him ever since second grade, his name is Kazune.

"ne, ne did you hear, Kazune likes Zoey, i think they are perfect together, Don't you?" I heard someone say.

I sighed, that's right he likes Zoey, my bestest friend. The first time i heard it, i was crushed, but now i am fine just by being his friend. Kazune is very popular at school. He is kind, gental, smart and everything else. He was perfect. No wonder all the girls in our school fell for him.

"hey shortie" i looked at and saw Kazune.

Yes, he does call me shortie, it's because i am short. I also had trouble speaking to him, but it has gotten better over the years.

"hi" i answered back.

"So how is it going with the swim team?" he asked smoothly.

"Fine, everyone's is preparing for the competion" I said.

I am part of the swim team, well, the captain actually so many people ask me about them. It's normal.

Me and Kazune walked to class, as friends, although i wished that we were more. When we went into the classroom the teacher told us to sit down. We rushed to our seat and the teacher started handing out our tests from the other day.

"Everybody, you have this period to find out the correct answers for the test. Next time we will take it up together." then the teacher left the class.

Kazune came and hovered on top of me. i felt my cheeks burn up and looked up. At first, i thought i saw him blush too, but it can't be true, he likes Zoey.

"Great job on the test" Kazune said.

I looked over at his sheet and he has also gotten perfect. He got perfect too, and he still compliments me, that's what's so nice about him.

The bell rang again and this time it was for lunch. Zpey had told me the other day that she wanted to tell me something and meet her on the roof. I walked up the stairs slowly. When i reached the top i could see Zoey waiting for me, i apologized for the wait.

Convo:

Me: Hey Zoey, sorry for making you wait
Zoey: No problem, can you do me a big favor??
Me: Ummm.. sure?
Zoey: Can you... asked kazune... who he likes?
Me: It's you Zoey, havent you heard the rumors?
Zoey: Those are just rumors I want to know if he actually likes me.. please can you do this for me??
Me:Zoey....
Zoey: Please Karina ! i won't ask for anything else ever again.
Me:........ fine

I agreed to her equest, even though i didn't feel comfortable doing it.

The next morning, when i woke up, i didn't feel so well, but i went to school anyways. As planed i told Kazune to meet me on the roof at lunch. The day went by too fast. I wasn't ready, but i went anyways. I walked up the stairs once again and saw that Kazune wasn't there yet. Good. i though, i wasn't ready yet. Then a few minutes later Kazune came.

Convo:

Kazune: Hey, sorry i'm late i had something to do.
Me: No, it's okay.
Kazune: So what did you want to talk to me about?
Me: uumm... well....
-pause-
Me: Who do you like?
Kazune: -blush- Why do you want to know?
Me:Well.... just tell... i have a reasson but i can't tell you.
Kazune: Why?
Me: Please can you jus......
Kazune -inturrups- you.... I LIKE YOU.
Me:m-me... (turnes away blushing >> sees Zoey at the door.) NO WAIT ZOEY!! (gets up to chase her)
Kazune:(grabs my hand) wait it her who told you to ask me?? does that mean you don't like me? please, answer...

I looked back and forth at the door and Kazune. My head felt heavier and heavier. it only took a few secnond until everything went black.

I woke up and saw that Kazune was holding my right hand, sleeping, and a wet towel on my forehead. I was so happy, but then i remembered everything. It felt like my heart has drowned in an ocean full on water. I felt tears dripping from my face. Quickly i rushed out to find Zoey, careful not to wake Kazune. I ran into Bridget and Mina and asked them if they have seem Zoey. They said that she looked upset about something so they left her alone and then they directed me to a tree in the front yard. The moment i saw her, i began to run. When she saw me, she turned her back towards me.

Convo:
Me: Sorry, I'm sorry.
Zoey: You apologive too much
Me: (looks down) sorry.
Zoey: (starts laughing) you know, i wish you couls see your face right now.
Me Huh?..... I'm very sorry that happened...
Zoey: Why are you apologizing for? You did nothing wromg...
Me: B-but...
Zoey: No buts (Smiles)
Me:(see's a hint of sadness in her eyes) Are you sure you're okay?
Zoey: Yes, and go for him
Me: Huh?
Zoey: Don't kid with me, you like him don't you?
Me: N-no of cours----
Zoey: You don't have to lie to me.. i'm really okay with this, but when you guys have your first kiss, you have to tell me first got it??!
Me: Zoey!! (gets up and starts chasing her)

I was chasing Zoey when i bumped into someone. I felt myself tilt backwards so i closed my eyes for the pain that was about to come... there was none.

Convo:

(opens eyes and see's Kazune)
Me: uhh.. thank yo-----
Kazune:Do you like me?
Me: (see's Zoey leaving) No! (see's Kazune) uh... i mean yes, I like you, but I can't right now...
Kazune: huh? you.. so basically you don't..
Me: No! I do!
Kazune: (blush) then.. kiss me
Me: huh? What do you mean
Kazune: we have been friends for so long, i didn't want to ruin our friendship with this one-sided love so i kept it inside... but not i can't... it's just too much. But if you really don't want to.... you don't have to....
Me: (thinks: I'm sorry Zoey) I-i w-want to....

Kazune stared into my eyes, surprised.

Kazune: Are you sure..
-nods-

I kept my eyes open, not wanting o miss seeing my first kiss. Gently, but also deeply he kissed me....

I thought to myself... I'm the luckiest girl in the world, and for all the other people in the world, i want you to know, love is magical....
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Posted 8/25/08
Great short story!!loves it ^-^
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Posted 8/25/08
nice one-shot story
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Posted 8/26/08

kyahikaru wrote:

nice one-shot story


thank yous~~
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Posted 8/27/08
OMG THAT WAS SOOOO KAWAII >.< I LUV IT!!! i like it when people make their own manga soo AWESOME >.<
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Posted 8/28/08

ahlor wrote:

OMG THAT WAS SOOOO KAWAII >.< I LUV IT!!! i like it when people make their own manga soo AWESOME >.<


heheh i tried to draw it but it didn't turn out good xD
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Posted 8/28/08
haha o wells it probobly was WAY better than I ever could draw
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Posted 8/29/08
cute short story!!!
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