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This is like a game: Someone starts to write a story. (the handle and all other we can enjoy together) The next write more to this story. the next is writing to the last answer, and so on. So every here can add something to the story. I hope you know, what I mean^^
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sounds good .... o let's start this but i hope that u'll be the 1st to add Nemi-chan ... so here goes nothing,,,,

In a far away galaxy some where in the vast universe lies a green planet ..... a very peaceful one yet an aware of the threat which approaches from a far a threat like no other .......
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On this planet peoples live peaceful with animals and plants. The planet was called the green planet cause there were many forests and plants. The people there lived in peace, no one hurt another. It was maybe like a dream. but there were things, no one knewn. Deep under the earth was the secret of the planet, there was something that only wait to be awaken....
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they loved nature and nature loved them back they had long life's , they excelled in architecture , they lived in marvelous houses built from wood small and nice connected together forming a net forming a town .. in the middle was the house of the town mayor and near the water always a small
temple ... except the town of Ishtar since the accident 300 years ago never built a temple ... the people of this towns were nice but for some reason all of them were old ... but that is todays story because tomorrow will be a festival for the Amorite couple will give birth to a twins the 1st babies in 300 hundred years .......
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Some feared this, because many had come to think that children being born was now merly a legend, a myth. But that was only the first of things to come...soon after some of the anmals that they have lived in peace with for centuries will turn on them with out a warning.
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Posted 8/28/08
So, it wasn't easy to celebrate a festival. Them who were feared know that they would only come, to see the twins, cause they haven't seen babies for so long time.

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The festival was celebrating, when an old man came through the gates of this peaceful town. He go by a cane and he was really old, older than 500 years the people thought. When he see the twins, he starts to scream. "They will bring you death and ruin. kill them and you will live in peace." But the people didn't believe the old man. they think he was a bit of irritated.
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but the mayor who was young < 150 years > but wise for he have learned the wisdom of the earth from the late mystics who lived high in the sacred mountain in the depth of the forest of the lost near the center of the planet ,
(( tomorrow i'll go and ask the beast )) said the mayor , the voices quited down < did he say the beast > said one , she'll eat u > said another .
the mayor closed his eyes and said while he smelled softly the gentile wind coming from the south < i'll let the planet guide me > .
Here the old man stood and asked < young one what is this beast u all mumbling about .. >
< she is one of the protectors of this planet that's all i know and that she is very old over a 10.000 years maybe
old oracle don't be surprised for i can see the marks on u .. > ..
the people began to mumble again < then it's true > ( but we can't kill the children , the gods will punish us )
then the mayor said < we do not know what the danger he was talking about , as u know prophecies tend to be ambiguous so until i come back don't do anything ) .
and here entered the village a group of animals and talked < head our warning , for it's coming , it's coming fast , that which will tear the sky a part and burn everything to from what it once was > ...
one of them turned to the mayor and said <Tammuz the son of nature , the sacred one asks for u , make haste > ... and they disappeared into the near wood...
Posted 9/1/08
(wait so the mayor's name us Tammuz ? edit it for me if i got it wrong kk >.<)

Tammuz stared at the empty spot they had disappeared, and turned back to the group of huddling villagers. Staring carefully at them, he saw soom frightful, other emotionless. Among all, he noticed one. She was young looking compared to the others. If he guessed rigght about 17 or 16, but nonetheless it was her striking golden hair and piercing green eyes that held his gaze.

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'suzune' I glanced down at a little boy tugging on my rag of a clothe.
"what is it Hide?'
he stared at me with his big creamy brown eyes,'what's going on up there?'

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she was the spitting image of his deceased wife , suddenly she vanished before his eyes < maybe am a bit tiered > thought the mayor , but he couldn't shut the warning all over his mind < something isn't right > ....
as he fixed his long white mantle and walked toward the woods .
Posted 9/2/08
'Why did you did that?' Suzune hissed at the Hide rolled on the floor laughing. He had a power that can make people disappear, and when he does, the person fills nothing but emptiness, and see only darkness.
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seas ur words ... if u spoiled my fun i'll kill u ... beside it's only an after image i created from his mind ...
....meanwhile the mayor was approaching the lake in the middle of th woods where the beast resides ...
am here sacred one .....< said tammuz > ....
sacred we are not < replied an astonishing sweet voice > for we are just guardians ....
and the time is upon us .....
tammuz was amazed by the striking beauty in front of him < can't believe she is over 10,000 years old > he thought .
age we not she said , and yes i can read ur mind ......
for the village u must return and u must protect the children for it is coming ...
what is it , said tammuz
1st u'll tell ur people not to harm the children ... then tomorrow night come here i'll tell u what to do next ...
son of nature ... now go in peace ...
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then tammuz walk away and thought about the words of the sacred... 'What is it, she have talken about?' After a few while he had returned to the village and look for the children. But he foundt them and their parents nowhere. Was he already to late? Had the villagers belived the words of the old man and killed the children without his oppinion? Everywhere he was looking for them, then...
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Posted 9/8/08
he spotted them they were close to the edge fo the forest. Their parents were no where to be seen...
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when he approached the children were sleeping peacefully , as he tried to pick them up a panther appeared
< it was hiding in the boshes > u saved them < said tammuz > nod down the panther yes .... and then left ...
tammuz picked up the children while thinking < i guess the village not safe anymore but what happened 1st i need to find a safe place for them > looking in the direction of the sacred mountain < guess it's time pay a visit to the mystic village > ....
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it was a long way to it, and with the twins it wasn't easy to. But finally he made it. He was standing on an hill and was looking on the mystical village. a bit fog laid over it and there wasn't much to see, but one of the childs suddenly start to scream. Tammuz looked at the child and start to wonder. The child scream louder when he got nearer the village. It looks like it has fear when he saw the village. But tammuz can't find a reason why. The other child was calm, it was sleeping. 'Why they are so different?', tammuz thought
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