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Chapter 1
Note: italics are thoughts ^^

*BEEEEEP* Nobuta hit the snooze button of her alarmclock. Sighing she turned around. Its time to get up... Reluctantly she stood up and did her daily routine. She didnt like school, but it was bearable(sp?) because she had her 2 true friends. A smile appeared on her face, "Kiritani Shuuji and AKIRA.........." She frowned, what was his first name again? *thinks* never mind...its time to go.

While walking to school she saw those lovey-dovey couples. As much as she hated to admit, she also wanted a boyfriend.
Someone tapped on her shoulder. "hello there miss! I'm namikiri gaku" he gave her his buisness card. She looked at the weirdly dressed guy, .....hentai... She continued walking to school but the guy walked next to her. "U seem very lonely and in need of a good boyfriend, am i right?" Nobuta shook her head. "Its your lucky day today!" what?? i knew it! he is a hentai! she thought. "I'm giving you a chance to find your ideal boyfriend!"

She got dragged along to Kronos Heaven, listening to his explaination of how she was gonna get someone who is perfect for her. "have a seat young lady" He pointed @ the desk "Just fill in that form and your ideal boyfriend will arrive in no time!" He smiled cheesy-ly. what kind of dating bureau is this? it looks more like a lab... She started to fill the form anyway, the part of her that longed for a boyfriend won over the part that didnt trust this.

"Your ideal boyfriend is: 1. Very jealous 2. A little jealous 3. Not jealous 4. Cold."
Nobuta clicked on option 2.
"Your ideal boyfriend's intelligence is: 1. High 2. Low 3. Normal 4. Irrelavant."
1. High
"Your ideal boyfriend's sexual preference"
eehh~? A faint blush apeared on her cheeks.
"is: 1.Adventuresome 2. Slightly adventurous 3. Normal 4.Hates sex"
How am i supposed to know!
She let the pointer on option 3, moved it towards option 2, then quickly clicked on 3.
"Your ideal boyfriend's smile is: 1. Refreshing 2.Cool 3. Rarely Seen 4. Bizarre"
Refreshing.
"Your ideal boyfriend's trustworthiness is: 1. Reliable 2. Unreliable 3. Normal 4. Horrible"
Who would want someone who is not reliable? *clicked on no.1*
"Your ideal boyfriend's personality is: 1. Strict 2. Lenient 3. Normal 4. Girly"
Girly? Shuuji came in her mind. why am i thinking of shuuji? he's not girly.. She gave a slight chuckle remembering the lessons he gave to make her more girly and flirty. *picks no.3*
"Your ideal boyfriend is: 1. Very Friendly 2. Friendly 3. Normal 4. Unfriendly"
Friendly
"Your ideal boyfriend's arguments are: 1. Strong 2. Weak 3. Normal 4. Irrelevant"
Strong
"Your ideal boyfriend's body type is: 1. Muscular 2. Skinny 3. Model 4. Normal"
Model.....should i have such high demands?
Feel free to add any additional requests in the space provided:
Additional requests? She typed: "Will always protect me. Will be there for me like shuuji to akira......and will love me for who i am"

"Very good! now choose the look you want for your boyfriend"
She saw over a hundred good looking guys. Are they the ones who match my discription? i never thought that there would be so many. She randomly clicked on one.

Note: here is the picture:

"congratulations! You have ordered your ideal boyfriend!"
..........ordered? She was dropped of by her school. Still in a daze of what happened she tried to make a logical explaination.
People dont 'order' their dates do they? what did he mean...

She walked to her class confused. When she entered the room Bando immediatly began with the bullying. Shuuji and Akira looked at Nobuta surprised, for she didnt respond or pay attention to Bando and her groupies. What's wrong with her?Shuuji&Akira thought. Bando got pissed off and pushed her "Oi!! Who do you think you are! ignoring us!" The teacher stepped in the classroom and everyone went to their seats.

Meanwhile in Kronos Heaven, Namikiri prepared her ideal boyfriend. "Well done Namikiri-san! 05 is succesfully programmed." a guy said. 05 opened his eyes (or whatever those are..) "Perfect! all the data is there and the programme is running safely" Namikiri said happily. The guy next to him hesitantly asked "but are you sure that it will work?" Namikiri gave him an are-u-kidding-me?-look: "100%! 01 had some malfunctions but i've finally got it right! 05 will have its own will, just like 01, just like a human, AND still be everything Kotani Nobuko wants!" "but thats similair to what u said about 04..." Namikiri glared at him: "05 is different! we have all the data of 01, 02, 03 and 04. It can't go wrong!" The guy sighed: "..ok...."

Namikiri searched for Nobuta's data and entered it all in 05. He asked: "Can U place me in the same class as nobuko-chan?" Namikiri smiled with pride like a father: "Ofcourse...*turns to the guy next to him* SEE!!! He knows what he can do!" The guy sighed again.. i just know this wont be a succesful project...

Namikiri called the principal and somehow convinced her to have a talk about 05 entering the high school.
~a few minutes later~
The Principal stared at 05. "you want to be in the same class as Kotani-kun?" He happily answered "yes ^^" After the proper procedure, 05 officially was a student. the principal said:"You will begin classes tomorrow, here is your schedual" "Thank you, but i'd rather begin now ^^" He smiled sweetly and went on his way to search for his beloved girlfriend.


Note: Please give me advice ^^ What did u think of it? What should i change? ^^
Chapter 2 will be here soon =D


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lol! nice 1st chapter ^^ cant wait for da second one ^^
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woah.. sugoii ! haha ! i like the 1st chapter. hihi. it's cute. demo, i haven't seen absolute boyfriend yet. haha !
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nyaa~ saph i cant wait for the next chapter hehe^^ its really nice^^
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i cant wait till nobuta sees her new kareshi in school ^^
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lol more more ... and this ... "Your ideal boyfriend's sexual preference" loved it haha so funny ... great story keep up the good work
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wow!!!saphy!!you're amazing!!!!!
it's so nice
i'm looking forward for the next chapters


Toma Ikuta is 05!!! wow!! hehehe
perfect!! hehehe

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his zettai kareshi is toma?? lucky!! am looking forward on the next chap.
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arigatou ^^ hontoni arigatou =D glad u all liked it =D
(waah i'm so happy =D lol i'm such a dork xD)
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Chapter 2

“Hey! Wait ! You cant just walk in! They’re in the middle of a class!” The Principal ran after him. When 05 entered the classroom, everyone had their eyes on him. A few girls squealed, :”Kyaaa~, he looks like a model!” “how old is he??” “does he have a girlfriend??” 05 Smiled upon hearing the word girlfriend and replied: “My girlfriend is ………….. Nobuko-cha~n” He pointed at Nobuta just like Yamapi did when he just finished his hallelujah chance pose. Everyone gasped, (some even fell out of their chair) “ EEEEH~!!!!””AKIRA SHOCK!!!” Nobuta shook her head “n-no I’m not..” A random guy said:”of course its not true! How could SHE end up with HIM!!” When the principal walked in everyone became quiet. “Good morning class, this is a new student his name is Namikiri Zero”

…..Namikiri…. That’s the name of the guy this morning! Nobuta realized. He is the arranged date? She looked at him and their eyes met. Smiling, as always, 05 walked toward her table and persuaded the person next to her to give up the seat. The Principal did the usual speech..welcome him, be friendly etc etc. At a random moment, 05 loudly said ”I luv you Nobuko” everyone: “ *pauze*...........EEEHH~” Shuuji looked at them amazed: when did this happen!?!
Bando angrily broke her pencil in 2 : “Damn her! How could she get a hot guy like that!” Akira just shot glares at the model guy.

At lunch time 05 was surrounded by girls asking if he really was Nobuko’s boyfriend. Nobuko kept denying. “Aww don’t be shy nobu-chan” he said hugging her. The girls stared at them, not believing what they saw. Akira tapped on his shoulder. “Ano*…Ze-ro-ku-n~” He smiled drunkenly, “Nobuko-chan still has something to do in her video-club, sou da ne* nobuko^^” Nobuta nodded. Akira took her hand and led her to the hallway. 05 wanted to go after them but Bando blocked the way.

"Ne, what do u see in her?!! What does that sadako have that i don't!" 05 looked at her confused "Her name is Kotani Nobuko, not sadako" Bando came closer and tried to seduce him, 05 looked deep in her eyes and said: "u should wear less make-up.." He walked away completely oblivious of the cursing Bando behind his back. He had his mind set on finding Nobuta.

Akira silently walked beside Nobuta until he finally asked: "Who is he?" Nobuta told him everything that happened.. well expect the sexual preference thing.. "AKIRA SHOCK!! Nobuta-chan went to a dating bureau??!!" She nodded again. My life is over.. he thought She wont see me that way, will she? MOUUU DOUSHIYO* >.< He put his hands on his head and shook it DOUSHIYO~* Nobuta tried to calm him down but he was in his own little world. "Nandayo*?" Shuuji said. Akira skipped to him and said "Shu-u-ji-kun! Nobuta-chan went to a dating bureau!! Shinjirarenai ne*!" Shuuji's eyes widened. "Majide*? Is that true Nobuta?" "H-hai"

05 finally found his love. "NOBUKO-CHAAAAAAAN!!" He ran toward her, smiling as always ^^ "nobuko-chan, lets go on a date =D" She nervously backed up. "Doushitano*?" He took a step forward, she took one back. "Ano.. when did u become her boyfriend?" Shuuji asked. "A few hours ago ^^" eeh? Is this guy serious?he thought. "But she went to the company a few hours ago... how could you become her boyfriend when u havent even dated or at least known her?" "She choose me, right nobuko? Ore wa Nobuko-chan no Risou no Kareshi* ^^"

The three friends somehow managed to loose 05 after running around for 30 minutes. "Nobuta, I dont think he's a good guy... I mean he just goes out with girls he's never seen before!" She nodded, Shuuji...he really does care for me^^. "Ha~i Sou da! Nobuta-chan, i'll protect you!" He was quiet for a minute and then turned around "omg! i cant belive i said that out loud! How embarrasing!" Shuuji and Nobuta ignored him already, they were used to his baka* remarks. "Ok so here's the plan" Shuuji whispered to Nobuta how they are gonna get rid of this model maniack. "Oi!! Akira shock! they started a plan without me! OIII!!!" Akira poked them untill they gave him a spot too. How will the plan go? They all thought. "NOBUKO-CHAAAAN???? DOKO DESU KA*!!! NOBUKO~" They jumped up in surprise and hid for 05.

Word list (here are the japanese words that i used ^^):

Ano= "umm"
Sou da ne= something like "thats right"
(Mou) doushiyo= "What should i do?"
Nan da yo= "what is it"/ "what the hell" lol somthing like that =P
Shinjirarenai ne= "its unbelievable, isnt it"
Maji de?= "are you serious?" / "really?"
Hai= "yes" (like u didnt know that xD sorry =) )
Doushitano= "whats wrong?"
Ore wa= I am
Nobuko-chan no risou no kareshi= "nobuko chan's ideal boyfriend"
Baka = "stupid"
Doko desu ka?= "where are you" / "where is it?"

Hai^^ i know its not that good =P but i want to thank you guys for reading ^^ i appreciate your compliments =D and your time ^^ thanks and hope you'll stay tuned for Chapter 3 =D

PS sorry for my english =P i make a lot of mistakes ^^

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lol! dis is so funny! i luv da 'Akira Shock' part ^^ great job! i cant wait for da next chapter ^^
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they didn't know 05 is a robot?? i can almost imagine it. a love square?? Pi(akira) vs. Toma(05) vs. Kame(shuuji) & Maki(nobuta)
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sugoi! AKIRA SHOCK!! haha=]]
love square! ~ nyaha!...
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thnx for your comments ^^ ooh maybe it is a love square...........maybe it isnt xD
haha i'll think of the plot =P
and no they didnt know he was a robot ^^
it'll come ^^ ****hehe evil plans >=3**** xD
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wow!! hehehe nice one!!!!!! i like the part when Nobuta and Shuuji ignored Akira because they are used to his BAKANESS!!!hahahhaa !! hahahaha
waiting for the next chapter!!! saphy!! Ganbatte!!
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