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Well lets share our Poems ... heres a list of some of mine all in the spoiler so read away enjoy and comment ... then post your own :D
** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** I Run ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show**
I run, but can't catch up.
Faster and faster I go,
but
he's always two steps ahead of me.
I trip over a twig,
hit the ground,
hurt my knee,
starts to bleed,
but
I get up and start to run
faster than ever.
I close the gap,
but
I'll never catch up,
for tomorrow is always
two steps ahead of me.
Cold nights walk
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Walking, slowly,
never stopping,its cold, very cold.
The wind bites my nose,
people laughing in warm restrants.
Wish, just one wish please.
There could that be, no that can't be.
Yes, yes it is,
one foot in front of the other I walk closer.
But then shes gone,
the winds taking her away from me, far away,
but I was close, so close.
So I'll keep walking, just keep walking.
Path
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Two paths, two choices
No end in sight, both are black.
How do I choose? How do I choose?
Right or left? A leap of faith?
One, two, three steps.
Leaning to the right, I begin to walk.
The darkness is clearing, I can see!
Was I right? Is this the path?
I'll never know, only time will tell.
A Smile
** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Why can’t I truly smile?
My face holds this fake smile,
pain hiding behind a smile.
Always smiling, but why,
Do I smile to deceive, deceive my friends, my family?
No,
to deceive myself.
I can’t smile, I don’t smile, I won’t smile.
This is my life
A fake smile, hiding everythin
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i luv ur poems ^^ my fav one was da last one, "A Smile"
Great work! And thank u for posting!
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waah~ you are so good =D
Keep Posting (^^)v
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great poem ^^ .. reminds me to my friend who always keep his poem that he made to his girlfriend ^^
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Thanks everything lol glad i didnt keep them under a rock lol
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i told u ppl will like ur poems. they r very good ^^
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i really like the first one its unpredictable ^^
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 thx all
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nice poems!
sugoi! like it!
nice nice~~~~
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