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Posted 8/28/08
Broken Heart, Final Pain...



This Feeling...
It hurts...
It feels
as if
your falling...
Falling down
a bottomless
pit...
Your heart hurts...
You want to
rip it out...
Your stomach
feels as if it
is being twisted...
You want the
pain to end...
You feel
like your
upside down...
Forever turning
in empty space...
Your head
feels light...
Your eyes
begin to water...
You hold back the tears
but its too much to handle...
You fall
to your knees...
Cry a
river of
sadness...
You feel
as if you
could die...
and you accept it...
but you know....
deep down...
below the pain...
that this is the
final pain...
because you know....
that by having a
broken heart....
you can no longer
cause more pain...
and your releaved...
Broken heart...
Final pain....
~

...enjoy.... *tear*
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Posted 8/30/08
It was really great I love it it was really sad whit a deep meaning in it !
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Posted 8/30/08
I enjoyed reading it.. so sad. I can feel what you are trying to express here.. ^^
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Posted 9/1/08
thnx everyone
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Posted 9/3/08
this is great. you really feel the feelings coming up.
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Posted 9/22/08
it made me tear up :tears:;; loved it!! <3
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Posted 10/5/08
Wow!!!!!!! Fantastic poem........ I'm really put my respect on u
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