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[Fanfiction] Kokoro no Tamago
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Posted 8/29/08 , edited 10/8/08
This is my first fanfic so be nice, except if u dont like it, don't pity me and say something like" oh, this is soo good! I love it!" when u hate it! ok? then here it is... and sorry for the crappy name...




Sorry for the short chapter. i hope to see at least 1 reply that tells the truth when they say they like it. bye!
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Posted 8/29/08
its pretty good but u need to make the chappy WAY longer 'cause it was just like 5 sentences! but other than that it is pretty good! keep it up!
Posted 8/29/08
ace thats cool already n u didn't even rite that much rite more plz plz plz pretty plz with shugo chara on top
Posted 8/29/08 , edited 8/29/08
Sounds interesting, looking forward to see how life is with Ikuto as a brother xD
Oh and what does the title mean? - As you can see my japanese is rubbish.
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HazyMonsoon wrote:

Sounds interesting, looking forward to see how life is with Ikuto as a brother xD
Oh and what does the title mean? - As you can see my japanese is rubbish.


i think the title is the hearts egg! and dont worry i really suck at japanese too!
Posted 8/29/08

appupuppu wrote:


HazyMonsoon wrote:

Sounds interesting, looking forward to see how life is with Ikuto as a brother xD
Oh and what does the title mean? - As you can see my japanese is rubbish.


i think the title is the hearts egg! and dont worry i really suck at japanese too!


Ah ha! Thank you for clearing that up! The hearts egg? Hmm is she going to have a shugo chara then?
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HazyMonsoon wrote:


appupuppu wrote:


HazyMonsoon wrote:

Sounds interesting, looking forward to see how life is with Ikuto as a brother xD
Oh and what does the title mean? - As you can see my japanese is rubbish.


i think the title is the hearts egg! and dont worry i really suck at japanese too!


Ah ha! Thank you for clearing that up! The hearts egg? Hmm is she going to have a shugo chara then?


probally!
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Posted 8/29/08 , edited 10/8/08
Here's the second chapter!!!
oh, and italics mean im thinking, so dont ask y i didnt put, " i thought"

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second chapter is up!!
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Posted 8/29/08
Interesting; you're pretty good at making fanfics!! Love it so far. :]
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:D Interesting; you're pretty good at making fanfics!! Love it so far. :]


thanks
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Posted 8/29/08 , edited 10/8/08
heres the third chapter!

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third chapter is up!
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Wow! so cool!!! ive been trying to make the perfect fanfic 4 years! urs is perfect!!! WOW! I love it! ill be checking everyday from now on to see if the next chapter's up! your very good at writing fanfics! I love ur FANFIC!!! im looking 4ward 4 the next chapter! Ja, ne!
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Posted 8/29/08
looking forward to the next chapter =D
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