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[Fanfiction] Kokoro no Tamago
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21 / F / A Chocolate Mint.
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Posted 9/3/08
ok lol
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Posted 9/3/08
every chapter is very very nice....weeeeeeeee.........im enjoying it..
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Posted 9/10/08 , edited 9/14/08
im sorry for not updating. im tired running around campus at school. and im sorry that its short, when i told u it would be longer.
and i changed the flasback from wat happened so dont come to me like" that never happened!" and that crap, because idont want to hear it.
Chapter 6

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F / New York...at home!
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Posted 9/13/08
Make more plz, pretty good so far
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Posted 9/14/08 , edited 9/14/08
People, please when u read, write a post and reply to it! wont write that much if i dont get any Fanfiction-fan-mail

Chapter 7


the chapter is short. i know that. ill make the next few chapters waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay longer
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Posted 9/17/08
You're doing a good job so far, keep up the good work! I really am enjoying this one...although I think I enjoy almost all shugo chara themed fan fics.
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Posted 9/17/08
im gonna post the next chap on fri. or sat. or sun.
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Posted 9/17/08
Wow, this story is good
Good job
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Posted 9/27/08
In this story, amu only has three shugo charas, and doesnt get dia.




i made it as long as i could, but i had n more ideas, and im sorry for late post
Posted 9/28/08
Nice story post more please :3
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23 / F / In your closet. O.O
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Posted 10/1/08
Cute story. It's not violent or depressing like the others
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Posted 10/1/08
so sorry for not reviewing to this story in such a long time!! >< i've been busy with my story (i hope u r reading it. called Love is Painful) but now i'm reading urs and it's great!! XD

haha all the names are similar to other names! like Yoru and Yora, Yuri and Yura......XD

update soon!
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Posted 10/1/08
Um... It's only my opinion, but I don't like stories when an OC is better then Amu... gomen!
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Posted 10/2/08

iluvshaoran wrote:

Um... It's only my opinion, but I don't like stories when an OC is better then Amu... gomen!


its fine, but if u dont like it, y do u read it?? i made this story ecause i anted to see how people would react when they saw another sister of ikuto
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Posted 10/2/08

Natsuya801923 wrote:

so sorry for not reviewing to this story in such a long time!! >< i've been busy with my story (i hope u r reading it. called Love is Painful) but now i'm reading urs and it's great!! XD

haha all the names are similar to other names! like Yoru and Yora, Yuri and Yura......XD

update soon!


YESS!!!! I LOVE UR FANFIC! PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAP ON THAT!!!
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