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yeah ^^ and sry I know its boring right now.So i'll try and think up some good parts!! btw I love ur new story thats out!! lol


no your stories not boaring it just hard to understand! :)


lol same thing in my opinion!!I always get ticked off when I don't understand a story (I;m like a big kid lol!!)
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yeah ^^ and sry I know its boring right now.So i'll try and think up some good parts!! btw I love ur new story thats out!! lol


no your stories not boaring it just hard to understand! :)


lol same thing in my opinion!!I always get ticked off when I don't understand a story (I;m like a big kid lol!!)


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yeah ^^ and sry I know its boring right now.So i'll try and think up some good parts!! btw I love ur new story thats out!! lol


no your stories not boaring it just hard to understand! :)


lol same thing in my opinion!!I always get ticked off when I don't understand a story (I;m like a big kid lol!!)


Aren't we all? Aren't we all...


lol I guess so.My moms like in her 50's and shes a lil kid.Acts even younger than I do!!haha~
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


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yeah ^^ and sry I know its boring right now.So i'll try and think up some good parts!! btw I love ur new story thats out!! lol


no your stories not boaring it just hard to understand! :)


lol same thing in my opinion!!I always get ticked off when I don't understand a story (I;m like a big kid lol!!)


Aren't we all? Aren't we all...


lol I guess so.My moms like in her 50's and shes a lil kid.Acts even younger than I do!!haha~


that's so cool! My mom is like one of my back up friends (who i dont really talk to about stuff)
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


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yeah ^^ and sry I know its boring right now.So i'll try and think up some good parts!! btw I love ur new story thats out!! lol


no your stories not boaring it just hard to understand! :)


lol same thing in my opinion!!I always get ticked off when I don't understand a story (I;m like a big kid lol!!)


Aren't we all? Aren't we all...


lol I guess so.My moms like in her 50's and shes a lil kid.Acts even younger than I do!!haha~


that's so cool! My mom is like one of my back up friends (who i dont really talk to about stuff)


lol thats good I often fight with my mother because were so alike (which " I " don't like to talk about) but I love her (somehow...)
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

yeah ^^ and sry I know its boring right now.So i'll try and think up some good parts!! btw I love ur new story thats out!! lol


no your stories not boaring it just hard to understand! :)


lol same thing in my opinion!!I always get ticked off when I don't understand a story (I;m like a big kid lol!!)


Aren't we all? Aren't we all...


lol I guess so.My moms like in her 50's and shes a lil kid.Acts even younger than I do!!haha~


that's so cool! My mom is like one of my back up friends (who i dont really talk to about stuff)


lol thats good I often fight with my mother because were so alike (which " I " don't like to talk about) but I love her (somehow...)


Yeah me too... but I get really worked up example: "mom where's the brush?" "I dunno maybe you should check the bathroom?" "JEZZ MOM~ MAYBE YOU CAN SAY THAT WITHOUT THE SARCASM, IT DOESNT MAKE ME FEEL ANY BETTER!!"
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Chapter 5-Pain Killers

It was now only hours away till the surgery

And I sat in the hospital chair.

Figiting impatiently as I waited for the doctors to come.

I felt my stomack roll and my head throb as I thought about the surgery,or what I was going to feel.

I heard the door click.

"Mrs.Mae.We are ready for you now"said Dr.Peters as his white trench coat slid across the floor.

I nodded.My bangs covering my eyes as I stood up and walked in his direction.

He pushed the door open for me as I reached

I didn't look up to him.

I was to afraid that he'd see how terrified I was.

As I walked through the open door I saw him frown from the corner of my eye.


IN THE ROOM

The doctors brushed past me as they grabbed objects for the surgery and what not.

They seemed to be in a hurry.

I felt a pair of hands on my shoulders,and looked up to see Dr.Peters their.

His eyes were grave,and Serious.

I wondered if this surgery was life threatning or something

"Sakura its time"I heard a doctor say as he walked towards me with a clip-board

I nodded and he grabbed my hand and lightly tugged me along.


TABLE

The doctors had pulled me onto a metal table and were putting on masks and gloves

"This won't hurt a bit"Said the doctor with kind words.

But I knew it wasn't true.

I saw a nurse move a lamp so that it was shinning onto my eyes

Another nurse on the right side of me handed a small needle to the doctor.

I heard them sigh.

Probly trying to calm down so that they wouldn't mess up.

I shivered as the needle was pumped with something unsee-able.

"This will put you to sleep.So that you won't feel anything"The doctor answered my unspokable thought,and weary eyes.

I nodded queitly as the needle came to me.

I felt the prick in my skin and felt the back of my mind drift.

The room faded faster than I thought it would.And was replaced with an odd silence...
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

yeah ^^ and sry I know its boring right now.So i'll try and think up some good parts!! btw I love ur new story thats out!! lol


no your stories not boaring it just hard to understand! :)


lol same thing in my opinion!!I always get ticked off when I don't understand a story (I;m like a big kid lol!!)


Aren't we all? Aren't we all...


lol I guess so.My moms like in her 50's and shes a lil kid.Acts even younger than I do!!haha~


that's so cool! My mom is like one of my back up friends (who i dont really talk to about stuff)


lol thats good I often fight with my mother because were so alike (which " I " don't like to talk about) but I love her (somehow...)


Yeah me too... but I get really worked up example: "mom where's the brush?" "I dunno maybe you should check the bathroom?" "JEZZ MOM~ MAYBE YOU CAN SAY THAT WITHOUT THE SARCASM, IT DOESNT MAKE ME FEEL ANY BETTER!!"


same here!!lol and shes so much like a kid that its almost annoying.She steals all my friends away!!And makes them turn their backes on me cause they think I'm the villan in this senario!!lol
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

yeah ^^ and sry I know its boring right now.So i'll try and think up some good parts!! btw I love ur new story thats out!! lol


no your stories not boaring it just hard to understand! :)


lol same thing in my opinion!!I always get ticked off when I don't understand a story (I;m like a big kid lol!!)


Aren't we all? Aren't we all...


lol I guess so.My moms like in her 50's and shes a lil kid.Acts even younger than I do!!haha~


that's so cool! My mom is like one of my back up friends (who i dont really talk to about stuff)


lol thats good I often fight with my mother because were so alike (which " I " don't like to talk about) but I love her (somehow...)


Yeah me too... but I get really worked up example: "mom where's the brush?" "I dunno maybe you should check the bathroom?" "JEZZ MOM~ MAYBE YOU CAN SAY THAT WITHOUT THE SARCASM, IT DOESNT MAKE ME FEEL ANY BETTER!!"


same here!!lol and shes so much like a kid that its almost annoying.She steals all my friends away!!And makes them turn their backes on me cause they think I'm the villan in this senario!!lol


Make a new chapter of your story! I want to get to the good part!!
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

yeah ^^ and sry I know its boring right now.So i'll try and think up some good parts!! btw I love ur new story thats out!! lol


no your stories not boaring it just hard to understand! :)


lol same thing in my opinion!!I always get ticked off when I don't understand a story (I;m like a big kid lol!!)


Aren't we all? Aren't we all...


lol I guess so.My moms like in her 50's and shes a lil kid.Acts even younger than I do!!haha~


that's so cool! My mom is like one of my back up friends (who i dont really talk to about stuff)


lol thats good I often fight with my mother because were so alike (which " I " don't like to talk about) but I love her (somehow...)


Yeah me too... but I get really worked up example: "mom where's the brush?" "I dunno maybe you should check the bathroom?" "JEZZ MOM~ MAYBE YOU CAN SAY THAT WITHOUT THE SARCASM, IT DOESNT MAKE ME FEEL ANY BETTER!!"


same here!!lol and shes so much like a kid that its almost annoying.She steals all my friends away!!And makes them turn their backes on me cause they think I'm the villan in this senario!!lol


Make a new chapter of your story! I want to get to the good part!! :D


okies.And just to let u know.I am going to write like 7 chapters about her past!!and then shes gonna wake up from the surgery and stuff (I know I did a crappier job this time,but I'll try and make it interesting.Plus this story is mostly about her past!! ^^ )
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Chapter 6-My Start to my jurney to remember

The memory started out different from what i had thought it would be.

Their were no short images

They were plain memorys

Like remembering what you did yesturday,or even what you were doing that day.

They hit me flatly and I heard voices.

A ruff,energetic,dark voice.No.A thought?

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I walked slowly down the empty street.

My parents had been fighting again...

About bills,and such.

And most of all about the strange people that had strange inhuman abilities.

I had been told.

No.Ordered not to leave the house and wander around the place but I couldn't stand being couped up in all day long...

I looked around slowly and curiosuly at the empty rundown streets.

Everyone was inside there homes terrified because of something different..

I felt the wind blow past me.

I turned around slowly and saw him.

A beautiful boy.

He stood their.

Eyes cold.

Clothes dirty.

And...Blood?running down his arm.

I stared at him curiously.

He didn't seem to be scared to come out like the others were.

At least I wasn't ALL alone...

I walked towards him wearily

He watched me careful not to move.

"Are you all right?"I finally asked

I heard a growl come from him

I flinched back but continued to walk towards him

He stepped back agressivly

I stopped moving towards him.

We stared at each other.

My eyes full of weariness,his full of coldness and anger

I took a daring step towards him with my hand held forward.

He bared his teeth at me.But I did not stop walking towards him.

I finally reached him and was about to touch his arm but he grabbed my rist before I could.

My eyes widened

Why was this person so upset,and protective?


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My past memory played in my head

Was I supposed to remember things that I had already remembered?

Suddenly my mind went blank and I didn't seem to find words to say.Or think.

Moving memory's passed by my mind and played in my head.

Almost as if it was looking for a certin memory to watch.

It stopped abrutly as the memory that I had saw before replayed and continued from were it had left off.


I took a daring step towards him with my hand held forward.

He bared his teeth at me.But I did not stop walking towards him.

I finally reached him and was about to touch his arm but he grabbed my rist before I could.

My eyes widened

Why was this person so upset,and protective?


The memory replayed.

Almost memorizing the exact words I had said.

Another memory hit me.

But it wasn't like it was waiting for me to open the door.

It just opened on its own


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Why was this person so upset,and protective?My thoughts wandered

I stared at absently with shocked eyes as he analized me,and glared.

I snapped out of my thoughts as I heard gravel crunch from behind me.

I ripped my hand away from his grasp on my arm and spun around to see 3 boys standing casuly next to each other.

I stared at them but then remembered the boy that was now behind me.

I glanced back and saw him almost nod his head.

I looked back towards the boys and saw one of them with short brown hair and green eyes step forward to me.

"So"He said casully as he reached me

"Whats a girl doing out late?Its dangerouse"I growled at how flacky he sounded

"If I can take staying home all day.And going to school.I can step outside my own home without having to worry about anything."I said back cooly.

He seemed taken aback for a second but regained his compossior and continued

"Aren't you scared that the freaks will get you"The other boys seemed to flinch

"Why should I?"I growled

"Their not attacking us.Were attacking them."I continued before he could responed

I saw the boys smirk.

I felt a little uneasy from how fast they broat the super powered people,up so fast.

"Well....see you then..."I turned around slowly but feircly as I tried to ignore the stares that beamed into my back

"hhhmm we will"I stopped in my tracks and glanced back daringly at the boys.

The all seemed to be pretty tattered

Hair was a mess,Scars on every corner of their body's,and some with blood on their pants or shirts like the boy that had grabbed me before.

"What makes you think that"I gulped as I tried to sound not freaked out.And as casual as they were.

The boys chuckled

"What kind of person would be out at night.And all alone?"He asked as he walked forward again

I thought about that for a second but couldn't really think of any clear answer to his question

"One of the smart one's?"I asked

"No.The one's that have bad luck"

Suddenly I got it.They were one of thoughs freaky superpower guys!?

I quickly tenced for a run and wirled my body around.

'This is bad,Very BAD!!'The words repeated in my head

'Why are they after me?Was I wrong about them being the sevilions,and not the villions?'


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k done ch 6!!hopes u liked~
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Chapter 7-Dangerose World

I felt a hand on my rist,and felt another hand on my shoulder.Turning me around.

I looked into the boys green eyes and grunted as I felt something tied around my rists,and pulling them togeather.

"Let Go"I growled

They ignored my question "Not attacking eh?"One of the boys repeated my sentance,and turned it to mush

"Oh well sorry if your a little mad because I defended you"I said sarcastically

One of the boys growled

"So now what?Your going to beat up a girl because of a defeneding you!?Well then go ahead"I growled

I saw a boy in the far back take a step forward,ready to hit me probley.

The green eyed boy,and the boy that had made fun of my speech held him back.

But they made sure that the guy from before had his grip on my rist's.

'Bastards...'I grumbled

I tried to think of a devershion or at least a way to get the guys grip on my rist's lose enough for me to get away but I couldn't seem to think of anything.

"Its a dangerouse world out their honey.So you better stop taunting me or I'll kick your skiny capreed a-"

"Okay-"One of the boys inturupted him before he could swore.

The green eyed boy eyed the boy from behind me and seemed to be explaining something by just looking at him.

I felt some movement from behind me,and then felt hands clamp on around my waist.

I gasped as I was lifted into the air and placed on the boys shoulders

"H-Hey!!Put me down!!"I growled as I tried to hit him with my tied rist's

He only grunted and started to walk in the direction of his friends who were now half way down the street.

I kept hitting him but I seemed to lose strength in my arms

And it also hurt since I was hitting my hands on his back the wrong way.

I stopped moving and relaxed my body

'At least I tried,right?'


HOUR LATER

It had been at least an hour since these guys had captured me,and I was starting to fall asleep.

But whenever the boy moved my eyes opened slightly.

"No one's seemed to notice her disaperance"I heard another voice come towards me.

"Of course they didn't"I yawned

Everyone was silent,almost like they were waiting for me to continue.

And I did. "They aren't exactly the best parents to notice when I'm their or not.Thats why I went out tonight"I yawned again.

No one said anything and their was an odd silence.

A silence that made my whole body relax

But then a sudden movement made me wake up again.

'Uh'I grouned as I started to fall asleep again

"We better get going"One of the boys whispered

I felt the boy that was holding me move but this time I didn't open my eyes.

I was now to tired too.

Darkness apeared before me.

And a dream started to brew.

A mixture of my past,and how it felt now...

When I was 5....

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"Mama,Papa.Don't fight"I cried out as they argued

"Your such a selfish old man.Do you know how hard I work every day!!"mama yelled

I heard papa growl "I'm the selfish one!?You were the one that started to miss work constantly!"Papa argued back.

"Papa thats not true its my fault that I-"They didn't seem to hear me and continued to squable

"I've had enough of this!I don't know what I was thinking when I married you!!"My mouther screamed as she walked towards the door

"Mama don't go!"I cried

But once again they didn't seem to hear me or notice me.

Tears fell down my hot cheeks as she ran out of the house

"MAMA!!"I cried out.

No responce.

Not even papa heard me...

'All Alone...No one hears me'My thoughts cried out.

'Alone...I feel so alone...my heart hurts...I think I might be sick' Tears sputtered down my cheeks

'My heart hurts so much.Maybe I'm going to die!?'I cried again

I fell to my nee's

'Someone...'I cried out again

2 YEARS OLD

"Melanie?What are you doing at the office again?"Asked a small voice

I looked up from my seat outside the office and saw my best friend...The only one that actually noticed me for the right reasons

"I got in trouble again"I laughed lightly even though I new that I did it on purpise.

The only way that I could get anyone.Not just my parents.Anyone to notice me I had to get in trouble.

"Mo.Melanie-chan thats not good"She frowned

I laughed "Its okay"

"What this time?"She asked

"For stealing the principals underware and placing it on the school board statue"I laughed again

"That was a good one"Her eyes widened

"haha I guess so..."I smiled weakly

She sighed,as the bell rang

"Well I better get going to class"She smiled widley "Good luck Melanie!!"She walked towards the door to leave the office.

I looked down

"Good one...huh..?"

'Good enough to get papa,and mama to come?'
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^U^ I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I'm so excited!!!!
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^U^ I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I'm so excited!!!!


hehe ty ^^ I can't wait for ur next chapter of shuffled mix,and blood red eyes,etc lol
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