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Posted 9/1/08 , edited 9/1/08
Sunlight, the feeling of the warmth against my skin, happiness imbued within my soul. a hint of laughter across my face as I look into her eyes. Beauty transcendent of what this world has to offer, inside that one simple smile. Always shy and waving it away, blushing and turning with every compliment. Hair that flows with beauty and shine, the sunlight reflecting so wonderfully. I reach out to hold her hand and yet somehow I can't. The day turns slowly to afternoon as we lay in the field, looking towards the sky, so near to each-other and yet I cannot feel her touch; why, oh why? I gaze to her as she looks back to me, blushing slightly then turning away. the sun begins to set as this bliss fades, reaching to her and feeling nothing. the vision is gone, too good to be true, love forsake me a long time ago.

At least her memories remain.










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Man I've been writing some depressing stuff recently, I suppose the pen reflects the heart.

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Posted 9/4/08
Haha...Nice one...You are really devoted to the group...lol...
I guess the same can't be said of me....lol...
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Lovely imagery ^^ I love reading your writing, although...Watch for conventions/grammar sometimes =]
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Bluesander wrote:

Lovely imagery ^^ I love reading your writing, although...Watch for conventions/grammar sometimes =]


Thanks, but again I just write what come to me on the spot here, open up a tab and write something for no good reason.

I mean I suppose I could do some editing >.<
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Posted 9/4/08

atatakakunai wrote:


Bluesander wrote:

Lovely imagery ^^ I love reading your writing, although...Watch for conventions/grammar sometimes =]


Thanks, but again I just write what come to me on the spot here, open up a tab and write something for no good reason.

I mean I suppose I could do some editing >.<


Nah, as long as we can read it, it's fine~ ^^ You can always edit it later for professional reasons, but there's no reason on editing something for fun! ^^
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well I do just write these for no good reason, some are bad, some are decent, and If I make a good one, I'll be sure to edit it and at least make it passable.
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