Post Reply My hideout, My world
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Posted 9/3/08
The peacefull night
outside my window
so beautifull
the moon shines
whit is silence glow
wraping around me
whit it cold touch
make me shiver
as I climb
up in the window
and open
the way for the light
of the moon
to fill
my world

This place
is only mine alone
only I can
see
all the secrets and fantasy
but you
would only see
a room who need
some cleaning
but
this is my world
whit secret books
and
magic in the air
but only at this time
when the moon
is out
whit is silence
song
my world shines

This is my
hideout
where the reality
takes a break
and
all the sorrow
fade away
and let me
finally have my peace
no tears I let fall
and
no smile I let
come
here I can think
who I am and what
this life
is
meant to be

Just my dearst
friend
can see my world
even
if he cant talk
hes more
then any of those
that fill
my reality world
I can feel the sorrow
but
I just let the cold
wind of the
midnight
carry it away

Im sitting
in my window
reading in the beautifull
moonlight glow
lisning to the song of the owl
so calming
is this place
so far away
from reality
here where my mind is free
and noone
can say
wrong or right
everyone
has such a place
different they are
noone is alike
but this
is my place
where my sould bealong
this is
My world
and noone else


I feel that I have been so lazy making poems latley im losing inspiration NOOOO!!
well I dont know if this turned out the right way but I think its not to bad well I let you guys jugde so enjoy it
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Posted 9/4/08
I love it!! It's definatly one of my faves!! ♥♥♥♥♥/♥♥♥♥♥
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Posted 9/5/08

CresentDemon wrote:

I love it!! It's definatly one of my faves!! ♥♥♥♥♥/♥♥♥♥♥


wow! thank you so much =3
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Posted 1/13/09
still your biggest fan (:
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Posted 1/18/09

moonwarrior485 wrote:

still your biggest fan (:


awww thanks !
Your still my poem sister =3
And I miss you hope I will soon see you here again
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