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I'm writing the first chapter.
Don't read it and you die.
Did you hear that?
DIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

Mweheheheheheh.

O_O Maybe I'm becoming suicidal. Next to that even emo pe0plez look nice. Holy s**t!

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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*GLOOM* I'm bad at summaries. XD
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Yeah, you can see I take alot of references of being born from body parts. XD

Part 1

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The story's got really nice description of personalities but there were no description of people other then Vivianne and there wasn't any description on clothing or the house and stuff like that.
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Part 2

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SilveenFox wrote:

The story's got really nice description of personalities but there were no description of people other then Vivianne and there wasn't any description on clothing or the house and stuff like that.


It's because I want the readers to experience it from Vivianne's point of view. However, if you want I can give you a certain description of the penthouse. . . . ?
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writing chapter tomorrow XD
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Hn. It's okay. I can figure it out.
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this is good I can't wait for the next part :]
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