Post Reply Paranoia
Posted 9/3/08
Paranoia

Doubt fogs my mind
Anxiety clenches my heart
Fear contains my soul
My first reaction is to dart
Run from my doubts and fears
Run from those I trust
Avoid another stabbing pain
That could cause my heart to rust
I’m scared
Unsure
I don’t know where to turn
Do I trust my thoughts?
Or forget them and let them burn
To scared to let go
So I turn away
And live with this fear for another day
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F / over there
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Posted 9/4/08
Nice poem.. I like the structure of it! ^^
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24 / F / Do you care?
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Posted 9/4/08
Really nice ^^
I like how you build it up really great !
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22 / F / "tHE bEAt wOrLD"
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Posted 9/4/08
o0o0h i love it!! [nice rhyming to0o ^_^]
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