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Blood Red Eyes
Chapter One
"The red eye'd monster"

The sunlight slowly flashed throw the window, as the wind blew the curtains in and out of it.
It was over. That horrible dream was over.
For the past two months, I've been having this frighting nightmare where I am running from
some vicious creature and fall in to a pool (where I drown). I haven't told anyone yet because I
though I was only natural to have a few bad dreams every now and then. But before I knew it a few
became, all the time. I was getting sick of it.
"Rayna, Get ready for school!" Yelled Kristen cooking breakfast while like usual trying to
vacuum the kitchen at the same time.
My family is not what you would call normal, but I deal with it. Every day my family does
one wacky unneeded thing after another. Like for example, vacuuming the kitchen tiles.
"I'm coming..." I whispered not thinking about weather she would hear me or not.
"Okies!" Yelled Kristen, showing another whacked trait my family had, ears from hell.
What time is it...? I wondered. Oh Crap! It's 6:49 already!
"Sorry Kristen! I'm going to be late!" I yelled running down stairs and out the door.

Bike, bike, bike! I never usual rode my bike to school, but ever since I started High
School I've been yearning to do things a little more differently so, I took my bike.
As soon as I got there I locked my bike to the nearest pole and ran to class, stopped and
walked (since I saw the principal), and then ran again.
Yes! Right on time! I thought seeing my homeroom teacher doing roll call.
Almost every day I'm late for school (most likely my family's fault) but my teacher just
never seems to notice me sneaking in when there doing roll call. My friends always say I'm lucky,
but I just though it was to even out my life, to fill in the place of something that was missing.
I jumped into my seat, at the back of the class, and waited for him to call my name.
"Navera, Rayna."
As I slowly raised my hand I started looking at all the teens in my class starting to label them.
That Geto has black streaks of eye liner on there faces, populars have to short skirts, goths wear to much
black, normal kids are to dull....

Before I knew it class was already over and little miss popular was already on her way, Making
fun of anyone in her way.
"Too ugly." She commented the getos.
"Way too ugly." She commented the goths.
Please don't stop here, I have way to much to think about and-
"Too... u-"
"I don't need to waste my thoughts one little miss America..." I yawned, letting my thoughts slip out of my mouth.
"...... Come on girls... let's go..." Glared Flora.
Darn it! Stupid Mouth!! Why now of all times!!

After school Elena; close friend, and I decided to go out for a smoothie. I knew I things to do
like thinking of a new schedule that include Flora in it, but Elena really wanted to talk about something.
So I decided let her have her way.
"So...." I said walking into the smoothie store.
"Just wait... I'll tell you after we get our smoothies!" She wined finding a place for us to sit.
We sat down for a few minutes and a few more minutes, but I got impatient so I went to check out
why no one would come out and serve their only two costumers in their store.
"Hello!! Hello, you got to impatient costumes waiting for smoothies." I yelled jumping over the counter.
"Sssssssss......."
"Hello?......" I said jokingly.
You got to be kidding me? This must be Steve's idea of a class act.
"Sssssssss...!!"
The closer I came to the kitchen the louder the hissing sound became.
"H-hey, Elena it just stupid little-....." I said backing away from the kitchen.
"Shhhhhhh......"
Does this freaky snake thing want me to be quite? I quickly shook off that though and headed toward the kitchen but more excited this time. This may have been my one and only chance to expose the Steve for playing such a cruel joke on us..
"He-...!!!" Before I got to finish my sentence, someone quickly grabbed me and pulled me into the darkness
of the kitchen. I didn't make a sound, I was to nervous and thrilled to have even make a mumble.
I looked up wondering what had grabbed me, but when I looked up all I saw was glowing blood red eyes. After
I saw that. I knew this wasn't a joke.
"Mmm....mmm? Mmmnn!!" I stated to wiggle and try to break my self free but the red eyed
things grip on my arm was to strong.
What's happening?!?! How is this even possible!?!?!

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Chapter 2
"New kid"


"Let go, let go!" I yelled when ever I had the chance. The more I squarmed the
harded the kidnapper's grip got.
Please let go! Please I thouth.
"Rayna?..." Said Elena nerviously stepping in front of the kitchen door.
Here's my chance! I thouth as I wiggled my self free from the crazy kidnaper's arms.
"Elena!!! Elena!!!" I screamed as I crawled torwards the door.
"Damnit! Heh... See you later Rayna!" Laughed the kidnaper as he disapeared
in a mist of black smoke.
Rayna! Are you okay!" Yelled Elena as she made her way into throw the kitchen door.
I can't tell Elena what happend! She'll overreact.....
"Ummm..... I'm okay... I just fell is all.." I lied.
"...Come on... let's go.." Said Elena helping me up, out of the kitchen and to my house.

As soon as I got home I ran upstairs to my room and jumped on my bed. I felt bad for
lieing to Elena.
...Sure someone tryed to kidnap me but... for some strange it was diffent this time....
I was so deep in thouth I almost didn't notice my mom was talking to me.
"Rayna...? Are you okay? Elena looked worried.."
"Yeah... I'm okay... I just fell is all." I lied again
There was a silent pause for a second, but after that everyone went back to what they
where doing as if nothing had happened.
"Why do I fell as if I had commited a crime or something...?" I whispered to my self.
"You did commite a crime... Lieing is a crime of it's own."
"Who said that!?!?!" I screamed turning my head torward the window. It was open, but I
wasn't the one who opened it.
"Rayna!!" Yelled my mom, who had heard my scream.
This time I didn't answer her.
Do I have a stocker...?

In the morning everything was back to normal. Kristen was cooking, Mom and Dad where
at work, and I was late for school.
Just when I thouth everything was back to normal, I saw my teacher not taking role call.
Instead he was introducing a new student.
"Attention class! Please welcome our new student, Akira Aram!"
Since every one's eyes was distracted by our new happy camper (including Elena)
I decided to take advatige of this moment and sneak to my desk. As soon as I sat down the teacher then
stared to do role call.
Ha... looks like Flora has a new play mate... and Elena has a new crush..... I laughed to my self.
"Rayna, would you like to show our new student around this school?" Asked my teacher.
"He's a big boy right?.... I think he's old enough to do it him self...." I said not really thinking
about what was coming out of my mouth.
What a drag it would have been if-
"I'll do it!" Said Flora happily raising her hand.
Flora decided to volenteer....
"It's okay. I think I can do it my self..." Said Akira rubbing the back of his head.
His voice! It can't be...

After class, Flora decided to acompany Elena and I home, and try to talk to us too.
"Hey, Navera! You think your so cool don't you! Talking lie that to Akira!"
I saw her mouth move but nothing come out from it. I was to deep in thouth.
"Hey are you listening to me!!"
Okay I hear that.
"Nope."

Eventully, Flora stopped following me and learned that there's no point in trying to
talk sence (which didn't really make any sence) to me.
Kidnaper... Who and why would anyone want to kidnapp me...
"Hey, your Rayna, right?
Looking up I saw Akira, and his (what seemed to me with his face so up close) big red eyes.
"Y-y-you have red eyes!!!" I yelled, remembering how frightned I was when the kidnapper grabed me.
"Yes... What about them?" Asked Akira, looking serious.
"Oh! Umm... You just look like someone who I know!.." I said trying not to get him involved.
"... If it looks the same, smells the same, or tatse the same, it is the same.... Well see you later, my
friends are calling me!" Said Akira.
"W-wait!" I yelled.
"Yes..." He said stopping.
"Nothing......" I said feeling saspicious.
Did he just confess to attemptive kidnap....?
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hey its not boring! all of ur stories are great! especially this one. i just love horror stories! XD
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hey its not boring! all of ur stories are great! especially this one. i just love horror stories! XD


Really? Thanks, I love horror to.. this story is basicly about a girl who gets involved with a group of demons who's job is to destroy other demons XD Now I'm so encouraged to make the next chapter! XD P.S. Im going to fish the last part of chapter 3 and post it right now!
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specialbunny11 wrote:

hey its not boring! all of ur stories are great! especially this one. i just love horror stories! XD


Really? Thanks, I love horror to.. this story is basicly about a girl who gets involved with a group of demons who's job is to destroy other demons XD Now I'm so encouraged to make the next chapter! XD P.S. Im going to fish the last part of chapter 3 and post it right now!


omg yay! i dont know where u get the time to do so much ^^lol
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kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:

hey its not boring! all of ur stories are great! especially this one. i just love horror stories! XD


Really? Thanks, I love horror to.. this story is basicly about a girl who gets involved with a group of demons who's job is to destroy other demons XD Now I'm so encouraged to make the next chapter! XD P.S. Im going to fish the last part of chapter 3 and post it right now!


omg yay! i dont know where u get the time to do so much ^^lol


Heehee hee I have too many ideas in my head. I didn't do anything today and my teachers haven't gave any homework out all week
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specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:

hey its not boring! all of ur stories are great! especially this one. i just love horror stories! XD


Really? Thanks, I love horror to.. this story is basicly about a girl who gets involved with a group of demons who's job is to destroy other demons XD Now I'm so encouraged to make the next chapter! XD P.S. Im going to fish the last part of chapter 3 and post it right now!


omg yay! i dont know where u get the time to do so much ^^lol


Heehee hee I have too many ideas in my head. I didn't do anything today and my teachers haven't gave any homework out all week :D


then u should not put those ideas to waste! i wanna be a mangaka but my imagination level is like about zero. hehe lol XD awwww....ur so lucky! i got like 6 homeworks and 7 textbooks on the first day of school! now im so glad they give lockers
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Chapter 3
"The Lost Boy "


The quiet whisles of the wind keep me up, but it was also very soothing.
"Attemptive kidnap... Akira?..." I whisperd to my self.
The wind was now starting to sound like whispers. Since I couldn't get any sleep I decided to
sit outside on the pourch.
The moon was full and if you listen hard enough, you can hear a song.
A song...? I think I can make out some of the words...
"Slilent wonder, quiet moon, where am I.... while the darkness brous...."
What a strange song... It sounds so sad...
"Excuse me, lady?"
"Yes!" I said looking down, finding a little boy with a black clok on.
Hollowen's a little early this year...eh?
"I'm lost... can you help me get home?" He asked.
"Umm, sure..." I said looking at my self.
I'm in my pajamas but, I guess I can help him...
"So where do you live at?" I asked moving his hair out of his face.
"1-1-10 Willow Street." Said the little boy, who was not able to say the street number correctly.
"All the way over there!" I said shocked.
I can't walk all the way over there! Not in my pajamas!
"Need a ride...?" Asked Akira beeping his car.
"Thanks!" I said bowing my head.

A few hours later, when we where half way there the little boy started to talk.
"Can you sing that song... the one you where singing earlyer..." Asked the boy pulling on my shirt.
"Umm okay... I think it goes like this.... Silent wonder, quiet moon, where am I? While darkness
brous..... sorry but that's all I know! I mean heard!"
"You heard this song form where?" Asked Akira.
"I don't know... I thouth he was singing it!" I said pointing a the little boy.
"I wasn't singing it... In fact no one was..." Whisperd the little boy.
"What do you mean? It was a little hard to hear but I heard it!" I said raising my hand (in a fist.)
Why did everyone stop talking?... Hello....? I thouth, trying to entertain my self.

Finally, when the car had stopped everyone got out. Even me, who still was in my pajamas.
"Hey... People? When are we going back home? If you hadn't noticed I was still in my PJ's!" I yelled
closing my eyes and stomping.
"Just trust me.... come on let's go and cheak this place out." Said Akira grabing onto my arm.
Suddently all the memories of the red eyed kidnaper appeared in me head. I quickly pulled my arm
back and started to rubb it.
"Are you okay..." He asked turning around.
"...Y-yeah! I'm fine..." I said as I continue walking into the house.
As I walked into the house small light started to appear all around me. Like little yellow eyes staring at me.
"A-are you 100% sure this is... safe?" I asked.
"Your as safe in this house as you are safe with me..." Said Akira looking around.
I can't tell if that's good or bad... but I'm sure... If a little boy lives here it can't be that bad...
The stair case was all screachy and broken. It was a maze trying to walk up it. I tryed not to freak
out because I didn't want to be labled scardy cat for the rest of forever. The moment I got up the stair case my thouths
where filled with wonder.
Why are the locks on the doors on the outside?....
"Hey, Rayna?" Asked a voice (who I thouth was Akira.)
"Yeah...?" I replyed turning my head.
"...Aaaaaaa!"
Something grabed my arm and tossed me into the right wall.

Several hours later I woke up in a dark room coverd with pictures.
Pictures?......
I hadn't had yet to notice how creepy the room looked so I just stood up to get a better look of the pictures.
"Demons.....local famers have been complaining about these so called "demons" trashing there crops and-"
As I read from the news paper sample on the wall a dark figure aproched me from the back.
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specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:

hey its not boring! all of ur stories are great! especially this one. i just love horror stories! XD


Really? Thanks, I love horror to.. this story is basicly about a girl who gets involved with a group of demons who's job is to destroy other demons XD Now I'm so encouraged to make the next chapter! XD P.S. Im going to fish the last part of chapter 3 and post it right now!


omg yay! i dont know where u get the time to do so much ^^lol


Heehee hee I have too many ideas in my head. I didn't do anything today and my teachers haven't gave any homework out all week :D


then u should not put those ideas to waste! i wanna be a mangaka but my imagination level is like about zero. hehe lol XD awwww....ur so lucky! i got like 6 homeworks and 7 textbooks on the first day of school! now im so glad they give lockers


Really! they gave me all 10 textbooks already! and im training to be a mangaka too! Im pretty good at it but I'm not good with the backrounds and stuff... Oh and chapter 3 is up!
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specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:

hey its not boring! all of ur stories are great! especially this one. i just love horror stories! XD


Really? Thanks, I love horror to.. this story is basicly about a girl who gets involved with a group of demons who's job is to destroy other demons XD Now I'm so encouraged to make the next chapter! XD P.S. Im going to fish the last part of chapter 3 and post it right now!


omg yay! i dont know where u get the time to do so much ^^lol


Heehee hee I have too many ideas in my head. I didn't do anything today and my teachers haven't gave any homework out all week :D


then u should not put those ideas to waste! i wanna be a mangaka but my imagination level is like about zero. hehe lol XD awwww....ur so lucky! i got like 6 homeworks and 7 textbooks on the first day of school! now im so glad they give lockers


Really! they gave me all 10 textbooks already! and im training to be a mangaka too! Im pretty good at it but I'm not good with the backrounds and stuff... Oh and chapter 3 is up! :)


ohhhh ten textbooks....thats alot of stuff....yay ur also going to be a mangaka! i agree on how hard the backgrounds are. i cant believe they use spray pens....okay gotta hurry up and read chap 3 before i goes to sleep! it too addicting! XD
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kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:

hey its not boring! all of ur stories are great! especially this one. i just love horror stories! XD


Really? Thanks, I love horror to.. this story is basicly about a girl who gets involved with a group of demons who's job is to destroy other demons XD Now I'm so encouraged to make the next chapter! XD P.S. Im going to fish the last part of chapter 3 and post it right now!


omg yay! i dont know where u get the time to do so much ^^lol


Heehee hee I have too many ideas in my head. I didn't do anything today and my teachers haven't gave any homework out all week :D


then u should not put those ideas to waste! i wanna be a mangaka but my imagination level is like about zero. hehe lol XD awwww....ur so lucky! i got like 6 homeworks and 7 textbooks on the first day of school! now im so glad they give lockers


Really! they gave me all 10 textbooks already! and im training to be a mangaka too! Im pretty good at it but I'm not good with the backrounds and stuff... Oh and chapter 3 is up! :)


ohhhh ten textbooks....thats alot of stuff....yay ur also going to be a mangaka! i agree on how hard the backgrounds are. i cant believe they use spray pens....okay gotta hurry up and read chap 3 before i goes to sleep! it too addicting! XD


thanks! XDXD im trying to make every chapter have the same feel it did in the first chapter.
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specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:

hey its not boring! all of ur stories are great! especially this one. i just love horror stories! XD


Really? Thanks, I love horror to.. this story is basicly about a girl who gets involved with a group of demons who's job is to destroy other demons XD Now I'm so encouraged to make the next chapter! XD P.S. Im going to fish the last part of chapter 3 and post it right now!


omg yay! i dont know where u get the time to do so much ^^lol


Heehee hee I have too many ideas in my head. I didn't do anything today and my teachers haven't gave any homework out all week :D


then u should not put those ideas to waste! i wanna be a mangaka but my imagination level is like about zero. hehe lol XD awwww....ur so lucky! i got like 6 homeworks and 7 textbooks on the first day of school! now im so glad they give lockers


Really! they gave me all 10 textbooks already! and im training to be a mangaka too! Im pretty good at it but I'm not good with the backrounds and stuff... Oh and chapter 3 is up! :)


ohhhh ten textbooks....thats alot of stuff....yay ur also going to be a mangaka! i agree on how hard the backgrounds are. i cant believe they use spray pens....okay gotta hurry up and read chap 3 before i goes to sleep! it too addicting! XD


thanks! XDXD im trying to make every chapter have the same feel it did in the first chapter.


oh yeah this is definetly a horror story....the suspense is killing me......o_o man...ur so good at making stories...first its Shuffled Mix(soooo good.) then its night rain and then next comes red eyes....omg u'll nvr run out of ideas....
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kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:

hey its not boring! all of ur stories are great! especially this one. i just love horror stories! XD


Really? Thanks, I love horror to.. this story is basicly about a girl who gets involved with a group of demons who's job is to destroy other demons XD Now I'm so encouraged to make the next chapter! XD P.S. Im going to fish the last part of chapter 3 and post it right now!


omg yay! i dont know where u get the time to do so much ^^lol


Heehee hee I have too many ideas in my head. I didn't do anything today and my teachers haven't gave any homework out all week :D


then u should not put those ideas to waste! i wanna be a mangaka but my imagination level is like about zero. hehe lol XD awwww....ur so lucky! i got like 6 homeworks and 7 textbooks on the first day of school! now im so glad they give lockers


Really! they gave me all 10 textbooks already! and im training to be a mangaka too! Im pretty good at it but I'm not good with the backrounds and stuff... Oh and chapter 3 is up! :)


ohhhh ten textbooks....thats alot of stuff....yay ur also going to be a mangaka! i agree on how hard the backgrounds are. i cant believe they use spray pens....okay gotta hurry up and read chap 3 before i goes to sleep! it too addicting! XD


thanks! XDXD im trying to make every chapter have the same feel it did in the first chapter.


oh yeah this is definetly a horror story....the suspense is killing me......o_o man...ur so good at making stories...first its Shuffled Mix(soooo good.) then its night rain and then next comes red eyes....omg u'll nvr run out of ideas....


Thank you! Hee hee I'll add more awesome chapters of each story soon! ^^
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