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I want some romance plz!!! :D



don't worry It's a horror romance and mystery story! XD
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OMFG THIS IS SSSSSSSOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!PLZ CONTINUE!!


Really?!? I'm not that good at writing but I try my best! Heehheh
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:



I want some romance plz!!! :D



don't worry It's a horror romance and mystery story! XD


yay!! XD plz continue!!
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

OMFG THIS IS SSSSSSSOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!PLZ CONTINUE!!


Really?!? I'm not that good at writing but I try my best! Heehheh


You are good u right with ur own style and make the stories interesting and funny ^^
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

OMFG THIS IS SSSSSSSOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!PLZ CONTINUE!!


Really?!? I'm not that good at writing but I try my best! Heehheh


You are good u right with ur own style and make the stories interesting and funny ^^

Thanks really!!! I always wanted my own style! who kenw i had one

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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:



I want some romance plz!!! :D



don't worry It's a horror romance and mystery story! XD


yay!! XD plz continue!!


Ok! Im almost done with chapter 4!! the semi-romance starts there! ill post it tommoro since my laptop is going to die and my mom has the chager! bye bye!!!
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Posted 9/10/08

kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

OMFG THIS IS SSSSSSSOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!PLZ CONTINUE!!


Really?!? I'm not that good at writing but I try my best! Heehheh


You are good u right with ur own style and make the stories interesting and funny ^^

Thanks really!!! I always wanted my own style! who kenw i had one



haha!! every1 somehow does.Now I wonder what mine is...? *thinks*
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:



I want some romance plz!!! :D



don't worry It's a horror romance and mystery story! XD


yay!! XD plz continue!!


Ok! Im almost done with chapter 4!! the semi-romance starts there! ill post it tommoro since my laptop is going to die and my mom has the chager! bye bye!!!


YAY!okies bye!! XD
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:



I want some romance plz!!! :D



don't worry It's a horror romance and mystery story! XD


yay!! XD plz continue!!


Ok! Im almost done with chapter 4!! the semi-romance starts there! ill post it tommoro since my laptop is going to die and my mom has the chager! bye bye!!!


YAY!okies bye!! XD


ok im back and almost done with chaspter 4. it a really long one. kind of RxA in this one
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:



I want some romance plz!!! :D



don't worry It's a horror romance and mystery story! XD


yay!! XD plz continue!!


Ok! Im almost done with chapter 4!! the semi-romance starts there! ill post it tommoro since my laptop is going to die and my mom has the chager! bye bye!!!


YAY!okies bye!! XD


ok im back and almost done with chaspter 4. it a really long one. kind of RxA in this one


yay!!!
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Chapter 4
"The Dark Room"

Creek Creek
The floor board where so old they made noises when ever someone steps on them..
"Hello little girl..." Asked a naily voice.
"Akira... Is that you?...." I asked stating to shake.
"What is a inoccent girl like you doing in a house like this...?" Asked the voice starting to lick my neck.
"W-what are you doing?....who are yo-! Aaaaa!"
"Rayna!!" Yelled Akira pushing his way into the room.
This guy... Isn't Akira... Oww... My neck.. what did he..do?...
"Hiro! Get the seals!" Yelled Akira running my way.
The black figure was hopping from wall to wall, trying to escape.
"Rayna?! Rayna!?! Are you okay?" Shouted Akira.
"I guess so... what did he do to me... my neck hurts alot!" I said making my way out of Akira's arms.
The little boy ran into the room and started to chant something in another laungage. After he finshed his chant
he got a peice of paper a throw it at the black figure.
"What are you doing?!?! You one of us!! How can you betray us?!!? How can you!" Was the fiures last words
before the incatation took full afect on him.
"Quick, stamp him!" Yelled Akira ripping a peoce of cloth and tieing it around my neck.
As soon as he was told the little boy jumped up at stamped a writing character on the figures head.
"Good job.. but we can do better... as soon as Rayna learns how to use her powers." Whisperd Akira craking his
neck.
"What do you mean as soon as I learn to use my power?..." I said bakcing up.
"You don't know...? Well all you need to know now is that... Your mine.." Akira whisperd in my ear.
"Yours....?" I repeted slowly.

The next morning at school was pretty normal, everything was NORMAL. Somethime durring the day I acctully
thouth that maybe not hab happend, that it was just a dream. But I was sooo wrong...
"Mae..." Akira mouned.
"Huh?!? Yes!" I said shocked that Akira would talk to me during school, and in front of people (not that he was
stuck up or anything, just that I didn't want to be seen with him during school hours.)
"I'll walk you home today..." He said combing my hair with his fingers.
"Umm... No thanks... I can walk home my self..." I said trying to doge Akira's/Flora's glares.
"I did tell you that you where mine right?...." Akira said trying to tick me off infront of everyone.
"Just leave me alone..." I said walking away.

After class (when I was walking home with Elena) Akira came by and kidnapped Elena and I.
"I told you to leave me alone you demon!" I yelled kicking the window, in a akward possision.
"Wow! It's like a one-sided love story!" Screached Elena not relizing how much danger she was in.
"It's pretty normal for a pretidor to attack it's prey, but why did you bring Elena!??!" I asked trying to move as
far away from Akira as possible.
"Because, haven't you noticed that if a hero thinks he/she has no one to talk about he/she becomes depressed."
Replyed Akira, moving closer.
"And if your to busy mopping around we'll never get anything done." Continued Akira.
How... thouthful-? No! Rude!
"And why would we EVER help you!" I screamed finally getting the door to open.
Yes!
"Well... Since we are here, you just saved me from having to open the door for you." Akira laughed at my
useless efforts to escape.
"Rayna? What's so bad about joining Akira and his little club?" Asked Elena helping me up.
"How can you not tell! He's evil, intimidating and crule. And last time I was with him I was almost-!" Before I
got to finsh my reply Akira covered my mouth.
What's wrong? CAN'T TAKE DA TRUTH BUDDY?!?!
As soon as I thouth hat Akira started glaring at me.
There's no way in hell this guy can read my mind! He's just toying with me. Or am I just toying with my self..
Or did he do that to make me think that he thouth that I thouth I was toying with my self!!! Or?!?!


Finally looking up I saw a huge four story house with a surrounding garden filled with purple and red roses.
Walking into the house I got this cold chilly feeling, like something was watching me, but I just shruged it off.
"Are you going in or what?" Asked Akira cornering me to the door.
The feeling or Akira's face so close to mine gave me this strange vide, that shortly turned into anger.
"What is your problem!!" I yelled opening the front door and stumbling forward.
"It's normal!" I yelled running up stairs to see if it was normal too.
"How is that a suprise?" Asked Akira from down stairs.
Level two of his house is normal too!! I'm impres-
There was only one door that stuck out, and the door looked as if it was torn apart stuck back together and left here
to rote.
If I where to check out this room would no one notice..? Na! I got stupid old Akira on my case.
When I was just about to turn and go down stairs the door creeked open.
This must be a sine.... I must go in now....
As I walked in everything became darker and darker like I wondering into a dream or in to hell.
Hello?..... I thouth out to shocked to speak.
Everything became darker and darker untill I begain to fade away as well.
"What?" I said trying to find the door.
Before I fully disapeared Akira opened the door and everything when back to normal.
"What are you doing in my room...?" Asked Akira slowly stepping forward.
M-maybe if I act like I saw nothing I won't get in troble!! I thouth childishly.
"A-akira what- why is your room so dark?" I asked just remembering how much I sucked at acting.
"......" Hiding his face he walked closer and closer.
"H-hey Elena! Come and look at this room!!" I yelled out, without noticing.
"Coming!!" Yelled Elena running up stairs and into the room.
"Since Elena's here now I might as well tell you...." Smirked Akira.
"Tell me what??" I asked get up in Akira's face area.
Before he would tell us he brought us out of his room and into another.
"Okay... I'll tell you.... Your living here...bye!" Said Akira quickly slamming the door.
"W-whhaaaaaaaaattt?!?!??!"
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:



I want some romance plz!!! :D



don't worry It's a horror romance and mystery story! XD


yay!! XD plz continue!!


Ok! Im almost done with chapter 4!! the semi-romance starts there! ill post it tommoro since my laptop is going to die and my mom has the chager! bye bye!!!


YAY!okies bye!! XD


ok im back and almost done with chaspter 4. it a really long one. kind of RxA in this one


yay!!! :D


Ok im done!! ...It looked longer on paper...
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OMG!!!!!!

THAT.WAS.SO.GOOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ WRITE MORE!!!

btw what does Akira mean by "your mine?"Is he evil,and like her.Or is he like going to eat her whicjh defibes the "Hunter,and Pray"Theary lol
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sgurlrox67 wrote:

OMG!!!!!!

THAT.WAS.SO.GOOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ WRITE MORE!!!

btw what does Akira mean by "your mine?"Is he evil,and like her.Or is he like going to eat her whicjh defibes the "Hunter,and Pray"Theary lol :D


Hahahha he's not going to eat her! he likes her! he's just messing with her.
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

OMG!!!!!!

THAT.WAS.SO.GOOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ WRITE MORE!!!

btw what does Akira mean by "your mine?"Is he evil,and like her.Or is he like going to eat her whicjh defibes the "Hunter,and Pray"Theary lol :D


Hahahha he's not going to eat her! he likes her! he's just messing with her.


aaww That'd be cool if he was though >:3 MUHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!
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