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OMG!!!!!!

THAT.WAS.SO.GOOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ WRITE MORE!!!

btw what does Akira mean by "your mine?"Is he evil,and like her.Or is he like going to eat her whicjh defibes the "Hunter,and Pray"Theary lol :D


Hahahha he's not going to eat her! he likes her! he's just messing with her.


aaww That'd be cool if he was though >:3 MUHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!


he's not ganna try to eat her...
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


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OMG!!!!!!

THAT.WAS.SO.GOOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ WRITE MORE!!!

btw what does Akira mean by "your mine?"Is he evil,and like her.Or is he like going to eat her whicjh defibes the "Hunter,and Pray"Theary lol :D


Hahahha he's not going to eat her! he likes her! he's just messing with her.


aaww That'd be cool if he was though >:3 MUHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!


he's not ganna try to eat her...


aaww I'd rather have him eat her (sarcasm needed) lol but I LOVE this so far!!
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

OMG!!!!!!

THAT.WAS.SO.GOOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ WRITE MORE!!!

btw what does Akira mean by "your mine?"Is he evil,and like her.Or is he like going to eat her whicjh defibes the "Hunter,and Pray"Theary lol :D


Hahahha he's not going to eat her! he likes her! he's just messing with her.


aaww That'd be cool if he was though >:3 MUHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!


he's not ganna try to eat her...


aaww I'd rather have him eat her (sarcasm needed) lol but I LOVE this so far!!


i just started working on chapter 7 and poor Elena... and poor Rayna... so sad....
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

OMG!!!!!!

THAT.WAS.SO.GOOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ WRITE MORE!!!

btw what does Akira mean by "your mine?"Is he evil,and like her.Or is he like going to eat her whicjh defibes the "Hunter,and Pray"Theary lol :D


Hahahha he's not going to eat her! he likes her! he's just messing with her.


aaww That'd be cool if he was though >:3 MUHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!


he's not ganna try to eat her...


aaww I'd rather have him eat her (sarcasm needed) lol but I LOVE this so far!!


i just started working on chapter 7 and poor Elena... and poor Rayna... so sad....


wait chapter 7!?you've wrote that many so far!?plz post!!lol I wanna read so badly!!!And what happened??
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i just started working on chapter 7 and poor Elena... and poor Rayna... so sad....


wait chapter 7!?you've wrote that many so far!?plz post!!lol I wanna read so badly!!!And what happened??


oh im working on the note for chapter 7 but right now im making chapter 5! but ill post as soon as possible! probly today! so stay up late tonight and wait for the next chapter!!!

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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

OMG!!!!!!

THAT.WAS.SO.GOOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ WRITE MORE!!!

btw what does Akira mean by "your mine?"Is he evil,and like her.Or is he like going to eat her whicjh defibes the "Hunter,and Pray"Theary lol :D


Hahahha he's not going to eat her! he likes her! he's just messing with her.


aaww That'd be cool if he was though >:3 MUHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!


he's not ganna try to eat her...


aaww I'd rather have him eat her (sarcasm needed) lol but I LOVE this so far!!


i just started working on chapter 7 and poor Elena... and poor Rayna... so sad....


wait chapter 7!?you've wrote that many so far!?plz post!!lol I wanna read so badly!!!And what happened??


oh im working on the note for chapter 7 but right now im making chapter 5! but ill post as soon as possible! probly today! so stay up late tonight and wait for the next chapter!!!



okies lol *tries to calm down anticipation* hehe
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Chapter 5
"Meeting The Gang"


Today I woke up, in a blue bed with Lavender and Orange roses in a vase next to me.
"Roses....Hmm... Didn't I read a book about what these ment?...." I whispered to my self.
Elena was sleeping on a red bed, half on it and half not.
Knock Knock
"Can I come in...?" Asked Akira knocking on the door.
"Why is Akira in my house...?" I whisperd to my self not recalling what had happend last night.
"Come on... get up.... I want to sleep in to but you don't see me doing that do you..." Complained Akira yawning.
Looking around the room half asleep I opened the door, not thinking about how Elena would think about someone
seeing her sleep.
"What....?" I asked rubbing my eyes and opening the door widly.
"Wow, such a nice morning greating.." Said Akira sacasticly looking at how much we messed up the room.
"What are you doing here..?" I asked holding onto the door knob trying to keep from falling over.
"Oh, you don't remember do you...?" Smircked Akira grabing onto my hair.
As soon as he started combing his finger thro my hair everything hit me, last night Akira anounced
that we where to stay at his house.
"O-of corse I remeber!! What do you think I am stupid!!" I said trying to keep my voice down.
"Of corse I do sweety..." Giggled Akira.
He must really hate me.... I said thinking I thouth this.
"Acctuly I like you... alot..." Said Akira now trying to kiss me.
Can he read my mind or some this!?!?!? (a/n: he can't read her mind XD she was thinking out loud.)
Quickly pulling away I shouted "Like I'd ever let a creep like you kiss me!"
"......" Akira fround, then turn around.
"Like I care, we're just using you.. Now hurry and get ready." Said Akira.
"Fine... wait! What clothes do we have to change into!" I said looking inside of the shelves.
"Here.. wear this.." Said Akira kicking a box filled with old white dresses inside of it.
These are so pretty!.... I thouth thinking of how Akira got these.
I bet him and (who ever, where ever) his goons (are) stole them!
"And hunny, you should where some clothes while addressing me." Said Akira pointing at me wearing a
long pink bath robe.
"Wait... I don't remember putting this on yesterday.... Wait did you-!??!"
"No I didn't.. I mean why would I....." Said Akira drifting off into dream land.
I can't tell if he's lieing or not?!?!? What's he thinking about?!?!?!

After waking Elena up and changing into the dresses.
I look like a doll....
"Don't we look just adorable!!!" Yelled Elena with hearts in her eyes.
"I guess we do...?" I said twisting around in my dress.
"Are you guys done yet?" Asked Akira opening the door.
"Your lucky we are done! Cause if we weren't done and you'd came in-!!!"
"I know, I know...." Said Akira interupting me.
"Well hurry up you've got to meet the rest of the group." Said Akira pulling my hair forcing me to come along.
"oww... oww...owww!" I screached trying not to stumble.
Finally letting go of my hair he said "This is Jun (pointing at a black haird boy), Arisa(pointing at a inoccent looking cute blonde haird girl),
Kei(pointing at a green haird boy), and this is Yuki(pointing at a brown haird hyper active boy)."
"Oh... Umm "hi" I'm Rayna...." I said sticking my hand out.
"You mean like that girl from Higurashi who was named Raina but changed her name to Rena!" Said Yuki jumping
up and down joyfully.
"You shouldn't say such vigular thing Yuki! I hope you didn't make her feel bad!" Said Arisa stoping cutely.
"Does it matter....?" Commented Jun reading a book.
"Hi..." Said Rei napping on the floor with a book on his head.
"Hi-hi people! I'm Elena!" Said Elena running torwards me and putting her shoe's on at the same time.
"Wowowowowo!!!" Yelled Elena falling down.
"Clutz..." I giggled helping Elena up.
"Hmn....." Sounded Jun.
"JUN!!! Did you just laugh!" Yelled Arisa in shock.
"No... I was just making noises...." Replyed Jun.

Later when we all made friends with each other...
"Jun! Your so boaring!" Sighed Elena.
"Why don't you play with us."
"Play....?" Said Jun having a flash back. Jun was five and was on a playground.
"You want to play with us?" Molked a older kid.
"Y-yes..." Said Jun.
"Ha! To bad! Come on guys let's play over there!" Shouted the kid.

"Hello!!" Said Elena snapping Jun out of his flashback.
"Nmm....?" Said Jun opening his eyes seeing Elena right in front of him.
"W-what are ou d=doing?!" Asked Jun.
"Do you want to play with us?" Asked Elena again.
"Y-.... What are you playing..." Said Junn trying hard not to act out of character.
"Cards!" Said Elen holding her hand up.
"...Sure......" Smiled Jun.

This is sure going to be a fun adventure....
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

OMG!!!!!!

THAT.WAS.SO.GOOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ WRITE MORE!!!

btw what does Akira mean by "your mine?"Is he evil,and like her.Or is he like going to eat her whicjh defibes the "Hunter,and Pray"Theary lol :D


Hahahha he's not going to eat her! he likes her! he's just messing with her.


aaww That'd be cool if he was though >:3 MUHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!


he's not ganna try to eat her...


aaww I'd rather have him eat her (sarcasm needed) lol but I LOVE this so far!!


i just started working on chapter 7 and poor Elena... and poor Rayna... so sad....


wait chapter 7!?you've wrote that many so far!?plz post!!lol I wanna read so badly!!!And what happened??


oh im working on the note for chapter 7 but right now im making chapter 5! but ill post as soon as possible! probly today! so stay up late tonight and wait for the next chapter!!!



okies lol *tries to calm down anticipation* hehe


ok fifth chapter is up! you can read it now!!
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:

OMG!!!!!!

THAT.WAS.SO.GOOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ WRITE MORE!!!

btw what does Akira mean by "your mine?"Is he evil,and like her.Or is he like going to eat her whicjh defibes the "Hunter,and Pray"Theary lol :D


Hahahha he's not going to eat her! he likes her! he's just messing with her.


aaww That'd be cool if he was though >:3 MUHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!


he's not ganna try to eat her...


aaww I'd rather have him eat her (sarcasm needed) lol but I LOVE this so far!!


i just started working on chapter 7 and poor Elena... and poor Rayna... so sad....


wait chapter 7!?you've wrote that many so far!?plz post!!lol I wanna read so badly!!!And what happened??


oh im working on the note for chapter 7 but right now im making chapter 5! but ill post as soon as possible! probly today! so stay up late tonight and wait for the next chapter!!!



okies lol *tries to calm down anticipation* hehe


ok fifth chapter is up! you can read it now!!


omg its ssoo good!!And I thought that Akira could read her mind.lol guess I was wrong!!I loves this story!!plz write another one soon!! ^-^
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omg I looked up what an orange rose means and its a "signal for desire" !!! lol
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omg I looked up what an orange rose means and its a "signal for desire" !!! lol


Violet rose mean "love a first sight" and "enchantment"
Orange rose means and its a "signal for desire"
Heheheh my mom loves flowers, so eventully I caught on.
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okies lol *tries to calm down anticipation* hehe


ok fifth chapter is up! you can read it now!!


omg its ssoo good!!And I thought that Akira could read her mind.lol guess I was wrong!!I loves this story!!plz write another one soon!! ^-^


Ok! I'm make the next one soon! And hehe and did you notice someone likes Elena~
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omg I looked up what an orange rose means and its a "signal for desire" !!! lol


Violet rose mean "love a first sight" and "enchantment"
Orange rose means and its a "signal for desire"
Heheheh my mom loves flowers, so eventully I caught on.


hehe I love roses ALOUT so I know alout about the coulers.But I've never seen or heard of an orange rose so I looked it up ^-^
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okies lol *tries to calm down anticipation* hehe


ok fifth chapter is up! you can read it now!!


omg its ssoo good!!And I thought that Akira could read her mind.lol guess I was wrong!!I loves this story!!plz write another one soon!! ^-^


Ok! I'm make the next one soon! And hehe and did you notice someone likes Elena~


yep Jun ^-^ ....right? lol <<<----- to stupid to be sure if she's right even though she knows alout about romance
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okies lol *tries to calm down anticipation* hehe


ok fifth chapter is up! you can read it now!!


omg its ssoo good!!And I thought that Akira could read her mind.lol guess I was wrong!!I loves this story!!plz write another one soon!! ^-^


Ok! I'm make the next one soon! And hehe and did you notice someone likes Elena~


yep Jun ^-^ ....right? lol <<<----- to stupid to be sure if she's right even though she knows alout about romance


Elena loves romance!! SO she's going to be the funnyness in this story!
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