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Should I continue this story?
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Posted 9/4/08 , edited 9/5/08


this is just the prologue.. and my mind already hurts so I stopped it.. the last part is a little messed up so I'm still gonna work on it... and this prologue is not yet finished because my original character is not yet there... anyways.. its FICTION ok? ^_^


and please rate this from 1-10.. 1 being the lowest 10 being the highest... and please give some comments TT__TT I really need your comments..

oh and dont mind the grammar.. its not yet finalized...

oh and another thing.. the first part (the chaos existing alone part) is an adoptation from greek mythology ^_^
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Posted 9/4/08
I say 10 its really good can't wait to read more keep up the good work Jiggs
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Posted 9/4/08
I'm gonna try to wok on the art today ^_^ lol.. I'll be drawing!!! WAAAH I cant draw TT__TT
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Posted 9/4/08
is lucifer maou? it's complicated to me. u can continue but i'm not sure i will read. so i'm not voting.
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Posted 9/5/08

Aegis85 wrote:

is lucifer maou? it's complicated to me. u can continue but i'm not sure i will read. so i'm not voting.


what do you mean its complicated to you???
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Posted 9/5/08
i think it's too long. and the fight seems like endless to me. hehehe

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Posted 9/5/08
i give 7. it's deep. pretty cool. but no sexy stuff? click!
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Posted 9/5/08
thanks... sexy stuff?? lol.. its only the prologue.. so I can't put those kinds yet dont you think? lol.. anyways.. thanks for the comment ^_^
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Posted 9/6/08
9,just continue this story, and i like to read fiction, but it's a bit long for proloque
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Posted 9/6/08
yeah, I think it is pretty good. I really like it. tell me when you continue.
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Posted 9/6/08

risa_arisaka wrote:

9,just continue this story, and i like to read fiction, but it's a bit long for proloque


thanks.. LOL.. actualy it's a summary of the prologue ^_^ lol.. someone even commented on me that I should make it a little more descriptive.. but I think it'll be too long so I made it short.. ^_^ thanks anyway
Posted 9/8/08
I give you 8.9! I love it...its a mix between heroic age and angel sanctuary ( I do that ever with aimes sry)! I loved the way how you used the 3 religions....like you wanted to say that we all believe at least in the same thing. I wanted to ask you what would happen to me when I die, coz atm I believe in any of those religions. ( grew up in a conservativ christian family)....but I found it out at the end...I am one of the bad ones! lols


But I am curious how it will go on.....so write guy....
Posted 9/16/08
wow that was really cool! I loved how long it was gave us some moe keep the writing up!
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Posted 9/16/08

Rebanex wrote:

wow that was really cool! I loved how long it was gave us some moe keep the writing up!


moe? which part was moe??? ^_^
Posted 9/16/08

jiggs_91290141 wrote:


Rebanex wrote:

wow that was really cool! I loved how long it was gave us some moe keep the writing up!


moe? which part was moe??? ^_^


hahaha no I meant "more" xD I just typed it very fast ;P
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