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Posted 9/4/08
She speaks soft nothings, and makes silent promises;
of all the things she won't do for me.
She smiles empty emotions, and says empty lies;
of how she will always love me.
She hugs touch-less embraces, and blows hollow kisses;
as she walks out once again.
I weep meaningless tears, and grasp non-existent hope
as I lie here once more.




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I'm missing creative talent tonight. I'll do more another time.
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Posted 9/8/08
Emotional, upsetting, and as stated in your writing above..."hollow." Can't wait to read more =]
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Posted 9/19/08
The feeling inside made my heart jump, did I hear right? Why...
"I... I mean you don't have to reply"
her words echoing through my mind, is this a dream, it can't be right
"Mark, say something... at least"
I looked into her eyes as I try to muster the strength to reply
"I know, it was weird to say, but I..."
The words then came slipping out
"I love you too..."
I leaned in to kiss her

Then I got maced, apparently she loves ewes...
who knew...
I just call em 'sheep'
Never hang out with sheep farmers by the way...
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Posted 9/24/08
holy shit I just spent two hours writing a story in here, and it was so beautiful, it just came to me as I wrote it.

I don't think I could write it again. when I went to submit, it said I needed to be logged in to post, and it was gone. I have this site sometimes :D

I am going to sleep, I need to learn to write things in notepad then bring em in here, cause that was some BS.

I mean I know I write all my stories off the top of my head anyhow, but goodness I just want to kill someone over losing that.
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Posted 9/28/08
Hehe, you're a great writer. Don't write the lost story again, write a new one. I'll read it <3~
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Posted 10/9/08 , edited 10/10/08
can one really know where to draw the line? In the heat of things sometimes we all lose oujr place, our minds, our wits. and we say things we can never get back once more. This is the story of one of those times.

My head hung low I continued along the same path I had been on before, crawling along slowly in what seemed to be an eternal hell. Why did I say that? What is wrong with me? I cannot take it back now, it's long gone and too late. It tore me apart on the inside, I just wanted to rewind it all. I came to a stop and waited even longer on this path to my destiny, a destiny I chose for myself and now regret more than anything else. I began to move slowly again knowing soon I would have to pay for what I had said, and then I would have to live up to my choices. I hung my head low as I stopped once more, looking to her just standing there... I payed dearly for what I had done. and now I felt an emptiness inside, I knew it was not the end of things, not even close. I continued along as the few feet I traveled each minute seemed like miles and miles. I just wanted it to be over, I cannot change things back to how I wanted, and I just wanted cruel fate to end it all. and finally I came to the end. Faced with what I had done I turned one more and...

The lady handed me the bag and said 'here is your chicken sandwich combo, and here is your Coke"
with that I took them thanking her...
I don't even like chicken that much...
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Posted 10/16/08
AHAHA! ^^ Gosh i thought the ending would b completley different! That's why i luv ur stories, short or long, because they always make me smile or cry or feel as the character does Dat was great i lyk how u used 'path' and 'destiny' to an extent that it clicked with the reader b4 changing the whole mood so dat u crack up laughing
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