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your poems are GREAT!!i mean REALLY GREAT!!!

sorry if i cant make one...i'm really not good at making poems....hehehe

and everyone is it okay for me to copy it?!pls pls pls...dont worry i'll credit u!!onegai!!
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CleyraGarnet29 wrote:

Uhmm...my poem is kind of emo---ish...so, forgive it's cheesiness...x]

A Dream and Only a Dream

A guy that remains in my dream
Never granted though what may seem
Only I a girl left to die
On a hopeless wish that makes me cry

A star too far away to reach
The same as the feeling I can't teach
While I left alone in the midst
Never had he known that I exist

There is no thought how much he knew
About my love that has no clue
Beside him is where all the girls surround
How would he even know that I was around?

He has everything and all the fame
Anywhere you go, they know his name
Every girl wants to get his attention
Hoping one of them would win his affection

I, too am no different
I would never understand what "forget" meant
Hurting inside with too much pain
But why does the feeling still remain?

Wishing I'd meet him one of this days
Yet passing through regrets and loneliness in every ways
Knowing that he could never be mine
Don't know what to do at the end of the line

Give up or hope, either causes suffering
The torment in the heart that is continuing
Whatever I do it's still the same
Tired of playing my own fantasy game

Don't know if I would even know how to learn
To let go of the feelings and let it burn
Cry as I much, nothing would change
Absurdity and futility is my range

How would I convince myself to realize?
That I'm building my thoughts with my own lies?
There's a deeper meaning within my eyes
Appears as smile, though all are cries

Yet all of this hurting I need to understand
I cannot conquer all that I desire in my hand
Because he's a guy that will remain in dreams
I cannot reach a star like him...

whatever it seems.


Ok, I wanted to post what I feel so please excuse the length... I apologize for the emo-ness and the drama. Sorry for the pessimism in there as well. xP
If you've read 'till the end, Arigato!



why is everyone so great????!!!

i'm jealous!!

haha!!

just kidding!!!


i admire you guyz!!

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jill17 wrote:

your poems are GREAT!!i mean REALLY GREAT!!!

sorry if i cant make one...i'm really not good at making poems....hehehe

and everyone is it okay for me to copy it?!pls pls pls...dont worry i'll credit u!!onegai!!



it's fine with me,since the poem's not so good but you appreciated it,

thanks so much,,,


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Uhmm...my poem is kind of emo---ish...so, forgive it's cheesiness...x]

A Dream and Only a Dream

A guy that remains in my dream
Never granted though what may seem
Only I a girl left to die
On a hopeless wish that makes me cry

A star too far away to reach
The same as the feeling I can't teach
While I left alone in the midst
Never had he known that I exist

There is no thought how much he knew
About my love that has no clue
Beside him is where all the girls surround
How would he even know that I was around?

He has everything and all the fame
Anywhere you go, they know his name
Every girl wants to get his attention
Hoping one of them would win his affection

I, too am no different
I would never understand what "forget" meant
Hurting inside with too much pain
But why does the feeling still remain?

Wishing I'd meet him one of this days
Yet passing through regrets and loneliness in every ways
Knowing that he could never be mine
Don't know what to do at the end of the line

Give up or hope, either causes suffering
The torment in the heart that is continuing
Whatever I do it's still the same
Tired of playing my own fantasy game

Don't know if I would even know how to learn
To let go of the feelings and let it burn
Cry as I much, nothing would change
Absurdity and futility is my range

How would I convince myself to realize?
That I'm building my thoughts with my own lies?
There's a deeper meaning within my eyes
Appears as smile, though all are cries

Yet all of this hurting I need to understand
I cannot conquer all that I desire in my hand
Because he's a guy that will remain in dreams
I cannot reach a star like him...

whatever it seems.


Ok, I wanted to post what I feel so please excuse the length... Image I apologize for the emo-ness and the drama. Sorry for the pessimism in there as well. xP
If you've read 'till the end, Arigato! Image


umm..i read it until the end..cause i loove the meaning of the poem..and it's ok if it's emo-ish smtyms..i wrote poems like that so i understand haha...
mmm it's true he can not noticed us..but we are the one who always support him.adore him...i think that's the greatest kind of love..even though we know..we can't meet him..we still continue on loving him...i mean.. it hurts sometym..but we make the heart of yama-chan..happy and made him felt success..on his every work...

gume ne~ if it's long..well luv luv ur poem!!!...~arigatou 4 posting and sharing what u feel~...
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your poems are GREAT!!i mean REALLY GREAT!!!

sorry if i cant make one...i'm really not good at making poems....hehehe

and everyone is it okay for me to copy it?!pls pls pls...dont worry i'll credit u!!onegai!!


u can copy it thanks for appreciating all the poems we've made..
i know u can do good poems to...just remember ur luv to yamada haha...
well hope we can chat smtym...
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niabelle28 wrote:

umm..i read it until the end..cause i loove the meaning of the poem..and it's ok if it's emo-ish smtyms..i wrote poems like that so i understand haha...
mmm it's true he can not noticed us..but we are the one who always support him.adore him...i think that's the greatest kind of love..even though we know..we can't meet him..we still continue on loving him...i mean.. it hurts sometym..but we make the heart of yama-chan..happy and made him felt success..on his every work...

gume ne~ if it's long..well luv luv ur poem!!!...~arigatou 4 posting and sharing what u feel~...


Hai...sou da ne! We should continue supporting Yama-chan!

Thanks for reading it to the end and for appreciating it! Honto ni arigato!

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jill17 wrote:

your poems are GREAT!!i mean REALLY GREAT!!!

sorry if i cant make one...i'm really not good at making poems....hehehe

and everyone is it okay for me to copy it?!pls pls pls...dont worry i'll credit u!!onegai!!


I'm fine with it. Just be sure to credit, okay?
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ryomada,CleyraGarnet29,niabelle28

thank you very much for letting me copy it!!!

dont u worry i'll definitely credit ur poems!!!
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I cant remember a time without you
Or imagine what it must have been like
You've changed me
Even from such a distance
You've changed my way of thinking
Got inside my heart and mind
Made me better
Made me happy

I dont want to lose thoughts of you
So don't dissapear and break my heart
Keep smiling your beautiful smile
And I'll be happy just to watch
Observe from afar
I wont ask for more
Even if it hurts
Even if I feel sad

You can copy both of mine =3
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ryomada,CleyraGarnet29,niabelle28

thank you very much for letting me copy it!!!

dont u worry i'll definitely credit ur poems!!!


ur welcum jill-chan ano~what should i call u???
haha...thx for liking our poems we appreciate it!!!
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I cant remember a time without you
Or imagine what it must have been like
You've changed me
Even from such a distance
You've changed my way of thinking
Got inside my heart and mind
Made me better
Made me happy

I dont want to lose thoughts of you
So don't dissapear and break my heart
Keep smiling your beautiful smile
And I'll be happy just to watch
Observe from afar
I wont ask for more
Even if it hurts
Even if I feel sad

You can copy both of mine =3


sugoii des ne~~!!!!
definitely ryt!! ur poem is soo great haha
he really changes my mind...
my view in life..this strucks my heart really~! arigatou~4 posting :)
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Etou~...I made another poem. This time it's a short one. Inspired by HSJ's song, "Dreams Come True".

We Can Dream

Too much impossibility
Is all of what I ever see
I know you'll never be with me
For that's the truth...it's meant to be

In my heart, I'm keeping this grim
Not being with you, it may seem
But I hear your voice, as you sing
"Yume mimashou..." We can dream.

Errr...~ okay...it's sad but hey, as what HSJ said..."We can dream." >_<
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CleyraGarnet29 wrote:

Etou~...I made another poem. This time it's a short one. Inspired by HSJ's song, "Dreams Come True".

We Can Dream

Too much impossibility
Is all of what I ever see
I know you'll never be with me
For that's the truth...it's meant to be

In my heart, I'm keeping this grim
Not being with you, it may seem
But I hear your voice, as you sing
"Yume mimashou..." We can dream.

Errr...~ okay...it's sad but hey, as what HSJ said..."We can dream." >_<


aren't you too good to be true?

you're awesome!!!

i liked it!!

now i'm all fired up!!

arigatou neh!!

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jill17 wrote:

ryomada,CleyraGarnet29,niabelle28

thank you very much for letting me copy it!!!

dont u worry i'll definitely credit ur poems!!!



it's ok!!!!
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jill17 wrote:

ryomada,CleyraGarnet29,niabelle28

thank you very much for letting me copy it!!!

dont u worry i'll definitely credit ur poems!!!


Sure, sure

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