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Etou~...I made another poem. This time it's a short one. Inspired by HSJ's song, "Dreams Come True".

We Can Dream

Too much impossibility
Is all of what I ever see
I know you'll never be with me
For that's the truth...it's meant to be

In my heart, I'm keeping this grim
Not being with you, it may seem
But I hear your voice, as you sing
"Yume mimashou..." We can dream.

Errr...~ okay...it's sad but hey, as what HSJ said..."We can dream." >_<


aren't you too good to be true?

you're awesome!!!

i liked it!!

now i'm all fired up!!

arigatou neh!!



Hahahaha! I guess inspiration (a.k.a. Yama-chan) is a powerful thing.

I'm glad you liked it. Arigato for reading it! ^^

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You can copy both of mine =3



if ur talking to me....thank you very much!!!
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i dont know how to sy an poem!! ..
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CleyraGarnet29 wrote:


ryomada wrote:


CleyraGarnet29 wrote:

Etou~...I made another poem. This time it's a short one. Inspired by HSJ's song, "Dreams Come True".

We Can Dream

Too much impossibility
Is all of what I ever see
I know you'll never be with me
For that's the truth...it's meant to be

In my heart, I'm keeping this grim
Not being with you, it may seem
But I hear your voice, as you sing
"Yume mimashou..." We can dream.

Errr...~ okay...it's sad but hey, as what HSJ said..."We can dream." >_<


aren't you too good to be true?

you're awesome!!!

i liked it!!

now i'm all fired up!!

arigatou neh!!



Hahahaha! I guess inspiration (a.k.a. Yama-chan) is a powerful thing.

I'm glad you liked it. Arigato for reading it! ^^




inspiration?

i mean,...

do you practice a lot?

can you give e some helpful advice to make my poet side better?
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CleyraGarnet29 wrote:


ryomada wrote:


CleyraGarnet29 wrote:

Etou~...I made another poem. This time it's a short one. Inspired by HSJ's song, "Dreams Come True".

We Can Dream

Too much impossibility
Is all of what I ever see
I know you'll never be with me
For that's the truth...it's meant to be

In my heart, I'm keeping this grim
Not being with you, it may seem
But I hear your voice, as you sing
"Yume mimashou..." We can dream.

Errr...~ okay...it's sad but hey, as what HSJ said..."We can dream." >_<


aren't you too good to be true?

you're awesome!!!

i liked it!!

now i'm all fired up!!

arigatou neh!!



Hahahaha! I guess inspiration (a.k.a. Yama-chan) is a powerful thing.

I'm glad you liked it. Arigato for reading it! ^^




inspiration?

i mean,...

do you practice a lot?

can you give e some helpful advice to make my poet side better?
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ryomada wrote:
inspiration?

i mean,...

do you practice a lot?

can you give e some helpful advice to make my poet side better?


Weeell... I've been writing poems ever since I'm 14...(okay, I feel old saying that. *coughs*) Anyway, I don't usually write poems unless I feel it. I mean, I only write whenever I'm in the mood, that is. Like for example, I feel so "fan girl-y". I write poems to express it.

I usually just play around with the words and I always make sure to put in rhymes for...artistic slash dramatic effect. When you have trouble with rhymes, just write all of the letters in the alphabet and then try which letter could be used to rhyme with your previous word. It's kind of funny trying every letter but hey...it works. xD

But then again, it's your poem, which means it's your choice whether to put in rhymes or not. I only put rhymes in mine because I enjoy playing around with the words. xD

You don't need to rush. Poetry is an art and art takes time. Just go on writing and you'll be able to create a great poem. Unleash your creativity, artistry and most of all your feelings. It helps a lot when you feel so strong about something. (Or someone. Think Yama-chan )

Well, I hope that helped. Let me know when you've created a poem, okay?

Good luck with your poetry!
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ryomada wrote:
inspiration?

i mean,...

do you practice a lot?

can you give e some helpful advice to make my poet side better?


Weeell... I've been writing poems ever since I'm 14...(okay, I feel old saying that. *coughs*) Anyway, I don't usually write poems unless I feel it. I mean, I only write whenever I'm in the mood, that is. Like for example, I feel so "fan girl-y". I write poems to express it.

I usually just play around with the words and I always make sure to put in rhymes for...artistic slash dramatic effect. When you have trouble with rhymes, just write all of the letters in the alphabet and then try which letter could be used to rhyme with your previous word. It's kind of funny trying every letter but hey...it works. xD

But then again, it's your poem, which means it's your choice whether to put in rhymes or not. I only put rhymes in mine because I enjoy playing around with the words. xD

You don't need to rush. Poetry is an art and art takes time. Just go on writing and you'll be able to create a great poem. Unleash your creativity, artistry and most of all your feelings. It helps a lot when you feel so strong about something. (Or someone. Think Yama-chan )

Well, I hope that helped. Let me know when you've created a poem, okay?

Good luck with your poetry!



haha!!

my i ask how YOUNG are you???

but,thanks!!

i'll try!!!

neh,anyway..can you message me some of your poems,too??

just a reference...

sorry for being demanding and for troubling you

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haha!!

my i ask how YOUNG are you???

but,thanks!!

i'll try!!!

neh,anyway..can you message me some of your poems,too??

just a reference...

sorry for being demanding and for troubling you



Hahaha! It's alright. I'm 16 by the way...[10 months and 10 days older than Yama-chan to be exact. xD That's sad...Why do I have to be older?!] Ahem! Anyway, I'll try to message you with my poems since most of them are long poems. Poems as long as 'A Dream and Only a Dream'. So... maybe I'll just message you one poem for now. Ne?
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Weeell... I've been writing poems ever since I'm 14...(okay, I feel old saying that. *coughs*) Anyway, I don't usually write poems unless I feel it. I mean, I only write whenever I'm in the mood, that is. Like for example, I feel so "fan girl-y". I write poems to express it.

I usually just play around with the words and I always make sure to put in rhymes for...artistic slash dramatic effect. Image When you have trouble with rhymes, just write all of the letters in the alphabet and then try which letter could be used to rhyme with your previous word. It's kind of funny trying every letter but hey...it works. xD

But then again, it's your poem, which means it's your choice whether to put in rhymes or not. I only put rhymes in mine because I enjoy playing around with the words. xD

well nice knowing that you know how to write great poems :)

You don't need to rush. Poetry is an art and art takes time. Image Just go on writing and you'll be able to create a great poem. Unleash your creativity, artistry and most of all your feelings. It helps a lot when you feel so strong about something. (Or someone. Image Think Yama-chan Image )

Well, I hope that helped. Let me know when you've created a poem, okay?

Good luck with your poetry! Image


u started at 14..wah~were the same i also started writing poems at that age...
and yeah~wrting poems takes time but if you really give all your emotions in writing your poem
you can finish it soon...!~

but i can't make a rhyming poem..it's hard 4 me..
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u started at 14..wah~were the same i also started writing poems at that age...
and yeah~wrting poems takes time but if you really give all your emotions in writing your poem
you can finish it soon...!~

but i can't make a rhyming poem..it's hard 4 me..


Really? Sugoi!

Ah, honto? I usually just change the first letter of the previous word and see if it would rhyme. Haha!
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ryomada wrote:


CleyraGarnet29 wrote:


ryomada wrote:
inspiration?

i mean,...

do you practice a lot?

can you give e some helpful advice to make my poet side better?


Weeell... I've been writing poems ever since I'm 14...(okay, I feel old saying that. *coughs*) Anyway, I don't usually write poems unless I feel it. I mean, I only write whenever I'm in the mood, that is. Like for example, I feel so "fan girl-y". I write poems to express it.

I usually just play around with the words and I always make sure to put in rhymes for...artistic slash dramatic effect. When you have trouble with rhymes, just write all of the letters in the alphabet and then try which letter could be used to rhyme with your previous word. It's kind of funny trying every letter but hey...it works. xD

But then again, it's your poem, which means it's your choice whether to put in rhymes or not. I only put rhymes in mine because I enjoy playing around with the words. xD

You don't need to rush. Poetry is an art and art takes time. Just go on writing and you'll be able to create a great poem. Unleash your creativity, artistry and most of all your feelings. It helps a lot when you feel so strong about something. (Or someone. Think Yama-chan )

Well, I hope that helped. Let me know when you've created a poem, okay?

Good luck with your poetry!



haha!!

my i ask how YOUNG are you???

but,thanks!!

i'll try!!!

neh,anyway..can you message me some of your poems,too??

just a reference...

sorry for being demanding and for troubling you



lucky~!

i'm of the same age as him..

his older than me ....

but anyway,,it's just 6 months and 10 days....

but anyway thanks~!

maybe i'll start now,too~!

ok~~!

i made a poem for my friend but maybe i'll share it to you some other time~!

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Really? Sugoi! Image

Ah, honto? I usually just change the first letter of the previous word and see if it would rhyme. Haha!


wah~it's easy for you to rhym that's kakoii ne~for me
usually my poems are sad u???
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wah~it's easy for you to rhym that's kakoii ne~for me
usually my poems are sad u???


Yeah, almost all of them are sad. Can't really write a happy one when most of the things I want are impossible to happen. [Okay, that was kind of emo, but it's true. >.<]

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lucky~!

i'm of the same age as him..

his older than me ....

but anyway,,it's just 6 months and 10 days....

but anyway thanks~!

maybe i'll start now,too~!

ok~~!

i made a poem for my friend but maybe i'll share it to you some other time~!



Ooooh! You're done right? Lemme read it!
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Yeah, almost all of them are sad. Can't really write a happy one when most of the things I want are impossible to happen. [Okay, that was kind of emo, but it's true. >.<]


hai!~ that's true...i usually write poems when i'm sad....
but it's agud thing we had a common... dont cha think ??
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