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Posted 9/6/08 , edited 2/12/09





Episode 1:Its Time Henshin




We next find a mutant destroyed by Yuusake and has henshined into the Kamne rider King
Episode 2: Regenerate


Kino was hurt due to the mutant battle. the mutant was then regenerated and become normal form again. Yuusake was then beaten by the mutant and then healed by DMO Corp. Yuusake then goes and fight the spider mutant he defeats the mutant and was victorious.
Episode 3: Mane Form Appears












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Posted 9/6/08
ooo you are back lets see wat the others have to say
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pretty simple..n u need to arrange ur paragraph nicely and use " " for ur dialog part..it was pretty confuse looking this way ~_~
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Posted 9/6/08 , edited 9/6/08
i agree wat dijoi said
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VictorBoy wrote:

ya i wan to add something its kinda short


what do u mean? this sound as if u n monkey king are the same person?
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Aegis85 wrote:


VictorBoy wrote:

ya i wan to add something its kinda short


what do u mean? this sound as if u n monkey king are the same person?


no
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Posted 9/6/08
wat the heck im even more confused now
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oh no hold im not finish i lost the other halve of my paper
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man your "" are confusing...
do it like this: Yuusuke said"..." not like this: "yuusuke said ..."
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monkey king, mind i ask how old r u actually ~_~?
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djloi wrote:

monkey king, mind i ask how old r u actually ~_~?

probably the same age as victorboy? or younger? the style of writing is pretty much similar though..dont u think?
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Aegis85 wrote:


djloi wrote:

monkey king, mind i ask how old r u actually ~_~?

probably the same age as victorboy? or younger? the style of writing is pretty much similar though..dont u think?


that depends ........
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haha..can expect....but seriously, u need improve more
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Posted 9/7/08 , edited 9/7/08
I just skimmed through ur fanfic. It needs work.
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anyway, u can post ur fan fic at blog. to make it looks better. including the songs
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