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Ahhhh...
*Sips cup of milk.*
That was enjoyable.
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-Part 4 of Mirror-

Her eyes shot open.
Shina sat up with a jolt, "Where am I?! Am I dead?!" She shouted out.
"....." It was completely silent.
She viewed her surroundings: A square, stone room, nothing inside but a bed and a window with the blinds shut.
A table with some very weird things that Shina had never seen before...her grades were crappy after all.
"Where am I?"
On another matter at hand, she remembered that thing had been eating her before she passed out! She pulled the covers away from her body, expecting the worst, or at best she was a robot...
But...she wasn't...instead, she was herself. It was like the entire thing hadn't even happened...
"Could it have been, a dream?" She looked down to her arm which had been ripped off, seeing it fine and well. And not mechanical...
She touched it.
It was real skin alright.
......
She rammed her wrist into the stone wall on her right as she could, seeing the crack in the wall.
"......"
......Her shoulders shook...
"OWWWW!!!!" She held her arm as she fell off the bed and rolled around on the cold stone ground.
There was probably an easier way to to tell if her arm was real or not, too bad she didn't think of it...and if her arm was real, her damaged internal organs were probably real too.

"What...happened to me back there...?" She couldn't exactly remember the entire fight. She remembered certain parts...the most brutal that is...
On the table near the bed, she saw a mirror.
Quickly standing up, she took the mirror by it's handle, staring into it's reflection. She saw herself...as normally as she could.
"Was it...a dream...?"

"Was what a dream?" Her reflection said back to her.

"Well, a little while ago, I remembered myself killing a bunch of weird looking monsters so-" She hadn't realized that she was talking to the mirror just yet.

"Oh, that was me. I'm Shinra. I live inside your body." The reflection pointed to herself, having an annoyed look on her face.

"Oh that's funny...Shina, Shinra. They kinda sound alike." She laughed nervously.

Shinra scowled, her annoyance levels growing. "...You...still haven't noticed have you...?"

"Hm?" She had a smile on her face as she stared into the mirror, it wasn't smiling back...actually, Shinra looked pissed.
"What a strange mirror."
She reached for her glasses which had been right next to the table and put them on to get a better look.

"No fucking way am I putting on those dorky glasses." Shinra responded. Apparently she hated Shina's glasses...
Noticing Shina's silence, she had to ask, "What the fuck are you doing? Just standing there and smiling like some kind of retard. It's freaking me out." The complete opposite of Shina. "Are you fucking deaf?!" She shouted out, her arms raised in a tsundere like style! "Do you want to fucking hit you until until you cry?!"

"AAAAHHHHHH!!!!" Shina screamed in surprise, never before had she seen a mirror like this. And she had never before been talked to like that by someone who looked exactly like her...
Even those stupid assholes that use her as their gofer don't talk to her like that.

"What the fuck are you doing?! Trying to make me ears bleed or something?!" She cleaned out her ear with her finger, it seemed that Shinra wasn't very ladylike.
This was made apparent as she scratched her armpit. "Shit, these really are small." Referring to her chest. Looking down at them with an annoyed face. "Why haven't these things grown since Jr. High? Where'd all that milk you drank go-"

"What is this mirror!?" She threw it away, it landed face down on the bed.

"Hey, it got dark!" Shinra exclaimed.

Shina had to get out of here somehow! She tried to pry open the door but found it locked!
She started banging on the door, shouting out: "Hello, someone, anyone out there, help me!"

"Oh, be quiet already, why don't you!" Out of a hidden compartment. A loli appeared.
Wearing the style of goth loli outfits, complete with a cool looking, black hat.
Long silver hair tied into pig-tails at the bottom of her hair.
Strands of hair over her face, completely hiding her eyes.
A black guitar hung from her back.
"Good afternoon." She spoke formally.
"Oh my, you threw away my mirror?" She noticed, skipping over to the bed and picking up the mirror. "You must be Shinra I presume, master Yorito explained about you."

"Oh yah, what did he say?" A smile on her face, an insane smile, but still a smile either way...it's not like she knew how to make herself seem happy without having herself look like a psychopath anyways.

"He said; 'Watch out for this one, Anya, she's the most blood thirsty servant I've created so far.' Is what he said."

"Why that fucking asshole....he knows exactly how to flatter a girl." She found that as a compliment, rubbing her nose while laughing...still...as insane as possible.

"You're a very scary person, Shinra." She noticed, handing the mirror back to Shina. "Don't break it...of course, if you look in any mirror, you're going to see her anyways."
She turned to the way she came in, through a secret hidden door in the wall. "If you break a mirror, it's 7 years of bad luck." She pointed out as she walked through the hidden door...
"Coming? I have answers for you."

"Oh, of course!" Taking the mirror she walked after Anya.

"Walk faster, you slow piece of shit!" Shinra shouted from the mirror...!

"Yes ma'am!" She was already scared of herself.
A new record...
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(I uploaded this because I felt like it...

I wish I had a fricken scanner. -__-
Than I don't have to wait so long to upload drawings, before I decide they look like crap...
I'm too self conscious about my drawing skills...they suck so much... )

-Part 5 of Mirror-

Shina followed Anya through the hidden passage as quickly as she could.
Eventually they ended up in a small room, which only had screens, and computer equipment in it.
"Oh wow...I've never seen so many computers."

"This is my room." Anya pointed to the sign over the door, which read: "Anya's room."
Anya reached under the mattress in the middle of the floor, which is where she must've slept.
"Here." She tossed a katana at Shina.

Of course, Shina caught it with ease.
"Why...are you giving me this?"
She was going to look at the blade, however...

"Don't unsheathe the blade!" She exclaimed with haste. "Unsheathing the blade could bring out Shinra."
She pointed to the mirror in Shina's other hand...it was quiet now. Shinra may have been sleeping...
"Yorito told me to pick the weapon best suited to you, so I chose this...you seemed like the close range type, that's probably what Shinra likes as well."
She sat in front of one of the screens, typing in some keys.
Yorito appeared in the screen, it was unknown as to where he was...the background was blackened...Anya's work of course.

"I see, you've awoken...your other half really is just like a rabid dog." A sinister smile on his face. "I suppose, you're wondering where you are?"
Yorito placed his hand over his eye.
"It's simple, you're in my home, it's a castle not too far from where you were killed. No one knows of it's existence because it lies within the woods, and a barrier protects it from being accidentally discovered by regular people, you could try to run away, but you'll probably get lost without a certain item...That Anya is in possession of."

Anya held a small pocket watch by it's chain.
"You need this to come and go as you please, otherwise you'll wind up lost."

"But, where are you than?" Shina asked out of curiosity.

"I am right behind you." Yorito spoke from behind her. As if he had appeared from the shadows...

"Ah!" Shina jumped in surprise, hiding behind Anya.

"Hey, Yorito, will this one be of any use?" Anya highly doubted her fighting capabilities if she was spooked that easily.

"Worry not, Anya, the way her other side fought was absolutely breathe taking!" He said while leaning against the wall.
At first glance, Yorito seemed to be just a regular boy, who looked around her age. Maybe a year or two older at most.
"Now than, down to business." He began, "I saved your life, therefor your life belongs to me. Simple as that."

"Eh? Saved my life? You mean..." Her memories flashed back to when she was being eaten and that thing that had fought and killed that other monster, it was almost like a monster itself.
"That was...you...?" Her eyes staring at Yorito in horror, averting her eyes away from him, as she shook, and hid behind Anya some more. "You...made me like that...?"

"Nope. I merely awakened your other half from sleeping. I sensed your grudge, so I gave you power to destroy it, afterward your soul, your body, your life, everything that is you will belong to me...that is, should you choose to follow through in your grudge."
He paced around to get a better view of Shina. "Hey, get up, we're sending you back to your home now...take that sword with you. You don't really need the mirror though. The choice is yours now, Anya's already told you, so don't unsheathe that sword if you have second thoughts...when you do, I will come to collect you." He could see the fear coming from her and sighed to himself.
"Anya, you know what to do." With that said and done, Yorito vanished in the shadows once more.

"Okay than." Anya turned to Shina and handed her a spare pocket-watch that looked exactly like hers, while at the same time, stealing the mirror.
"Like Yorito said, the choice is yours now."
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When Shina opened her eyes, expecting to see Anya. She found herself in her house, the dojo behind the house to be specific.
It was a wide, square-shaped, made of wood, scrolls on the wall. It was pretty spacious, perfect for sparring.
The thing that stood out was her family sword hanging from the northern wall.

In her hand, she held the katana and the stop-watch.
She frowned in sorrow as she looked down to the two items.
"The choice...is mine..." She said silently to herself. Staring at the sword on the wall she thought to herself;
"What would you do, Onii-chan?"
Tomorrow was a new day, so maybe she wouldn't end up unsheathing the blade after all...? "I don't...want to kill anyone..."
Her memories once again flashed to the brutal killings handed down by Shinra.
A look of shock on her face, she fell to her knees, holding onto her sides. She felt like she was going to throw up...
She shut her eyes tightly, "No...not like that...I don't want to kill anyone!" Fate can be cruel to the unsuspecting...
One choice you make can be changed within seconds...
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(In case anyone's wondering.
The chapter title of mirror isn't about the mirror in parts 4 and 5...
It has to do with how Shinra is a mirror to Shina. The complete opposite... A completely useless fact that some people probably already figured out anyways.
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-Part 6 of Mirror-

-Next day-

While in class, the teacher was lecturing.
Shina sat in the very back of class by the window. She diligently took notes because her grades were seriously slipping due to all the forced class skipping and stuff...
While writing, she noticed the symbol of the covenant on her hand. Apparently that wouldn't go away.

She had ended up bringing the katana with her, discreetly stashing it inside her locker before school started, originally she was going to leave it home, but it turned out she couldn't leave it behind because her hand kinda brought it with her on it's own if that made any sense at all.

Once the lunch bell rang, Shina placed her stuff inside her desk.
When looking out the window, she remembered something important! "Oh crap!" A 'so dead' look on her face.
Yesterday she forgot to buy the smokes for those bastard sempais...
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Of course, when she got to the back of the school building. They were beating up some freshmen for money.
"Uh, hey, guys..." The timid Shina said.

Out of the 6 of them, the biggest, stupidest, and ugliest of them noticed her.
"Whatchu want, gopher? And where are those smokes?!"

"Uh, the store was closed." Shina laughed nervously.

"Than, I guess you can't join the kendo club." He went back to beating up the freshmen.

"But...girls can't...join male kendo clubs..." The little freshmen pointed out.

"You asshole, why'd you tell her that?!" It's not that they were 'considerate' they just didn't want to lose their gopher.

"Ah screw it, since this asshole already said it, we'll come clean...you can't join the kendo club. You're too small, you're too weak, and, you're a girl. This school's kendo club is males only."

"Now that you know, go steal us some smokes."

"No." Shina stated, a sad look on her face, it seemed that the sudden realization hit her like a ton of bricks. "You guys...you said...if I did all that stuff for you, you'd let me join...I believed that. I wanted to be like my brother, that's why I tried so hard to join. And you're saying there was no point in that?"

"I'm surprised you didn't notice it sooner...your going to be our gopher for life, try and tell anyone, and we'll hurt you, try to start your own club, and we'll break it...give it up. By the way, come to the hideout today, we're gonna have you 'star' in a little video."

"What...video...?"

A smirk on his face.
"I was originally going to do this some time later, but, why wait if you already know." He took his little gang of asshole and pushed past her.
"Don't forget to look pretty, some people really like your type...oh, and this goes without saying...if you don't show up, we'll come get you. With your brother dead, there's not a single person you can count on to save you."
He left, with a satisfied laugh, his stupid friends laughed too...

Shina fell on her knees, tear droplets fell from her eyes.
"...Why...?" She asked no one in particular. "Onii-chan...why is Fate so cruel?" Of course, no answer came.

"So it seems, you have two choices...become their slave, or fulfill the contract." Shinra's voice came from an unknown place.
Taking off her glasses she could see Shinra's reflection in them.
"Fate's dealt us a cruel hand. So let's reveal our trump card." A wicked smile on Shinra's face.

The tears still flowed from Shina's eyes. But it didn't look like she had much of a choice...
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Shina stood behind the school after school. The katana in hand...staring at it while her hand rest on the handle.
Her mind flashed to those brutal killings...
"Will that happen again...?" She said to herself. But she had no more doubts, her path was the same anyways...
She unsheathed the blade...
........
It was as if nothing happened.
Shina took off her glasses, stuffing them in her bag. "Heh..." A sinister smile on her face. "So, this is what you decided...Shina..." Shinra said to herself, turning around, she started running...
She had to make one more stop before she did her job....
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"Shit, these really are small." Referring to her chest. Looking down at them with an annoyed face. "Why haven't these things grown since Jr. High? Where'd all that milk you drank go-"


you killed me with this one

how can you write this fast?? you are like a machine man...
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elanra_moonlight wrote:


"Shit, these really are small." Referring to her chest. Looking down at them with an annoyed face. "Why haven't these things grown since Jr. High? Where'd all that milk you drank go-"


you killed me with this one

how can you write this fast?? you are like a machine man...



I showed that line to someone on my side, they laughed too.

As for how I can write so fast......
Beware of when I go Blood Lust Mode. Which is the same as my Gensaku-sha Berserker mode.
I've been known to write an entire story in one day at it's 100% efficiency...the last time it happened was back in middle school.
In a way, I am like a writing machine!
Fear me...! FEAR ME I SAY!!! >8D
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Kouta_XIII wrote:


elanra_moonlight wrote:


"Shit, these really are small." Referring to her chest. Looking down at them with an annoyed face. "Why haven't these things grown since Jr. High? Where'd all that milk you drank go-"


you killed me with this one

how can you write this fast?? you are like a machine man...



I showed that line to someone on my side, they laughed too.

As for how I can write so fast......
Beware of when I go Blood Lust Mode. Which is the same as my Gensaku-sha Berserker mode.
I've been known to write an entire story in one day at it's 100% efficiency...the last time it happened was back in middle school.
In a way, I am like a writing machine!
Fear me...! FEAR ME I SAY!!! >8D


I obey you master...I do fear you

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Part 7 of Mirror

-Nearing the hideout-

This hideout, was basically just an abandoned warehouse. The kind of hideout scum like that would use. It had so many holes, and so many fatal errors, it probably should've been condemned long ago, maybe even smashed by now...
The 6 sempais were hanging around in a broken, small, doorless room, with poorly lit hallways, doing just about nothing, smoking, doing illegal stuff, things like that...

One of them looked at their watch.
"Hey dudes, I'm gonna go take a leak."

"If you're not back by the time the gopher gets here, we're starting without you."

"I got it, I got it."
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Around here, there really was no bathroom that worked...they just did their business wherever they damn well pleased...disgusting creatures, weren't they?
Also, there were more of these assholes around. Just a bunch of delinquents, hanging around with more delinquents who will probably end up in jail someday and become someone's man-wife.

He found a spot outside, behind the building.
"This place'll do." Looking around before he even started, he saw someone walking around the corner. "Whose there?" He moved around to get a better look.
He saw Shina standing there....wearing clothe that did not fit her personality at all...kinda like the punk rocker look mixed with a goth touch...

She wore a black, sleeveless shirt with a Holy cross on the front, her naval exposed.
A red, steel dog collar around her neck, as well as 3 dog-tags.
A Dark Blue jacket, also sleeveless but hooded, a black flame on the back.
She wore two belts on her waist, as well as a short, black and red checker-patterned skirt.
Two belts between her elbow and shoulder.
As well as red arm gloves, with a metal knuckle guard. Her fingers were exposed though.
She didn't wear any make-up, just some orange-tinted goggles hanging over her head.
She still wore her hair in a ponytail, but the ribbon holding it was black instead.
Red and indigo-striped knee socks, with purple boots.
She also smoked a cigarette.......just for the hell of it.

Her eyes locked on this guy.
"Oi, cherry boy, come here a moment, I want to show you something." She placed her hands on the ends of her skirt.
It was obviously Shinra in control, and not Shina.

Normally, as one of the original six who had used her as a gopher for so long, you'd think his tiny brain would've thought:
"Wait a minute, something's wrong here, I should run away!"

Instead, this is what happened.
"Okay." A sinister smile on his face.

Shinra's smile was much darker though, so much evil.
When he got close enough, Shinra took him by the ends of his shirt collar, and pushed him against the wall.
"This is kinda weird isn't it? But you like it right?" She moved her hands around, grasping his chin.
"You seem so inexperienced...no idea what to do...do you want me to show you what it's like...? I promise you, you'll never feel anything like it." She whispered sensually. Of course, she only measured up to about his collar bone....a useless fact though.
"Do you want to feel it?"

"Yes! Yes of course! But, what is it I should feel?" Wow, this idiot managed to ask a question.

"Pain." Shinra answered. Grasping his throat and lifting him off his feet.

"Wh-wh-what are you do-"

Shinra smashed his head into the wall.
Completely smashing it into pieces, leaving a bloody mess there.
"I told you, you'd never feel anything like it." She blew a kiss at the remains and stepped over the body.
She picked up the two katanas she had lain against the wall before making her appearance.
Re-strapping them on her back and waist she kicked the door to the warehouse open. "Knock, knock." She said sarcastically...
Blowing a cloud of smoke from the cigarette...

She heard someone running down the hall.
"Hello, is anyone there."
When he reached the broken door, a steel pipe in hand. He saw...no one...just a broken door, and the outside world. He took some steps forward, looking down at the broken door. Seeing a boot mark there...
"Huh?"
He saw something else...
A shadow on the ground...it's hand was moving to something on it's waist. The next moment, he heard the sound of a blade being unsheathed.
He looked up...but it was already too late...!
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elanra_moonlight wrote:


Kouta_XIII wrote:


elanra_moonlight wrote:


"Shit, these really are small." Referring to her chest. Looking down at them with an annoyed face. "Why haven't these things grown since Jr. High? Where'd all that milk you drank go-"


you killed me with this one

how can you write this fast?? you are like a machine man...



I showed that line to someone on my side, they laughed too.

As for how I can write so fast......
Beware of when I go Blood Lust Mode. Which is the same as my Gensaku-sha Berserker mode.
I've been known to write an entire story in one day at it's 100% efficiency...the last time it happened was back in middle school.
In a way, I am like a writing machine!
Fear me...! FEAR ME I SAY!!! >8D


I obey you master...I do fear you




Now, read and behold...MORE OF MY WRITING POWAHS!!! >8D
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man that was very vivid...your decription is improving let me say. I could see her like she was in front of me. and so did the environment...I really liked it.
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Hopefully, I'll be able to do more of the same.
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-Part 8 of Mirror-

"Hey, does it seem quiet?" Big stupid asshole number 3 spoke out as he leaned against the wall.

"And where'd that idiot go? Don't tell me he took one of the girls from the shed?" Idiot number 4 questioned.

"Hey you're right." Idiot leader said. He pointed to idiot 3 and 4. "Go out and check around..."

Idiot number 4 looked outside the door, "Nothing here, just the same poorly lit hallways, doorways with no doors, weird blood stains, and a bunch of holes in the wall....you know, maybe we should clean up a bit?"

"Idea denied." Idiot leader stated, drinking a beer. "Find your friend, if Gopher doesn't arrive soon we're gonna look for her ourselves."

"Right boss." The two of them left the room...

"Fucking morons, everyone." He drank more beer...
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"Hey, do you ever wonder why we even hang out here?" Idiot number 3 questioned as he followed behind number 4.

"Because, that's what the boss said."

"Why do we always do everything he says?"

"Because he's the boss."

"Yah, but couldn't we have picked a better place to hang out, I always feel like there's something right behind me...and look, all I got is my fists. What's that gonna do against a psychotic killer?! I might as well try to throw a piece of paper-fuck!!!" He was grabbed and pulled into a room.

The remaining idiot stopped.
"Paper fuck?" He turned around, "Dude you have some serious-hey where'd you go?"

"OMG NO!!! AHHHH!!! AHHHH!!!!" He screamed in a high pitched voice. "Ah-" .....It was silent after a slicing sound.

"....okay...I'm gonna run away now." Just when he was about to run the fuck away, a hand grasped his shirt. "...Please kill me quickly..."

"No can do." Shinra taunted, a sadistic smile on her face...
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"Where the hell are they?" Idiot leader was getting irritated now. "Alright, lets go look for them." Standing up from his seat, he saw that his two henchmen were passed out from one too many beers.
"Psh, fine, I'll do it myself." Kicking the one nearest to him hard in the side as he stepped outside...
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Quickly after leaving he noticed, there weren't as many people around as usual.
"Hm, this place really IS pretty creepy at night."
When looking down the four corner halls, he noticed at the end of the hallway was Shina. Standing there with a bloody sword in hand. Her clothe had been stained in blood...
Her eyes turned to the idiot leader. A smile on her face...

"Gopher, what the hell are you doing with that horror-styled clothing...doesn't matter, you're late so lets just get this over with." He walked towards Shina.

She laughed and skipped down a different hall, going out of sight.

"Hey, trying to run away are you-" As he ran after her, looking down the hallway she went down he saw nothing but a sea of blood. On the ground, the walls, the ceiling, severed body parts everywhere...
At the end of the hallway, where the lights were shadowed.
A silhouetted Shinra stood, a dark smile on her face.
The next moment, she disappeared into the darkness.

"What the hell...is this...?" Beads of sweat dripping from his temple. A terrified look on his face, the shaking of his body was proof of his fear.

He heard the sounds of screams back from the main room.
Like the idiot he was, he rushed back there...
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Shinra stood over the chopped up corpses of the two people she had just murdered.
Holding up one of them by the neck, against the wall, half their body had been cut in half leaving a trail of blood on the wall to the ground.
Fresh blood dripped from Shinra's blade, a smile on her face as she turned to the idiot leader. Dropping the one she just killed...
She laughed an insane laugh.

"You...stupid bitch!!!" He had a gun in his pants, pulling it out he took aim at Shinra.
BANG x 12.
He unloaded the entire cartridge on Shinra.

Shinra didn't even try to dodge, she just stood against the wall as the bullets entered her body and bled.
"Wow, you've got guts cherry boy..." She pushed off from the wall, it was like the bullets in her body didn't even affect her. "To fire a gun at me rather than run away. I respect that, but it won't change anything. So, what're you going to do, try and fight me, or run?" She unsheathed her second blade from over her back.
"Don't disappoint me, cherry boy."

"AAAAHHHH!!!" He ran away like the coward he truly was.

"....." This caused Shinra to have anger, causing a disgusted look on her face. "So your not a worthy enemy after all." She placed her blade's tip against the wall.
"Too fucking bad, I'll see what color your blood is anyways!" She sliced the wall in half, stepping through the big hole she created she stood in front of him.
"Come on, fight me! Fight me! Fight me!" She shouted as she advanced on him.
Dashing forward, she sliced off his arm and leg.
Seeing him writhe in pain on the ground, she tilted her head in confusion. "Your the one whose been threatening my other half all this time?"

"Please, save me! Call an ambulance!" He begged, grabbing onto Shinra's knee-sock. "Please, I beg you!"

Shinra blew out smoke, the disgusted and angry look on her face increasing.
She stepped on his hand, hearing the cracking of the bone. "Come on, you and your friends weren't even worth a challenge!"
She held her blades in an L formation. With one quick sweep, she sliced off his remaining limbs...the screams becoming louder.
"Oh shut up!" She stuck the blade into his mouth and cut out his tongue! Now there were just words she didn't understand...
She turned her back and sheathed her blades. "You don't deserve a proper burial...how about, I give you a taste of the Hellfire you'll be seeing." Taking the cigarette she tossed it to on the couch in the room she just came from, she watched as smoke started coming from it...and in no time it was already on fire, everything else followed soon.

"Wow, didn't expect it to burst into flames that quickly." Shinra whistled, turning her back she started walking.
Hearing the inaudible sounds of the person she just cut down, she looked back with an insane smile.
"I bet you're saying: "you can't just leave me here?!" well, I don't see a single fucking soul trying to stop me so...bye-bye, cherry boy...have fun burning in Hell." With those words complete she went on her way.
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By now the building was already engulfed in a raging hellfire.
Shinra took her time walking because she was pretty much invulnerable.
Staring at the exit engulfed in flames, she looked around, seeing no other way out.
"A life of violence it seems...I'm already fucking loving it."
The entire burning building collapsed all around her........
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-The next day-

At school, where those 6 assholes were SUPPOSED to attend class, there was no one sitting there.
It was announced that they had burned to death.
Shina passed by their class, but only because it was on the way to the roof.
When ascending the stairs, she saw the mirror on the wall. She saw her own reflection, but at the same time, it wasn't...
With a sad face, she looked down to the mark of the covenant on her hand.
"Hey...Onii-chan...don't bother waiting for me in the afterlife." Because her soul belonged to Yorito now....that was the deal after all...

(I don't like this part much...
Because I couldn't concentrate...there was a fucking asshole screaming in my ear the whole time.
*Pissed off.*)
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And that's the end of the first chapter.
Not sure when the 2nd chapter will show up...
Expect to see more Shinra, and a new character...
I'm still deciding on his weapon and skills...
So far, I wanted him to be a long range attacker who uses his mind, since Shinra already covers close range, speed, and power.
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WOW!!!!! I didn't come here for just a little bit and you've already written so much!!!!! And I JUST LUV THE BLOOD AND GORE!!!! This story is truely worthy of my time!!! Your description is getting better and so is varying personalities. It's a very interesting story. Wonder if Shina would disappear or something because Shinra took over completely or maybe vise versa.

Does Shin(r)a become immortal? Does she even age anymore? Does she gain powers other then physical improvement and not being able to be killed easily if at all? Friends? Is there going to be others the same as her later on? Will someone discover who/what she is? What'll happen to her in the end?

These are some questions that I look forward to finding out later on in the story ^_^
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Thanks dudett, that means a lot to me.
I'll answer those questions in the story, as soon as I can.

Hell, the only thing keeping me alive right now is the compliments people give my stories.
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