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Chapter 1 - Submittion
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Hi fellow writers, please submit your chapter 1 here.

Please conduct these mini checks before you submit:

1) Make sure you keep to the 5000 words limit for the chapter. Too much words will lead to disqualifications.

2) Make sure your grammar and spelling is ok. Little mistakes are fine, but take note that we are not your editors. And people who rate and vote for u need to be able to understand what you wrote.

3) Only subtle foul langauge is allowed, else we will delete it for you, or you will be disqualified.

4) No pornography. Any such entries will be disqualified immediately.

5) Please remember to be an ettiquete writer. If any entries that are found to be offensive, that entry will be automatically disaqualified.

Optional(s):

1) Chapter Title: we'll use the one u provide, else if there is none, we'll decide one for you.


Please follow these rules to ensure a happy time for everyone here! *okies, now i sound like a shopping mall announcer....*

Time limit: 1 month. so the deadline is 1 mth from this post. 7th October 2008.

Happy writing! :D

EDIT: WORD limit from 5000 to limitless.
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5000 words? isnt that short?.. lol.. because when I write its like non stopping..
Posted 9/7/08
i an't 2 happy about rule number 4 i would like that rule to be taken down
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chapter 1 part 1
In the great city of london two men are standing faceing each other in a dark ally way, Both men are wearing leather jackets and appear to be perpareing them selfs for a fight. The man wearing a black leather jacket with black spiky hair begins to smirk as he pulls out a knife. The man standing oppisite him wearing a brown leather jacket and long brown hair isn't to phased by the other man and reaches 4 a bottle of beer and opens it. " so wat u plan on doing with that knife ?" asks the man in the brown leather jacket as he opens his bottle of bear and begins drinking it. The man in the black leather jacket begins to laugh " i plan on cutting your heart out with it" says the man with the black leather jacket as he laughs hestercally.

The man in the brown leather jacket isn't to bothered by the words and remains cool as he takes his sweet time to finish off his drink " WHY YOU SON OF A BITCH I WILL KILL U 4 BEING SO COCKY" says the man as he begins to run in the direction of the other man with the intent to kill him. The man with the brown leather jacket sees him comeing and moves to the side avoiding the incomeing knife attack. The man in the black leather jacket grows even more angry at the fact that the other man was able to avoid his attack with ease and was able to do so with a cool expression on his face.


The man in the brown leather then begins to repeatedly attack the other man but the other man was able to dodge all of the attacks as if they were nothing. He then throws a right hand hitting the man in the black leather on the face and knocking him down "TSK i have u out classed why don't u give it up and go on home" says the man in the brown leather jacket and long hair.
" I WON'T STOP U FOOL U MESSED WITH ME AND U R GONNA PAY" says the other man in a black leather jacket


The man with the long brown hair then decides to finish him off and hits the bottle on the wall which splits it in half " i'm way out of your league u sure u wanna go through with this? " says the man as he holds up the sharp end of the broken bottle." HELL YEAH U R SO GONNA DIE" says the man in the black leather. Then the man with the brown hair begins to move forward for the final blow " so long amigo" says the man as he goes in 4 the final attack. The man in the black leather then reaches in his inside pocket and gets out a fire arm which stops the other one in his tracks " U AN'T SO TOUGH ARE YOU?" says the man in the black leather as he waste no time and shoots at the man with the brown leather right in the chest


to be continued chapter 1 part 2 comeing soon
Posted 9/8/08

lockon101 wrote:

i an't 2 happy about rule number 4 i would like that rule to be taken down


Well no hardcore....an you should write down then that only people who ar 18 should read it! Thats so you! lols
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miuanna wrote:


lockon101 wrote:

i an't 2 happy about rule number 4 i would like that rule to be taken down


Well no hardcore....an you should write down then that only people who ar 18 should read it! Thats so you! lols


lockon, we are not going to take it down!!! give up that thought! be reader friendly!
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just wanted to ask.. why dont you put some names? I mean its a little confusing.. ^_^ unless you have plan for it.. sorry for asking...

but wow it starts off with climax ^_^
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i dont agree on rule no.4 too...is there any chance we can put something sexy but restricted to certain level?
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i dont agree on rule no.4 too...is there any chance we can put something sexy but restricted to certain level?


well they are saying limit it. well I get the point of you guys wanting to put it because well.. from my point of view, its pretty normal to have passionate love when it comes to world end.. but that must be limited because maybe some young people will read this and stuff.. and it should appear proper.. not in a malicious way ^_^ I dont know the limits they are setting though.. and as much as possible, rather than concentrating on those stuff, be sure that you have a good story plot first.. because if your story wasn't chosen, it'll be useless.. if you get what I mean..
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Got. it sweaty. of course i wont put things that slides in and out in my story. well, i'm not an active user....perhaps just within this months. not sure i can active again in next month.
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Iijima88 wrote:

Got. it sweaty. of course i wont put things that slides in and out in my story. well, i'm not an active user....perhaps just within this months. not sure i can active again in next month.


well if you just can ^_^ because the more idea the better ^_^
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i've got inspiration but no time to do the story...damn
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i've got inspiration but no time to do the story...damn


does that means u lazy? be franks pls. hahaha. click!
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SealedTime wrote:

i've got inspiration but no time to do the story...damn


does that means u lazy? be franks pls. hahaha. click!


hey~!!! well nt that im lazy...my exams are coming so i've gotta study ...
Posted 9/9/08

jiggs_91290141 wrote:



just wanted to ask.. why dont you put some names? I mean its a little confusing.. ^_^ unless you have plan for it.. sorry for asking...

but wow it starts off with climax ^_^



yeah not given them names is confuseing i confused my self as i was writeing it but they will have there names in the nxt post so wat do u have planned 4 your chapter if u r gonna do 1
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