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Minna, it's my first time to write a fanfic here....i just decided to post it here coz im really bored....and hope i can finish this fanfic coz i get bored easily...LOL


~~THE SWEETEST DISEASE~~



how can three individuals become true great friends?......



CHAPTER ONE: "she's a BAKA"



Characters:
YAMADA RYOSUKE - he's an ordinary junior HS. he hates boorish girls like YUI. he is the mortal enemy of MAKI...

NAKAJIMA YUTO - the best buddy of yama~chan. he is a happy-go-lucky person.

KUMIKO MAKI - hsj9392 she is pretty and kinda boyish. she gets easily irritated. she wears fishnet stockings instead of knee socks. she is the mortal enemy of YAMADA.

SARUWATARI YUI - lo0ol123 && deen22 a boorish girl and the bff of MIKA. she is totally obsessed with yama~chan

NAGASAWA MIKA - vanialestari she is a shy girl but she is trying her best to conquer her shyness because of YUTO. she likes YUTO btw

Mr. and Mrs. Yamada - the parents of yama~chan

SENSEI


It was the last day of summer vacation. Ryosuke woke up and rubbed his eyes. He knew it was the last day of FUN. and tomorrow is the comeback to school which sucks. He scratched his head and frowned.He dislike school, homeworks, and teachers...and thinking about it makes him feel so sad. "crap!" he thought frowning. He got up and went straight to the fridge. He noticed a piece of small note from her ka-chan saying:

ryosuke, dont forget to deliver the devil's food cake to moto-san^^
[note: devil's food cake is a rich dark chocolate cake]

Ryosuke's mom is a baker and his father is working abroad. Ryosuke sighed. "ERRAND!" he said to himself annoyed. He crumpled the piece of small note and threw it in the trash bin. He took the cake and rode his skateboard to deliver the cake. He was driving smoothly. Until, out of nowhere, a girl crossed the street. Ryosuke didn't notice and he almost hit the girl. The girl was pretty though kinda bit scary.

gal: *glared* you almost hit me!
Ryosuke: I didn't notice you! you crossed the street out of nowhere!
gal: you reckless little baka!
Ryosuke: what?!? little baka?
gal: baka.
Ryosuke: call me "baka"....ONE MORE TIME.
gal: you already heard it...baka:w00t:

Ryosuke lost his temper.His mind went blank.And he threw the cake on the girls face.

gal:*shocked* BAKA~!!!! what have you done!
Ryosuke: who's the baka now?

Ryosuke left the gal. And went back to his home.

gal: *mad* MATTE MATTE~! you BAKA~! I WILL HUNT YOUR PUNK ASS DOWN~!


in the evening, Ryosuke's mom finally arrived.

Mrs. Yamada: where's the payment for the cake?
Ryosuke: *gulped* gomen...ka-chan.
Mrs. Yamada: nande? doshite? what happened?
Ryosuke: i almost hit a girl. and she was very mad. she called me baka. i lost my temper. and my mind went blank. i threw the cake on her face.
Mrs. Yamada: WHAT?!? what have you done? Oh god, ryosuke~! stop acting like a KID!
Ryosuke: gomen *bows* and im not acting like a kid. ew.
Mrs. Yamada: You always apologize and yet you never changed. First, i caught you eating the cake i baked for your cousin and Now, you threw the cake on a girls's face? NANDE KUSO~!
Ryosuke: i promise not to do it again ka~chan.
Mrs. Yamada: oh please ryosuke. dont make a promise. DO IT! now, go to your room and prepare your things for school.
Ryosuke: hai

The next day:
Ryosuke got up and prepared for school. He went to school using his skateboard. Upon arriving in the classroom, He saw Yuto.

Ryosuke: YUTO!!!!!
Yuto: *turned to face ryosuke* yama-chan!
Ryosuke: how have you been?
Yuto: im FINE....summer is cool. we went to shibuya~!
Ryosuke: MAJIDE? i wanna go there too.
Yuto: oi, yama-chan...have you heard about the big news?
Ryosuke: BIG NEWS?
Yuto: yea. we have a new classmate.and i heard she's kirei and kawaii
Ryosuke: eh?
Yuto: oh i forgot. you hate ladies...
Ryosuke: i dun hate them. i just dislike some of them like my mom.
Yuto: but im sure..you'll gonna love this girl..
Ryosuke: oh common, yuto...

All of a sudden, two girls named "SAWATARI YUI && NAGASAWA MIKA" interrupted. Sawatari Yui is crushing on ryosuke. she is a very boorish girl. and everybody hates her except for her best friend named Nagasawa Mika who is crushing on Yuto.Nagasawa Mika is a
shy girl but she is trying her best to conquer it.

Yui: YAMADA-KUN!

Ryosuke: crap! the fishwives are here. [note: fishwife is an offensive term for a woman who is regarded as loud-voiced and lacking in manners]

----Yuto giggled----
Yuto: oh spooky girls.
Yui: Yamada-kun! how was your vacation?!?
Yamada: im fine.
Yui: I missed you ne~!
Ryosuke didn't respond.
Yui: yamada-kun?!?
on the other hand....
Mika: yutoo-kuun,hoow are you ne?
Yuto: im fine. how are you?
Mika: *blushed* iii aaaam fiiiine too...


The sensei arrived and all the students went directly to their proper seats. All the students were excited for the new classmate except for Ryosuke.

Sensei: Minna, i would like you to meet your new classmate, KUMIKO MAKI.

the girl named "KUMIKO MAKI" showed up. and all the guys went soo hyper except for ryosuke. she was wearing her uniform but instead of knee socks. she was wearing fishnet stockings. Ryosuke was shocked...

Ryosuke: yuto! that's our new classmate?
Yuto: yea...lovely eh?
Ryosuke: eh? she' s a BAKA....

Ryosuke's voice was too loud and the whole class heard what he said...the whole class stared at him

Sensei: yamada-kun. please stand up.
Ryosuke: *stood up* gomen sensei.

The girl was glaring at him.

Sensei: baka?
Ryosuke: gomen sensei..*bowed*
Sensei: now, please sit down.
Ryosuke: hai...
Sensei: class, i want you to treat maki-chan as your friend && i dun wanna hear that word again, yamada-kun. now, maki-chan. you can introduce yourself.

the girl named maki stood infront of the class.

maki: ohayo minna~! kumiko maki desu. dozo yoroshiku! *bowed*
sensei: okay maki-chan. you can sit next to yamada-kun.
maki: hai sensei.

Ryosuke was frowning.

Ryosuke: *thought* ohh...im gonna sit next to a BAKA...CRAP!

Maki walked straight to her seat. All the students were staring at her mostly the BOYS except for yamada.

----RECESS TIME-----

all the students went outside.
Yuto: oi yama-chan.you called her baka. why?
Yamada: oh just forget about it.
Yuto: oh come on. tell me.
Yamada: it's a long story. and i dun want to recall it
YutO: iya~! you have an issue?
Yamada: BAKA! issue? what's that? like in mags?
Yuto: BAKAYARO~!
yamada: okay stop it. yesterday, i almost hit her.
she was so mad and she was yelling @ me. she called me BAKA.i lost my temper and i threw the cake on her face.
Yuto: MAJIDE? she's a girl. *shocked*
Yamada: oh come on. she doesn't act like one. and stop acting like a gentleman, yuto.
Yuto: well, i am a gentleman. not like you.EWWWWW
yamada: enough with this conversation. im starving. let's go eat.


i know it's kinda stupid..lol..gomen..hope you like it...
okay....wait for the CHAPTER TWO...hehe
arigato for reading~!!! love lots<33333cheeky-chan
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KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~
cheekychan!!!ur fic!!!waaaaaaaaaa
ahahaha^^
ILOVEIT...
whn will u post the next part????hehehe
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waa~~
new FANFIC .
love it soo much !!
next part next part !!
hehe ..
can't wait to read the next part ~~
hehe .
anyway , can i be the char of ur fanfic ?
if yess , since i love yuto so much , nagasawa mikaa please !! (:(:
it's okiess if i can't ..
xDD
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weeeee!!! cheeky-chaaan! Ur fic! ish Wonderful!!! XD haha! i'll be waiting for the next chap!! XD
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KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! xD
HUUUUUUUUUUUUH? THREW A CAKE!! ON HER FACE!!!!???
KYAAAAAAAA!!! I WONDER WHAT THE GIRL FEELINGS ? xD HAHAHAHA!
IT'S SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OMG xD I MEAN KAKOI KAKOI KAKKOI KAKKOI!!! LOOOOOOL
<<<<BAKANISHI ILNESS

i love it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!! <333
kekekekeke~ demo MEAN RYO-CHAN xD

CAN'T WAIT
4 THE NEXT~!
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vanialestari wrote:

waa~~
new FANFIC .
love it soo much !!
next part next part !!
hehe ..
can't wait to read the next part ~~
hehe .
anyway , can i be the char of ur fanfic ?
if yess , since i love yuto so much , nagasawa mikaa please !! (:(:
it's okiess if i can't ..
xDD



wah..ofcourse..you can be nagasawa mika..hehehe..im glad you loved it...hehehe^^
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arigato naa for all your wonderful
posts...*bows*

chapter two will be post soon...hehehe^^
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hahha great fic!!!!!
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OMgosh!!
may i be part of this?? if yes..Maki pls??
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WOW!!
it's so cute!!
I'm loving it!!
keep it up!! xDD
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KYAAAAA!! I WANT CHARR\ECTER TOOOOOOOOOO!! T.T
SARUWATARI YUI PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ~ xD
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kyaaa kawai kawai!!

can i be SARUWATARI YUI?? since daiki isnt here

hahaha!! domo~
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lo0ol123 wrote: KYAAAAA!! I WANT CHARR\ECTER TOOOOOOOOOO!! T.T
SARUWATARI YUI PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ~ xD



deen22 wrote: kyaaa kawai kawai!!

can i be SARUWATARI YUI?? since daiki isnt here

hahaha!! domo~


waaahhh..both of you wants to be yui?!? ahehehe^^
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OMgosh!!
may i be part of this?? if yes..Maki pls??


waaaa~! no problem..hehe..ofcourse you can
and thanks for liking the fanfic..lol..
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lo0ol123 wrote:

KYAAAAA!! I WANT CHARR\ECTER TOOOOOOOOOO!! T.T
SARUWATARI YUI PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ~ xD


waaa~ deen22 wants to be Yui to0...im confused with the both of you...umm,...i think...im gonna make you both as YUI...lol
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