Post Reply Dreaming of "Ends"
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Posted 9/11/08 , edited 9/11/08
This is the first time I've attempted writing in a long time... so please bear with me. Like always. I think Zodiac went down the drain... so here's my newest creation. :D

xxx

First Person POV

Dreams are the most interesting things I've ever heard of. That's right. Heard of. I'll bet you're questioning my choice of words right about now. Don't worry, I'm saying it correctly. Now I'll bet you're asking WHY I phrased it like that. Well, it's actually quite simple.

I've never had a dream before.

I don't know why. But I WANT to know. It's really frustrating for me. I've become quite jealous of sitting by while people talk about the amazingly random things they see when they close their eyes at night... some talk about how it was just plain amazing.

It feels like I'm missing out on damn near half of life's pleasures. It annoys me. I'm probably having a dream when I go to sleep, but I forget it the moment I wake up, leaving a little void of darkness in my memories. Then I spend the whole morning and damn near half the day wondering what I dreamt about.

Of course, I realized that it was becoming a bad habit... my grades dropped dramatically as a result of all that daydreaming. My social life also took a nose-dive because, apparently, I was so unresponsive, people thought I was half-dead, resulting in me somehow ending up all alone one lunch period.

So I never took much of an interest in my little personal anomaly, hoping to get my life straight... but.... life comes at you fast. Real fast. Faster than you can say "hamburger". Even faster than you can say-- ugh. Wait. Getting off topic.

So! About how life comes at you fast. It really does. Because today, that horrible little habit came back with the nice big infamous lightbulb of inspiration, accompanied by a person I've never met before.

"Have you ever considered the fact... that YOU are the one responsible for forgetting your dreams?"

... yeah. Old habits die hard. And this one? Well, I don't think it dies at all. Instead, if shot out of the ground I buried it in like a freaking daisy and even brought a friend back with it. I suppose this all needs some explaining, though... I can't tell you what happens next until you know what happened waaay in the beginning.... let's say.... yesterday?

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Yesterday comes tomorrow. That's all I'm writing for now. Thoughts? Crit? Ideas? Complaints?
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Posted 9/12/08
waaaa loved it! please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Posted 9/12/08
................where did the action go??? TT_TT. It's got the emotional and the basics for info down but I DEMAND MY SHARE OF ACTION!!!!!! .................yeah, that's all I'ma say for now since there's no way you can add descriptions there but like Kyuu would say, don't forget to add description later on. Since he's not online much, I'm saying it for him.

I'm not reading it if the next few posts are boring. I dun like to read and have to wait for boring stories. Yeah, this is pretty damned boring. But still decent I guess. GIMME THE INTERESTING STUFF!!!!!!!!
Posted 9/14/08
.... you dodged the bullet again, baka ookami. Lucky you. Now, your editor demands the next part. Tomorrow is waaaay past.
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