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I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; Every story has a beginning and an end. For Amu and Ikuto, the beginning was not where they thought it was. For a slave girl in ancient Egypt and the god she serves, the end is something they never could have imagined...

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

EDIT- After talking to some people here, I decided to go with keeping this story in canonverse. ^^ I'm still working out a lot of detials, though...


Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

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Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T
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Plunny 1:


Plunny 2:
Seems interesting and I don't even like Amuto. :P

Plunny 3:
If it has a lot of pairings, yay! Make random pairings like Yaya and Kairi.

I didn't read the samples, though.
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AnaMaree wrote:

Plunny 1:


Plunny 2:
Seems interesting and I don't even like Amuto. :P

Plunny 3:
If it has a lot of pairings, yay! Make random pairings like Yaya and Kairi.

I didn't read the samples, though.


#1- Is that good or bad?

#2- That's nice to hear! The best judges of a story are ones who look at things objectively. I'd take someone who likes a story for it's story over someone who just reads it for the pairing any day of the week.

#3 XDDD I think i'm having the most fun with Magick Heart because of all the pairings, really. ^^ I think a little conflict in a story is nice every now and then... Yaya/Kairi? I was planning on having something like that, kinda... Mostly onesided on Yaya's part, though, since I have plans for Kairi...

Thank you for the feedback! 'glomps AnaMarie' And if you get the time, plase look at the samples too! I promise they're nothing too painful, I've had a lot of experience writing and I'd like to think I have a talent for it, since it's one of my many passions...
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WingsofMorphius wrote:


AnaMaree wrote:

Plunny 1:


Plunny 2:
Seems interesting and I don't even like Amuto. :P

Plunny 3:
If it has a lot of pairings, yay! Make random pairings like Yaya and Kairi.

I didn't read the samples, though.


#1- Is that good or bad?

#2- That's nice to hear! The best judges of a story are ones who look at things objectively. I'd take someone who likes a story for it's story over someone who just reads it for the pairing any day of the week.

#3 XDDD I think i'm having the most fun with Magick Heart because of all the pairings, really. ^^ I think a little conflict in a story is nice every now and then... Yaya/Kairi? I was planning on having something like that, kinda... Mostly onesided on Yaya's part, though, since I have plans for Kairi...

Thank you for the feedback! 'glomps AnaMarie' And if you get the time, plase look at the samples too! I promise they're nothing too painful, I've had a lot of experience writing and I'd like to think I have a talent for it, since it's one of my many passions...


Lol Plunny 1 was kinda strange is all.

I'll read the Plunny 2 sample now.

As for Plunny 3, someone paired ami with nobuki. Anything is possible. ^^
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lol I just skimmed through Plunny 2. The ending is just like something they would do. XD
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AnaMaree wrote:


WingsofMorphius wrote:


AnaMaree wrote:

Plunny 1:


Plunny 2:
Seems interesting and I don't even like Amuto. :P

Plunny 3:
If it has a lot of pairings, yay! Make random pairings like Yaya and Kairi.

I didn't read the samples, though.


#1- Is that good or bad?

#2- That's nice to hear! The best judges of a story are ones who look at things objectively. I'd take someone who likes a story for it's story over someone who just reads it for the pairing any day of the week.

#3 XDDD I think i'm having the most fun with Magick Heart because of all the pairings, really. ^^ I think a little conflict in a story is nice every now and then... Yaya/Kairi? I was planning on having something like that, kinda... Mostly onesided on Yaya's part, though, since I have plans for Kairi...

Thank you for the feedback! 'glomps AnaMarie' And if you get the time, plase look at the samples too! I promise they're nothing too painful, I've had a lot of experience writing and I'd like to think I have a talent for it, since it's one of my many passions...


Lol Plunny 1 was kinda strange is all.

I'll read the Plunny 2 sample now.

As for Plunny 3, someone paired ami with nobuki. Anything is possible. ^^


Yeah, but the thought of Kitty Amu toturing Ikuto just wouldn't leave me alone. 'laughs weakly'

Anything is possible, but it's a bit more practical to think about what's probable. ^^ I'll have a lot of pairings, but I won't stray too far from canon in that one, which means the focus is gonna be the pairings shown regularly in the anime.
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AnaMaree wrote:

lol I just skimmed through Plunny 2. The ending is just like something they would do. XD


Ikuto always seems to be ruining the moment like that...
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WingsofMorphius wrote:

I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; -curently unavailable (see below)-

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

Sample;


Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T


i like them all..

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WingsofMorphius wrote:

I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; -curently unavailable (see below)-

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

Sample;


Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T





Overall, I love how much creativity and description you put in all three stories. The fact that someone would actually spend their time to write something such as this truly is phenomenal. You got some good potential..if I could I would've drawn this out a long time ago, and I'm not just saying that....

Plunny 1: It made me laugh so hard. Never in my life I would've thought that Amu would act as "innocent" as our friend Ikuto would....It simply is a way of showing what would happen when the tables are turned, I love that...

Plunny 2: This is the real definition of romance. The immortal god finds power inside of a young slave, and develops more than he ever thought it would be...In my opinion, I thought of it actually ironic. And I didn't read it just because of Amuto, if it was Tadase and Amu, it still would've been just as great.

Plunny 3: The one I love the most. There is nothing better than having a mixture of romance, drama, envy and magic all from one protoganist. It truly is the most descriptive. The fact that both East and West families are looking for the same treasure really is fantastic. it also reminds me more into a Romeo and Juliet story, except there is more than one person after our fair Maiden...

So, that is my opinion on these stories. if you think I went a little too far, please let me know. I cannot wait for any of these stories to develop more and more. Also, could you tell me what a AU/Canon ment? (ugh, I sound like a teacher )

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WingsofMorphius wrote:

I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; -curently unavailable (see below)-

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

Sample;


Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T





Overall, I love how much creativity and description you put in all three stories. The fact that someone would actually spend their time to write something such as this truly is phenomenal. You got some good potential..if I could I would've drawn this out a long time ago, and I'm not just saying that....

Plunny 1: It made me laugh so hard. Never in my life I would've thought that Amu would act as "innocent" as our friend Ikuto would....It simply is a way of showing what would happen when the tables are turned, I love that...

Plunny 2: This is the real definition of romance. The immortal god finds power inside of a young slave, and develops more than he ever thought it would be...In my opinion, I thought of it actually ironic. And I didn't read it just because of Amuto, if it was Tadase and Amu, it still would've been just as great.

Plunny 3: The one I love the most. There is nothing better than having a mixture of romance, drama, envy and magic all from one protoganist. It truly is the most descriptive. The fact that both East and West families are looking for the same treasure really is fantastic. it also reminds me more into a Romeo and Juliet story, except there is more than one person after our fair Maiden...

So, that is my opinion on these stories. if you think I went a little too far, please let me know. I cannot wait for any of these stories to develop more and more. Also, could you tell me what a AU/Canon ment? (ugh, I sound like a teacher )



Even more ironically with Plunny 2, Tadase is a king. (At least he thinks so.)
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But that's one of the things i like about him...btw, do these stories continue, or just stop here since they are plunnies, and which one do u like?
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WingsofMorphius wrote:

I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; -curently unavailable (see below)-

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

Sample;


Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T





Overall, I love how much creativity and description you put in all three stories. The fact that someone would actually spend their time to write something such as this truly is phenomenal. You got some good potential..if I could I would've drawn this out a long time ago, and I'm not just saying that....

Plunny 1: It made me laugh so hard. Never in my life I would've thought that Amu would act as "innocent" as our friend Ikuto would....It simply is a way of showing what would happen when the tables are turned, I love that...

Plunny 2: This is the real definition of romance. The immortal god finds power inside of a young slave, and develops more than he ever thought it would be...In my opinion, I thought of it actually ironic. And I didn't read it just because of Amuto, if it was Tadase and Amu, it still would've been just as great.

Plunny 3: The one I love the most. There is nothing better than having a mixture of romance, drama, envy and magic all from one protoganist. It truly is the most descriptive. The fact that both East and West families are looking for the same treasure really is fantastic. it also reminds me more into a Romeo and Juliet story, except there is more than one person after our fair Maiden...

So, that is my opinion on these stories. if you think I went a little too far, please let me know. I cannot wait for any of these stories to develop more and more. Also, could you tell me what a AU/Canon ment? (ugh, I sound like a teacher )



^^ Thank you! I believe it's very important to plan your stories out carefully, since it helps keep you from getting stuck on what to write next. I've been seriously considering writing as a profession for a while, so fanfictions make for excellent practice. Besides, it's fun to write about something you love. ^^

1; XD More then romance, I've always had a great fondness for humor. I always love to hear that I made someone laugh, so thanks! ^^ Yeah, the point of this one is for Amu to be acting mostly on feline instincts, since she's not completely aware that she's actually human, so in that sense her actions really -are- innocent. And Ikuto definately needs a taste of his own medicine every now and then... XDDDDD

2; Eh, really? I didn't even realize I made this one that romantic until you pointed it out... ^///^ Like I said, this is the one that I've planned out the least, since I'm stuck on the AU vs Canon thing, but it was still something I wanted to try since, as I mentioned in the synposis, I made the big mistake of listening to Walk Like An Egyptian while contemplating Amuto. That got me thinking about how Egyptians worshipped Cats, which got me on the Cat God Ikuto thread and everything just kinda went downhill after that. At first, I was thinking about making Amu the Pharoh's youngest daughter, but I decided not to since the Pharohs were, according to Egyptain mythology, Human Gods who would accend to full Godship after their deaths (At least, I think that's how it went... it's been a while since I read up on my Egyptian mythology...) And I wanted that stigma of mortality to come between Amu and Ikuto here. I'm a sucker for Forbidden Love. I blame my mom, she made me watch one too many Soap Operas as a kid...

3; To be honest, I'm most attached to this one, too. ^^ I love writing in dept plots where the character changes and grows as the story progresses, and that's exactly what this story is shaping up to be. One of the things that disappointed me about Shugo Chara is the fact that Amu just kinda knew exactly what to say and do almost right off the bat as far as her transformatoins and everything were concerned. I believe it's better when a character has to learn about their power and work hard to control it, since that forces them to learn more about themselves and their own potential. Amu kinda got that after Miki scolded her for wanting to use a Chara Change for the snow/sand art competition, but even now it feels like that wasn't explored as deeply as it should've been. ^^ I love romantic conflict too, but I also believe love is something that you earn, not win, so I'm gonna play it safe with the rivalries between the guys and everything.

'Too far?' Nonsense! This is feedback, my dear, which is exactly what I was looking for! You told me what you liked, and gave me a little insight on what i have to work on, and for that I thank you a million times over! 'glomps'

Canon- A story based in the same universe that the original story is in, meaning tha the whole Shugo Chara, Chara Nari and Chara Change concepts are still the same in the fanfic as they are in the anime or manga. People also refer to Canon couples, which are couples that are widely acknowleged in the anime or manga. Amuto and Tadamu are canon couples, for example, while something like Kairi/Utau would be considered crack.

AU- Alternate Universe. The opposite of canon. A story based in a different world or universe then the one the mangaka created, like if someone made it so that the Guardians were born 1000 years into the future and were fighting in a mecha war or and Shugo Charas didn't exist. Or if someone wrote a story about Amu being born and raised as a mermaid or a vampire or something to that effect. It gives the fanfic author the chance to explore more creative rights, but they tend to be harder for people to connect with sometimes...
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AnaMaree wrote:


starlight8901 wrote:


WingsofMorphius wrote:

I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; -curently unavailable (see below)-

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

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Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

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That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T





Overall, I love how much creativity and description you put in all three stories. The fact that someone would actually spend their time to write something such as this truly is phenomenal. You got some good potential..if I could I would've drawn this out a long time ago, and I'm not just saying that....

Plunny 1: It made me laugh so hard. Never in my life I would've thought that Amu would act as "innocent" as our friend Ikuto would....It simply is a way of showing what would happen when the tables are turned, I love that...

Plunny 2: This is the real definition of romance. The immortal god finds power inside of a young slave, and develops more than he ever thought it would be...In my opinion, I thought of it actually ironic. And I didn't read it just because of Amuto, if it was Tadase and Amu, it still would've been just as great.

Plunny 3: The one I love the most. There is nothing better than having a mixture of romance, drama, envy and magic all from one protoganist. It truly is the most descriptive. The fact that both East and West families are looking for the same treasure really is fantastic. it also reminds me more into a Romeo and Juliet story, except there is more than one person after our fair Maiden...

So, that is my opinion on these stories. if you think I went a little too far, please let me know. I cannot wait for any of these stories to develop more and more. Also, could you tell me what a AU/Canon ment? (ugh, I sound like a teacher )



Even more ironically with Plunny 2, Tadase is a king. (At least he thinks so.)


I've actually had trouble fitting Tadase into Plunny 2, since I was considering making him the son of the Pharoh, but then thought that maybe Shuraiya, the prince from the fillers, would fit the role better. But I'm reluctant to make a filler character so important... maybe I should have Tadase and Shuraiya as half brothers, fighting for their father's throne? If that was the case, it would make sense for Tadase to seek help from the Gods, to gain an edge over his half brother, and through that meet Amu...
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WingsofMorphius wrote:

I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

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Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; -curently unavailable (see below)-

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

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Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T





Overall, I love how much creativity and description you put in all three stories. The fact that someone would actually spend their time to write something such as this truly is phenomenal. You got some good potential..if I could I would've drawn this out a long time ago, and I'm not just saying that....

Plunny 1: It made me laugh so hard. Never in my life I would've thought that Amu would act as "innocent" as our friend Ikuto would....It simply is a way of showing what would happen when the tables are turned, I love that...

Plunny 2: This is the real definition of romance. The immortal god finds power inside of a young slave, and develops more than he ever thought it would be...In my opinion, I thought of it actually ironic. And I didn't read it just because of Amuto, if it was Tadase and Amu, it still would've been just as great.

Plunny 3: The one I love the most. There is nothing better than having a mixture of romance, drama, envy and magic all from one protoganist. It truly is the most descriptive. The fact that both East and West families are looking for the same treasure really is fantastic. it also reminds me more into a Romeo and Juliet story, except there is more than one person after our fair Maiden...

So, that is my opinion on these stories. if you think I went a little too far, please let me know. I cannot wait for any of these stories to develop more and more. Also, could you tell me what a AU/Canon ment? (ugh, I sound like a teacher )



Even more ironically with Plunny 2, Tadase is a king. (At least he thinks so.)


I've actually had trouble fitting Tadase into Plunny 2, since I was considering making him the son of the Pharoh, but then thought that maybe Shuraiya, the prince from the fillers, would fit the role better. But I'm reluctant to make a filler character so important... maybe I should have Tadase and Shuraiya as half brothers, fighting for their father's throne? If that was the case, it would make sense for Tadase to seek help from the Gods, to gain an edge over his half brother, and through that meet Amu...

How about Tadase be the king of a diffrent kingdom and Amu falls in love with him. LOVE TRIANGLE! xP

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But that's one of the things i like about him...btw, do these stories continue, or just stop here since they are plunnies, and which one do u like?


I do plan to continue these stories, I just wannt tweak them a bit before I finalize anything. That's why I wanted feedback you see... Them being plot bunnies just means that they're still in the planning stage.
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