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I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; -curently unavailable (see below)-

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

Sample;


Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T





Overall, I love how much creativity and description you put in all three stories. The fact that someone would actually spend their time to write something such as this truly is phenomenal. You got some good potential..if I could I would've drawn this out a long time ago, and I'm not just saying that....

Plunny 1: It made me laugh so hard. Never in my life I would've thought that Amu would act as "innocent" as our friend Ikuto would....It simply is a way of showing what would happen when the tables are turned, I love that...

Plunny 2: This is the real definition of romance. The immortal god finds power inside of a young slave, and develops more than he ever thought it would be...In my opinion, I thought of it actually ironic. And I didn't read it just because of Amuto, if it was Tadase and Amu, it still would've been just as great.

Plunny 3: The one I love the most. There is nothing better than having a mixture of romance, drama, envy and magic all from one protoganist. It truly is the most descriptive. The fact that both East and West families are looking for the same treasure really is fantastic. it also reminds me more into a Romeo and Juliet story, except there is more than one person after our fair Maiden...

So, that is my opinion on these stories. if you think I went a little too far, please let me know. I cannot wait for any of these stories to develop more and more. Also, could you tell me what a AU/Canon ment? (ugh, I sound like a teacher )



Even more ironically with Plunny 2, Tadase is a king. (At least he thinks so.)


I've actually had trouble fitting Tadase into Plunny 2, since I was considering making him the son of the Pharoh, but then thought that maybe Shuraiya, the prince from the fillers, would fit the role better. But I'm reluctant to make a filler character so important... maybe I should have Tadase and Shuraiya as half brothers, fighting for their father's throne? If that was the case, it would make sense for Tadase to seek help from the Gods, to gain an edge over his half brother, and through that meet Amu...

How about Tadase be the king of a diffrent kingdom and Amu falls in love with him. LOVE TRIANGLE! xP



Hmm, but that seems kinda difficult to pull off, since other cultures didn't worship Egyptian gods and therefore would not believe in them. Amu lives on the same plain as the Gods, so it would be hard for them to meet under those circumstances after Ikuto takes her away, which happened when she was still a small child... Though I suppose Tadase could be a god visiting from another culture's system of beliefs. I remember the Egyptain gods were unique in that they allowed the Gods of others to mingle with them... Tadase would be cool as a Greek or Roman God... Or even Norish or Celtic... Roman would probably fit best though, given the history between Egypt and Rome...
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WingsofMorphius wrote:


AnaMaree wrote:


WingsofMorphius wrote:


AnaMaree wrote:


starlight8901 wrote:


WingsofMorphius wrote:

I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; -curently unavailable (see below)-

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

Sample;


Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T





Overall, I love how much creativity and description you put in all three stories. The fact that someone would actually spend their time to write something such as this truly is phenomenal. You got some good potential..if I could I would've drawn this out a long time ago, and I'm not just saying that....

Plunny 1: It made me laugh so hard. Never in my life I would've thought that Amu would act as "innocent" as our friend Ikuto would....It simply is a way of showing what would happen when the tables are turned, I love that...

Plunny 2: This is the real definition of romance. The immortal god finds power inside of a young slave, and develops more than he ever thought it would be...In my opinion, I thought of it actually ironic. And I didn't read it just because of Amuto, if it was Tadase and Amu, it still would've been just as great.

Plunny 3: The one I love the most. There is nothing better than having a mixture of romance, drama, envy and magic all from one protoganist. It truly is the most descriptive. The fact that both East and West families are looking for the same treasure really is fantastic. it also reminds me more into a Romeo and Juliet story, except there is more than one person after our fair Maiden...

So, that is my opinion on these stories. if you think I went a little too far, please let me know. I cannot wait for any of these stories to develop more and more. Also, could you tell me what a AU/Canon ment? (ugh, I sound like a teacher )



Even more ironically with Plunny 2, Tadase is a king. (At least he thinks so.)


I've actually had trouble fitting Tadase into Plunny 2, since I was considering making him the son of the Pharoh, but then thought that maybe Shuraiya, the prince from the fillers, would fit the role better. But I'm reluctant to make a filler character so important... maybe I should have Tadase and Shuraiya as half brothers, fighting for their father's throne? If that was the case, it would make sense for Tadase to seek help from the Gods, to gain an edge over his half brother, and through that meet Amu...

How about Tadase be the king of a diffrent kingdom and Amu falls in love with him. LOVE TRIANGLE! xP



Hmm, but that seems kinda difficult to pull off, since other culture didn't worship Egyptian gods and therefore would not believe in them. Amu lives on the same plain as the Gods, so it would be hard for them to meet under those circumstances after Ikuto takes are away, which happened when she was still a small child... Though I suppose Tadase could be a god visiting from another culture's system of beliefs. I remember the Egyptain gods were unique in that they allowed the Gods of others to mingle with their own... Tadase would be cool as a Greek or Roman God... Or even Norish or Celtic... Roman would probably fit best though, given the history between Egypt and Rome...


It's kind of getting hard to catch up on what and Ana are saying...I had to read some of your concepts more than twice over...I'll try though. After all, I like REAL disscussion
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They're great! I like the 2nd one ^^ You should post all your fanfics in fanfiction.net before anybody steals your great ideas! ^^
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Wait a minute, who's the pharoah? What character plays him, or is he some new character?

P.S: It seems that a canon story is easier to plan and go along with. However, it wouldn't hurt to add a bit of twist into it, right?? Personally, Plunny 2 sounds a bit better with canon and part AU, but not too much of it.....
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starlight8901 wrote:


WingsofMorphius wrote:


AnaMaree wrote:


WingsofMorphius wrote:


AnaMaree wrote:


starlight8901 wrote:


WingsofMorphius wrote:

I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; -curently unavailable (see below)-

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

Sample;


Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T





Overall, I love how much creativity and description you put in all three stories. The fact that someone would actually spend their time to write something such as this truly is phenomenal. You got some good potential..if I could I would've drawn this out a long time ago, and I'm not just saying that....

Plunny 1: It made me laugh so hard. Never in my life I would've thought that Amu would act as "innocent" as our friend Ikuto would....It simply is a way of showing what would happen when the tables are turned, I love that...

Plunny 2: This is the real definition of romance. The immortal god finds power inside of a young slave, and develops more than he ever thought it would be...In my opinion, I thought of it actually ironic. And I didn't read it just because of Amuto, if it was Tadase and Amu, it still would've been just as great.

Plunny 3: The one I love the most. There is nothing better than having a mixture of romance, drama, envy and magic all from one protoganist. It truly is the most descriptive. The fact that both East and West families are looking for the same treasure really is fantastic. it also reminds me more into a Romeo and Juliet story, except there is more than one person after our fair Maiden...

So, that is my opinion on these stories. if you think I went a little too far, please let me know. I cannot wait for any of these stories to develop more and more. Also, could you tell me what a AU/Canon ment? (ugh, I sound like a teacher )



Even more ironically with Plunny 2, Tadase is a king. (At least he thinks so.)


I've actually had trouble fitting Tadase into Plunny 2, since I was considering making him the son of the Pharoh, but then thought that maybe Shuraiya, the prince from the fillers, would fit the role better. But I'm reluctant to make a filler character so important... maybe I should have Tadase and Shuraiya as half brothers, fighting for their father's throne? If that was the case, it would make sense for Tadase to seek help from the Gods, to gain an edge over his half brother, and through that meet Amu...

How about Tadase be the king of a diffrent kingdom and Amu falls in love with him. LOVE TRIANGLE! xP



Hmm, but that seems kinda difficult to pull off, since other culture didn't worship Egyptian gods and therefore would not believe in them. Amu lives on the same plain as the Gods, so it would be hard for them to meet under those circumstances after Ikuto takes her away, which happened when she was still a small child... Though I suppose Tadase could be a god visiting from another culture's system of beliefs. I remember the Egyptain gods were unique in that they allowed the Gods of others to mingle with them... Tadase would be cool as a Greek or Roman God... Or even Norish or Celtic... Roman would probably fit best though, given the history between Egypt and Rome...


It's kind of getting hard to catch up on what and Ana are saying...I had to read some of your concepts more than twice over...I'll try though. After all, I like REAL disscussion


Sorry, we're trying to figure out Tadase's situation... Which, to be perfectly honest, is something I really did need to figure out.
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Wait a minute, who's the pharoah? What character plays him, or is he some new character?

P.S: It seems that a canon story is easier to plan and go along with. However, it wouldn't hurt to add a bit of twist into it, right?? Personally, Plunny 2 sounds a bit better with canon and part AU, but not too much of it.....


I dunno who the Pharoh would be... Gozen, maybe? XD That would certainly be interesting, and it would help explain why Tadase would be so determined to replace him...

Canon stories are easier to plan, but I find AUs more fun. ^^ The idea I was thinking for Plunny 3 was to jump back and forward from the canon plot to the one of their previous incarnations every other chapter, drawing parallels between the two as I went. Also, their previous incarnations would have different names then the incarnations we know. I left names out of the sample on purpose since I wasn't sure which way I'd be going with the idea when I was writing it up, though it was a little harder to write it that way. I'll proably rewrite that scene when I write it into the story...
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They're great! I like the 2nd one ^^ You should post all your fanfics in fanfiction.net before anybody steals your great ideas! ^^


Than you! ^^ I intend to write all of them, and I hope no one steals any of these plunnies, with the amount of work I've put into them... Number 2 will need the most polishing before it'll be ready, but I think the people here are really helping me with that... ^^
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Good luck! I hope the see the chapters on fanfiction.net soon! XD
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I see, so will you plan on putting more SC charaters in the story?? Or just a small amount of them will be on?
Note: I'm more of a visual learner, so I'm kind of better off reading along than particapating with feedback...

What kind of learner are you?

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Lolz, looks like 2 is getting more attention, and I've forgot all about 1...
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I see, so will you plan on putting more SC charaters in the story?? Or just a small amount of them will be on?
Note: I'm more of a visual learner, so I'm kind of better off reading along than particapating with feedback...

What kind of learner are you?



I'll probably add more, if I feel more are needed. I've kinda got ideas for Seichiro, but I dunno how to fit anyone else in... If I use the cannon plot as well, though, then I probably won't have to try to figure most of them into the past...

I'm visual too. When I read something, it gives me more time to consider it then when I'm in a conversation and words get missed or misheard. As far as writing goes, though, I like bouncing ideas off of others and hearing thier opinions, since that always gets me thinking and inspires me even more. (You and AnaMaree have been wonderful with that, by the way. ^^ )
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PLUNNY 1 IS THE BEST~!!!! =3 i kinda got bored while reading the samples of 2 and 3
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I see, so will you plan on putting more SC charaters in the story?? Or just a small amount of them will be on?
Note: I'm more of a visual learner, so I'm kind of better off reading along than particapating with feedback...

What kind of learner are you?



I'll probably add more, if I feel more are needed. I've kinda got ideas for Seichiro, but I dunno how to fit anyone else in... If I use the cannon plot as well, though, then I probably won't have to try to figure most of them into the past...

I'm visual too. When I read something, it gives me more time to consider it then when I'm in a conversation and words get missed or misheard. As far as writing goes, though, I like bouncing ideas off of others and hearing thier opinions, since that always gets me thinking and inspires me even more. (You and AnaMaree have been wonderful with that, by the way. ^^ )


Aww, really??

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I see, so will you plan on putting more SC charaters in the story?? Or just a small amount of them will be on?
Note: I'm more of a visual learner, so I'm kind of better off reading along than particapating with feedback...

What kind of learner are you?



I'll probably add more, if I feel more are needed. I've kinda got ideas for Seichiro, but I dunno how to fit anyone else in... If I use the cannon plot as well, though, then I probably won't have to try to figure most of them into the past...

I'm visual too. When I read something, it gives me more time to consider it then when I'm in a conversation and words get missed or misheard. As far as writing goes, though, I like bouncing ideas off of others and hearing thier opinions, since that always gets me thinking and inspires me even more. (You and AnaMaree have been wonderful with that, by the way. ^^ )


Aww, really??



It's fine. ^^ Hey think you can gimme a hand with something? I need a name for Egyptian!Amu... It's one that Egyptian!Ikuto gave her after he finds her, so I decided to make it something that either had to do with their meeting, something that he thought of when he first saw her, or just a name that he plain and simply liked. So far, I've got it narrowed down to these ones;

AMISI: "flower."
EMU: "cat."
FEMI: "love."
KEBI: "honey."
MIU: "gentleness."
PANYA: "mouse."
SAGIRA: "little one."
SANURA: "kitten."
SHASHAI: "necklace."
SHERITI: "little girl; maiden."

I've posted the story description for Sweet Desert now, by the way.
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Cool! ^_^ and i choose, Amisi, it souds nice.....and i just notice that you add an ! right after Egyptain, which sorta confused me 4 a few seconds...
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