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Cool! ^_^ and i choose, Amisi, it souds nice.....and i just notice that you add an ! right after Egyptain, which sorta confused me 4 a few seconds...


I liked Amisi too, but I'm worried that it sound too much like Amu or Ami... I don't want there to be any confusion about that. That's why I'm kinda hesitant about Emu, too... Yeah, I do the '!' thing a lot, out of habit, to specify certain things. Like Ninja!Kairi is from the episode where Kairi was spying on Amu and Tadase's 'date,' for example, and Ballerina!Amu is from when Amu was attending dance classes with Yaya. Have fun at your fair!
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I LIKE THE THIRD ONE!!! at least its not alllll Amuto...
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Cat-Astrophe !!!!! plz continue it iz so funny

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I LIKE THE THIRD ONE!!! at least its not alllll Amuto... <_<


Magick Hearts will probably be the first to come out, actually, since that's the closest to being done... And I want to write a story that's Tadamu or other pairings sometime in the future, but I just can't find the inspiration for one right now for some reason...
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amulet_heart wrote:

I LIKE THE THIRD ONE!!! at least its not alllll Amuto... <_<


Magick Hearts will probably be the first to come out, actually, since that's the closest to being done... And I want to write a story that's Tadamu or other pairings sometime in the future, but I just can't find the inspiration for one right now for some reason...


lol im writing a fanfic myself but it looks weird coz its more like a dialouge.... n i dun no y but i dun feel like makin it a tadamu one or amuto or anything..
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I LIKE THE THIRD ONE!!! at least its not alllll Amuto... <_<


Lolz, i agree with you. Having everything completely focused on one pairing is really a bit of a bummer...=__= i mainly like it becuz of the creativity put into this..... (Though a bit hard to read...in the grade a am in...)

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starlight8901 wrote:




Cool! ^_^ and i choose, Amisi, it souds nice.....and i just notice that you add an ! right after Egyptain, which sorta confused me 4 a few seconds...


I liked Amisi too, but I'm worried that it sound too much like Amu or Ami... I don't want there to be any confusion about that. That's why I'm kinda hesitant about Emu, too... Yeah, I do the '!' thing a lot, out of habit, to specify certain things. Like Ninja!Kairi is from the episode where Kairi was spying on Amu and Tadase's 'date,' for example, and Ballerina!Amu is from when Amu was attending dance classes with Yaya. Have fun at your fair!


all right, i have some options of my own, if accepted ^_^

Shashai: Egyptian name meaning: "Angry Woman" (lolz)
Seshafi: Egyptain name meaning: "Necklace" (Amulet...) u already have it, but spelled different
Nuru: Egyptain name meaning: "Born during the day."
Nanu: Egyptain name meaning: "Beautiful"

hmmm, im thinking "Nanu", and "Seshafi", what do u think? ^.^

btw, wat will be our fair "emu" god's name? lolz....^.^


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Da 1st one is kind strange, no offense, but I like the other 2.
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I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; Every story has a beginning and an end. For Amu and Ikuto, the beginning was not where they thought it was. For a slave girl in ancient Egypt and the god she serves, the end is something they never could have imagined...

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

EDIT- After talking to some people here, I decided to go with keeping this story in canonverse. ^^ I'm still working out a lot of detials, though...


Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

Sample;


Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T


i personally like plunny 1. it makes things interesting now that amu lost her memory. and i like the fact that ikuto,a freedom-seeking person, is tied down by amu lol.

plunny 2 is a typical romance story, so i wouldn't really go much into that. but it's kinda cool, having gods and all. ^^

plunny 3 is cool XD XD i love a little mystery and thrill.

love your stories!!! u have great potential ^^ i also love reading and writing, and i wouldn't mind searching a whole day for good stories like these XD
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Posted 9/15/08

starlight8901 wrote:


WingsofMorphius wrote:


starlight8901 wrote:




Cool! ^_^ and i choose, Amisi, it souds nice.....and i just notice that you add an ! right after Egyptain, which sorta confused me 4 a few seconds...


I liked Amisi too, but I'm worried that it sound too much like Amu or Ami... I don't want there to be any confusion about that. That's why I'm kinda hesitant about Emu, too... Yeah, I do the '!' thing a lot, out of habit, to specify certain things. Like Ninja!Kairi is from the episode where Kairi was spying on Amu and Tadase's 'date,' for example, and Ballerina!Amu is from when Amu was attending dance classes with Yaya. Have fun at your fair!


all right, i have some options of my own, if accepted ^_^

Shashai: Egyptian name meaning: "Angry Woman" (lolz)
Seshafi: Egyptain name meaning: "Necklace" (Amulet...) u already have it, but spelled different
Nuru: Egyptain name meaning: "Born during the day."
Nanu: Egyptain name meaning: "Beautiful"

hmmm, im thinking "Nanu", and "Seshafi", what do u think? ^.^

btw, wat will be our fair "emu" god's name? lolz....^.^




The Amulet thing was why I chose Shashai in the list I gave you (Which according to the site I was looking at, means 'necklace' Seshafi was the one that meant 'Angry Woman' ) I was kinda leaning towards that one to begin with for that same reason... besides, I like the way Shashai rolls off the tongue. (I kept saying all the names out loud, to find the one that sounded best.)

The name I chose for Ikuto is Kamenwati, with means 'Dark Rebel.' Which I thought was a very fitting choice. Besides, Kamenwati sounds God-ish, in my opinion. ^^

Sorry to hear about the fair.
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:) ur right, it does sound kind of goddish, and i do like the name, but out of curiosity, just wat is "Black Lynx" in egyptian??
Also, which name will tadase have if in this one??? Also also, is this an AU??Also to the other alsos ( ), Where&When will it tkae place in Egypt?? AND, was Amu (aka:......) freed from the clutches from the pharoah?? And finally, was Ikuto a spoiled god...before he met Amu? (just brainstoming... )


I was considering other names, but that was the one I fell in love with right away. ^^; I dunno what Black Lynx is, but Kemnebi is 'Black Panther' I thought that one was too difficult to say, though, so I dropped it. It'll kinda be AU. I read ahead, and I think you got a little confused... Sweet Desert is the one that switches off every other chapter. The first chapter will focus on Kamenwati and Shashai (?) and the second will be about Amu and Ikuto. Then we're back to Egypt again for Chapter 3 and so on and so forth. It's not really AU, since I plan to tie everything together at the end...

Sweet Desert mostly takes place in a fictional realm of the Egyptain Gods, in about 1500 BC I think (3500 year ago). Shaisai didn't work for the pharoh, just a rich trader who lived along the Nile before Kamenwati stole her away. And I don't imagine him as a spoiled God as much as he's just bound by duties. He's actually kinda cold and emotionless before he meets Amu, and pretty much just going through the motions every day (He's a minor God working under Bast, so he mostly does grunt work and such for her and her son Khonsu, God of the moon) Though after taking her in, he starts to develop the playful, spoiled side of him that we adore so much. ^^

And yes, I have been considering names for Tadase. Roman ones, actually. I have my choices narrowed down to 3;

Aurelian: “Little golden one”
Basilius: “King”
Caratacus: “Beloved”


Will this one need the most work on as an AU/Canon; besides Plunny 2??


Actually, I'm pretty set with Cat-Astorphe. I didn't need to brainstorm as much with that one, since it's mostly a comedy and I tend to work with that a lot. I always know what I want to write for comedies, so it's just a matter of sitting down and writing it.


What time period does this take place?? Also, as you said before:
"The idea I was thinking for Plunny 3 was to jump back and forward from the canon plot to the one of their previous incarnations every other chapter, drawing parallels between the two as I went. Also, their previous incarnations would have different names then the incarnations we know. I left names out of the sample on purpose since I wasn't sure which way I'd be going with the idea when I was writing it up, though it was a little harder to write it that way. I'll proably rewrite that scene when I write it into the story"


I said that for plunny 2, dear. Plunny 3 is Magick Hearts, remember? 'amused'

Plunny 3 is going to be completely AU, set in a different realm of Kingdoms and Magic and such, were some modern day convienences like airplanes and a more primitive version of computers still exist. It's hard to explain, but like I said eariler it's kind of like an RPG brought to life (Think of any Final Fantasy games, for example, or even Kindgom Hearts.)
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WingsofMorphius wrote:

I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; Every story has a beginning and an end. For Amu and Ikuto, the beginning was not where they thought it was. For a slave girl in ancient Egypt and the god she serves, the end is something they never could have imagined...

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

EDIT- After talking to some people here, I decided to go with keeping this story in canonverse. ^^ I'm still working out a lot of detials, though...


Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

Sample;


Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T


first one like WOW did really amu do that?!!!!!!!!!!? but its still good and simple..........
second :good*thumbs out*
third :make me wanna read the second chapter hehehe sorry XD
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i like them all!!!!!!!!!!!
waa u have such creativity AWESOME =D
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WingsofMorphius wrote:

I need some help with some story ideas that have been bugging me, and I figured that since they're Shugo Chara stories, this'd be the best place to ask for help. Tell me whatcha think of these plot bunnies;

Plunny 1;

Title; Cat-Astrophe

FF.net description; After a Chara Nari with Yoru while the Lock was malfunctioning left Amu stuck in a very awkward position, it’s up to Ikuto to help her out. That is, if he can resist the innocent charm of Neko Amu-chan.

Story Synopsis; Totally and unapologetically inspired by Amulet Cat. Basically, Amu gets stuck as a catgirl with no memory of herself or her charas, and about the same mental level of a kitten. Meaning she's completely sweet and innocent and totally incapable of taking care of herself. Thus, her reluctant knight-in-shining-armor Ikuto steps in to take care of her while she's incapacitated, and some serious karmatic payback ensues.

Pairings; Can be seen as Amuto, but it's mostly just silly stuff to get back at Ikuto for tormenting Amu so. ^^

Sample;


Plunny 2;

Title; Sweet Desert

FF.net description; Every story has a beginning and an end. For Amu and Ikuto, the beginning was not where they thought it was. For a slave girl in ancient Egypt and the god she serves, the end is something they never could have imagined...

Story Synopsis; I am never, EVER listening to Walk Like An Egyptain ever again! It does unspeakable things to my poor muses... T.T At any rate, I need the most help with this plot bunny, since there's two different directions I can take it; AU or Canon. What's constitent no matter which way I take it is that fact that Egyptain Cat God Ikuto find slave girl Amu and notices a peculiar power in her, thus decides to bring her back home with him to keep a closer eye on her. For the AU version, Amu and Ikuto would play these respective roles just like this, but for canon I figured I could make our Amu and Ikuto the reincarnations of these two, meaning Past!Amu and Past!Ikuto would have different names then Present!Amu and Present!Ikuto. Tell me which idea you like better, since I honestly can't decide myself...

EDIT- After talking to some people here, I decided to go with keeping this story in canonverse. ^^ I'm still working out a lot of detials, though...


Pairings; Amuto, plain and simple.

Sample;


Plunny 3;

Title; Magick Heart

FF.net description; -AU- For centuries, both the East and West Kingdoms have searched for the infamous Embryo. Now Prince Tadase has found a girl who holds a key to finding it. But he’s not the only one interested in Amu...

Story Synopsis; Before anyone says anything, I planned this one out LONG before the preview for episode 50! It involves Shugo Chara having a plot more like a Final Fantasy-type RPG, since I'm a total gaming geek who thinks too much about stupid things. I can't give away much more then that, unfortunately, but I'm having a lot of fun planning it!

Pairings; Everything you can find in the canon story'll be in here. Plus a little of this and that, too...

Sample;


That's all for now... please gimme some feedback! T.T


first one like WOW did really amu do that?!!!!!!!!!!? but its still good and simple..........
second :good*thumbs out*
third :make me wanna read the second chapter hehehe sorry XD


1- Yep. ^^ In her defense, though, she's not aware of what she's doing.
2- Thank you!
3- XD Well, hopefully the first chapter will be up soon, so I can get started on the second.
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