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kyaaaa sugoi!! i love the description and ur banner...kawaii!! i love it!! square love, or is it triangle love!! ahah well it's really intersting!!
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NICE banner i love it...and the fanfic is so interest looking forward to it
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yuko-chan!! contact me when u finish with the first part!
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There are people who actually read this! ^^
I'm so happy~ I shall reply to them right here!

Note: If there's a specific nickname you guys would like me to call you by, tell me ^^ it's a lot easier for me to remember nicknames than usernames ><

@ pafu-chan: thank you! and yes! you can be hayashi kyoko~ :3
@ Geh-san: Ehe~ Takeda Haruka? Yes~ of course you can be her! She's paired with someone! but not going to reveal yet ;D
@ hsj9392: thank you for reading! yes~ so lucky ne? ^^
@ yamachan-kakkoi: thank you! yeah~ haha. having so many ppl like her. very lucky. ^^
@ vanialestari: Hm. Takeda Haruno. Sure! You can be her~ ^^ Thank you for reading~
@ jally23: Haha~ glad it sounds interesting~ thanks!
@ Yamada_Yuuki83: oh~ thank you! the banner? oh~ I used Photoshop to do the banner! [a graphic editing program~] oh, if you want me to help make you a banner, i wouldn't mind doing so! ^^
@ Cherrilly17: Thank you! I hope you'll still be excited after the first chappie! ><
@ chiiakii: Ehe~ Thanks for reading! :D
@ Mai-Lee: Haha! Yeah~ Love square-ish triangle-ish. o-O hard to explain. haha, thank you for reading!
@ licous: Haha~ Thank you so much! ^^





♥ Chapter One:

He walked towards the direction of the wind.

“I’m sorry; we can no longer be together.”

The wind pushed against his face as he walked further and further.

“Why? I don’t understand.”

The wind was incapable of pushing him backwards even just a little bit. He continued to walk further away.

“I’m sorry.”

His figure was no longer in sight.



Jin, did you know I really loved you?

-

Kyoko got a call from Yamapi at 7:00 AM on a Saturday morning asking to meet with her in the park near her house. She attempted to get ready as quickly as possible. After what seemed to be several minutes, she finished getting ready and managed to quickly style her hair in a likable way. She went to check the time.

8:00 AM. She took an hour to get ready. Brilliant, Yamapi was going to kill her.

She quickly got her keys and rushed out of her house as quietly as possible because both her parents were still asleep. As she reached the park, she saw Pi with a big bouquet of flowers.

“Yamapi…” she whispered quietly with a stunned look on her face.

“Good morning!” he chirped happily holding out the flowers.

“For you!” he added as he placed the bouquet in her arms.

“Yamapi, this is very sweet of you and I like you very much as a friend, but you of all people should know that… I can’t be in that kind of relationship,” she muttered quietly.

Yamapi looked a little taken aback. He laughed nervously and with an awkward smile, he asked, “What makes you think I’m confessing to you?”

Her eyes widened slightly and she asked, “You’re not?”

Yamapi rubbed his temples and laughed again, “Um, it’s your birthday.”

Her lips suddenly formed an “O” shape and she giggled, “Ah, that’s right. I nearly forgot. Thank you.”

She accepted the flowers and Yamapi could see the sparkle of innocence in her eyes. Kyoko was happy and at that moment, that was all that mattered.

“I mean, who would like you anyway?” Yamapi laughed suddenly and Kyoko looked insulted. After several minutes of laughing, Kyoko started slapping Yamapi on the arm with her free hand. She chased Yamapi around the park while laughing.

Yamapi loved seeing her laugh.

However, he soon realized that what he said was a lie. He lied to her. Yamapi promised never to lie to her. He broke his promise.



I like you, Kyoko. I like you even more than you think I do.

-

“Kyoko! HAPPY 17TH BIRTHDAY!” Haruka barged into Kyoko’s house with a big teddy bear in her arms. She gave Kyoko a big hug and then handed over the teddy bear. After saying Happy Birthday one more time, she realized that Yamashita was here as well.

Kyoko and Yamapi went over to Kyoko’s house after chasing and playing around with each other at the park. The two of them were exhausted.

“Thank you Haruka! The teddy bear is adorable,” Kyoko said with a smile. Haruka forced a smile back.

“So why is Yamashita-kun here?” she asked nervously.

“Oh, well, it’s a long story. Let’s just say he’s here because it’s my birthday and all,” Kyoko replied happily. Haruka nodded.

Haruka hated herself. She hated how whenever she saw Kyoko with Yamashita-kun, she had this funny feeling. This funny feeling happened to be called jealousy. She hated it because she knew that Kyoko had no interest in Yamashita-kun. She hated her attitude. She hated how immature she was. She hated how much she liked Yamashita.

“Maybe I should leave you two alone. I feel so left out and you know, I’m sure you guys would want to be left alone anyway,” Haruka giggled. This was what she did every time she felt jealous over Kyoko. Every time, she teased them and then walked away. It seemed like a routine now.

“Stop it, you know we’re not like that,” Kyoko laughed as she gave Haruka a light punch on the arm.

“Bye bye~” Haruka said as she waved and walked out of Kyoko’s house.



It hurt, but I’ll endure.

-

The next day at school, Haruka made a decision to talk to Kyoko about Yamashita-kun.

“Kyoko, hypothetically speaking, if a close friend of yours liked you, what would you do?” Haruka asked curiously.

“Hypothetically? Can’t you at least give me an example?” Kyoko laughed as she bit into her sandwich.

“Well, for example, Yamashita-kun!” Haruka laughed nervously as she began to nibble on her Pocky stick.

“Yamapi? Well, I wouldn’t do anything I guess,” Kyoko replied casually taking a sip of her water.

“Does that mean you would reject him?” Haruka asked hoping Kyoko was not thinking that she was being overly nosy.

“Well, I’d distance myself. I don’t know really. I just won’t like him back,” Kyoko said. Haruka nodded in understanding.

“Kyoko, if I told you I liked one of your guy friends, would you help me confess to him?” Haruka suddenly asked and Kyoko nearly choked on her sandwich.

“You like Yamapi?” Kyoko asked in shock.

“No! Wait! I never said I liked Yamashita, I meant one of your friends, but not necessarily Yamashita-kun,” Haruka stuttered as her cheeks turned a dark shade of red.

“Ehhhh, then who is it?” Kyoko asked as she giggled quietly. Haruka opened her mouth preparing herself to tell Kyoko the truth, to tell her that it was actually Yamashita.

However, Yamashita-kun suddenly came and interrupted their conversation.

“Kyoko!” he screamed and gave a little pinch on her cheek. Kyoko winced a little from the pain. She frowned.

“Come to my house after school,” he added and walked away with a smile. Kyoko smiled back with an abnormally big smile.

“Okay!” she screamed to Yamapi who was walking further and further away.

“Kyoko, you are happy, aren’t you?” Haruka asked, interrupting Kyoko’s thoughts.

“Hm? What did you say?” Kyoko asked when she came back to reality.

“Nothing,” Haruka said and forced a smile. Kyoko smiled back.

-

After school, Kyoko walked to Yamapi’s house silently by herself. Suddenly, one of Haruka’s question came into her mind. If Pi ever did like her, what was she going to do? Yamapi was the closest person to her besides her parents. Without Yamapi, her life was going to be empty and meaningless. He was important to her and she did not want to lose him.

She decided not to think of it now as she finally arrived at his house. Ringing his doorbell, she waited for an answer. She waited for about fifteen minutes before she started getting worried. When she was about to try opening the door herself, Yamapi suddenly slammed the door open.

“Hey, sorry for not opening the door earlier for you,” he said awkwardly with a peculiar smile. Kyoko slowly nodded.

“It’s okay, but is something wrong?” she asked as she walked into his house. Not getting a reply, she decided to walk into the kitchen which seemed to have a nice food scent.

“Surprise!” he screamed from behind her. Kyoko jumped a little and turned around to see a little birthday cake in Yamapi’s hands.

“What’s this?” she asked with a smile.

“Don’t ask that type of question. Clearly, it’s a cake and it took me forever to make this since I don’t cook,” he laughed as he placed it down on the kitchen table.

“Eat!” he said as he took some of the cake with a fork and stuffed it in her mouth.

“Is it good?” he asked and Kyoko nodded and swallowed.

“I love you Pi-chan! You’re the best!” she exclaimed with a big smile. Yamapi suddenly frowned a little.

Not noticing Pi’s frown, Kyoko got up from her seat to get another fork for him. As she walked towards the kitchen drawer, she felt something from behind. Yamapi… was hugging her.

“Yama--“

“Shh… don’t talk,” he whispered into her ear.

“Can we stay like this for a little longer?” he asked and Kyoko did not reply.

Yamapi continued to embrace her tightly from behind. He didn’t want to love her because he was afraid that it would destroy their friendship one day. He wanted to stop, but when she said things like…

“I love you Pi-chan! You’re the best!”

It seemed impossible to control his heart from beating slightly faster than normal.



Kyoko, stop doing this to me and making me love you even more.
It hurts to know that only I will embrace you.
It hurts to know that you will never embrace me back.






I'm so scared it's confusing. ><
Is it?

Oh, I also want to say sorry because I haven't read any fanfics yet! I WILL DO SO SOON! ^^
I didn't have much time yet to actually read one yet~ so yeah! ^^
Um. I hope you enjoy? and i really do hope it's not confusing. ><

I'll try to make the next chappie better! :]

Thanks for reading!
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WOW..it was a nice fic, and it wasn't that confusing i sorta understand it, but yeah i'll be waiting for the next chapter!!! and YES first one to comment haha...

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Gyaaaaaaaaaa ~~
greaat parrt ^^
LOVE THIS FANFIC SO MUCH !!
anywy , looking forward for the next part !!
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omg~
I LOVE IT!!
kyaakyaaaa~
luckylucky girl..<<saying this again n again lol^^
cant wait for the next part!!
btw u can call me chachan..
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that kyoko is soo lucky!!!
i love your first part!
keep on going!
and regarding that you're not yet reading
our fics yet...well its ok...it won't be
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*wwwaaaaa!*

don't worry, you'r fic is not confusing~! XD!
I really like the way you make pieces of sentences together to make a wonderful fic you have~!
Kyoko's pretty lucky... and I'm thinking that one day Haruka might hate Kyoko because she envies her...

you can call me shie~chan!
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honto?..i'll call u shie chan?
hehe..ano u read my fic already???
or maybe it's not me who you're talking too?..haha
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Waaa, it was really nice ^^
Yeah the girl is soooo lucky! xD
And i think it wasn't confusing at all ^_^
I'll be waiting for the next chapter ^^
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yuko-chan i finally finish ur chappie!!
omg it's really good!!
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OMGosh!!
I'm so late!! T.T
gomen..


oh btw..
THIS IS REALLY AWESOME!!
more more!!
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WOW..sugoi ne....i wanna read this..it sounds interesting....
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woooooooah!! so coool! sugoi!!! XD i pity yamapi. T_T i wish kyoko would love him.
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