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CHAP ONE WAS REALLY GD! OH PI.....poor guy):

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Thank you guys for your support ^^

@ Shonny: yay first comment! ah~ good. at least it wasn't too confusing ^^
@ Vaan-chan: thankyouuu~ [haha, and your current avi's cute xD]
@ Cha-chan: Haha~ yeah! she's so so so lucky xD
@ Geh-san: thank you~ and ah~ i plan on reading some fanfics tonight~ :)
@ shie-chan: your comment makes me so happy! and hm~ i wanna reply to what you guessed about Haruka, but then.. i don't wanna spoil.. so ehe ^^ but thank youu~
@ Yumi: Ah~ I'm so glad it wasn't confusing ^^ thank you for reading~
@ Pafu-chan: Yay~ you read it~ ^^ haha, thank you~ *huggles*
@ hsj-chan: >< i don't know what to call you~ ^^ but~ thank you for reading~ :)
@ saya_hagi: haha~ thank you~ :)
@ jally: Thank you for reading! I pity yamapi too ><
@ jadelimrixian: ah~ arigatou~ ^^ yeah. poor yamapi ):

I realized how messy the replies look. ><
BUT THANK YOU FOR READING AND COMMENTING~ ^^ [beware of my weird handwriting in this chappie.]





♥ Chapter Two:



Kyoko found this note in her locker the next day. She was unable to stop staring at it until she realized what Yamapi meant. Yamapi didn’t like her anymore. He wanted to cut ties with her now. He was bored of her. He didn’t want to be her friend anymore.

She was angry at him. Yamapi was being childish and idiotic. She didn’t do anything to deserve this and she didn’t do anything to upset Yamapi.

-

Kyoko walked home alone that day. Yamapi didn’t want to see her and she didn’t want to see anyone else besides Yamapi at the moment.

However, when she reached her home, she saw someone by her door.

Was it Yamapi?

She walked closer towards that person and he suddenly turned around.

“Kyoko! I’ve been waiting for you,”

“K-Kame, why are you here?” Kyoko asked with a shocked face. He laughed.

“I came here to give you your late birthday present. Well, and Jin’s late birthday present to you as well,” he explained.

“Oh, I see,” she simply said. He chuckled.

“You seem sad,” he said.

“My best friend hates me. What do I do?” she asked as she opened her door to let them in.

“Talk to him. Your best friend is Yamashita correct?” he asked as he began taking off his shoes. Kyoko nodded.

“Oh, actually, I should be going now. Here are the presents though,” he said as he wore back his shoes and gave Kyoko her presents.

“Thank you and thank Ji-… Akanishi for me,” she said with a small smile.

“No problem. Remember to open the presents and talk to him,” he said and walked out the door with a wave.

-

The next day, she decided to approach Yamapi. Unfortunately, Haruka decided to approach her at the same time.

“Sorry Haruka, I’m a bit busy right now,” Kyoko said nervously.

“You don’t look busy. I need to talk to you Kyoko, it’s very important,” Haruka said with a serious face.

“I’m sorry, I really need to go,” and with that, Kyoko ran off to find Yamapi. It wasn’t hard finding him because he was usually either with her or with a whole bunch of guys.

“Hey, it’s your girlfriend!” Kyoko heard someone scream as that person points to her. That person was talking to Yamapi.

“She’s not my girlfriend!” Yamapi screamed back to that person.

“Then who is she?” that person asked with a smirk. Yamapi didn’t respond for a long time.

“No one important!” he replied and Kyoko stared at him. How could he say that? Was she really just a nobody to him?

“YAMASHITA TOMOHISA!” Kyoko screamed loudly. She was angry. Why was Yamapi suddenly so different now? He didn’t used to be so distant and mean to her.

Yamapi walked towards her slowly.

“What is it?” he asked casually.

“How can you say that to him?” she asked angrily.

“Say what?”

“You told him I wasn’t anyone important!” she yelled furiously. Yamapi didn’t respond.

“And this note, how can you just leave it in my locker and give no explanation. Do you know how worried I was?” she said as she held up the crumpled piece of paper. She could feel it coming. She could feel her tears slowly roll down her pink cheeks.

“And why do you need to apologize. You don’t need to apologize for baking me a cake or hugging me. It’s natural. This is what friend’s do for each other. Why are you so distant now?” she said with one breath. She was losing it. Her control was slowly decreasing.

“We were friends for so long and you never ever gave me such an idiotic note like this. I thought you hated me after reading this. I thought you didn’t want me anymore!” she continued.

“You can’t just leave me without an explanation. You can’t just be so sweet one day and be all distant the next day. Did you know that--“

“Stop,” he said.

Kyoko was crying. She was crying a lot. She was crying so much that she didn’t realize that Yamapi was crying.

“Stop,” he repeated.

“Just stop,” he said.

The two of them were silent for a long time afterwards. Neither of them moved.

“I do hate you,” he suddenly said, breaking the silence.

Kyoko stared at him wide-eyed.

“You--“

“I hate you so much. I hate you so much for doing this to me,” he began.

Kyoko decided not to interrupt. So Yamapi did hate her.

“I hate you so much for making me feel this way,” he continued. Kyoko didn’t understand a word Yamapi was saying.

“I hate you so much for making my heart die half the time,”

“Yet, I also hate you for making my heart alive the other half of the time,”

Kyoko felt calmer. However, Yamapi hated her. That was all she understood. That was all she cared about.

“I hate you so much for making me…”

Yamapi stopped for a long time. He didn’t want to continue. He was afraid of continuing. Yet…

“…love you so much... for making me... love you more than I should.”

Kyoko didn’t seem to understand it because she didn’t show any emotion for a long time. She didn’t seem to understand, but she did. Her outsides looked the same, but her insides was burning. She felt as though she would die any second. She was not prepared for this.

She didn’t want to do this and she didn’t have any intention of doing this.

However, she slowly walked closer to him. She walked close enough to feel his breath against her cold skin.

Her arms slowly wrapped around his waist, embracing him tightly.

“Yamapi… I’m sorry,” she whispered and cried against his chest.

Her embrace was cold.
Her embrace was sad.
Yamapi was incapable of warming her.
He was incapable of making her smile.

He failed as a best friend.
He failed as a person.

I should be the one to say sorry, Kyoko.






I don't really like this chapter. ):
It was kind of hard to write towards the end. ><

Well, the next chapter will have more Kame~ Yama-chan will appear too! ^^
Eek. This chapter was sad. ><

I hope you enjoyed this chapter anyway~ :)
Look forward to the next one! ^^
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waaaa..sugoi....yamapi and kyoko!! ahah more please
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T-T it was sad.. yamapi love her so much..
it's like a drama.. kool ^^
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yeah~ this chapter was sad. ):
i'm not sure whether i should make the next chapter sad or not. ><
thank you both for reading ^^

haha~ pafu-chan, i don't think i'm capable of making anything seem like a drama though. xD
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~mou!
this is oozing emo~ness... I feel like crying for YamaPi!
He really loves her so much that Kyoko broke his heart so much too....
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GAAAHHHH..SO ANGSTY><

BUT I LOVE ANGST! LOL xD

bring it onnn~ x))
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MORE.... I LOVE IT!!!
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omg...
sadsad~
but iloveit!^^
moree please..
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oh~ you can call me yuuki-chan or anythin you like xD
btw, i love you fanfic! it's so...wow xD better than mine!
&& can you help me make a banner for my fanfic(s)? if you don't mind...
If you too busy and can't, i would understand ^_^
Can't wait for next part!
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aww this part is soo emotional!
but anyway, good job!
i can't wait for kame and yama chan to appear on the next part!
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

oh~ you can call me yuuki-chan or anythin you like xD
btw, i love you fanfic! it's so...wow xD better than mine!
&& can you help me make a banner for my fanfic(s)? if you don't mind...
If you too busy and can't, i would understand ^_^
Can't wait for next part!


Hi Yuuki-chan ^^
ah~ don't say that everyone's fanfic has their good points and bad points ^^ we're all here to improve!
oh! and of course i don't mind. i'll help you make a banner~ ^^
Let me go read it first and then i'll comment on it okay? :)
[and then you can give me info on how u want the banner to look like ^^]




and thank you minna~ for reading ^^
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yuko-luff wrote:


Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

oh~ you can call me yuuki-chan or anythin you like xD
btw, i love you fanfic! it's so...wow xD better than mine!
&& can you help me make a banner for my fanfic(s)? if you don't mind...
If you too busy and can't, i would understand ^_^
Can't wait for next part!


Hi Yuuki-chan ^^
ah~ don't say that everyone's fanfic has their good points and bad points ^^ we're all here to improve!
oh! and of course i don't mind. i'll help you make a banner~ ^^
Let me go read it first and then i'll comment on it okay? :)
[and then you can give me info on how u want the banner to look like ^^]




and thank you minna~ for reading ^^


hii~~
:] hehe i guess...demo yours is good!
thanks~~!
:] i have two...it's "true calling" and "friends forever?"
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that was like...wow. may i be part of it too? i love it. ^^
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yuko-luff wrote:

yeah~ this chapter was sad. ):
i'm not sure whether i should make the next chapter sad or not. ><
thank you both for reading ^^

haha~ pafu-chan, i don't think i'm capable of making anything seem like a drama though. xD


will you knida did it hahah
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